English writing and translation of my travel diary

I went to Beijing on holiday.

I went to Beijing for my holiday.

I have been to Beijing more than eight times. Beijing is the capital of China. This is a big city. I am very familiar with Beijing. It takes one hour and forty minutes to fly from Nantong to Beijing. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. This is a modern city. ?

I have been to Beijing more than eight times. Beijing is the capital of China. This is a big city. I am familiar with Beijing. It takes one hour and forty minutes to fly from Nantong to Beijing. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. This is a modern city.

My family visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, Beihai Park and the Space Museum. I went to the countryside in Beijing to go boating and fishing. Very interesting. ?

My family visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, Beihai Park and the Space Museum. I go boating and fishing in the countryside of Beijing. Very interesting.