Junior high school composition ~

It is late at night. I tossed and turned in bed. My parents have not come back yet. I'm a little scared and angry. A family of three crowded into this two-bedroom and one-bedroom house with little furniture and an old black-and-white TV set. Although poor, I am still unwilling to bow my head. In this strange big city, I have no money to go to an excellent high school. But I have my own ideals and goals. Although I am in rags, I have my own dignity. This year is the second year of senior three, and the college entrance examination is a turning point for me to realize my life dream.

The only thing that makes me a little dissatisfied is my parents, who always get up so early and leave and come back so late every day. I really want to go to the park on weekends and go to the river to blow the wind, but even this small request has not been promised by God.

No, we must wait until they come back today. I know they want to make money, not for me, but I don't want them to be so tired. I am willing to live a harder life. After all, I still have a long tomorrow.

A faint voice came from the stairs outside the door, so light, so weak, so slow, and the voice slowly approached and stopped at the door.

After a long time, I slowly heard a slight metal collision, and an object was slowly inserted into the keyhole, which was a gentle rotating sound. The door opened quietly. "Be gentle, the child is asleep." This is the mother's voice.

I can feel her tiptoeing towards me.

There is no sound, but I can feel it. Light footsteps warm my heart step by step. "I licked the quilt again!"

Mother gently pulled the quilt, slowly moved to my side and slowly pulled it away. ...

From beginning to end, the lights at home didn't turn on and didn't make any loud noise. Only my parents stood on tiptoe and stepped on my heart step by step.

I pulled the quilt over my head, trying to keep my voice from coming out, but tears fell down line by line. I don't know. I cried that night. How long has it been? All I know is that it is wet.

Men don't cry easily, but I will cry a thousand times tonight! How many years, how many days and nights! Every night, my parents tiptoe around the dark room. What am I still angry about?

Zhu Ziqing has his father's back, Shi has his mother's body pushing a wheelchair, and there are letters from Mr. Fu Lei, and I, what do I have? I have my parents on tiptoe!

Parents are ordinary, but their love for their children is great and unparalleled, which is the greatest wealth of a person's life.

On tiptoe, my parents' love will never be forgotten in my life, and I dare not forget it!

The full text describes a period of lying in bed late at night, showing parents' love for "me" and their desire for understanding when they tiptoe home late at night, which is in line with the meaning of the question. The overall thinking of the article is clear, emotional and infectious. The application of structural arrangement and expression also shows the examinee's quite good literacy and ability. At the beginning of the article, a specific situation is briefly introduced. The second and third paragraphs are not only the footnotes of "anger", but also the necessary bedding for the following. When my parents came home, they crept up to me. The description accords with the feeling of lying in bed and expresses the truth. Writing is enough, and emotions naturally erupt. By comparing the parents' "toes" with Zhu Ziqing's father's back, we can sublimate this concern and affection to the height of human emotion universality and make the theme more meaningful.

Second, stand on tiptoe (narrative)

Hunan examinee

From spring to winter, my mother stood on tiptoe to welcome the new day; Growing up, my mother stood on tiptoe to support the clear sky of love for me. -inscription

When I think of my mother, I think of many photos of her. In every picture, the mother's posture is on tiptoe.

She stood on tiptoe and stepped on the thresher hard; She stood on tiptoe and put baskets of rice into the tall barn. She stood on tiptoe, picked peaches and oranges from the tree and took them to the market several miles away. In the crowd in the market, she shouted, still standing on tiptoe ... but what impressed me most was that ...

one

Autumn at the age of five. There is a movie in Zhaocun, four miles away. Mom promised to take me to see it, but when she finished washing the bowl, chopped the pig grass and put it in a big lotus leaf pot, we hurried to Zhaocun, and the movie had already started. More importantly, many people have gathered on the Sunguping, even on the haystacks piled up on both sides. We can't get to the front, and we can't see the back. I was so anxious that I shouted. Mother quickly put me around her neck. "Oh, great! Almost! Incomplete. " Mother adjusted her body again, and now I can see completely. At that time, I didn't think about it. I just went to see a movie that I didn't know much about. Many years later, when I recalled my childhood, I understood that I was able to see the movie that night because I had been riding on my mother's neck, and my mother had been standing on tiptoe all night. All she saw was the backs of others.

two

In the summer when I was fifteen, I took the senior high school entrance examination. At that time, the senior high school entrance examination was a fashion, especially for rural children like me. Jumping out of the farm and having a job is the greatest wish of their elders. )

I remember/kloc-June, 2008, when I finished my Chinese exam and walked out of the examination room, I saw my mother in the crowd at a glance. She stood on tiptoe and leaned out to look this way! I ran over and gently scolded 1, "Mom, why are you here? Our family is cutting wheat, as busy as a bee! " "Mom smiled, took out two fried eggs and some eggs from the plastic bag, and stuffed them into me and said," This is for you, your favorite! "It's too hot. I didn't get much. I'm afraid of going bad. I'm hungry! Eat quickly. "

I took it and looked down. A few wheat ears were stuck on my mother's head. I don't know what to say at the moment, but I am determined in my heart that I must do well in the exam!

three

I was lovelorn in the winter when I was twenty-five. I feel that my whole world has frozen and collapsed. A person walks aimlessly in the cold wind, desperate! I don't know when it rained rice residue (hail), I don't care; I don't know how long it took, but snowflakes like goose feathers floated over, and I still didn't care. Later, somehow, I walked home. My mother was surprised and happy when she saw me coming back from work. She quickly patted the snowflake off my body. "I also have some in my hair. Do not move. Mom will help you take it off! " As she spoke, my mother stood on tiptoe and opened her arms to get the snow from my head. In an instant, I felt a huge warm current spread all over my body. At this moment, I understand that even if I lose the whole world, I still have my mother and her warm love. What reason do I have not to live actively?

four

I was about to take a nap when I heard a rustling sound in the living room. I came to have a look. It's my mother. She tiptoed, tiptoed. "Mom, what's the matter!" "Ah, I woke you up!" Mom is like a child who has done something wrong. "It's okay, I'll send some vegetables! By the way, do you have any laundry? ..... Oh, go to bed! Go! " I can't argue with my mother. She just took my son's dirty clothes.

This year, I was thirty-four years old and my mother was fifty-seven. She works as a temporary worker in the canteen of my school. She values and cherishes a job with several hundred dollars more than anyone else. In my spare time, I grow vegetables in the open space behind the canteen and help me with housework from time to time. ...

The figure of mother in dirty clothes has gone away. On the stove, there are vegetables that she just picked from the ground, green and shiny. Scene after scene of the past, the figure on tiptoe staggered in front of my tears, telling me a lot, teaching me a lot and reminding me a lot. ...

The perfect reason is that the text is expensive and new. After reading this perfect composition, we only feel a fresh air, and this "new" is reflected in the following three aspects:

First, unique thinking. It's really remarkable that the little author writes in the form of intercepting sections. What is more commendable is that the article can highlight the profound theme-maternal love through the details of "standing on tiptoe". It can be seen that its conception is profound and its implication is far-reaching.

Second, the writing style is original and novel. Centered on "Stand on tiptoe", this paper adopts the overall structure of the score, taking time as the longitude and details as the latitude in turn, showing a series of "unique" love and motherly love sub-pictures, starting with the description of the characters' movements, highlighting the characters' characters with the help of each character's movements in the middle, and deducing the characters' movements at the end, adding a lot of color to the performance of the characters and themes with the expression and language of the characters.

Third, the organizational ability is new. The full text seeks the layout of the article and is unique. Not to mention the use of ordinal numbers, but the interception of section is unique. The author intercepts the four life stages of "five years old", "fifteen years old", "thirty-five years old" and "forty years old", showing the theme of "My mother stood on tiptoe and supported the clear sky of love for me" from childhood to adulthood. It is really rare to achieve such novel and ingenious ideas. There is a shadow of homesickness in the article. (Gao Xingyun comments)

Grade and score (on the first-class composition paper) score: content 25+ expression 25+ development level 10=60 (Huaguan composition network)

Third, stand on tiptoe (argumentative paper)

Hunan examinee

When you stand on tiptoe, you are closer to the sun. -inscription

Stand on tiptoe, listen to the morning breeze caressing the pine forest, rustling, that is the breath of Lin Hai; Stand on tiptoe and feel the warmth from the sky when Chu Yang leaves grass and picks up pearls. Stand on tiptoe, watch butterflies flapping their wings and flying. That is the vitality of life. The life of walking on tiptoe is wonderful!

Stand on tiptoe and feel the beauty of nature.

Look: beautiful nature, catkins swaying, swallows returning to the north, the sun shining high, cicadas singing, wheat waves spitting gold, sweet-scented osmanthus fragrance, snowflakes flying, cold plum proud of snow. In this unique world, don't shut yourself in your room, open the window, look outside, push open the door, go to the field, stand on tiptoe, open your hands, close your eyes, listen to the wind and touch the air. Everything is so fresh and natural, which makes people feel refreshed.

Stand on tiptoe and write true love on earth.

Look: the little girl stood on tiptoe, holding ten dollars in her hand and stuffing it into the donation box. The expression on her face was so sacred. The thin boy stood on tiptoe. "Mom, I am taller than you. I can recite this! " "Take the bag in your hand; Behind the tall, thin boy, the mother has been on tiptoe to adjust her son's collar!

Stand on tiptoe and achieve a better life.

Listen: "If I see farther than others, it is because I stand on the shoulders of giants." Newton stood on tiptoe to "study" Kepler and invented the law of universal gravitation. "Don't take the results soaked with sweat as your own, and inform your peers as soon as there is a breakthrough, so that everyone can enjoy the results. He used his personal achievements to raise the jumping point of his peers in the country again and again, and soon caused a situation in which thousands of troops and horses worked together to tackle the problem. " Yuan Longping stood on tiptoe of "morality", gave up his fame and fortune, and promoted the overall cause, making rice grow taller than sorghum, ears longer than brooms, and rice as big as peanuts, which made the yield of hybrid rice reach a new level.

When you stand on tiptoe, you are closer to the sun.

Make the first wish 10 1, and one day happiness will listen to us. Now, we are "heroic and dashing, black scarves with feather fans", we are youth, and youth is our bargaining chip. In the arena of youth, we stand on tiptoe to work hard, sweat heartily and look forward to a bumper harvest. Even if we have withered rice in our hands, we don't care. "Those who can't reach it even if they try their best can have no regrets. Who can laugh!"

However, just stand on tiptoe? The answer is no, for a suitor, it is not enough to "stand on tiptoe", because even if we stand on tiptoe, there are fruits that we can't reach, and even if we stand on tiptoe, there are landscapes that we can't see. As early as more than 2,000 years ago, the philosopher Xunzi said in his famous article "Encouraging Learning" that "I am not as good at learning as I am." From this point of view, although standing on tiptoe can make us see farther, it is better to stand on high. It is precisely because of standing "high" that Confucius can see farther and his profound ideological light can shine on future generations. Therefore, if you want to see far, you must stand tall. Sometimes, I'm afraid it's not just a matter of standing on tiptoe. You need to work hard, even try to climb high, which may be more useful.

The beautiful scenery requires us to stand on tiptoe.

True love on earth drives us to stand on tiptoe.

A perfect life is inseparable from our standing on tiptoe.

This is an argumentative essay with strict ideas and rules. The article is divided into four main argumentation contents in the form of "one sentence and one paragraph, indicating the sub-argument, leading to hierarchical argumentation": the first is to stand on tiptoe and feel the beauty of nature; On the second floor, stand on tiptoe and write true love on earth; The third layer, stand on tiptoe to achieve a perfect life; On the fourth floor, you stand on tiptoe and get closer to the sun. The main contents of the four layers are different from each other, from shallow to deep; The first layer quotes ordinary cases from nature, and the second layer quotes ordinary cases from life; The third layer is a typical example in the book; The fourth layer is related to its own reality.

It is particularly noteworthy that the structure of this paper has great imitation value: four levels of subject arrangement, the setting of the total score level of the full text, the selection of routines and typical special cases; The first and second paragraphs take care of each other; At the beginning, it is always said to pave the way, and the subject is closely related to the general theory, which is divided into four layers, all of which are meticulous and rigorous.

The first and second paragraphs of the article use parallelism, and the language is very literary and imposing. (Gao Xingyun comments)

Grade and score (on the first-class composition paper) score: content 25+ expression 25+ development level 10=60 (Huaguan composition network)

Stand on tiptoe (narrative)

Hunan examinee

"Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival. He hasn't come back for more than 50 years. " Grandma stood on tiptoe on the threshold, repeating what she said today every year. I have listened to this sentence for more than ten years, and I watched her step by step from full of hope to disappointment. Now, she is obviously desperate, but she is still forcing herself to believe that he will come back.

He refers to my grandfather. Grandma often tells us that grandpa is very old, his skin is very white, and he is good at fortune telling. Unfortunately, in the second year of his marriage, he went to Taiwan Province Province with the Kuomintang army and was never heard from again. According to grandpa, he has never seen grandpa either, so grandpa is almost a dispensable figure to everyone in our family. Only grandma reads him in her mouth every day, hangs on her heart and wants to dream. For so many years, she stood on tiptoe and looked forward to it day and night, but the greater the hope, the greater the disappointment.

"I miss my relatives more on holidays", which is undoubtedly a blow to her. Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival. Everyone sat around the dining table and had a reunion dinner. Grandma suddenly sighed: "I don't know when our family will really reunite." So everyone was lost in thought again, and dad comforted: "Don't worry, grandpa will definitely come back."

I remember the day when Hong Kong returned to the motherland, and my grandmother was very happy. She is the only one sitting by the TV and crying. She said, "It's good to be back, it's good to be back!" Later, Macao returned to the motherland. This time, she didn't cry. She smiled happily and announced to our family: "Macau has also returned, and the next stop is Taiwan Province Province. I don't have to stand on tiptoe. " After that, she sang Song of the Seven Sons. Although there was something wrong with her tone and her voice trembled, she sang to her heart's content.

In the next few years, grandma was not as tough as before, but she missed her loved ones more and more, like a boulder, which made her breathless. Finally, she fell ill.

Lying in the hospital bed, she still watches the news and weather forecast as before, and sometimes makes a sound: "The temperature in Taiwan Province Province has dropped, will it be cold?" Sometimes it is an angry voice: "Taiwan Province Province wants to engage in Taiwan independence, no!"

Her illness is getting worse and worse, so that she can't watch the news or listen to the weather forecast. Dad knows that she cares about Taiwan Province Province and tells her the latest news every day. She regards expectation as a kind of belief, which supports her in the face of illness. It pains our whole family to see her in such pain, but we can't help her.

Until one day, I told her the latest news about Taiwan Province Province: "The issue of Taiwan Province Province has been settled peacefully, and she has returned to the embrace of the motherland. Moreover, we have got in touch with my grandfather ... "Although this is false, she believed it. She closed her eyes with relief and watched her leave calmly. We are full of emotions.

Taiwan Province Province, Grandpa will come back quickly and realize my lies and grandma's wishes.

This is a typical "theme first" article and a popular color in the examination room. However, the author is good at seeing the big from the small, and has a good grasp of the current topic difficulties. The structure, plot and even details give people a real feeling. A short span of 900 degrees reveals the sufferings of ordinary families caused by national disunity, and profoundly reflects the theme of the times when people on both sides of the strait "stand on tiptoe" looking forward to family reunion and reunification of the motherland. The structure of the article is complete, and the writing is smooth and natural. In addition, line drawing techniques also add a lot of color to the article.