How to modify a wrong sentence?

1

Incomplete ingredients

1. After watching this drama, I received a profound education. (The subject "who" is missing)

2. The teaching building built before liberation is now almost in danger. (The predicate "how" is missing)

3. The soldiers signed up one after another. (lack of the object "what")

2

Inappropriate choice of words

1. Li Dong and I shook hands warmly. (Synonyms are incorrectly used, "enthusiasm" should be changed to "enthusiasm")

2. Li Hua is willing to help others and is praised by the whole class. (A big word but a small use, "praise" should be changed to "praise")

3. Although he studies well, he often helps classmates who are struggling to study. (The related word is improperly used, it should be "not only... but also...")

3

Improper collocation

1. He knew he was wrong and was in a heavy mood . (The word collocation is inappropriate, "the mood is very heavy" should be changed to "the mood is very heavy")

2. People who spit everywhere are uncivilized behaviors. ("Spitting people" and "behaviour" are not matched properly, "spitting people" should be changed to "spitting")

4

The order is reversed

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1. I have told everyone the news of victory. ("Already" should be placed in front of "Bang")

2. Generally speaking, students' scores in this exam have improved. ("General" means "improve" and should be placed before "improve")

3. Students in the meteorological team record and listen to the day's weather broadcast every morning. (The order of "recording" and "listening" is reversed, you should "listen" first and then "record")

5

Repetitive and cumbersome (wrong sentences like this often appear during exams, especially It’s question 1)

1. He often recalls past events. ("Past" itself means "past", "past" or "past" should be deleted)

2. In the group discussion, he was the first to speak. ("First" and "First" have duplicate meanings, one should be deleted)

6

Inconsistency

1. The teachers are all off work, only Teacher Li is still correcting homework in the office. ("All" and "Only Teacher Li" are inconsistent)

2. The students lined up neatly and squeezed into the exhibition hall. ("Neatly" and "squeezed in" are inconsistent)

7

Improper classification

1. The book corner includes "Children's Literature" and "Juvenile Literature and Art" ”, “China Youth Daily” and other extracurricular books. ("China Youth Daily" is not a book)

2. I like to eat apples, pears, cucumbers and other fruits. (Cucumbers are not fruits)

8

The concept is vague

1. It rained all day yesterday morning. ("Morning" equals "day" is obviously wrong)

2. Papermaking is one of the four great inventions in ancient my country. ("Papermaking" is one of the four great inventions in ancient my country)

9

Inappropriate rhetoric

1. Athletes rush to the finish line like wild horses running wild. . (It is inappropriate to compare athletes to wild horses running wild)

2. The sea is as blue as blue ink. (Inappropriate metaphor)

10

Praise or criticism (bāo biǎn) does not matter

1. Our teacher Li is as smart as a fox. ("Teachers are like foxes" is sarcastic and inappropriate)

2. Zhang Lingfu, commander of the 74th Reorganized Division of the Kuomintang, died in the Battle of Menglianggu.

(Zhang Lingfu is a villain, and the word "sacrifice" has a positive connotation and is inappropriate)