How to use composition materials to write an essay

1. What is composition material

1. Composition material: it is the original material of literature and art, and it is the real life phenomenon that has not been summarized and refined. Once the "material" enters the article, it becomes the "subject matter" and constitutes the material of literary and artistic works. Judging from the different ways in which the author obtains the materials, the materials can be expressed as direct event materials (such as phenomena in life) and indirect symbolic materials (such as graphic materials). In a broad sense, material can refer to all phenomena in the objective world, and it can truly be said to be “inexhaustible and inexhaustible”. For composition materials, you must be good at drawing the essence from life.

2. Composition materials are not written, but need to be accumulated. In terms of accumulation methods, you can accumulate from life, from reading, and from recitation.

(1) Accumulate from life

As the saying goes, as broad as life is, so is language. Colorful life is a "knowledge base", a "language base", and a rich source of composition materials. But they are prepared for those who are willing, which requires us to practice them in our daily lives, whether in study, work, rest, entertainment and sports activities, walking in the streets, sightseeing, social practice, or community activities. To be a thoughtful person, see more, listen more, think more, and absorb more everywhere. Develop a good habit of observing life carefully and carefully.

(2) Accumulation from reading

Books and newspapers are another rich resource for composition materials. Compared with the rich and colorful social life, although it is "second-hand" material, due to the author's processing and sorting, the material is more standardized, more refined and more concentrated, making it easier for readers to absorb and accumulate. Besides, middle school students have heavy learning tasks, and it is neither possible nor necessary to accumulate the materials needed for composition from their daily lives. Then accumulate materials from books, newspapers and periodicals.

(3) Accumulation from recitation

Guide students to recite excellent chapters, exciting fragments, and beautiful sentences in the textbook, so that students can get more language reserves, which is accumulation Effective methods for composition materials. If students read but do not memorize, they will feel that their writing power is insufficient and their words are poor when composing. Therefore, teachers should make full use of the fact that the primary school age is the best period for memory in life, strengthen recitation guidance for students, strengthen memory, and help them accumulate materials that will be used throughout their lives.

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Methods for teachers to guide students to accumulate from recitation:

Generally speaking, when teaching each textbook, teachers must do the following:

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① Select some excellent texts about people, narratives, scenes, and objects, and let students organize and recite them to master the whole text.

② For texts that are inconvenient to recite in full, you can select fragments and guide students to recite. They were also asked to copy it into their own notebooks, and spend their time after school and meals, morning and night, reciting, savoring, and internalizing it.

③Instruct students to extract good sentences from the text and remember them on the basis of understanding. In this way, students can not only become familiar with various sentence patterns, paragraph patterns, and chapter structure methods, but also understand the connections between sentences, sentences and paragraphs, paragraphs and paragraphs, and paragraphs and articles, and consolidate their learning achievements. The things in the book become your own. If you want to use certain sentence patterns and paragraph structures when composing, it is like searching for something.

Reference materials: Sogou Encyclopedia - Composition materials 2. How to write a good composition using one material

It is possible to write an argumentative essay using one material. There are a few suggestions. For reference:

1. Based on this material, extend forward to build some paving the way for the past and the future. It can also be said to extend the material forward, that is, to explain the cause, as a basis for the development of the article. Base.

2. When the article structure is laid out on the front end, it can also be described in a foreshadowing state to create ups and downs for the subsequent development of the article.

3. The description in the middle paragraph should be fully developed and described in detail, but do not go off topic.

4. The ending should have new ideas, or highlight the topic, or highlight the foreshadowing laid before, or leave suspense

5. It is recommended to read Maupassant's "My Uncle Yule" 3. Composition materials for writing. Give me some composition materials for writing about one thing that made me change. Pay attention.

"Inspiration from Sharpening Knives" On Sunday morning, the weather was sunny. The sun was shining brightly, the sky was cloudless, and I was playing happily. At this time, my mother came over and said to me: "There is an embroidered kitchen knife here. Please sharpen it." I agreed readily. As the saying goes. : "Seeing things is easier than doing things." I think this is true at all. After sharpening the knife for a while, my hands were exhausted and I was so angry that I couldn't laugh or cry. I originally wanted to give up sharpening the knife and just muddle along, but at most I would be scolded by my mother. But looking at the rusty edge of the knife, it seemed to be smugly laughing at me: "I'm so mentally retarded. I quit doing things halfway." At this time, the teacher's lesson about grinding and grinding in class clearly appeared in my mind. The story of the Needle. It tells that Li Bai often played truant when he was a child. Once, while playing truant, Li Bai saw an old lady grinding an iron pestle by the river. His curiosity made him go forward involuntarily. Li Bai asked the old lady: "Why are you doing this?" I'm just looking for trouble, so I'm sharpening the iron pestle. Isn't this a waste of effort?" The old lady said seriously: "My child, I'm not looking for trouble, I'm using this iron pestle to sharpen an embroidery needle." After hearing this, Li Bai couldn't help but think. He laughed loudly and said to the old lady: "This is impossible. The iron pestle is so thick and the embroidery needle is so small. How many years and months will it take to grind it?" The old lady said seriously: "As long as you have patience and perseverance. , even big things can be done. The so-called three feet of ice does not freeze in a day." After hearing this, Li Bai felt very ashamed, because he had no patience for anything in the past. After that, he worked hard every day, and spring came. Qiulai finally became a famous poet in the Tang Dynasty. I thought, the old lady has the spirit of perseverance, why can't I? So, I calmed down and started sharpening the knife again. I put the kitchen knife on the whetstone and sharpened it with all my strength. The whetstone made a rustling sound, like spring silkworms eating mulberry leaves. I tried my best again I kept grinding, and the rustling, rustling sound became louder, as if the spring rain was moisturizing the earth. After a while, the edge of the knife became extremely sharp, shining golden in the sun. Looking at the sharp edge of the knife, it seemed to be convinced. He praised me sincerely: "Young man, you can really endure hardships and stand hard work." 4. How to apply accumulated composition materials into compositions

(1) Accumulation and application of textbook materials.

From primary school to junior high school, we have studied dozens of Chinese, political, history, geography and other textbooks. They should become the "natural granary" of our composition materials. The composition "Smile and Sing the Ballad of Life" written by a candidate in Shaoxing in 2011 borrowed the idea of ??"smile" from Gorky's Haiyan. Please enjoy: ...What a persevering smile that is! A pair of alert eyes on the gray head are burning with passion.

The black beak showed unyieldingness, and suddenly, the corners of its mouth seemed to be slightly raised. Maybe I was numbed by the sea breeze, maybe I was exhausted by the waves, but I am more willing to believe that this is the smile of Petrel... The author wittily expanded the textbook material and "processed" the flight posture of Gorky's Petrel He is extremely heroic and abstracts "perseverance" from the personified "smile" as his spiritual pursuit, which is just right.

(2) Accumulation and application of experience materials. Personalized experience is a valuable asset, and accumulating experience and enriching inventory is essential for selecting new materials.

The methods of using this unique material in the examination room are: 1. Extract personalized insights from group life. For example, in the 2012 Changchun essay question "Keeping the past as aftertaste", one candidate quickly extracted the hardships, interesting things, and joys of boarding life from his life inventory, and played a "symphony" that came from his own experience and cannot be "copied". .

2. Carefully select "objects" as clues to connect the fragments of life and interpret the theme. For example, in the 2012 Nantong essay topic "Growing Up Slowly Like This", a candidate carefully selected 3 items - "clothes worn when one year old", "dance shoes worn when dancing ballet" and "small bag full of toys", and narrated My own growth experience is quite new.

3. Extract the "emotions" that make you tempted from life as clues, travel through time and space, and connect scenes. For example, the essay "Collecting the Past with a Smile" written by a candidate in Tianjin in 2012 uses "sadness, melancholy, nostalgia, sadness, excitement and happiness" and "moving forward with a smile" as the emotional context, and selects purple flowers, old class lectures, and cicadas chirping outside the window. , smiles from the past, and parting words are used as emotional attachments, conceived and written.

Please watch the clip: As June 25th approaches, my junior high school life is coming to an end in a sense. Listening to Lao Ban's last lecture, everyone was silent, as if they all wanted to quietly remember what they might lose in the next second.

The sunshine outside the window is very bright, and there is also the unique chirping of cicadas in summer. When the teacher stopped, the huge classroom seemed eerily quiet.

In this unbearable silence, I carefully relived the third grade of junior high school in my memory.

Every day I work hard in the mountains of books, and occasionally I look up and smile at my classmates, and there is always a warm feeling in my chest; every morning, everyone greets each other with dark circles under their eyes, sometimes patting each other on the shoulder and saying, " Don't be exhausted, your body is the capital of revolution." A happy smile will appear on your face...Those days when we were as green as summer leaves, when we think about them now, we will feel the desire to see the veins of leaves clearly through the sunlight. The excitement, that happiness.

Standing under the tree full of purple flowers, watching the leaves falling, I think of the passage in the classmate's book: "When one day in the future we go our separate ways, we must also remember each other. Because that is The memories that belong to us are unique. ”

… Look back with a smile and treasure the memories; move forward with a smile, without sadness. (3) Accumulation and application of classic materials.

The use of famous works materials mainly includes "abbreviation" (used for argumentative essay examples), "rewriting", "continuation" and other forms. No matter which form is used, it must be "connected" with the characters in the original work, keep pace with the times, and reflect the flavor of the times.

For example, the 2012 Qingdao essay was written on the topic of "self-reflection". One candidate chose the topic "Reflection Hall", which tells the story of the recurrence of three apprentices' old problems after returning from Buddhist scriptures, and Tang Monk wanted to build a "Palace of Reflection". "Reflection Hall" restrained them, which led to interesting stories. In the article, new words such as "laid-off", "fans", "book signing", "national poverty-stricken county", "belly dance", "open bidding", "tofu shoddy project", "arrears of wages to migrant workers", etc. are used appropriately, and the character description is in line with his character traits. , which embodies the characteristics of criticizing current ills and being humorous, and has universal warning significance.

(4) Accumulation and application of celebrity materials. This includes the experiences, achievements, spirit, speeches, poems, etc. of celebrities. There are three points to be grasped when using such materials: 1. Introducing ancient materials requires a new perspective.

The 2012 Tongren City essay was titled "This is also a kind of beauty." One candidate used the idea of ??"Farewell is beauty" and expanded it with three subtitles: "Wen Cheng entered Tibet - Farewell is not sadness, "It is a colorful bridge of peace"; "Gou Jian left the country - farewell is not sadness, but a perseverance to rise"; "Qu Yuan threw himself into the river - farewell is not sadness, but touching loyalty." Although the historical celebrities quoted by the young author are well-known, they incorporate their own unique thinking, which is refreshing.

2. Fresh material about contemporary celebrities is more engaging. The 2012 Anshun City essay question was based on the topic of "heart". One candidate wrote an argumentative essay on the topic of "enjoying psychological balance". One of the sub-themes was "external balance depends on internal balance, and the first thing to 'enjoy' is , it should be inner balance." The argument was introduced by balance beam world champion Liu Xuan's answer to a reporter's question. Liu Xuan said: "In the past 16 years, there have been successes, but more of them have been failures.

The greatest wealth I have gained is that I have learned. How to balance your mind after failure. Only with mental balance can you balance on the balance beam. "It is relevant to the topic and clever.

3. The introduction of celebrity speeches and poems must be just right, and the "modification" of famous poems must comply with the needs of the theme and reflect personality. In the 2012 Lianyungang City essay titled "The Road Ahead Is Still a Road," one examinee chose the following argument: Marie Curie, who won two Nobel Prizes, regarded success as passing smoke and gave the gold medal to her little daughter as a toy. She said "I want my children to know that this is not forever."

Such famous sentences are highly consistent with the argument and are extremely persuasive. Another example is the 2012 Liupanshui City essay titled "With you accompanying me along the way." One candidate identified the companion "you" as "spiritual food" - books, and "I" was a "bookworm". The opening line was "' Lazy man, it's already 8 o'clock! "My mother pushed me hard to wake me up.

"Last night the moon was bright and the stars were sparse, so I was tired of reading.

You know, reading is a lot of fun. I am not a lazy person, but a bookworm! '" The author imitates Li Qingzhao's "Like a Dream", with a light and humorous style that is based on himself. 5. How to properly use essay materials

First of all, you have to clarify the purpose of the article you are writing. After clarifying it, you can think of any examples that can be used.

Then, make an outline in your mind and combine the materials in the order you want.

Finally, start writing according to your own ideas, and pay attention to the precise connection of the materials. It is best to have transitional sentences to connect the materials, so that the text can be read smoothly; you can also quote famous quotes and aphorisms to introduce them. Material.

Sometimes you can also use the lens-style method to use materials in the article, so that you can avoid the use of transitional sentences. Generally speaking, lens-style essays are easier to write and easier to get high scores. (The author can check how to write a specific lens composition by himself)

The most important thing when using materials is not to go off topic. Write more, accumulate more, and read more examples. After a long time, you will be able to pick out things like a bag. Just as handy.

I wish the poster can master it soon~~

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Write about the successes of some people in the materials because they understand these principles

Write about the failures of some people in the materials because they do not understand the principles.

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Points: What is the principle, why is the principle correct, and what will happen if you use the principle well? , how to make good use of major principles (choose 1 to 3 from them)

Use examples to prove your points

For example, if you take the path of life, you should first establish your arguments (i.e. Attitude towards the path of life)

Then select appropriate materials for the sub-points, and read the materials aside from the composition. If you finish reading the materials, you will sigh about what the truth is and why it is right. What will happen if you use the major principles well? How to use one of the major principles well? Then this is the material

The interpretation of the material should go back to the composition, look at your major principles, and focus on the writing Focus on the general principle, and others can be passed on (but it is best to write down the achievements in detail).

For example, when writing about "perseverance", you should focus on the various hardships the protagonist has overcome...