Modify several ill sentences and example sentences

Correct the wrong sentence1-improper use of words Example: ① The students warmly welcome the teacher. Xiaoming cherishes time very much. We should stick to our correct views. Zhang Lin's suggestion is correct, and everyone agrees with him. He is tenacious and humbly refuses to accept the opinions of his classmates. At the class meeting, the students almost exposed his advantages and disadvantages. Exercise: Use modifiers to modify the following sentences. (1) Li Lin in our class was rated as a "three good" student. (2) Xiaoling is very arbitrary and never hesitates. He greeted me warmly and shook my hand. (4) Qiqi did something wrong and felt heavy. (5) The school playground has expanded a lot. (6) I just regard growing flowers as an interest in my life. Through hard work, I finally achieved good academic results. (8) If you want to write a good composition, you must have the spirit of not being afraid of difficulties. The soldiers hid in the forward position. (10) During the War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression period, there were many anti-Japanese heroes in China. Modify the second sick sentence-incomplete sentence A complete sentence should generally include a subject and a predicate, and define "who does what" or "what to do and how to do it". Sometimes, the subject is missing. I can sing "Only Mom is Good". Under the teacher's education, I understand the meaning of learning. Reading this article has taught me a lot. Sometimes, predicates are missing. We should have lofty revolutionary ideals. The bus will be on the meeting road in front of my house. We should make our country more prosperous. Sometimes the object is missing. I gave it to Xiaoli. The person I respect most is. Exercise: Read the following sentences and complete the incomplete sentences. 1. Dad is in the light. The room looks warm when it shines on the table through the glass. Look closely at the little feet of Parthenocissus tricuspidata and you will think of the picture. We should pay attention to hygiene. 5. The sound of piano came from the hut. We should educate young people to love their motherland. 7. The boat quickly left the dock and headed for the middle of the lake like an arrow that left the string. 8. The PLA uncle opened it. Kong Fansen has helped many orphans in Tibet. 10. The beloved teacher takes care of everything. 1 1. From this ordinary little thing, a profound truth is illustrated. Example: ① Li Yong was definitely rated as a "three good" student by his classmates. It's a sunny night. Beijing in May is a beautiful season. To tell the truth, he can't sing well. I have told everyone the news of victory. We discussed and listened to the headmaster's report. This year's wheat harvest is in sight and the growth is gratifying. These two old and new societies are really in sharp contrast! Exercise: Find out the inappropriate word order in the following sentences and correct it. China people have a special interest in me. 2. Cars running on the road. China is the most populous country in the world. He held the old worker's clenched hand. There are rich minerals buried underground in our country. 6. On the rostrum sat an old worker with gray hair. There is not much time before the exam, so we should review quickly. 8. Through the review at this stage, the students' total score has been improved. 9. We discussed and listened to the report of the old Red Army. 10. The teacher praised Li Xiaoming's spirit of helping others. Revise the sick sentence 4-repeat the reading example: ① The teacher repeatedly taught us to study hard. There are fruit trees everywhere in the mountains. All the teachers, students and principals of our school attended the National Day party. Exercise: Correct the repetition in the following sentences. 1. Grandma remembered many past events. We listened to the teacher without blinking. The school is a big park with beautiful scenery. The flowers in the park are very beautiful. We should save water and not waste it. 6. Xiaohong answers the teacher's questions endlessly. It was sunny this afternoon, but I didn't expect it to rain heavily in the afternoon, which really surprised me. 8. The wheat is ripe, and the color in the field is golden. I have a bright red scarf. 10. After reading the sketch "So Packaged", everyone laughed in unison. Inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent-inconsistent. It rained heavily all night last night. I'm going to graduate from primary school. I concluded that he might be Lu Li's brother. The students lined up neatly and squeezed into the cinema. Exercise: Find out the inconsistencies in the following sentences and correct them. 1. A thunderstorm lasted for a day and a night. In the early morning, the afterglow of the sunset filled the campus. I was doing my homework when Sun Lin came to play with me. I am good at all subjects, but my music is not good. Almost no one in the class failed the exam. 6. As soon as the bell rings, the campus gradually boils. 7. Look at the skillful movements. He must be a professional athlete. 8. I bravely rushed down the hill, and I was a little scared. 9. The sky is overcast and the sun is blinding people. 10. I totally agree with your method, but I disagree with one point. Examples of conceptual confusion: ① There are various snakes and many birds on display in the crawling hall of the zoo. (2) There are many trees in the park, such as pine, cypress and peach blossom. I like apples, bananas, cucumbers and other fruits. There are extracurricular books such as Children's Literature, Youth Literature and Art and China Youth Daily in the book corner. Exercise: Correct the vague concepts in the following sentences. 1. I love reading China Youth Daily and Childhood. 2. Today, my mother bought a lot of vegetables: vegetables, radishes, fish ... 3. Shanghai Oriental Pearl, Wan Li Great Wall and Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are all famous historical sites in China. Li Ming's father can speak three or four foreign languages, especially Chinese. 5. Papermaking is China's four great inventions. His hometown is Nanjing, Jiangsu. 7. The West Lake is a good place to visit in spring. 8. The CPC Central Committee sent planes to send food, medicine, rice and clothes to the people in the disaster areas. 9. There are all kinds of sports equipment on the school playground, such as horizontal bar, parallel bars, climbing poles, bunkers and basketball courts. In the zoo, we saw many interesting animals, such as monkeys, elephants, tigers, lions, Siberian tigers and polar bears. Modify seven ill sentences-improper collocation. First, the subject-predicate collocation is improper. The homework that the teacher asked me to do was finished on Saturday. Everyone pays attention to school hygiene, and the health and diseases of the whole school will be guaranteed. (3) People's lives have been continuously improved and improved. Second, the verb-object collocation is improper. With the help of the teacher, I quickly overcame my mistake. At the farewell party, the students performed songs and dances. I listen to radio and TV every night. The students gradually corrected their attitude and purpose. Third, the collocation of related words is improper. Although Mr. Liu is over sixty years old, he is in good health. In order to improve everyone's literary appreciation ability, this poem recitation exercise was held: find out the improper collocation of words in the following sentences and correct them. 1. Dad's password was brought home on time. The path between the two mountains flows slowly. Mom made a cup of tea, delicious! After the teacher's education, I improved my interest in learning. He likes playing football and table tennis very much. 6. During the exam, I meticulously answered questions and handed in papers. 7. After sweeping the floor today, we put the tables and chairs in order. 8. We strolled along the suburban roads. The teacher praised him because he made great progress. 10. Only by accepting others' opinions with an open mind can we correct our shortcomings. Practice and modify the following sentences comprehensively, and think about what kind of mistakes they belong to. The streets are lined with people. (2) Miss Li is very kind. She always laughs when she sees us. (3) The scenery of the West Lake is elegant and beautiful. (4) Zhang Yan and Wen made an appointment to review their lessons together in their respective homes. The athletes ran the whole course with firm perseverance. (6) Reading extracurricular books can increase our knowledge and writing level. (7) Only independent thinking can improve academic performance. (8) Li Gang doesn't care about collective affairs. I like painting, especially portraits. (10) Under the teacher's education, I corrected my learning attitude and purpose. (1 1) We not only exercise regularly, but also strengthen our physique. (12) On her way to school, Xiaoli walked to school alone. (13) My mother is worried. (14) Old workers help the police to keep order on the road. (15) In the autumn fields, the ripeness and fragrance of fruits can be seen everywhere. Comprehensive 2( 1) Xiaoming wrote to his mother and said, "Everything is fine here. I hope I won't miss him at home! " (2) Through studying in the Youth League School, my ideological understanding has been improved obviously. (3) Zhu De was born in a family of working people, and he has developed a character of loving labor and being able to bear hardships since he was a child. (4) After summing up, I improved my study methods and academic performance. (5) Shanghai Science and Technology Development Company has gathered a group of professional teams with excellent level and excellent technology. (6) A company's opening advertisement says that small gifts will be given free of charge until they are used up. (7) The newly opened store said in the advertisement: "Welcome new and old customers". (8) It is hard for people to imagine whether a person who doesn't care about others can write touching works. The people of China are striving to build a powerful socialist modernization country. (10) Although this novel has been roughly turned over, it will take a lot of time. (1 1) Eggplant, wax gourd and tomato * * * are all from his family, accounting for 1200 kilograms. (12) In order to write this newsletter well, he learned a lot about Mr. Zhang's advanced deeds. (13) After listening to the scientist's report, I strengthened my determination to learn scientific and cultural knowledge well for the construction of the motherland. (14) As soon as I entered the classroom, I saw the whole class reading and a female teacher patrolling. (15) Now, studying hard and exercising self-study ability are the keys for students to make great achievements in the future. (16) Wang Dahai's revolutionary spirit of being fearless in times of crisis and giving his life to save others always comes to my mind. (17) Everyone seriously discussed the extracurricular swimming training this summer vacation. (18) Whether the content is substantial and the sentences are fluent is the minimum requirement for middle school students' composition. (19) With a little careful consideration, this math problem is not difficult to work out. Zhang Yong is such a good student that no one will deny that he can do such an uncivilized thing.