What are the good sentences and paragraphs in the article Winter in Jinan?

The winter in Jinan is very beautiful, and the winter in Jinan written by Lao She is even more beautiful. Mountains, water, sunshine and snow all give people a beautiful enjoyment. In particular, the rich feelings soaked in the picturesque scenery make the works have a unique charm and a long aftertaste. There are many places worth pondering in this paper, and the following points are briefly described here:

The layout of this article is very organized. In the first paragraph, the winter weather in Jinan is described. By comparing with Beiping, London and the tropics, the author wrote the "miracle" and "strange thing" of Jinan's windless, foggy and drug-free winter, highlighted its "warmth" and praised it as a "treasure land". This is the main thread that runs through the whole article, and the unique beauty of Jinan in winter is all. "This is not surprising" is an important transitional sentence, which turns to the description of winter landscape. Before writing mountains and rivers alone, it gives people a general feeling of Jinan, and uses anthropomorphic brushwork to set off an "ideal realm" of "warmth and comfort". The author sticks to this point, painting mountain scenery and watercolor, and reflects his feelings in the landscape, which not only shows the beauty of Jinan's winter landscape, but also expresses his sincere love for the motherland's rivers and mountains. Write about the snow-covered mountains, and then the distant mountains outside the city, and outline an elegant ink painting. The fifth paragraph, write the water color in winter. The author writes about the green color of algae to set off the clarity and transparency of water. He also expanded his imagination, integrated the skylight with the water color, and depicted the bright and beautiful colors of Quancheng. Finally, he ended with a concise, powerful and meaningful sentence. The full text is arranged orderly and the context is clear.

The article uses metaphor and personification, which is not only similar, but also vivid and appropriate. The metaphor is outstanding, such as comparing Jinan to a "small cradle"; Compare the snow scene of the small village on the hillside to "small ink painting"; Comparing Jinan in the whole winter to a "blue crystal" is small and beautiful, and comparing the low mountains in Jinan with the cold winter is just right. There are more anthropomorphic sentences, more obvious personalization, for example, the old city of Jinan "sleeps warmly and comfortably, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up"; Write a circle of hills around Jinan with warmth. "They whispered,' Don't worry, it will be warm here.' "The mottled colors on the hillside are described as' putting a floral dress with water patterns on the mountain', which is so beautiful. Compare pink Bo Xue under the setting sun to a shy girl, she is charming; Anthropomorphize algae, water and weeping willows, saying, "Take out all the green stored all the year round", "With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze" and "The weeping willows have to take a picture in the water! "These all show the infinite vitality of Jinan in winter and the hazy spring scenery in winter.

The blending of scenes is another feature of this paper. When describing the winter scenery in Jinan, the article reveals the author's admiration everywhere. There are several ways to write it: first, express feelings directly. For example, it begins with "to a person who is used to living in Beiping" and "to a person who has just returned from London". Through comparison, we can draw a conclusion that Jinan is really a treasure, which not only writes its own unique feelings, but also appears sincere. The last sentence contains the affection of "I love Jinan in winter, I love Jinan in winter". The second is to create artistic conception and show deep affection. For example, "please close your eyes and think about it: an ancient city ... is this the ideal state?" "The best thing is that it snowed a little!" This is a small ink painting. In the beautiful artistic conception, it expresses the true feelings of the author's praise. Third, combine reality, expand imagination and express love. For example, "there is a bun of white flowers on the top of the tree, which looks like a Japanese wet nurse" and "the top of the tree is all white, and the blue sky is edged with silver", which not only writes the shape of the scenery, but also is full of love.

Mr. Lao She is a master of language. He is very particular about words, such as: "An ancient city with mountains and water is basking in the sun, sleeping warmly and comfortably, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up." "When the sun sets, the yellow sun shines obliquely on the mountainside, and the snow seems to suddenly blush and show a little pink." "In addition", further state the reasons, or supplement and add new reasons; "Return" means expanding the scope, acquiring or supplementing a certain degree. Here, the conjunction "besides"

The title of the article is "Winter in Jinan", which explains that the winter in Jinan, a specific environment, is different from the winter in other places. Finally, "this is Jinan in winter" is the conclusion of the full text, which expresses the author's overall impression of Jinan in this particular season. It means that this warm, picturesque, clear blue crystal world in the morning is Jinan in winter! This ending not only echoes the beginning "Jinan is really a treasure", but also points to the theme, expressing the author's praise and giving people room for aftertaste.

Please close your eyes and think about it: an ancient city with mountains and water is basking in the sun, sleeping warmly and comfortably, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up. Is this an ideal realm?

Sleeping and Awakening are anthropomorphic writing methods, which personify the "old city" and make it have the feeling and meaning of life, showing the warm and comfortable characteristics of Jinan in winter.

There are some villages lying on the hillside, and there is some snow on the roof of the small village.

The word "lie" is used to describe villages, snow, their appearance and shape as if they were living things.

The clearer the sky, the greener the algae. With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze, and those weeping willows with long branches will take a picture in the water!

I can't bear to personify water and make it full of aura; The purpose of writing is to write about the preciousness, loveliness and beauty of green and green spirit.

Tell everyone in the group or class what winter is like in your hometown, and then draw lessons from some writing methods of the text to write the most distinctive scenery in your hometown in winter, with unlimited words.

There are many places to appreciate in this paper, such as the choice and change of observation angle: describing the scenery, and taking different description angles because of the different foothold of observing the scenery. Some are under the observed object and look up from below. For example, in the fifth paragraph of the text, "Look up slowly from the clarified river …", some of them are above the observed object and overlooking from above, such as the second paragraph of the text. Some people are carefully observing the described object part by part. Also, with the change of the author's foothold, describe what he sees, which is what he usually calls "changing scenery." Another example is the use of language, the deployment of colors, the arrangement of structure, the writing of metaphors and personification, and the characteristics of scene blending, all of which can be appreciated as key points. Of course, in the process of appreciation, it is not necessary to cover everything, but to highlight the key points and concentrate on appreciating a few key paragraphs, so as to get a glimpse of the whole leopard.

Fourth, the beauty of painting in winter in Jinan (excerpt, Enoch Tsui)

Vivid language can arouse readers' association and imagination, and make readers' minds produce concrete images with light, color and state, which is the enlightenment of language. The author of Winter in Jinan gives full play to the enlightening function of this language, arouses rich association and imagination of light, color and state in readers' minds, and forms a vivid picture.

How does Lao She arouse readers' association and imagination, and make the winter in Jinan have the characteristics of painting art?

First, contrast the image with hue contrast.

Mr. Lao She aroused readers' reverie by saying, "For a person who is used to living in Beiping like me, if it doesn't blow in winter, it will be a miracle", and let readers see a picture of depression in which the north wind roared and it was freezing, and set off the "warm" color of Jinan in winter with the "cold" color in this picture; It arouses readers' imagination by saying, "For a person who has just returned from London, like me, it is very strange to see sunlight in winter", which makes readers seem to see a gloomy picture outside the fog in London, and sets off the "bright" color of Jinan in winter with the "dark" color in this picture. That's not enough. The author also showed us a terrible picture of the hot sun in the tropics, and then used this picture. "

Second, from the complicated scenery, omit the minor parts and grasp the main features of the main scenery to highlight it.

This is a painting method of landscape painting. Mr Lao She used the composition framing method of China's landscape paintings to describe the land of Jinan, that is, "seeing the big from the small". The author spread his imaginary wings, flew to the sky of Jinan overlooking the earth, and then made a simple and freehand description of the land of Jinan. Draw a city, not its east, west, north and south. "An ancient city with mountains and water is sleeping comfortably in the sun, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up" (note: the mountain in this sentence is the mountain in Jinan). Some trivial details are omitted, and only Jinan's beautiful sleeping state in winter is painted, leaving readers with sufficient space for association, imagination and artistic re-creation. Painting the mountain is not about painting its top, bottom, left and right. "The hill surrounds Jinan, only a little bit of the north is missing." The main point of the scenery is captured with a pen. Then guide readers to develop artistic association and imagination: "This circle of hills is particularly lovely in winter, as if Jinan were placed in a small cradle, and they quietly said,' Don't worry, it will be very warm here.' "With this kind of association and imagination, the picture will come alive. Men, women and children who paint people, but not people, not only omit the eyes and ears like Chinese painting, but also omit the shape completely.

Third, carefully design the scenery and composition to show the image of the scenery layer by layer.

Painting is a kind of "space art", and the juxtaposed scenes in space must be arranged skillfully according to the principle of beauty. Lao She's prose also uses this painting technique. If the second seamless Jinan land is a freehand painting, then the third beautiful Jinan snow scene is closer to meticulous painting.

The author draws the beauty of the hill by describing the snow light, snow color and snow state in every detail of the beautiful hill. The artistic structure is divided into two layers. First, we describe the mountains, peaks, slopes and mountainsides with meticulous brushwork, step by step, and understate them: they are white, "there is a bun of white flowers on the top of the tree", and the pine and green are white. It is silver, "putting a silver edge on the blue sky", such as washed blue sky, such as silver snow; It is colored, "Put a flower coat with waterline on the mountain" is its color, "This flower coat seems to be blown by the wind, which makes you want to see more beautiful mountain skin" is its state, and it writes the movement in silence in the description of color and state; It has the most touching color in the world. Under the dazzling setting sun, like a girl, it "suddenly feels blushing and shows a little pink", and in the brilliant rendering in the evening, it paints feelings in form. It is really a scene, a scene, a state. This paragraph is described in detail, from the method point of view, it is meticulous, from the artistic conception point of view, it is still based on freehand brushwork. China's paintings pay attention to "vivid charm", and the snow is portrayed in detail. When readers are brought into the artistic conception of association and imagination, they feel not only the external beauty of light, color and state of snow, but also the emotional charm and internal beauty of snow. What the author creates is the highest realm of painting art, that is, "vivid charm".

In order to make this painting more perfect, the fourth paragraph depicts the snow scene on the second floor. After sketching separately, the snow scene is always painted, and the ancient city, the inside of the city, the outside of the city, the hillside, the village and the whole land are all put into the snow scene. The conclusion directly points out: "This is a small ink painting, perhaps painted by a famous painter in the Tang Dynasty."

Fourth, highlight your most vivid impressions and feelings, so as to arouse readers' similar experiences and create an immersive feeling.

Jinan is called Quancheng, and its water is very famous. The water in Jinan comes from the depths of the earth, and it is mighty and flowing all year round. How to draw such a beautiful image? The author abandons all kinds of appearances of Jinan winter water, summarizes the vivid image of the water with his own impressions and feelings, and expresses his unique feelings in the vivid image. First of all, he tried to exaggerate the "green" of Jinan's winter water and a series of five "green" characters. The author describes the green of duckweed, green algae and willow shadows on the water surface, but reveals the green of water. Read these duckweeds, green algae and green willows. Feel the green spirit and green life contained in Jinan winter water, and then make great efforts to render the "life" of Jinan winter water. All the details, even the specific form of water flow, have disappeared, leaving only the vitality of water: "The air, the air and the sky are so clear and blue from top to bottom." It is impossible for water in nature to flow to the sky. It is the unique impression that Mr. Lao She got by observing the scenery with the painter's eyes. In the art of graphic painting, in order to show the unique state and potential of water, running water can completely flow into the air and sky. This is not an excellent painting art? At the end, in Water Color, Water Light and Shui Ying, the author left a beautiful image for Quancheng with the brightest and most vivid colors in the whole article: "This crystal is covered with yellow grass mountain with red top, like a small group of gray trees on the carpet; This is Jinan in winter. "

Finally, this article is a complete picture in terms of conception, composition and brushwork. Sunshine, mountains and rivers, people, white snow and green water all show the word "warm". It draws a big layout of the landscape. Writing snow and water describes the specific details of this picture, from the warm sun in the sky to the warm city and the warm mountain under the warm sun, the snow on the mountain can be traced, and the water in the snow is drawn from the snow, which is smooth and in one go; Lao She is really a Dan Gao Qing.