Write a composition by analogy.

1. Write a composition by comparison. Students, when we have some of the above bad behaviors, will you think of the 4 Liang water rationed by each person in the dry areas of the five southwestern provinces every day? Do you think anyone in the world died of hunger? Do you think children in poor mountainous areas are still studying under kerosene lamps? Do you think of the fallen trees in the forest? We have no right to waste, and we have no capital waste and profligacy. If such waste spreads to the whole city, the whole province, the whole country and even the whole world, how much will we lose in one day? However, as students, although we can't serve the society and make great contributions, everyone, as long as they start from themselves and strive to be frugal, is a contribution.

Therefore, it is time for us to take practical action. What I got on the paper is very shallow, and I don't know how to do it. Students, we should start from ourselves, from the small things around us, and show our determination to protect the ecology and environment with our own practical actions, and strive to do it: in life, save every drop of water, keep the tap on, and wash your face with a face; Keep every piece of paper well, don't post "inspiration" indiscriminately, and report to the teacher or relevant departments directly if you find or lose items; Save every ration, "a drop in the bucket is hard to come by"; Save every kilowatt hour to ensure that the classroom lights are no longer tired and useless.

In study: save our time, make full use of time to do meaningful things, enrich our study life, study hard and work hard. Only in this way can we move towards our ideal posts and make greater contributions to society. We should become the benchmark and banner of the new century, with good moral quality, learning ability and awareness of saving environmental protection.

In the face of pressure, take a positive attitude to deal with it, rather than unrestrained venting or powerless avoidance; In the face of difficulties in study and life, we should bravely accept them, summon up courage to struggle, and boldly and resolutely do what we can, instead of hesitating and stopping. Teachers and students, at this critical moment, we can't hesitate any longer. The natural climate has shown us that it will be too late to take action. For the blue sky above us, and to prevent our tears from turning into the last drop of water, only by saving everyone from low carbon can we win this tough battle! Let's act! Let our younger generation really take on the new force of low-carbon environmental protection and play a resounding song of victory tomorrow.

2. Ask to write a short essay in a comparative way. There are several tall palm trees in our campus.

Seen from a distance, it looks like an open umbrella. Standing at its feet and looking up, it is straight up, up to four or five floors.

Its trunk is thick, straight and slender. The thickness of the trunk varies from top to bottom, and the middle part of the trunk is the thickest.

The upper and lower parts are thinner than the middle part. The most beautiful is the leaves of palm trees, which spread out like peacocks.

The leaves are very big, separated by small leaves, like Guanyin with a Thousand Hands, which is really interesting. Palm trees are full of vitality all year round.

Whether it is spring, summer, autumn and winter, it is so green and so high, as if soldiers are guarding our campus and accompanying us to learn and grow. In summer, the hot sun shines on the earth like a fireball. With the shelter of palm trees, we won't feel so hot when we play games under the trees and go to physical education class.

Sometimes children drag palm leaves and ride them to play. Really like a magician in a comic book. It was fun. When it rains, the leaves of palm trees become greener after being washed by rain, which adds a bit of greenery to the campus and makes our campus more beautiful.

Autumn wind is blowing, and the leaves of palm trees are swaying, like a little girl with green hair dancing happily. Also issued a "rustling, rustling ..." sound, like a little singer singing.

What a complete song and dance! Palm trees, you not only add a lot of beauty to the campus, but also bring laughter to the students. I like you-the tall palm tree.

In the political class, the teacher suddenly asked me, "What is your ideal?" I'm at a loss. I don't know how to answer this question at the moment. I once had my own ideals, starting from childhood.

I didn't know anything when I was a child. My mother asked me, "What is your ideal?" I opened my eyes wide and asked curiously, "What is an ideal?" My mother told me: "the ideal is what you want to be when you grow up."

For example, be an engineer who can draw design drawings, a worker who can produce parts, and an uncle who sells things ... "I thought for a while and said," I want to be a teacher because teachers can already take care of their students. "My mother was shocked by my answer. She told me, "Being a teacher is very hard. "

I said, "As long as I can be a teacher, being a teacher is the hardest. I am not afraid!" " "How time flies! In an instant, I grew up two years old. I went to school, but my grandmother got a cerebral hemorrhage. Since then, my ideal has become to be a doctor.

In the third grade, the teacher asked us to write our own ideals, so I wrote down my new ideal: to be a glorious people's teacher in the future. I often dream of becoming a doctor to relieve the pain of patients.

Dad told me, "It's not easy to be a doctor. You have to know a lot of knowledge to ... "But I stubbornly shouted: I want to be a doctor, I must be a doctor! "Suddenly, I grew taller, grew up, and became more sensible.

Entering middle school, I don't know how many times, the teacher talked about ideals and asked us to correctly understand ideals, fantasies and fantasies. I don't know when, I read a passage from Grandma Bing Xin: "The flower of success is often admired for its brilliance. However, at the beginning, its buds were soaked with tears of struggle and full of blood and rain of sacrifice. " Yes, the ideal is beautiful, but it needs to be realized from now on.

In order to realize his ideal, Zhang Guanghou studied hard with the spirit of "stupid birds fly first", devoted himself to mathematics with double time and energy, and finally became a famous young mathematician. This gave me a profound enlightenment.

I don't know when I started to correct the mistakes my mother told me. I began to understand the great significance of the ideal and stopped treating it as a joke.

Tolstoy, a famous Russian writer, said: "Ideal is the guiding light. Without ideals, there is no firm direction; Without direction, there is no life. "

I see: how much the ideal can promote a person's life. I began to think and seriously consider my ideal.

I think: if I want to be a painter when I grow up, then I will practice painting and calligraphy every day from now on, and I will be able to draw a beautiful picture of the reunification of the motherland in the future, and then write a beautiful couplet; If I want to be an engineer when I grow up, from now on, I will concentrate on learning knowledge and apply it to my work in the future; If I want to be a doctor when I grow up, then, from now on, I should know how to care and love others, so that I can take up the bounden duty of a doctor and save lives in the future. If I grow up ... well, I think: I want to choose the ideal I can achieve, and benefit the society, the motherland and the people in the future, and strive for the ideal from now on. Yes, when I grow up, I will consider my ideal from another new angle.

It's next to the house in my hometown in the country. There is a very large space for others to grow mahogany seedlings.

Mahogany is a special kind of tree. It is beautiful and straight. It was planted in the old forest farm and has grown into a forest several feet high. So when I saw that the saplings of mahogany only reached my knees, it was a little hard to believe my eyes.

The man who grows mahogany seedlings is a very tall man. When he bent down to plant trees, he felt like transplanting rice seedlings. He often comes to water the saplings after they are planted. Strangely, he comes here irregularly, once every three days, once every five days, and sometimes once every ten days. The amount of water is not certain, sometimes more water, sometimes less water.

When I lived in the country, I walked on the path next to mahogany saplings every day, and people who planted saplings occasionally went home for tea. Sometimes he comes in the morning, sometimes in the afternoon, and the time is not necessarily.

I'm getting more and more strange. Stranger still, redwood seedlings sometimes wither inexplicably.

So when he comes, he always brings a few seedlings to replant. At first, I thought he was too lazy to water the trees after such a long time.

But how do lazy people know how many trees will wither? Later, I thought he was too busy and everything was irregular. However, how can busy people do things so leisurely? I can't help asking him when he should come. How often do you water it? Why does redwood wither for no reason? If you water it every day, the redwood seedlings will not wither, will they? Tree planting machine.

3. Write a composition in contrast [Thinking Analysis]

Let's talk about the contrast in Lu Xun's Kong Yiji first.

[Problem solving process]

Contrast, as an artistic technique commonly used by Lu Xun, can also be seen everywhere in Kong Yiji. Now let's talk briefly about the artistic effect of each group contrast in the novel:

1. Comparison between "short clothes gang" and "wearing long clothes"

A. the "short coat gang" is standing outside the cabinet drinking.

B. "The man in the gown" wandered into the house next to the shop, ordered wine and vegetables, and "sat and drank slowly".

Xianheng Hotel is the epitome of the dark old society at that time, with distinctive characteristics of the times. The novel introduces two kinds of drinkers: one is the "short coat gang"-the working "poor workers"; The other is the "long gown wearer"-a leisurely and rich exploiter. In the sentence, "short" and "long", "outside" and "inside", "standing" and "sitting" are in sharp contrast, paving the way for Kong Yiji's appearance. The contrast between the two reveals the disparity between the rich and the poor and the difference in the social status of customers.

2. Contrast of internal contradictions:

Kong Yiji was the only one standing drinking and wearing a gown. "Standing and drinking" shows that Confucius has been living in poverty, and his economic status and social status are the same as those of the "short coat gang"; "Wearing a gown" shows that he puts on airs, envies those who are leisurely and rich ideologically, despises the working people and is unwilling to associate with the "short clothes gang". The contrast between the way he drinks and the clothes he wears reflects the contradiction between his economic status and ideology, thus revealing Kong Yiji's special social status.

3. Comparison between "beating" and "being beaten":

A. Ding defeated Kong Yiji.

B. Kong Yiji's leg is broken.

This comparison reveals how the imperial examination system divided scholars into two opposite poles: some climbed the imperial examination ladder, such as Ding, and beat Kong Yiji at will, becoming arrogant "cannibals"; More people fell down, such as Kong Yiji, who was poor and became the object of being beaten and eaten. This fact profoundly exposed the evil of the imperial examination system.

4. The contrast between "laughter" and "fate":

A. Kong Yiji's face is black and thin, and it is no longer like it; Wearing a shabby jacket and crossing his legs ... his eyes seemed to beg the shopkeeper not to mention it again.

B. At this time, several people have gathered around, and they all laughed with the shopkeeper.

The novel describes in detail the tragic scene of Kong Yiji's leg being broken by Ding during his last appearance. Kong Yiji died in the laughter of drinkers and shopkeepers, and "laughter" runs through the whole novel. This burst of laughter was in sharp contrast with Kong Yiji's unfortunate fate, which profoundly exposed the darkness and cruelty of feudal society and criticized the numbness of the masses.

5. Comparison between "clap" and "touch":

A. Without answering, he said to the cabinet, "Heat two bowls of wine and ask for a plate of fennel beans." I will pay a lot of money.

B.he took four pence out of his tattered pocket and put it in my hand. He found his hands covered with mud. ...

The word "Pai" shows that Kong Yiji wants to show his generosity to the "short coat gang" who only spends a lot of money, writes his proud expression, and also shows his pedantic character; The word "touch" shows that Kong Yiji is slow to move, and the "four pence" is well hidden, which shows that this money is hard to come by, and Kong Yiji is further down and out. The contrast between the first "row" and the second "touch" reflects the deteriorating economic status of Kong Yiji.

6. Contrast between "disdain" and "decadence":

A. Someone asked, "Kong Yiji, can you really read?" Kong Yiji looked at the person who asked him and showed disdain.

B. They went on to say, "Why can't you even get half a scholar?" Kong Yiji immediately a face of depression, face was full of gray.

Kong Yiji is proud to be a scholar. He always pretends to be a scholar in front of everyone and disdains the jacket gang. Even when others made fun of him, he repeatedly showed pretentious and narcissistic arrogance. Only when people ask, "Why can't you get half a scholar?" Does he feel very painful, because he is bent on learning from middle school, but he never gets what he wants, which has become his greatest pain and humiliation. This is enough to show that feudal culture and imperial examination system have seriously poisoned the lower intellectuals.

Among the bustling crowd around me, there are parents who love me, classmates who have classes together every day, and hard-working teachers ... Among them, a stranger left a deep impression on me-a sanitation worker. Last winter, the sea salt weather after the cold snap was extremely cold. Go to school in the morning and arrive at Qiyuan Road. Suddenly, a cold wind blew, and I couldn't help saying, "Wow! Looking up, I suddenly saw a middle-aged woman wearing an orange sanitation suit sitting on a stone pillar next to Qiyuan Road. She is of medium height, with a ponytail, and her hair hanging from her forehead looks a little messy. Her dark face was carved with several wrinkles prematurely, and her deep purple lips were chapped. She holds an old enamel cup in her left hand and a pair of bamboo chopsticks in her right hand. She ate a cold breakfast in the cold wind, and a garbage sweeper was parked next to her. I asked my aunt curiously, "Aunt, aren't you cold?" Aunt smiled and said, "it's not cold, we are used to it." "In a simple conversation, I learned that she is a worker at Haiyan Environmental Sanitation Center. For the cleanliness of the city, regardless of spring, summer, autumn and winter, regardless of wind, frost, rain and snow, they go to work at 4 am every day. When people are still sleeping soundly in sweet dreams, they have swept through the streets, accompanied by a "whoosh" sound. What would sea salt look like without their dedication without regrets? Whenever the morning sun rises and the city resumes a new day, who will think of the hard work of these urban beauticians? Some people may think that sanitation work is vulgar and look down on them, but I think they are great and deserve people's respect because they have a kind, simple and hardworking heart. Thinking of this, I can't help but say to the aunt emotionally: "Aunt, you have worked hard! " " .

5. Contrast writing. The beginning is the beginning of the composition describing the scenery (Shunde Teaching and Research Office). When commenting on the Grand View Garden, Jia Baoyu said something insightful: all beauty must be "natural and interesting".

The excellent college entrance examination composition of millions of candidates in China cannot be separated from a "reason" and a "fun". The college entrance examination magazine collected and sorted out the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination in recent years, and found that there are many remarkable places, but they are all interesting.

Just reading the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and encouraged. Let's classify them and dedicate them to you. Maybe you can learn from them.

First, the most taboo to read the opening is to give people the feeling of digression with a pen. It directly tells the marking teacher that the author has not carefully judged the meaning of the question, and the composition score will be greatly reduced. Please look at the beginning of several compositions in the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination.

Example 1 "remembered by language and communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, the clouds are rolling and the clouds are comfortable. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; The lush green clothes in midsummer indicate the harvest in autumn; The fruit of autumn shows the bleak winter.

The four seasons cycle, autumn comes and winter comes, and everything in nature is wonderful. How can we expect the hope of early spring without the baptism of severe winter? Our human society is just like nature. Without language connection and the same lifestyle, how can we connect the world into a whole and build a bridge of communication? "The metaphor at the beginning is improper, and the previous metaphor part is not well paved in similarities.

Why do you say that? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where is the relationship between "green dress" and "bumper harvest", "fruit" and "bleak"? In particular, the rhetorical question "How can we hope for early spring without the baptism of severe winter" has nothing to do with the topic. Example 2 "Spiritual interaction": "Trees never laugh at the weakness of grass, which, though weak, adds green to the grassland; Peony never laughs at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, they bring infinite vitality to the earth.

Trees and grass, peony and wild flowers can be harmonious because they have a common language, communicate with each other and interact with each other. "At the beginning, I was close to the topic and found no similarities, which seemed far-fetched.

Example 3 "Language and Communication": "Language is a grass, and communication is a shade; Language is white clouds, communication is floating clouds. Language is a flower, and communication is an ocean of flowers. " This beginning regards "language" and "communication" as the relationship between individuals and the whole, and fails to understand the relationship between them.

All the above three situations use metaphors to increase literary talent, which is also the usual writing method of many candidates. If the examinee does not have an accurate grasp of the topic, he will take a wrong turn at the beginning, which will seriously affect his score.

The following examples illustrate the function of language more accurately and vividly. Example 4 "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; Language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; Language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth.

Only when the language is expressed accurately can communication be successful. If the language is wrong, it may have unpredictable consequences.

So how can we express the language accurately and promote the success of communication? Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue is still in the exam; When judging the meaning of a question, seek accuracy first, and then seek image. Many methods are introduced at the beginning.

1, quote the famous saying (1) ask how the world is and teach people to commit themselves to life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he.

His question can be said to have been asked for a long time Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price.

But every family's words are as different as everyone's face. Shi said, "Love is a tool.

..... "("What is love in the world ") 2 In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "Long years, a flick of a finger.

In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine." Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. "

Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success.

("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice. (A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you.

Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat.

You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened. The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time."

At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past. And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world.

(Heroes of the Three Kingdoms) Liang Shanbo's Juyi Hall is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling.

What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently. It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin.

That's why all heroes gather here to argue.