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At that moment, my heart was also rising

On Monday morning, the weather was sunny, and the fiery red sun had just emerged from the horizon. A breeze gently caressed the earth, and a few white clouds floated in the blue sky. All the teachers and students of the school gathered in the playground, arranged in neat formations, with very serious expressions and with great reverence, waiting for the arrival of this solemn moment.

The host's solemn command resounded throughout the playground: "Everyone stand at attention! The flag-raising ceremony begins now! Play the national anthem and raise the flag!" After a moment, the exciting melody of "March of the Volunteers" came from the radio. This is How familiar, what a sonorous voice, no noise or noise allowed, he was only born for this moment. The flag guard tossed a corner of the national flag in his hand, and the bright five-star red flag rose slowly amid the national anthem, gathering the respectful eyes of all teachers and students, solemn and solemn. The national flag stretched out and fluttered gently in the breeze. Rising to the sky in front of everyone's gaze.

I look up at the five-star red flag: the national flag, the national flag, the symbol of New China. You are the pride of the Chinese nation and the Chinese people. The golden five-pointed star is your noble dignity; the bright red color is the condensed blood of countless Chinese people. On October 1, 1994, on the Tiananmen Gate, Chairman Mao raised you into the sky for the first time, which represented that China has since entered an era of independence and the people are the masters of the country. China is like a lion that wakes up from sleep and can no longer be bullied by foreign invaders. And you are the totem of this great nation and the sustenance of the spiritual power of all Chinese people. The national flag is like a rising sun that shines on the heart of every Chinese person. It is so warm and full of the power of fraternity.

"We are united and brave the enemy's artillery fire, move forward, move forward, move forward! Move in!" The flag-raising ceremony is over, and the voice is still stirring in my heart for a long time. I know that he will accompany me through it. A wonderful life.