The Story of "Me" and the Weather (Composition)

Dingling, I yawned. This is a morning in the future. I looked at my alarm clock. Today is Saturday. I want to take a time machine to observe the weather.

After I made all the preparations, I came to the time machine, typed in the word "sunny day", pressed the button and suddenly entered sunny day.

Wow, how comfortable! A gust of wind blew and my hair floated. Look around, the trees are standing on the grass like soldiers, and look at the willows. They seem to dance in the wind. After a while, I was a little hot and stood under the tree. Suddenly, I remembered to go back, and I reluctantly left that sunny day.

I input the word "snow" again, press the button and whistle into the snowy weather. The cold wind made me tremble. I quickly put on my cotton-padded jacket, which is warm. Soon, I began to make a snowman. I rolled a big snowball first, then a small snowball, and then I drew a picture on my face with my hand. Made a snowman. I grabbed a handful of snow and tasted it. Oh, my God! This is vanilla ice cream. I gulped it down. After eating, I went home again.

After returning home, I have a suggestion. I should watch the weather forecast every day, or I will make mistakes.

General comment: This is a fairy tale. This expression is also a way of learning, and at least two weather conditions are written in the article. If you simply look at the expression of the article, the language is fluent and the structure is clear, it is a good article. However, from the subject content or topic, its description of the weather is not specific enough, and there is no knowledge about the weather.