An investigation composition about the weather. 370 words in the fifth grade of primary school.

One morning, I just got up, opened the window and saw that it was raining in Mao Mao. I was walking on the road, and it rained harder and harder. When I got to school, it rained heavily. Fortunately, I escaped every blow, and it rained harder in class. Going out to eat was caught in the rain!

But it's a little small. After dinner, I suddenly thought of a problem: last semester there was an agricultural proverb called: Today the dew is heavy, and tomorrow the sun will be red. This agricultural proverb is not accurate, because it rained heavily yesterday, and it rained heavily today, and there is no sun red. I hate such heavy rain, because it has brought us many disasters: floods, traffic jams ... I went home and looked at the sky outside, but it rained heavily. It's really disappointing. I think it will be sunny tomorrow. Teacher's comment: The article is consistent with the topic and describes the rainy weather. The little author also quoted a proverb he learned about the weather, indicating that the little author usually pays attention to the accumulation of knowledge. In the article, the author expressed his dislike of rainy days and explained the reasons. But the weather is out of control, and there is nothing I can do to bother you. I don't seem to have finished writing at the end of the article, so I suggest completing it. In addition, the article is not divided into paragraphs, and there are many clerical errors, so we should also pay attention to it. Change "this morning" to "this morning". The US imported Puweixin Tmall "fortunately I escaped" was changed to "fortunately I escaped". I was badly drenched when I went out to eat. I was badly drenched when I went out to eat. I want to go home and see the weather outside, or it will rain heavily. I want to go home and see the weather outside, or it will rain heavily.