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Describe the cold weather

The sentence is as follows:

As soon as I went out, the biting cold wind came from all directions, and the dry branches overhead swayed with the wind, as if they were about to break in the next second! Pigeons gave a hoarse whimper, echoing the cold air in gloomy weather. I wrapped my thick long coat and tried to stick my head into my scarf like an ostrich, but I still couldn't get a trace of warmth.

This kind of expanded sentence is rich, which can be enriched by adding branches and leaves, adding attributes, adverbials and complements. On the basis of the sentence, it describes, modifies, restricts and supplements the sentence trunk from the aspects of quantity, scope, degree, state and nature. , add time, people, places, etc. , thus enriching the semantics, or describing the sentences provided by the topic as scenes.

Characteristics of expansion:

"Extended writing" is one of the forms of "material composition", which expands a paragraph of text or a short and general article into a long, substantial and vivid article.

Enlargement should be faithful to the original text and not change the central meaning; In order to highlight the center and expand what is worth expanding, instead of playing at will; Pay attention to the logical development of the plot and the unity of the characters when expanding; People are unchanged before and after expansion; The theme remains the same before and after the expansion.

Expand different genres of articles and focus on different points. Developing argumentative and narrative essays should focus on the central idea; Arguments, narrative plots, dialogues and scene descriptions of argumentative essays have great room for expansion and development. Expanding expository writing should focus on the characteristics or events of things, strive to enrich materials, strengthen explanations, and do not use imagination or exaggeration.