The article about Guilin is about 1500 words.

Many, many small animals live in forests far away. In the forest, there is a particularly mighty tiger king, and small animals are particularly afraid of it. There is also a self-righteous flower fox living in the forest, who always thinks he is the cleverest.

On this day, King Tiger caught a fat and big bison, but King Tiger couldn't bear to eat it himself because his beloved son was going to have a birthday. The fox saw it by accident, and said politely, "Your Majesty, is today your son's birthday?" Without looking up, the tiger said, "Yes!" What happened? ""then I'll go to your house and have a look! " The king paused and said, "Well! All right! Come to my house at night! "The fox was very happy. He thought happily: Can I enjoy a delicious meal? I've been hungry for days?

In the evening, the fox went to King Tiger's house excitedly. When he got there, he saw King Tiger still lying there motionless. The fox went up to him and asked, "King, what shall we have for dinner?" "What to eat, ha ha! Eat meat! " "What meat to eat? Why can't you see where it is? " "Just around the corner!" "no!" The words sound just fell, only feel black at the moment, a Tiger Claw has overturned it in the corner, "Do you still want to sit here and enjoy it, want to run here to eat and drink, it's simply daydreaming, you just want something for nothing without effort, it's impossible, it's not asking for trouble, hahaha, it serves you right", and then you bite the fox to death, "I'm coming. .

At this point, the story tells us a truth: we can't sit back and relax, don't be self-righteous, and the fruits gained through our own efforts and labor are the most important.

Every time I write a composition, I feel a little worried. That's because I usually don't study well. I read a few extracurricular books, and my handwriting is not good either. After reading them, I found no story. In the future, you must listen to your mother and teachers more and correct these shortcomings. The beginning is too simple, the content is a little too simple, and the end is too fast. In the future, my composition must be complete, rich and free from typos.

Be sure to do it.

Parental comments:

I'm glad to find that this semester, you not only studied hard by yourself, but also urged the children next to you to finish their homework in time and give help when necessary. What a capable young cadre! In class, your speech is always so loud and clear that all your friends envy you. I want to see you go further in reading: don't be satisfied with reciting the text, but pursue good reading and try to guide it. Wouldn't it be better to read more books and add more beautiful words, good sentences and good paragraphs every day? Now, when writing a composition, I always write for the number of words, and I don't put my attitude right. It would be better if you corrected these a little. Don't study for the sake of studying, but be willing to do it.

Every time I write a composition, I feel a little worried. That's because I usually don't study well. I read a few extracurricular books, and my handwriting is not good either. After reading them, I found no story. In the future, you must listen to your mother and teachers more and correct these shortcomings. The beginning is too simple, the content is a little too simple, and the end is too fast. In the future, my composition must be complete, rich and free from typos.

Be sure to do it.

Shanxi Experimental Primary School Grade Four: Wang Jialong