How is steel tempered? 10 highlights, each with comments.

1, the most precious thing is life. Everyone has only one life. A man's life should be spent like this: looking back, he will not regret wasting his time, nor will he be ashamed of his meanness and vulgarity; On his deathbed, he can say, "My life and all my energy have been devoted to the most magnificent cause in the world-the struggle for the liberation of all mankind." Seize the time and live quickly, because an inexplicable disease or an unexpected tragic event will interrupt life.

Appreciation: This is a famous saying in How Steel was Tempered. Paul thought it difficult to take part in the work because he was injured. When he recovered, he walked in the street and walked near the tomb of the martyrs. Paul is very sad. This is a famous monologue that inspires generations of young people to move forward. It expounds the meaning of life from the perspective of Marxist proletarian outlook on life. It reflects Paul's disappointment that he can't contribute to the people because of his injury. Paul therefore had the idea of cherishing time and living fast. When a person is healthy and full of youthful vitality, being strong is relatively simple and easy to do. Only when life holds you tightly like a hoop, being strong is a glorious achievement.

2. A snowstorm suddenly struck. Gray clouds are low on the ground, moving and filling the sky. Heavy snow fell one after another. In the evening, there was a strong wind, and the chimney made a whining roar. The wind chased the rapidly circling snowflakes in the forest, flashing left and right, screaming bitterly and stirring the whole forest. The snowstorm roared all night. The shabby house on the station can't keep the heat at all. Although the fire burned all night, everyone was frozen from the inside out. When I went to work the next morning, the snow was deep and I couldn't walk, but there was a red sun hanging on the treetops and there was not a cloud in the blue sky.

Appreciation: this is the weather when the railway is being dug, and the severe cold makes it more difficult to build roads that are not easy. This scene description shows the harsh environment at that time, creates a gloomy atmosphere, and highlights the difficulty of the project and the urgency of time. ",the chimney purred. The wind chased the rapidly circling snowflakes in the forest, flashing left and right, whining and stirring the whole forest. Here, anthropomorphic techniques are used to show the size of the snow and everything is shocking, so that people can clearly understand the bad weather.

City life is as usual. In the five small markets, people are bustling and noisy. There are two dominant intentions here: one is to ask for money all over the sky, and the other is to pay back the money on the spot. All kinds of swindlers work their magic here. Hundreds of sharp-eyed and quick-witted people keep moving like fleas. They have everything in their eyes but no conscience. This is a big cesspit, where maggots from all over the city gather. Their purpose is to cheat those "fools" who have never seen the world. There are few trains that discharge groups of people carrying bags from their bellies. These people are flocking to the small market.

Appreciation: What is described here is that in the newly liberated city, order has not been restored. People need the means of subsistence, so the market appears. The noise of the market is vividly written, and the vendors and customers in the market are compared to fleas, which is very vivid and highlights the image of people in the market. Fleas also wrote the opportunism of these people from another angle. The cesspits and maggots also illustrate the shamelessness of these people and the chaos of urban public security under the rule of reactionary forces.

4. One eye of octopus is bulging, as big as a cat's head, with dark red around and green in the middle. This eye sparkles. Dozens of octopus's long wrists are crawling like small snakes, and their scales make an annoying rustle. The octopus is swimming. He saw the octopus almost sticking to his eyes. Those wrists crawled on him. They are cold and sting like nettles. Octopus sticks out like a leech, bites his head, shrinks and sucks his blood. He felt his blood flowing from himself to the swollen octopus. The needle keeps sucking. The stabbing pain in his head is unbearable.

Appreciation: This is Paul's illusion. Paul was wounded in the battle. He was hit in the head by shrapnel and almost died. However, under the resistance of his tenacious vitality, he miraculously resurrected! Here is a metaphor to describe Paul's hallucinations when he was in a coma. Comparing pain to octopus and its thorns is very incisive and wonderful, and the feeling of pain is vividly written.

5. "In the mist before dawn, the Dnieper River glows vaguely; The river washed away the stones on the shore and made a slight noise. The river near the banks is quiet, and the smooth water surface is silver-gray, as if stagnant. In the middle of the river, the dark water is tumbling, and the naked eye can see that it is rushing downstream. "

Appreciation: The gloomy atmosphere before the war is rendered here. The river is quiet, but it can be seen flowing. What is written here is the current situation, and from another angle, it is written about the vitality of the Russian people.

6. For a whole week, the town woke up and fell asleep amid the rumble of guns and the ringing of gunshots. It was only late at night that it was quiet. Occasionally, a burst of random shots pierced the silence of the night sky, which was an ambush for opposing sides to test each other. At first light, it was busy around the gun emplacement on the station. The cannon has a black mouth and a terrible roar.

Appreciation: This is the beginning of the seventh paragraph, describing the Red Army's attack on Shchepetov Card. "For a whole week, this town woke up and fell asleep in the rumble of guns and the ringing of gunshots." Here, anthropomorphic techniques are used to describe the tragic situation in the local area, the fierce offensive of the Red Army and the strict guard of the bandit troops. "The cannon has a Darkmouth, which makes a terrible roar." Here, personification is used, showing the horror of the cannon and the ferocity of the enemy.

I have experienced the pain of being abandoned and betrayed in my own life. But one thing saved me: my life will always be purposeful and meaningful, and that is to fight for socialism.

Appreciation: After being paralyzed and blind, all he needs in life is to continue working for the Party. As he said, "all my life and energy have been dedicated to the most magnificent cause in the world-the struggle for the liberation of mankind." The spirit of dedication to his ideal is his salvation in the face of suffering, and his iron will and noble quality of tenacious struggle have made his revolutionary cause.

3. Steel is made by high temperature and cold in fire, so it is very strong. Our generation has also experienced struggles and severe tests and learned never to lose heart in life.

Appreciate:

Paul is a firm and strong revolutionary fighter, who has withstood the severe tests in all aspects of life. In the face of the enemy's torture, he is firm and indomitable; On the battlefield of bullets, he went forward bravely; In the struggle against diseases that devoured life, he discouraged death many times and created a miracle of "coming back to life". In particular, he struggled to climb the palace of art from the time of his death, showing the highest realm that a revolutionary soldier's iron will can reach.