Yang Shan story composition

Thinking of writing: Simplify task language directly. In narration, direct narration should be changed into indirect narration, and the language of characters should be simplified as much as possible. In this way, even if the plot is coherent, the sentence is "concise".

Today, my father drove my uncle and aunt to Moon Cave, Yang Shan.

We walked along the Shanghai-Shaanxi Expressway for nearly two hours, and then along the 203 provincial highway, we came to the "Moon Cave" scenic spot in Yang Shan. The word "Moon Cave" spelled with white pebbles at the gate looks very special. After buying the tickets, we followed the tour guide up the steps like a "ladder". Although the weather is very hot, it is very interesting because I found many small animals, including lizards, geckos, red ants, beetles and snails.

After walking more than half, we came to a pavilion. Looking down from the pavilion, it feels a little condescending. The car has become so small, the Qianhe River is like a piece of white silk, and the mountains in the distance are heavy and still so high. Although it is noon, the mountain is still foggy.

We came to another shed made of bamboo strips. Although it was a bit shabby, it still blocked the sun, so we had a rest there. Then, we came to Tongxin Tree. Although this tree is a root, it is really strange that every tree has two separate and thick trees.

Above the concentric tree is a 90-degree cliff, which is really amazing. Then we came to the hole.

Aunt guide opened the iron gate of the cave with a key, then turned on the switch, and all the lights in the cave lit up. Because there are stalactites emitting moisture in the cave, and the moisture is very heavy, the guide aunt let us adapt to the environment of the cave entrance.

After staying for about ten minutes, the tour guide told us that the depth of this hole is about two kilometers. After listening, we couldn't wait to get into the hole.

After entering the cave, a stream of moisture came on me, so cold that I seemed to immediately enter the cold winter from the hot summer. The stalactites at the mouth of the cave are fishing in front of you. If you are not careful, you will encounter it. One third of the cave is undeveloped, so there is no light, so we can only walk two thirds.

The landscapes include King Tota Li Tian, Blast Furnace and Monkey Watching the Moon. The most famous one is "Jade Pillar Supporting Heaven", which is a stalactite extending from the top to the bottom of the cave. Because it is thick and shiny, it can be described as extraordinary.

There are not only grotesque stalactites in the cave, but also black bats hanging upside down at the top of the cave. We didn't know at first. Just as we were approaching the front, they suddenly flew over and almost scared me out of my mind.

Walking, you reach the "end" of the cave. I really don't know what more peculiar scenery there is in the remaining third cave. I really hope that the government can develop the Moon Cave as soon as possible so that everyone can enjoy this wonderful natural landscape together.