English composition "The Weather in Luoding"

Considering that the landlord said that he wanted a first-grade composition, he dared not use too difficult words. In addition, the composition of senior one should not use too many words, should it? I hope the following is enough. I wrote it myself, about 120 words. . .

The weather in Luoding

The weather in Luoding

Luoding, my hometown, is located in the south of China. Like other cities in this country, it has four seasons, spring, summer, autumn and winter. When the seasons change, the weather will also change.

My hometown Luoding is located in the south of China. Like other parts of this country, there are four seasons here: spring, summer, autumn and winter. When the seasons change, so does the climate.

Spring is warm, but there is a lot of rain. If people want to go out, they usually take an umbrella.

It is warm in spring, but it often rains. When people want to go out, they always take an umbrella.

Summer is very hot and the temperature is very high. We always go swimming in the afternoon.

Summer is very hot and the temperature is very high. In the afternoon, we often go swimming.

Autumn is my favorite season. The golden sunshine looks beautiful this season. On windy days, we fly kites together.

Autumn is my favorite season. The golden sunshine in autumn looks very beautiful. When it is windy, we often get together to fly kites.

The winter in Luoding is not as cold as in the north of this country, but I still want to make a snowman myself.

The winter in Luoding is not as cold as that in northern China, but I really want to make a snowman for myself.