Outline description composition band appreciation

1. A profile composition at seven o'clock in the morning, familiar footsteps and loud door calls will always ring in the corridor. "Here comes the milk! Every time I hear this voice, I know it's the milkman, and I will get up and open the door.

The milkman is an ordinary man, an uncle in his fifties. The uncle's dark skin can be seen at a glance as the result of years of sun exposure. Under his gray hair, there are a pair of small and intense eyes. But it stayed in my mind deeply.

Because the milk he poured out was thick and fragrant, many residents on the floors ordered it. One of them is on the sixth floor, and the subscriber on the sixth floor is our home, on the 12 floor. It's tiring enough not to carry things up and down, not to mention round and slippery milk bottles, which will break several bottles if you are not careful.

Winter snow covers the earth, everything is covered with silver fashion, and the long and lonely winter day comes early. But whether it's windy or snowy, uncle will always come to deliver milk.

In the morning, it is still as cold as usual. The doorbell of Ding Ling rang again. I still want to sleep under the quilt, but I have to open the door. I slowly opened the door among the gangsters. Opening the door, I saw standing at the door as usual, smiling, wearing a black coat, with deep wrinkles on my forehead, as if I could catch mosquitoes, but I also looked energetic. I took the bottle at hand and fell heavily on the ground. I said to myself in disappointment, "Hey, today's milk flow is ruined!" " "Uncle smiled and said," it doesn't matter. I will fill another bottle for free today. " I took the milk and thanked her.

It's the morning when the cold wind is howling again, and grandpa has come to deliver milk again. He handed me the milk carefully. When I took the bottle, I found that his hand had been frozen and cracked by the ruthless cold wind. His skin is wrinkled like that of an old pine tree, and there are holes in it. His hair was slightly shaken by the cold wind I saw his mouth shaking. Obviously, he is cold, although he is still smiling. I asked him, "Don't you wear gloves in this cold, or should I ask my father to give you a pair?" As he spoke, he pointed to the bottle: "Look, there is a layer of ice beads outside this bottle. If I wear gloves, the bottle will easily slip, and I am used to it. " When he left, I put my parents' black gloves in his box when he wasn't looking.

Another morning, "the milk is flowing!" " When I called the door, I saw those hands wearing a black glove and the other person was smiling. Of course, I am also smiling happily in my heart.

2. The sentences described in the profile extract a clean white face, revealing a sharp and angular coldness; Dark and deep eyes, glowing with charming colors; Thick eyebrows, high nose and beautiful lips all show elegance.

Thick eyebrows rose slightly in rebellion. Under the long slightly curly eyelashes, she has a pair of clear eyes like morning dew, an English nose, rose petal-like lips and fair skin. ...

A smiling face, even two heavy eyebrows, has soft ripples, as if smiling all the time, curved like a bright first quarter moon in the night sky. White skin sets off pale pink lips, handsome and prominent facial features, perfect face, especially the dazzling diamond earrings on his left ear, which adds a touch of unruly to his handsome sunshine. ...

I saw that man was extremely handsome, with sculptural facial features and angular face. The appearance seems bohemian and informal, but the nudity inadvertently revealed in the eyes can not be underestimated. A thick black hair, but a pair of slender peach eyes under a pair of knife-shaped eyebrows, full of affection, people will fall into it if they are not careful. With a high nose and a red lip of moderate thickness, she has a dazzling smile at the moment.

A man with purple hair knelt on the ground. That is a very beautiful man with long eyebrows and a body like Yushu. The white shirt on his upper body was slightly wet, and the thin sweat penetrated, which made his original excellent figure more exquisite. Long purple hair draped around a white neck is charming and moving. It is rare for a man to look like this.

A 17-year-old girl, with a black head spread behind her like ink, hung a bunch of small hair with purple lace thread, a small lace dress with squares outside her red shirt, a beautiful bracelet hanging on her white wrist and a silver ring without any modification on her little finger. All the dresses are so luxurious and exquisite, but people don't feel any unnecessary and burdensome, as if she should wear them like this. Behind the girl stood three young men of about 20 years old, all with beautiful faces and slender bodies.

3. Description and appreciation of the introduction in step 1. A peach tree was planted next to the steps, which provided shade for the steps. Sitting in the shade of a tree, my father can see the high steps of other people's homes, and several willows are planted on the steps. Willow branches are always swaying, but they can't shake my father's focused eyes. At this time, a piece of dry smoke floated around my father's head.

This paragraph is a description of expression, focusing on the high steps of others, which my father envies and yearns for. He is thinking about how to speed up preparations and strive to build a new house with high steps as soon as possible, which is as imposing and enviable as others. The description of willows and drought cigarettes also reflects his father's inner world.

Step on the yellow mud. The yellow mud is mixed with lime and soybean milk, which is like corn flour, red with white, and there are several blisters on it. In the morning sunshine, it is bright and bright.

This passage describes his father's excitement and anxiety, and he is eager to establish a high step. Describing the yellow mud in detail and writing the color of the yellow mud is actually writing about the father's mood, eagerness and excitement.

I don't want you to join in the fun I can't even carry a bucket of water?

This sentence describes that my father didn't really feel old, but emphasized his own strength.

One winter, broken straw sandals were piled on the steps.

According to the introduction, the labor intensity is only big, and it is very hard to start a business.

5 The fifth paragraph details of my father washing his feet on the three-stage bluestone steps "┅┅ Because of the sand, my father asked for a blackboard brush to wash his feet. Later, my father's feet were finally washed, and finally the true colors of the feet were washed, but they were also yellow and the color of the earth. "

It shows that my father is a hard-working person, and I can also see the poverty and hardship of my father's life; "Huang Jiji" is the color of the soil and the color of his father's skin, which shows his father's simplicity and generosity.

Appreciation may be a bit bad, the landlord should improve according to his own understanding! )

4. Both the positive composition and the profile composition are autumn. "Autumn wind with autumn rain, cool night. It is whistling and the leaves are dancing. " Yes! Autumn wind is blowing, autumn rain is over, and autumn mother is busy putting golden clothes on the tree.

Climb high and see far, just like a vast "sea of gold", the autumn wind sweeps away, leaves fall in succession, and some dance like butterflies; Some fly like orioles; Some people spin lightly like dancers.

The fallen leaves on the ground are like a thick golden blanket. Autumn is not as vibrant as spring when flowers are in full bloom, but it is not as vibrant as summer when trees are shaded. But it attracts people with attractive autumn colors and golden fruits.

I love the bright moon in autumn; Love to see the beautiful autumn chrysanthemums in Yingze Park; Love to watch the uniform geese fly south; Love to see the clear Fenhe River reflecting the blue sky; I prefer to see pearl-like grains piled up in the granary and heavy apples covered with branches. In autumn, chrysanthemums stand upright against the wind, graceful and proud.

There are red, white, yellow, purple and pink.

Colorful, make autumn look beautiful. There is not such a saying that "chrysanthemum is not preferred among flowers, and this flower is even more flowerless."

In autumn, towering mountains are covered with red leaves, which are like flames and sunset clouds, and seem to disdain cold and autumn. It's really "frosty leaves are redder than February flowers". How can this beautiful autumn color not be liked? When we enter autumn, the ears of rice, sunflowers, apples, grapes, corn and sorghum are all ripe, and the beautiful wild chrysanthemums also fragrant the narrow paths in the fields.

The ears of rice are ripe, and the golden face is like beautiful gold, shining in the sun. When sunflowers are ripe, they all bow their heads as if they were walking with their backs bent.

The apples were cooled by the autumn wind, and everyone put on a red cotton-padded jacket, as if red lanterns were hung on every branch. Cut off every branch.

Grapes were also cooled by the autumn wind, and they were all covered with a purple robe, as if grapes were also cooled by the autumn wind, and they were all covered with a purple robe, just like beautiful purple pearls. How beautiful these strings are! Corn happily holds the red tassel, as if forgetting the troubles of a summer. Sorghum blushed and smiled as if she had been praised by others.

Wild chrysanthemums are also very fragrant in autumn. I walked on the narrow path in the field and gently smelled the fragrance of wild chrysanthemum, which was as beautiful as roses, honeysuckle, morning glory and cactus flowers. Autumn, there are golden ears of rice, autumn, there are golden ears of rice, shiny sunflowers, red apples, purple grapes, yellow corn, red sorghum, so beautiful! Ah! How colorful autumn is! How glorious you are! How noble you are! You are not only a beautiful season, but also a harvest season.

I want to thank autumn, because autumn brings us food and fills the world with beauty. Ah! How wonderful you are in autumn! Today is the sunset. After dinner, my friends and I are playing in the yard. We played for a while. When we are tired of playing, we lie on the soft beach and look at the sky. Suddenly, a sunset glow floated into my sight. I looked around and saw more sunsets. I looked at it carefully and found that it was like many things.

Some sunset clouds are like an old hen, the chicks are covered with yellow feathers, and the sunset clouds behind them are like a vicious dog. Suddenly, the hen turned and pecked the evil dog and drove it away. Some sunset clouds are like a dozen horses. They fly on the Yuan Ye and seem to run faster than anyone else. After a while, a horse crossed the finish line first. It is the strong in the group and the leader in the group. I think in life, no matter what you do, you must strive to be the first and not lag behind others.

Some sunset clouds are like children playing together. They sometimes swim in the river. Sometimes picking up stones by the river; Sometimes they wrestle in the shade, sometimes they pick fruit on the tree ... they have a good time. The sunset glow is so beautiful that I didn't notice it before! In the early morning, in grandpa's yard, a silvery birdsong awakened the sleeping earth.

I opened my blindfolded eyes, put on my clothes and went to grandpa's farmhouse. I looked up at the sky. The sky in the east was a fish-belly white, and the small courtyard gradually became active against the rising sun.

Look, the rooster held his head high, straightened his chest, strode up the courtyard wall and shouted "wow, wow"; Birds stand in the treetops, chirping like happy notes; The smoke from the chimney is very warm. I think grandma must have started cooking. After breakfast, the sun has risen very high.

The yard suddenly lit up. Peony, rose, Clivia ..... one by one to meet the sunshine and compete to open.

Peony flowers are blooming brightly, like the bright smiling faces of children. Red, yellow and pink roses are dancing in the breeze, just like a graceful girl.

Clivia is in full bloom in the corner, but it doesn't make public, as if to show its gentlemanly demeanor. There is an apricot tree in the middle of the yard, which looks so tall and straight among the flowers. It stretches the notes hard.

On the branch, the small oval leaves are green. Pushing open the dense leaves, I also saw small apricots, like beating little hearts, showing us its exuberant vitality.

What surprised me even more was that a small drop of water hung on each tip of a clump of bamboo at the gate of the yard. I asked grandpa why every bamboo leaf was hung with crystal dew.

Grandpa told me that bamboo absorbs water as much as possible at night to meet the needs of growth until it reaches the tip of the leaf. I suddenly realized that this thick green color is the embodiment of its vitality.

Time gradually arrived at noon, and in the moist earthy atmosphere, I smelled a burst of fragrant fragrance. Looking up, it turned out to be floating down from the locust tree outside the yard.

White Sophora japonica is covered with branches, like a silver mountain. It's really "like the spring breeze, thousands of trees bloom at night"! The buzz of bees adds vitality to the yard.

This is grandpa's yard, a vibrant yard! Look carefully! This is 4 articles! Don't speculate.

5. Write a question and describe your hometown positively and laterally. Where there is a postscript, please note that it is one of the expressions used by writers when writing articles or novels. For example, "that person is good or bad, this person is just like him." Profile description is used to make an article or novel more moving and touching. General description, also called indirect description, refers to literary creation. The author expresses the object to be described by describing the people or environment around him, making it stand out, that is, indirectly describing the object. Usually, the description of characters in literary works adopts the method of positive description, that is, through the description of portraits, language, movements, manners and psychology, the character, conduct and skills of characters are directly expressed. However, sometimes with the help of some side descriptions, it is often irreplaceable or difficult to achieve positive descriptions. First of all, profile description can stimulate people's imagination. Profile description is often more witty than frontal description. It can express the described object with economic pen and ink, but it can achieve twice the result with half the effort. In order to show the beauty of Luo Fu, a mulberry picker, the author first describes Luo Fu positively by rhetorical devices such as parallelism and exaggeration: "The moss is a cage, the cassia twig is a cage hook, the bun falls on the head, and the moon shines on the ear;" Chen Qi is the lower skirt and Zi Qi is the upper skirt. " Here, Luo Fu's exquisite mulberry picking equipment, beautiful hair style, precious earrings and gorgeous clothes are the most beautiful of her looks. If we only use such a positive description, it is still somewhat conceptual, lacking in image and artistic expression, and cannot give people rich associations. Next, the author fully shows the beauty of Luo Fu with vivid profile description. In spite of resentment, he sat watching Luo Fu. "This profile description is not only full of rich flavor of life, but more importantly, it vividly and skillfully sets off the beauty of Luo Fu, giving people endless imagination. Luo Fu can't be too beautiful. Here, the profile description has aroused people's imagination and thus received a strong artistic effect. Secondly, the side description is a useful supplement to the front description. Side descriptions are often combined with front descriptions. A good profile description can often be icing on the cake. The first scene of Stomatology describes the quiet night and the noisy scene when family members wake up. After describing the voice performed by ventriloquists, the author describes the noise with an overview of "all at once". At the same time, on the basis of narration, the following comment that "everything is ready" shows that there is no trouble in the performance. Everyone is so lost in thought: "Stretching your neck, staring sideways, smiling, sighing silently, I feel wonderful." The excited expression of the audience jumped from the paper. Although this vivid profile describes the audience, its significance lies in comparing and praising the "good" skills of ventriloquists. The third scene describes a fire in the middle of the night. The author uses five "100,000" sentences and four. Try to describe the complexity of the voice and further praise the "good" skills of ventriloquists. Then change the style of writing and write the audience's extremely excited reaction: "Everyone changed their colors and left the table, bravely pulled out their arms and wanted to be the first." "The audience's expression, movements, emotions and psychology are all described incisively and vividly. This thrilling scene makes readers feel that ventriloquism performance has really reached a fascinating level with both form and spirit, which can not be ignored. Liu E's Farewell to Lao Can's Travels and Ye Junjian's Going to the Theatre both adopt the combination of frontal description and profile description, and further describe the audience and their strong reactions on the basis of frontal description of rendering performance skills, thus vividly depicting the superb performance skills of artists such as Wang Xiaoyu and Mei Lanfang, and making readers feel immersive. Third, profile description helps to express the characters. Although profile description is often combined with positive description to shape characters, sometimes it is not suitable to use positive description to express characters. Chen Yiling in "Re-examination" is outstanding in talent and noble in quality. She does good deeds consciously and doesn't tell outsiders. Even if there were abnormal reasons for the second examination, she didn't give anyone any explanation. This decided to use the method of profile description to express her personality. When describing Chen Yiling's second interview, the author uses positive descriptions to show her "dull voice", "hard to hide drowsiness" and "dull eyes", but how helpful she is at ordinary times and how her voice before the second interview was affected by disaster relief were subtly introduced through her brother's mouth. In this way, Chen Yiling's glorious image, in addition, through comparison, we can find that profile description can save a lot of pen and ink for positive description, making the structure of the article more concentrated and compact, and the expression more concise, which is also the advantage of profile description. The role of introduction description is not limited to this. In addition to the above works, there are many successful models, which can be seen from time to time in Mr. Lu Xun's novels, such as the revolutionary Yu Xia described in Medicine. Outline description is mainly used. Kong Yiji and blessings are also described in profile. These places deserve our serious consideration, study and reference. In future writing practice, we should consciously use profile description. Of course, both frontal description and profile description are literary means, aiming at highlighting the object to be described. Therefore, in literary description, which means is not the most important, the key is whether it can better express the object being described. For example, if you write a performance, you can describe the audience's performance or the sentences they discussed. You can also use lyrical methods to describe it more richly. You can also use this writing method in many aspects.

6. The 500-word composition described from the side has a kind of love, which will affect your motivation when you fail; There is a kind of love that inspires you to continue your efforts when you succeed; There is a kind of love that urges you to make up when you make a mistake. There is a kind of love that inspires you to cheer up when you give up.

This kind of love is called fatherly love. Fatherly love is not as gentle, warm and comfortable as maternal love, but fatherly love has its unique color.

It is deep, it is implicit, and it is silently dedicated to its children; It's practical, it's true, and it's always been like this. Dad's love for me is special. I remember learning to ride a bike when I was six years old.

Dad holds me, and I dare not ride. As soon as dad let me go, I stopped riding. My dad was so angry that he let it go in the middle. I was sensitive and stopped at once. The car was unstable and fell. I fell down and cried, too.

My mother couldn't bear to see it, so she ran to coax me, but my father stopped her. Father said, "If you want to learn to ride a bike, how can you not wrestle?" Then hug me in the car and continue to teach me. This time, I dare not be careless. I was so absorbed in cycling that I didn't notice that my father had let go.

In this way, I learned to ride a bike. I secretly praised myself for being really smart, but I didn't expect my father's efforts. Another time, I knocked over Aunt Wang's rice bag and spilled rice all over the floor, leaving me at a loss.

At this time, I saw my father's eyes, worried and happy, worried about how my father would blame me, and happy that my father should help me deal with this matter. I looked at my father with helpless eyes, hoping that he could do something for me.

But my father told Aunt Wang that I had to bear the mistakes I made and let me take the rice back to the bag. I choked back my tears and picked up all the meals. I was hungry and tired, and my heart was full of confusion. Other people's fathers are "afraid of falling in their hands and melting in their mouths" to their children, but why should my father do this? When I got home, I forgot to complain, ate in a hurry and went to sleep.

At night, I vaguely heard my mother's voice. She reproachfully said to her father, "The child is too young, why let her do such a job!" " "Dad said," If the child made her own mistake, she should bear it herself. If I do this, it will be good for her when she grows up. "At that moment, I understood what fatherly love is.

What is fatherly love? It is subtle warmth, it is painstaking to children, it is special, it is sincere.

7. Description of the composition 1, "Spring": Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees, you won't let me, I won't let you, they are all full of flowers. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow. Hundreds of bees are buzzing under the flowers, and butterflies of different sizes are flying around. The first two sentences are about flowers, colors and flowers. The last sentence is a brief description. It goes without saying that bees make noise and butterflies dance because the gorgeous flowers attract them. )

2. The rain is coming for Xiaojie: People in Lu Hua Village heard several gunshots by the river. The old people said with tears in their eyes, "Yulai is a good boy. What a pity to die! " "Aspiring is not high." The children in Lu Hua Village, their friends Tietou and Yulai Sanzuer all cried when they heard the gunshots. These words were written by a villager who mistakenly thought that the rain was killed by the devil, and people commented on him. This aspect describes the noble quality of eulogizing the heroic struggle of the little hero Yu Lai against the enemy. )

Magic makes people see things in a blur, and "double spears stab the throat" makes people tremble with fear. You see, the two teenagers strode onto the stage, saluted the audience, and then grabbed an iron gun with gun tips at both ends at the same time, aiming the gun tips at their throats respectively and pushing hard together. The gun shaft became an arc, so it was quiet for a second, two seconds ... it seemed that even the air did not flow. "Son, don't push! Put it down! " An old woman cried. Those two teenagers didn't care, and my heart suddenly came to my throat. Suddenly, the two men uttered a "hi" at the same time, and the gun shaft was actually folded into a "U" shape. People were shocked, and it took a long time for people to wake up. Suddenly, applause and cheers sounded together ... (rendering a thrilling atmosphere. )

4. "Mouth skills": Suddenly a person shouted "fire", the husband shouted, and the woman shouted. The two children burst into tears. Suddenly, hundreds of people shouted, hundreds of children cried and hundreds of dogs barked. The voice pulled down by Zhongli, the fiery voice, the whistling wind, and hundreds of works together; There were hundreds of cries for help, shouts of dragging the house, shouts of grabbing water and splashing water ... so all the guests changed their colors, left the table, struggled to take out their sleeves, won two battles and wanted to go first. All their movements seem to be on fire, which sets off the superb skills of export performers from the side. )

5, "Under the scorching sun and heavy rain": There is no water accumulation point on the road, and it is dry and white. The dust on the sidewalk flies high and connects with the gray air in the sky, forming a vicious gray sand array that burns the faces of pedestrians. Everywhere is dry, everywhere is hot, everywhere is stuffy, the whole old city is like a burnt-out brick kiln, which makes people breathless. Dogs spit their red tongues on the ground, mules and horses' nostrils are wide open, vendors dare not shout, the asphalt road is tanned, and even the bronze medal in front of the shop seems to be tanned. The street is quiet, only the copper and iron shops make people feel anxious. (Contrast and render the life dilemma and inner pain of specific characters in the text. )

8. Introduction Writing composition friendship, drinking kungfu tea and tasting tea! Friends are like fragrant teas, which make people precipitate and make people strong; Friends are the eternal wealth of life and destiny, and sincerity cannot be profaned. The right amount of tea meets the right water for you, and the tea meets the right person for you. This fate of tea, water and people makes people feel that when drinking tea, they always feel that they can't take away a cloud, or when they are desperate, they still find themselves holding the tail of the cloud.

What is friendship? You may be surprised that I don't even understand friendship, but it was only after that that I really understood its meaning.

At noon that day, the sun was still breathing fire, shining violently on the earth as if to scorch it. Cao Qing, Yu Pei and I are hiding in the shade and jumping rubber bands. We discussed the weather while jumping rubber bands. Cao Qing said, "The weather forecast also says it will rain today. I think it is a lie. " I also support her point of view. Yu Pei said, "It doesn't look like rain in such fine weather."

But after the second class in the afternoon, the weather forecast was biased. After a while, the sky was overcast, and we rushed into the classroom. After a while, a silver light pierced the sky, Lei Gong blew a whistle, and Miss Yu spilled the best and most pearls.

After school, everyone went their separate ways. As for me, I am standing on the roadside outside the school, hoping that the rain will stop, because according to the distance from my home and the slow running speed, it is enough for me to take a big bath. Suddenly, an umbrella blocked the sky above me. As soon as I turned around, it turned out that my good friend Zhao Mali was behind me. She smiled sweetly and said, "Let's go home together." I was so happy that I walked into the rain talking and laughing with her and forgot all my troubles just now.

Soon, we will reach the fork in the road. I guess I'll just have to spell it. I was about to rush into the rain when she suddenly said, "Here, take this umbrella." I said, "How can this work? Aren't you going to get wet? " She smiled: "It doesn't matter, my home is near, and it's only a few steps away. Your home is far away, you'd better hurry home, or your parents will be in a hurry. " I was so moved that I didn't know what to say, but I said "thank you" when I heard it.

Along the way, I feel heavy and full of friendship.