What is the answer to Jinan's winter after-school questions?

1, how does the author write the weather characteristics of Jinan in winter?

Write by comparing three groups:

(1) Beiping cold-Jinan warm

(2) The darkness of London-the light of Jinan

(3) Tropical fever-the temperature in Jinan.

2. What are the advantages of comparative writing?

Through the comparison of the three groups, the characteristics of Jinan in winter are highlighted.

Can you change "there is no wind in Jinan in winter" to "there is no wind"? Why?

No wind doesn't mean no wind, it's just a breeze. If it is changed to "no wind", it is not in line with the situation. It can be seen that the author uses words very accurately.

Discussion 2

1, how to translate the mountain scenery in the bright sunshine in the second paragraph?

With the transitional sentence "It's not surprising if there is only sunshine", the mountains turn in winter.

2. What are the characteristics of the mountains in Jinan?

The hill surrounds the whole of Jinan, with only one mouth missing in the north. Write about the geographical environment of Jinan Mountain besieged city.

Discussion 2

3. How did the author write that the hills under the bright sunshine are particularly lovely?

(1) Use anthropomorphic techniques: "Take an ancient city with mountains and water, and wait for the spring breeze to wake them up", and use a series of related verbs such as "sunbathing", "sleeping" and "waking up" to create a comfortable and warm environment.

(2) Metaphor and personification: "This circle of hills is particularly lovely in winter ... They whisper quietly ..." Use the "small cradle" as a metaphor for the geographical environment of the hill besieged city, and use the "caretaker" as a metaphor for the surrounding hills to write that this circle of hills is particularly lovely.

(3) From the perspective of people's feelings, I wrote: "With a smile on my face", "I feel that I have landed, and my heart is dependent", and I also wrote people's fantasies. It not only depicts people's smiles, but also highlights people's feeling of comfort and warmth.

Discussion 3

In the third paragraph, in what order did the author describe the mountain scenery after the snow?

According to spatial order, from the mountain, the top of the mountain to the hillside, mountainside, write beautiful mountain scenery in different levels.

(1) The central sentence of the whole paragraph is: The best thing is a little snow.

(2) The level of the whole paragraph is divided into three layers: Xiaoxue /look … Pink/Gang …

(3) Verbs in the text are well used, such as "top", "embed", "wear" and "dew"

(4) Color words are used well, such as cyan, black, white, blue, silver, dark yellow and pink.

(5) How does the text change from static to dynamic?

The main skill of turning static into dynamic is to use metaphor and personification.

Discussion 3

5. "It is best to have a little snow." Where is the "wonderful" mountain view after the snow?

The beauty of (1) lies in snow light and snow color: use "Japanese wet nurse" as a metaphor for snow light; Use "flowery clothes" as a metaphor for snow color.

(2) Beauty lies in the snowy state: "Dress the mountains with water lines" and "As if Bo Xue suddenly felt ashamed" write a touching snowy state.

Discussion 4

In the fourth paragraph, how to write about the distant mountains outside the city?

Use the "smallness" in the city to set off the "spaciousness" outside the city, and use the word "lying" to vividly take care of the "warm and comfortable sleep" above. Use "small ink paintings painted by famous painters in the Tang Dynasty" as a metaphor for the distant mountains outside the city.

Discussion 5

1, paragraph 5, What are the characteristics of winter water in Jinan?

(1) The green color of water;

(2) The water is clear and bright.

2. What rhetorical devices are used in this article? What are the benefits?

(1) The anthropomorphic algae, water and weeping willows show the infinite vitality of Jinan in winter and the hazy spring scenery in winter.

(2) Metaphor, highlighting the distinctive features of water.

Discussion 6

What are the advantages of ending the article with "This is winter in Jinan"?

The emphasis on winter expresses the author's overall impression of Jinan in this specific period. This ending not only echoes the beginning "Jinan is really a treasure", but also points out the topic, expresses the author's praise and gives people room for aftertaste.