Reading Masterpieces: Road-building is a wonderful piece about how steel was tempered by Oskarov, a Soviet writer. . . . . .

Road construction mainly describes the hardships of building a light rail from Bo Iarca station to logging yard from 192 1 late autumn to the end of the year. At that time, Kiev, the capital of Ukraine, had just quelled a counter-revolutionary riot, but "new enemies are threatening the city-railway transportation will be paralyzed, and hunger and cold will follow." The bad elements hidden in the Railway Forestry Committee deliberately asked the workers to cut wood in the forest seven Russian miles away from Bo Iarca station, so that the 265,438+100,000 cubic meters of wood that had been cut could not be transported to Kiev. In order to get rid of the fuel shortage, the Party Committee of Kiev Province decided to build a light rail from Bo Iarca to the logging yard within one and a half months, and decided to organize workers to participate in labor in stages. Due to the arduous road construction project, members of the Youth League in Kiev were first transferred to build roads. At that time, Paul participated in the road construction work as the secretary of the Youth League Committee of Kiev Railway Factory.

The work of building roads was carried out under extremely difficult conditions. From the beginning, the novel shows us the harsh natural environment through detailed descriptions of the scenery. Clouds are rolling and clouds are comfortable, and autumn rain is continuous. It is in the "endless" forest where all the leaves are gone, and the environment is more depressed, cold and harsh. Road builders work in this environment, and their clothes are soaked by cold rain, "sticking under their boots and making a straight sound", which is very unfavorable to their work. However, the rain kept washing away the fruits of people's labor, and "mud dripped from the roadbed like thick porridge". Faced with this situation, the Communist Youth League members who built roads were not intimidated or conquered. They "dig hard" every day and "work until dark", which shows their tenacious fighting spirit and selfless working attitude. Because of this, the "built subgrade" has "continuously extended to the depths of the jungle".

The road construction team not only faces such bad working conditions, but also has very difficult living conditions. They live in stone houses with "big holes in doors and windows, black holes in oven doors" and "broken roofs" and sleep on the concrete floor covered with a thin layer of hay; Wearing clothes that are "wet inside and out and covered in mud" and "not done"; I ate "monotonous vegetarian lentil soup and a pound and a half of bread almost as black as coal" This hard living condition is a severe test for every road builder. Most of them "endured all kinds of difficulties and hardships with perseverance" and achieved new victories in road construction, which fully reflected the indomitable spirit of the vast number of young league members cultivated by the Bolsheviks. But there are also 14 people who are afraid of death and can't stand the test and become shameful deserters. Through the comparative description of positive and negative aspects, the author further highlights the hardships of road construction and the tenacious will of the youth league members to overcome difficulties and the selfless spirit of dedicating themselves to capitalism.

With the in-depth development of highway construction, there are more and more difficulties and fierce struggles. One blow after another followed, and the first blow to the road construction team was that the bread was not delivered the next night. It is really a great difficulty for a road construction team with 120 people. Secondly, "the sleepers are used up" and there are no vehicles, which makes the road construction work face a serious problem of waiting for materials; Third, "the successor has not yet landed", and so on. The author used more pen and ink to render these extreme difficulties in the road-building struggle, which not only truly reflected the harsh struggles and common difficulties faced by the young Soviet Republic in the early 1920s, but more importantly, laid the necessary foundation for showing the steely character of Paul and his comrades.

As an outstanding representative of road builders, Paul performed very well in this severe road struggle. Here, the author does not describe how Paul works selflessly, but chooses the detail of "boots" to show it. Began to write his "boots are always wet, and the mud in them makes a straight noise when you leave." Nevertheless, he insisted on working in the frozen mud. Later, the soles of his boots fell off. "He can't do anything," so he couldn't help cursing. This shows that scolding Paul is not to vent his dissatisfaction with this hard work, but the bad weather has better affected his work. Now he is barefoot in the biting mud and has to go to the kitchen to repair his boots. However, he never expected to be ridiculed and reprimanded by the chef's assistant Aadahl Ka. If he is a person who loves leisure and hates work, he is afraid of hardship, so when he encounters this situation, he will definitely spit out his complaints and anger. However, Paul simply explained, "The boots are rotten." This won Adal's sympathy. This series of detailed descriptions of "boots" profoundly shows Paul's political qualities of loyalty to the revolutionary cause, hard work, simplicity and hard work, and further embodies the difficulties and hardships of road construction.

If everyone is facing a severe test in the road-building struggle, the resolution of the Youth League Committee conveyed by tokarev, secretary of the Party Committee of the Road Construction Team, after his return from the city is the touchstone of the true and false revolution. Tokarev told everyone that "the shift-changing people haven't come together yet" and conveyed the resolution of the Youth League Committee, asking all members to "stay at the construction site". This is indeed a severe test for hard-working party member. The vast majority of party member can still obey the organization's resolutions, although I can't figure it out at the moment. Only one poor man who was afraid of death announced that he was leaving the team. "He shouted and cursed", slandered the road construction work as "punishing the prisoners for their hard work" and clamored for "leaving tomorrow". His poor performance completely exposed the filth in his soul to the broad daylight.

For this ghost who is afraid of death, Panclough, the communist youth league secretary of the road construction team, gave a severe reprimand: "Who is talking nonsense there? Who said that the task given by the party is hard? " These two rhetorical questions are a powerful criticism of the poor man who fled from the battlefield, especially the significance of his current job to all party member: "If we slip away from here, many people will freeze to death"; "Being a deserter" is not allowed by our thoughts and discipline. These words are profound and powerful, and love and hate are clear, which maintains the purity and strict discipline of the party's thinking and is also a good education for people with fluctuating thoughts.

However, the struggle is not over. The poor guy shouted openly, "I don't work for a piece of cardboard." This shameless rhetoric pushed the road-building struggle to a climax. The poor man's despicable behavior of throwing away the group card has educated the vast number of party member from the opposite side, and a scolding sound broke out in the meeting room immediately. In the struggle, everyone recognized the poor man's ugly face, reprimanded him as a "soul-selling guy", and revealed that he "wanted to be promoted and made a fortune", expressing extreme hatred and contempt for him. Finally, pankratov burned his league card and announced the political death penalty for this shameful deserter who was greedy and lazy. This struggle criticized the poor students who betrayed the organization and the revolution, educated the provincial youth league committees, strengthened the unity of the revolutionary ranks, and laid a solid ideological foundation for the successful completion of the road construction task in the future.

To sum up, we can see the excerpts from Road Building. Through the concrete description of the construction of light rail under extremely difficult and difficult conditions, it praises the noble quality of party member, represented by Paul, who have the courage to overcome difficulties, the will to fight hard, the noble quality of abiding by resolutions, and the selfless labor spirit of dedicating themselves to the cause of * * *. At the same time, it also exposed and criticized the despicable soul who acted as a shameful deserter in the face of severe struggle. The noble ideological quality and tenacious will of Paul and his comrades in the road-building struggle deserve our serious study.

In art, road construction is also very distinctive. First, the description of the environment is vivid and profound, which not only exaggerates the atmosphere and depicts the characters, but also helps to express the central idea. The natural environment described at the beginning of the novel, such as autumn rain, dark clouds, old trees and sticky mud, and the social environment, such as the lack of food and clothing and materials for road builders, constitute the typical environment of the Soviet Union in the 1920s. Only when things change can we show our true colors as heroes. This typical environment is of great significance to express the ideological quality of Paul and his comrades and the central idea of the novel. It makes us realize that this road-building struggle is a revolutionary melting pot, where the iron will and strong character of Paul and his comrades-in-arms have been tempered.

Second, the plot is concentrated, the structure is rigorous and interlocking. Write about bad working conditions first, then hard living conditions, and then show the difficulties and tests encountered in road construction to road builders. The paragraphs written in this way are mutually causal and complementary, which provides incredible ideological connotation for showing the high consciousness and tenacious will of road builders and exposing the face of shameful deserters.

Thirdly, the metaphor is vivid and appropriate, which enhances the effect of language expression. Comparing rain to' sifted with a sieve', comparing brown bread to' black as coal', comparing active Kholyava to mercury, and so on, the objects are very accurate and expressive. In addition, the anthropomorphic description of the old elm tree at the beginning of the novel is refreshing.

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Road construction mainly describes the hardships of building a light rail from Bo Iarca station to logging yard from 192 1 late autumn to the end of the year. At that time, Kiev, the capital of Ukraine, had just quelled a counter-revolutionary riot, but "new enemies are threatening the city-railway transportation will be paralyzed, and hunger and cold will follow." The bad elements hidden in the Railway Forestry Committee deliberately asked the workers to cut wood in the forest seven Russian miles away from Bo Iarca station, so that the 265,438+100,000 cubic meters of wood that had been cut could not be transported to Kiev. In order to get rid of the fuel shortage, the Party Committee of Kiev Province decided to build a light rail from Bo Iarca to the logging yard within one and a half months, and decided to organize workers to participate in labor in stages. Due to the arduous road construction project, members of the Youth League in Kiev were first transferred to build roads. At that time, Paul participated in the road construction work as the secretary of the Youth League Committee of Kiev Railway Factory.

The work of building roads was carried out under extremely difficult conditions. From the beginning, the novel shows us the harsh natural environment through detailed descriptions of the scenery. Clouds are rolling and clouds are comfortable, and autumn rain is continuous. It is in the "endless" forest where all the leaves are gone, and the environment is more depressed, cold and harsh. Road builders work in this environment, and their clothes are soaked by cold rain, "sticking under their boots and making a straight sound", which is very unfavorable to their work. However, the rain kept washing away the fruits of people's labor, and "mud dripped from the roadbed like thick porridge". Faced with this situation, the Communist Youth League members who built roads were not intimidated or conquered. They "dig hard" every day and "work until dark", which shows their tenacious fighting spirit and selfless working attitude. Because of this, the "built subgrade" has "continuously extended to the depths of the jungle".

The road construction team not only faces such bad working conditions, but also has very difficult living conditions. They live in stone houses with "big holes in doors and windows, black holes in oven doors" and "broken roofs" and sleep on the concrete floor covered with a thin layer of hay; Wearing clothes that are "wet inside and out and covered in mud" and "not done"; I ate "monotonous vegetarian lentil soup and a pound and a half of bread almost as black as coal" This hard living condition is a severe test for every road builder. Most of them "endured all kinds of difficulties and hardships with perseverance" and achieved new victories in road construction, which fully reflected the indomitable spirit of the vast number of young league members cultivated by the Bolsheviks. But there are also 14 people who are afraid of death and can't stand the test and become shameful deserters. Through the comparative description of positive and negative aspects, the author further highlights the hardships of road construction and the tenacious will of the youth league members to overcome difficulties and the selfless spirit of dedicating themselves to capitalism.

With the in-depth development of highway construction, there are more and more difficulties and fierce struggles. One blow after another followed, and the first blow to the road construction team was that the bread was not delivered the next night. It is really a great difficulty for a road construction team with 120 people. Secondly, "the sleepers are used up" and there are no vehicles, which makes the road construction work face a serious problem of waiting for materials; Third, "the successor has not yet landed", and so on. The author used more pen and ink to render these extreme difficulties in the road-building struggle, which not only truly reflected the harsh struggles and common difficulties faced by the young Soviet Republic in the early 1920s, but more importantly, laid the necessary foundation for showing the steely character of Paul and his comrades.

As an outstanding representative of road builders, Paul performed very well in this severe road struggle. Here, the author does not describe how Paul works selflessly, but chooses the detail of "boots" to show it. Began to write his "boots are always wet, and the mud in them makes a straight noise when you leave." Nevertheless, he insisted on working in the frozen mud. Later, the soles of his boots fell off. "He can't do anything," so he couldn't help cursing. This shows that scolding Paul is not to vent his dissatisfaction with this hard work, but the bad weather has better affected his work. Now he is barefoot in the biting mud and has to go to the kitchen to repair his boots. However, he never expected to be ridiculed and reprimanded by the chef's assistant Aadahl Ka. If he is a person who loves leisure and hates work, he is afraid of hardship, so when he encounters this situation, he will definitely spit out his complaints and anger. However, Paul simply explained, "The boots are rotten." This won Adal's sympathy. This series of detailed descriptions of "boots" profoundly shows Paul's political qualities of loyalty to the revolutionary cause, hard work, simplicity and hard work, and further embodies the difficulties and hardships of road construction.

If everyone is facing a severe test in the road-building struggle, the resolution of the Youth League Committee conveyed by tokarev, secretary of the Party Committee of the Road Construction Team, after his return from the city is the touchstone of the true and false revolution. Tokarev told everyone that "the shift-changing people haven't come together yet" and conveyed the resolution of the Youth League Committee, asking all members to "stay at the construction site". This is indeed a severe test for hard-working party member. The vast majority of party member can still obey the organization's resolutions, although I can't figure it out at the moment. Only one poor man who was afraid of death announced that he was leaving the team. "He shouted and cursed", slandered the road construction work as "punishing the prisoners for their hard work" and clamored for "leaving tomorrow". His poor performance completely exposed the filth in his soul to the broad daylight.

For this ghost who is afraid of death, Panclough, the communist youth league secretary of the road construction team, gave a severe reprimand: "Who is talking nonsense there? Who said that the task given by the party is hard? " These two rhetorical questions are a powerful criticism of the poor man who fled from the battlefield, especially the significance of his current job to all party member: "If we slip away from here, many people will freeze to death"; "Being a deserter" is not allowed by our thoughts and discipline. These words are profound and powerful, and love and hate are clear, which maintains the purity and strict discipline of the party's thinking and is also a good education for people with fluctuating thoughts.

However, the struggle is not over. The poor guy shouted openly, "I don't work for a piece of cardboard." This shameless rhetoric pushed the road-building struggle to a climax. The poor man's despicable behavior of throwing away the group card has educated the vast number of party member from the opposite side, and a scolding sound broke out in the meeting room immediately. In the struggle, everyone recognized the poor man's ugly face, reprimanded him as a "soul-selling guy", and revealed that he "wanted to be promoted and made a fortune", expressing extreme hatred and contempt for him. Finally, pankratov burned his league card and announced the political death penalty for this shameful deserter who was greedy and lazy. This struggle criticized the poor students who betrayed the organization and the revolution, educated the provincial youth league committees, strengthened the unity of the revolutionary ranks, and laid a solid ideological foundation for the successful completion of the road construction task in the future.

To sum up, we can see the excerpts from Road Building. Through the concrete description of the construction of light rail under extremely difficult and difficult conditions, it praises the noble quality of party member, represented by Paul, who have the courage to overcome difficulties, the will to fight hard, the noble quality of abiding by resolutions, and the selfless labor spirit of dedicating themselves to the cause of * * *. At the same time, it also exposed and criticized the despicable soul who acted as a shameful deserter in the face of severe struggle. The noble ideological quality and tenacious will of Paul and his comrades in the road-building struggle deserve our serious study.

In art, road construction is also very distinctive. First, the description of the environment is vivid and profound, which not only exaggerates the atmosphere and depicts the characters, but also helps to express the central idea. The natural environment described at the beginning of the novel, such as autumn rain, dark clouds, old trees and sticky mud, and the social environment, such as the lack of food and clothing and materials for road builders, constitute the typical environment of the Soviet Union in the 1920s. Only when things change can we show our true colors as heroes. This typical environment is of great significance to express the ideological quality of Paul and his comrades and the central idea of the novel. It makes us realize that this road-building struggle is a revolutionary melting pot, where the iron will and strong character of Paul and his comrades-in-arms have been tempered.

Second, the plot is concentrated, the structure is rigorous and interlocking. Write about bad working conditions first, then hard living conditions, and then show the difficulties and tests encountered in road construction to road builders. The paragraphs written in this way are mutually causal and complementary, which provides incredible ideological connotation for showing the high consciousness and tenacious will of road builders and exposing the face of shameful deserters.

Thirdly, the metaphor is vivid and appropriate, which enhances the effect of language expression. Comparing rain to' sifted with a sieve', comparing brown bread to' black as coal', comparing active Kholyava to mercury, and so on, the objects are very accurate and expressive. In addition, the anthropomorphic description of the old elm tree at the beginning of the novel is refreshing.

A. during this year, Paul experienced many terrible things. Like thousands of soldiers, he was naked, but his chest was burning with eternal flame.

In order to defend the political power of their own class, they fought in the north and traveled all over the motherland. Only twice did Paul have to leave the revolutionary storm temporarily.

The first time was because I hurt my thigh. The second time was February 1920. I got typhoid fever and was very ill. Typhus caused a large number of attrition in the divisions and regiments of the Twelfth Army, which was even more severe than the machine guns of the Polish army. This group army has a long front, guarding almost the whole northern Ukraine and blocking the further advancement of the Polish White Army. Paul returned to the team as soon as he recovered.

Now, their regiment is on the Kazakh-Uman branch line, guarding the position near Frontovka station. The station is in the Woods. The station building is not big, and there are some abandoned and badly damaged small houses next to it. It is impossible to live in this area. For more than two years, we have to fight every once in a while. This station has really seen all kinds of teams. Now, a new big storm is about to mature. ) Although the 12th Army lost a large number of soldiers, some troops have been divided, and under the oppression of the Polish army, the whole army is retreating in the direction of Kiev, but it is at this time that the Proletarian Republic is deploying major military operations, ready to deal a devastating blow to the Polish White Army, which was carried away by victory.

The division of the First Cavalry Army, which has been tested by war, moved to Ukraine from the remote North Caucasus, which was an unprecedented March in military history. The fourth, sixth, eleventh and fourteenth cavalry divisions successively moved to Uman area and assembled in the rear not far from the front line of our army; In the process of marching into the final battle, they wiped out the Ma Qinuo gangs along the way.

This is 16500 combat knives, and this is 16500 soldiers exposed to the sun on the hot grassland!

B. Youth won. Typhoid didn't kill Paul. Paul has crossed the threshold of death for the fourth time and returned to this world. After lying in bed for a month, pale and thin Paul finally stood up, his legs trembling, holding the wall and trying to walk around the room. Mother helped him to the window and he looked at the road for a long time.

The snow melted and the puddle glistened. It was already warm and cold outside in early spring.

On the cherry branch next to the window, a sparrow with a gray chest stood proudly. It peeks at Paul from time to time with sly little eyes.

"How, we finally survived the winter?" Paul tapped on the window with his finger and whispered.

Mother gave him a surprised look.

"Who are you talking to there?"

"with the sparrow ... it flew away, so cunning." He smiled feebly.

It's spring with a hundred flowers. Paul began to think about returning to Kiev. He has recovered enough to walk, but there are other diseases lurking in his body. One day, when he was walking in the garden, he suddenly felt a sharp pain in his spine and fell to the ground. He made great efforts to move into the house slowly. The next day, the doctor gave him a detailed examination and found a deep pit on his spine. He let out a cry of surprise and asked, "How can there be a pit here?"

"Doctor, this is a collapsed stone on the highway. At the gates of Rovno, a three-inch shell exploded on the road behind me ... "

"Then how do you get there? It doesn't matter? "

"No, I was lying for two hours, and then I continued to ride. This is the first attack. "

The doctor frowned and examined the pit carefully.

"My dear, this is a very annoying thing. The spine doesn't like this vibration. I hope it won't happen again. Get dressed, Comrade Kochakin. "

The doctor looked at the patient sympathetically.

Question:

1.A paragraph "Now, a new big storm is about to mature". According to the meaning of the paragraph, what does the "new big storm" mean?

2. In paragraph B, "Doctors can't hide their worries", what do you think are the worries of doctors?

3. From the above two paragraphs, what spirit of Paul is worth learning?