Answer to Jinan Winter Exercises

1. Read the text and see how the author describes the winter in Jinan.

This topic is mainly to let students know the author's writing ideas and see what special scenery the author has grasped to show the main characteristics of Jinan in winter.

Write winter in Jinan from three aspects. First of all, through comparison, I always write the characteristics of "warmth and sunshine" in Jinan in winter and praise Jinan as a "treasure land". Then write about the mountains in Jinan, imagine that the hills are full of warmth from the geographical environment of Jinan, and then write about the mountain scenery after snow. Finally, I wrote about the water in Jinan, and I was full of praise for the clarification and affection of water.

Second, try to understand the following sentences and talk about the benefits of underlined words.

1. Please close your eyes and think about it: Is it an ideal state that an ancient city with mountains and water is basking in the sun and sleeping peacefully, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up?

"Ancient cities" are heartless things, but the author says that they are "sleeping" and can be "awakened" by the spring breeze, endowing the ancient city with human spirituality and rejuvenating it.

The top of the mountain is all white, with a silver edge for the blue sky.

Writing the word "mosaic" seems to have been deliberately done by the tip of a mountain and Xiaoxue, and it seems to be the ingenious hand of a craftsman, leaving room for imagination.

There are some small villages on the hillside, and there is some snow on the roofs of the small villages.

The word "lie" is in harmony with the word "sleep warm and comfortable" in front, vividly drawing the expressions of the village and Xiaoxue, as if they were all spiritual.

The clearer the sky, the greener the algae. With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze, and those weeping willows with long branches will take a picture in the water!

The word "I can't stand it" personifies water. The water is so affectionate, for the sake of the green algae and the reflection of weeping willows, it is still "unbearable" to freeze in winter and still full of spring.

3. Read the paragraph "The best part is Xiaoxue" carefully, see where it is well written, explain the reasons, and then recite this paragraph.

This topic mainly trains students' ability to read articles intensively, so that students can discover beauty and understand where beauty lies.

There are many accurate and vivid sentences about the hill after snow in this passage. For example, the sentence "Watch it" seems to put the reader in the author's situation and make the reader feel immersive. Another example is not that the top of the tree is covered with snow, but that it is "with a bun of white flowers", followed by "Japanese wet nurse", which is not only vivid but also poetic. Another example is the "shy" modality of snow, and the hillside with "pink" appearance, and so on. , highlighting their beautiful shapes and beautiful mountain scenery.

Read the full text and find some wonderful sentences in your notebook.

This problem is mainly to accumulate language materials, which are freely completed by students.

Teaching suggestion

First of all, this is an eloquent essay about scenery. In teaching, students can be asked to read aloud several times or listen to the tape. Pay attention to the following words and think about problems when reading aloud.

Note: Ji (jǐ) South London (dūn) Mosaic (xiāng) is spacious (ch ǐ ng).

Algae storage

Explanation: If: If

Ink painting: a painting in which pure ink is used in Chinese painting.

Store: to store, store

Vague: flexible and unpredictable

Thinking about the problem:

1. What are the winter scenes in Jinan?

After reading the text, do you think the winter in Jinan is really "warm and comfortable" as the author said? Why?

Second, teach this article. On the basis of reading aloud, let the students first summarize the main characteristics of Jinan in the author's works, and find out from what aspects the author shows this characteristic, including the author's feelings. On the basis of a general understanding of these contents, combined with exercise 2, students can understand how the author carefully chooses words and makes sentences to express his feelings. Then the teacher and students read the passage about the hill after the snow carefully to see where the language is used.

Third, combined with the text, select appropriate examples to further talk about metaphor and personification knowledge. You can use substitution method to change the sentences using rhetorical methods into general expressions and compare the differences in expression effects. The following examples can be used for teaching:

The first group: A This circle of hills is particularly lovely in winter, as if Jinan were put in a small cradle. They whispered, "Don't worry, it will be warm here."

This circle of hills surrounds Jinan, which makes the winter in Jinan particularly warm.

Group 2: A When the sun sets, the yellowish sunshine shines obliquely on the mountainside. It seems that Bo Xue suddenly feels ashamed and shows a little pink.

B As the sun sets, the sun shines obliquely on the mountainside, and Bo Xue shows a little pink.

Group 3: The clearer the sky, the greener the algae. With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze, and those weeping willows with long branches will take a picture in the water!

The better the sunshine the next day, the greener the algae and the water won't freeze. The long branches of weeping willows are reflected in the water.

Four, teaching this article, we should pay attention to the connection between old and new knowledge. After learning "Spring" in the last lesson, the students have some experience in using vivid words, metaphors, personification and other rhetorical methods to describe scenery. To guide students to understand this text, we can make some hints: the article about scenery is a description of the external environment in form, but in fact it can only be written after careful observation, serious thinking and attempt; It is by no means a metaphor of the east, a personification of the west, or a pile of gorgeous words. The two texts "Spring in Jinan" and "Winter in Jinan" have achieved a close combination of scenery and emotion, and written the author's true feelings.

5. In teaching, students can be given the practice brush of Exercise 4 in advance, so that they can learn the text, deepen their understanding of this writing feature, and consciously accumulate suitable materials to make full preparations for the final composition.