Common problems in correcting Chinese sentences.

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The position of attributive and head language is reversed;

Example: It is impossible for China to be self-sufficient in cotton production for a long time. ("cotton production" should be "cotton production")

2, put the real language in the position of adverbial:

: exodus the vast number of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform. (Put "incomparable" before "enthusiasm")

3. Put the adverbial in the attributive position:

1, improper collocation of subject and predicate:

Exodus: His revolutionary spirit always comes to my eyes. ("God" and "manifestation" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship, so "God" can be changed to "image")

2. Improper collocation of verbs and objects:

Exodus: Commemorating the arrival of three major festivals. (Only "March 8th" can be commemorated, not "arrival")

3. Improper collocation of modifiers and headwords:

Exodus: We have carefully studied the suggestions of the staff and workers and humbly sought the opinions of experts. ("seriousness" cannot modify "research", but it can be changed to "seriousness" and "prudence". )

4. Improper collocation of subject and object:

We firmly believe that one day, China's agriculture and agriculture will become developed countries. (The word "state" should be changed to "act")

5. Improper collocation of related words:

Now that you are here, I should go, too. (Since "and" Ye "cannot be used together," Ye "should be changed to" Jiu ")

(3) Incomplete and redundant components

1, the composition is incomplete

(1) Missing theme:

She was praised by her teachers and classmates for her good grades. She achieved such good results that she was praised by her teachers and classmates.

(2) lack of predicates

Exodus, as in the old society, the working people did not have enough to eat and wear. (Or delete "live" or add "live" before "eat")

(3) Missing objects:

Exodus: Take care of the motherland and the world, vigorously carry forward the courage to fight and finally win the championship. (Add "spirit" after "dare to fight")

(4) Lack of necessary additional ingredients:

: Exodus When spring came, the wheat grew well and got a gratifying harvest. (The word "summer" should be added before "acquisition" to limit the time)

(5) Incomplete related words:

Exodus: This academic conference has gained a lot and the time is not long. (The word "notwithstanding" should be added before "time")

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(1) redundant subject

: Exodus Our revolutionary predecessors shed a lot of blood and sacrificed many precious lives for the benefit of the people. There is a subject "revolutionary predecessors" in front of it, so "they" are redundant. )

(2) the predicate is redundant:

The students are studying hard to meet the coming of the college entrance examination. ("Welcome" is "the college entrance examination", not "coming", so it should be deleted. )

(3) the object is redundant:

Today, I came to Yangzhou Slender West Lake and visited the White Pagoda, Junyutai and Wu Ting Bridge. ("place" is redundant and should be deleted)

(4) Additional ingredients are redundant:

Exodus: In order to simplify the number of words, we have to make some slight deletions. ("Yes" and the previous "slightly added" are duplicated, and one can be deleted)

(D) Combined with chaos

(1) mixed sentence patterns.

If you don't study hard, you can imagine that you may get good grades. The combination of rhetorical questions and judgmental sentences destroys the integrity of sentence structure and tone. If you use rhetorical questions, it should be "how can I get good grades in the exam?" If you use a judgment sentence, it should be "it is conceivable that your grades are not good." )

(2) Mixed sentences

For example, Survival published by Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House is written by a Chinese Canadian writer who has lived abroad for more than 20 years. (It is a mixture of subject-predicate sentences and verb-predicate sentences, and the "author's hand" at the end of the sentence should be removed)

(5) the meaning is unclear.

1, unknown reference:

Exodus: Some people advocate acceptance, while others oppose it. He agrees with this idea. (It is not clear whether "this proposition" refers to "acceptance" or "opposition". )

2. Sentence ambiguity:

Example: My sister is in a hurry when she can't find her parents. (What's the situation? Is "Sister" in a hurry? Or "dad" and "mom" are in a hurry. Or is "mom" in a hurry? You can put a comma between "Dad" and "Mom" or before "Dad".

(6) illogical:

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