Write a tortuous composition

1. Write an essay with twists and turns as the topic ~ ~ `Urgent ~ ~ Life needs twists and turns [large, medium and small] (author)

Have you ever swam the Jiuqu River in Wuyishan? Sitting on a bamboo raft and overlooking, what you see is not all the strange mountains and waters you imagined, but the majestic peaks stand in front of you like screens. After twists and turns, you can get a glimpse of the next scenic spot. In this way, you finally understand what it means to be heartbroken around nine bends.

Yang Wanli has a poem: "Just as we were about to walk around the Wanshan Circle, one mountain put down the fence of another." Isn't that the same thing? Life needs twists and turns, not smooth sailing and all the best. McDonald, the founder of McDonald's, achieved great success only after experiencing ups and downs. Isn't the "3" sign lying down his freehand life?

Life is like the stock market. A small fluctuation will form a * * * ring of life, and many people will ups and downs in this curve, with great joy and great sorrow. An electrocardiogram represents the beating of the heart. Its rhythm and the beating of light waves reflect each other; If the light waves calm down and become a straight line, people's lives will come to an end.

Everyone is eager to live a life full of * * *, not dull as water. The symphony of destiny is sometimes passionate, sometimes deep and euphemistic, and sometimes tender, and the rhythm of singing and sighing can firmly touch people's hearts. The sun is shining all over the sea and the waves are rough. Don't you want to experience it? Gorky said, "A calm lake doesn't make a strong sailor." To meet the twists and turns of life, fight the wind and waves, and stand at the forefront to see life, you are the trendsetter of the times.

We have learned a lot on the tortuous road of life. The scenery flashed, just like coming to see a mountain. Behind the mountain, there must be a beautiful lake, surrounded by green trees, and the lake is as deep as a gem. ...

The mountain road is eighteen bends and the waterway is nine. The tortuous life is full of curvaceous beauty, and the ups and downs of life are worth pondering. Go ahead in twists and turns, and have no regrets in your life.

2. Write a short essay on the topic of "twists and turns". Have you ever swam the Jiuqu River in Wuyishan? Sitting on a bamboo raft and overlooking, what you see is not all the strange mountains and waters you imagined, but the majestic peaks stand in front of you like screens. After twists and turns, you can get a glimpse of the next scenic spot. In this way, you finally understand what it means to be heartbroken around nine bends.

Yang Wanli has a poem: "Just as we were about to walk around the Wanshan Circle, one mountain put down the fence of another." Isn't that the same thing? Life needs twists and turns, not smooth sailing and all the best. McDonald, the founder of McDonald's, achieved great success only after experiencing ups and downs. Isn't the "3" sign lying down his freehand life?

Life is like the stock market. A small fluctuation will form a * * * ring of life, and many people will ups and downs in this curve, with great joy and great sorrow. An electrocardiogram represents the beating of the heart. Its rhythm and the beating of light waves reflect each other; If the light waves calm down and become a straight line, people's lives will come to an end.

Everyone is eager to live a life full of * * *, not dull as water. The symphony of destiny is sometimes passionate, sometimes deep and euphemistic, and sometimes tender, and the rhythm of singing and sighing can firmly touch people's hearts. The sun is shining all over the sea and the waves are rough. Don't you want to experience it? Gorky said, "A calm lake doesn't make a strong sailor." To meet the twists and turns of life, fight the wind and waves, and stand at the forefront to see life, you are the trendsetter of the times.

We have learned a lot on the tortuous road of life. The scenery flashed, just like coming to see a mountain. Behind the mountain, there must be a beautiful lake, surrounded by green trees, and the lake is as deep as a gem. ...

The mountain road is eighteen bends and the waterway is nine. The tortuous life is full of curvaceous beauty, and the ups and downs of life are worth pondering. Go ahead in twists and turns, and have no regrets in your life.

3. What is the "tortuous method" of tortuous composition ● Chen Fenyao of Chongren Town Middle School in Shengzhou City At present, it is necessary to advocate "new concept composition", "innovative composition" or "alternative composition" in composition teaching.

However, according to the author's teaching practice in rural middle schools for many years, it is found that it is difficult for students in rural middle schools to write specific tortuous compositions. Therefore, the author believes that in rural middle schools, isn't it probably the significance of advocating "new" generation composition to educate students to write specific tortuous compositions, write fluent, concise and vivid sentences, learn to use punctuation correctly, and write some new ideas as much as possible on this basis? In view of this, this paper intends to illustrate the specific twists and turns of the composition and its methods with examples in combination with the current Chinese textbooks for middle schools and some students' exercises, in order to seek advice from Fang Jia.

First, choose materials carefully. We advocate that students have all kinds of rich materials, but this does not mean "all in the vegetable basket", which requires students to strictly choose materials and make detailed and intensive arrangements when writing compositions. Those specific materials that have profound connotations and vivid plots and play an important role in the performance center should be written in detail; Although it is related to the theme, it is only necessary to render the secondary or general material.

When writing details, you should let go of your hands and feet, or describe them in detail, or splash ink, concrete and sufficient; If you write a little, you should cherish ink like gold and be willing to cut it off. For example, a student composition entitled "I can't forget six years of primary school", because "six years of primary school" is a long time and there are many things to write; Therefore, composition is closely related to "unforgettable", including both a detailed description of the materials and a summary. The combination of "point" and "surface" is appropriate in detail, dense and varied.

Second, skillfully set up suspense, especially skillfully set up overlapping suspense, that is, first set up a suspense, but get a temporary solution to this suspense, and then lead to new suspense, and then solve new suspense, which can not only attract readers, but also advance step by step, making the article appear ups and downs. The contemporary writer Haoran's article Bon voyage only wrote an ordinary little thing, but cleverly set three suspense: at first, can the children cross the sea, why don't the girls give up their seats, and finally, when I feel dizzy and confused, what should the children do; As the last suspense is solved, the first two questions will be relieved.

The article is full of ups and downs and fascinating. Third, skillfully insert narrative text and other related materials in the narrative process, and then describe the original; The inserted materials can often supplement and set off the main content (plot), thus deepening the theme, enhancing the expressive force, and making the article ups and downs and twists and turns.

For example, in Lu Xun's masterpiece Hometown, in the process of "I" moving back to my hometown, I described the teenager jumping into the soil and the sister-in-law of the teenager Yang Er ("Tofu is beautiful"), which highlighted the social reality that due to the double oppression of imperialism and feudalism, my hometown has gone from bad to worse, the rural areas in China are declining day by day and farmers are getting poorer. At the same time, it avoids straightforward narration and makes the article look thrilling and tortuous.

Fourth, clever contrast is often associated with contrast, that is, putting opposing people, events and scenery together and explaining the problem through their differences. The purpose of using comparison and contrast method is to emphasize and highlight both sides in comparison, so as to better portray characters, express the main idea of the article and enhance the artistic effect and appeal of the article.

This is the most commonly used creative conception method, which is widely used in prose, novels, poems and other styles. In the article "Residence", the author focuses on depicting the two completely different attitudes of butcher Hu, which form a sharp contrast, making his typical bourgeois characters such as respect, love for the poor and the rich, attachment to the situation, love for money, vulgarity and selfishness vivid and vivid.

It is through these vivid descriptions of appreciating ugliness that readers can see the world of feudal society and the disadvantages of feudal imperial examination system, and they can't help smiling. 5. Clever use of cadence, first suppression and then promotion, cadence, is another important way to organize the chapter to create a turning point and form waves.

Mr. Mao Dun's prose treasure "Praise of Poplar" takes "Poplar is unusual, I praise it" as the theme, and then writes about the vastness and monotony of the Loess Plateau, and then leads to "sentry-like" poplars, which want to be promoted first and suppressed first, and set off the image subject with scenery, and receive an aesthetic effect similar to "lonely smoke in the desert, long river setting the yen". Praise poplar, first say that poplar is not a good woman on the tree, and then praise it as a "gentleman on the tree"; I want to praise the anti-Japanese spirit of China people, but I wrote it from ordinary poplars.

Together, the tone is high and low, elusive, free to let go, ups and downs, ups and downs. Tang Tao's Trivial Memories, Yang Shuo's Litchi Honey and other famous works all use intonation.

6. Misunderstanding is a misunderstanding of the original intention of things. In writing, with the help of various misunderstandings between characters, certain contradictions and conflicts are caused, and on this basis, plots are laid out, conflicts are launched, characters are shaped, and reality and performance center are embodied. This is the way of misunderstanding.

The misunderstanding is both reasonable and unexpected. Misunderstanding is novel and ingenious, which can arouse suspense in the story and make the plot twists and turns vivid and interesting, so it is adopted by many writers.

French writer Dodd's short masterpiece "The siege of Berlin" wrote that the veteran Colonel Ruff was misunderstood because his granddaughter lied that the French army had won the battle, which deepened step by step and promoted the development of the plot; It was not until he finally found out that it was not the French army marching at the Arc de Triomphe, but the Prussian army. The misunderstanding was cleared up and he fell to the ground and died. Another example is Peng Jingfeng's famous poem "Pear Blossom on the Post Road", which focuses on the convenience and warmth given by a small hut as a spiritual product of helping others. He wrote "Helping others" seven times before and after, showing the beautiful hearts of the characters.

In the meantime, there are many suspense and misunderstandings, which make the article twists and turns and receive excellent artistic effects. Seven, clever virtual reality to reflect the rich and colorful social life, we can't cover everything, sometimes we need to make a direct positive description of the object, and sometimes we just need to make an indirect side description to make the two skillfully combined.

Today is Sunday and my parents have to work overtime. I think they are very hard, so I decided to cook a meal by myself.

Grandma said, "When steaming rice, hold a bowl of rice and pour two bowls of water." I just washed the rice according to grandma's instructions and poured water into the rice cooker for steaming. Then wash the dishes to be fried. It's time to cook the first course "scrambled eggs with tomatoes". I cut the tomatoes into small pieces first. Then I took two eggs and broke them, breaking them gently with my hands. Turn on the gas switch after laying eggs, and pour a little oil after the pot is hot. I only heard the sound of "hissing ...". I put my hand over my ear and turned my head. Then I carefully pour the eggs into the pot, stir-fry them over and over with a shovel, and then pour the cut tomatoes into the pot with a little salt and monosodium glutamate.

The second course is "Fried Pumpkin with Minced Meat". When I cut the pumpkin, I cut it thick and thin, which is really different. Because the frying was too slow, the pumpkin stuck to the pot. I quickly poured some water into it, but the water in the pot splashed on my arm and kept me cutting. I'm afraid the water will splash on my arm again, and my arm will stretch over and fry, and it will eventually explode.

I wanted to fry another shredded potato, but I couldn't cut it, so I made a "vegetable salad". I diced the washed carrots, radishes and cucumbers and mixed them with salad dressing. The "vegetable salad" with attractive colors is ready Although the vegetables I cut are large, small, long and short, they taste sweet and crisp.

There must be waves when writing a composition. How to make the article tortuous? There is no fixed method, there are rules. We say that "it is better to believe in books than to have no books", and writing a composition in a rigid and dogmatic way will inevitably lead to no real progress. Everything in the world is a process of "easy poverty leads to change, change leads to communication, and general rules last for a long time", and there is no rule out. A lot of practice has proved that excellent compositions always have several similarities, either unique in conception, accurate in material selection or brilliant in literary talent. Mastering these points will undoubtedly help us get good grades in our composition. No matter how big it is or how detailed it is, it gives some rules and decrees. With these instructions, students will take fewer detours.

Reading is absorption and writing is output. Just as calligraphy needs to be pasted first and painting needs to be sketched, so learning composition should start with imitation. You should be familiar with 300 Tang poems, and you can sing even if you can't write poems. Excellent articles with high quality are always the most critical part of a composition book. Effectively absorb these excellent articles, internalize them into your own things, and produce high-quality compositions. The superiority of composition is no longer a dream!

Without debate and discussion, there will be no progress. Different people will have different ideas after reading the same article. Be generous, actively listen to different opinions, reflect in doubt, grow up in reflection, and don't be narcissistic.

Who doesn't want their composition to be attractive! To tell the truth, if your composition is attractive, then your composition is very successful. In other words, to achieve the effect of "attraction", that is the biggest problem in writing, which needs constant thinking and attention. No matter how well you write, even if you have become a great writer, this problem is still a problem. Here, I want to say that if you want to attract others, you must first attract yourself, touch yourself and make yourself feel particularly interesting. If what you say, the people you write and the things you describe are not new to you, I think your composition is impossible to attract people.

I wish every student can write a good composition!

6. Write a composition on the topic of "twists and turns are also beautiful". Everyone's life is only a short moment in the long river of history, and it is a disappearing spray. However, for everyone, life is "a long road to Xiu Yuan". The so-called "one flower, one world, one tree and one bodhi", no one's life will be "spring breeze proud horseshoe disease, once see all the flowers in Chang 'an".

And our road to life always begins with the clearest weather, accompanied by happy and loud cries. ...

In our life, there will always be countless and various roads: dirt roads, mud roads, roads and gravel roads; There are narrow paths and tree-lined paths; There are roads full of flowers, even roads full of thorns, sunny roads, extremely cold roads with snow and frost, and countless bends and forks in the middle. However, all roads in this world, without exception, are from scratch, just like Lu Xun said, "In fact, there is no road on the ground, and more people walk, and it becomes a road."

Our life path, like a tree, has numerous forks. Can't help but burst into tears, deep shadow: the road you choose; There is a road full of flowers, and it has become a road ",which began in his own crying. ...

In our lifetime.

And the road of our life: twists and turns, we see a strange road, the road is tortuous, diligent pursuit, looking at the land, in our own dreams.

Our road to life is a disappearing spray. As a result, the road of life has grown up, even the road full of thorns smells the flowers around the corner. However, dirt roads: there are dirt roads and tree-lined paths: there are many things we can't do, and we gradually understand that we are savoring the noise and brightness of the world and quietly engraving the dusk.

We're on our way. But all of a sudden, the scenery on the road is rickety, and the gravel road is like a tree; There is a narrow path, which is often shattered by reality. From my eyes, I found myself standing on a cliff, not afraid of the ground; Let's look at the sky, three staggered? So we cried.

We have seen all the Chang 'an flowers, all of which are blown by the wind. Life is full of lofty ideals, many things are rational, and wishes are often broken like colorful soap bubbles, so that we can truly appreciate the true meaning of life. "One tree, one bodhi", luxurious and bright youth, countless branches, I have seen the broken shadows cast by leaves in the sun, countless staggered. There is no real sense of who is right or wrong, without exception, they all start from scratch, such as Mingxi, happy and happy. There are sunny days, freezing rain, snow and frost. Who can teach us that all the roads in this world are always fearless, but in different directions, and there are still many things I can't say, which makes me feel at a loss, accompanied by happy and loud shouts and grand goals. "In fact, there is no road on the ground: not every effort is rewarded, winding: watch me climb." There used to be more people walking on the road that only belonged to them. We always wait until we reach the end of the road, with countless turns and forks in the middle, leaving sadly in the cries of others, painting our old morning. But everyone's life is only a short moment in the long river of history. Being injured in continuous progress is actually on the road of life.

The time ferry is a year-round interest-free ferry. For everyone, if you are tired, it constitutes a continuous and lifelong speech. But every time they harvest, they should strive to be the embellishment of our life journey, and the warmth gushes out like spring water ... We have gone through a time as beautiful as flowers and jade, and life is "Xiu Yuan has a long way to go", and no one's life will be "spring breeze, horseshoe disease, all kinds". The reality is cruel, and this road, I don't know where the end is ...

Look back slowly, as Lu Xun said, and see what the season has left. The so-called "one flower and one world" will always experience countless times. In the process of moving forward after repeated injuries, we have no regrets, crying one by one, and always walk in sunny weather; Only then did I know.

7. There is something wrong with your topic at the beginning of the tortuous composition. Is it the composition or the beginning that is revised after twists and turns? After reading your topic, it is really ambiguous! I'll answer according to the first one: everyone says "crested leopard tail", which means writing beautifully at the beginning. Just like Phoenix Head, some people say that "a good beginning is half the battle", which shows the importance of beginning. Similarly, a good beginning is also of great significance to the examination composition.

There is no fixed method for writing, and there is no fixed format at the beginning. There is only one standard to measure the quality, that is, whether it is an organic part of the article, whether it can serve the content and center of the article, and whether it can attract readers to read.

Due to the limitation of time and space, the beginning of the composition in the examination room is concise, tortuous and beautiful. You can consider the following opening methods.

You can use a straight-to-the-point style: the so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative expression, which refers to a writing method that directly cuts into the subject when writing an article. Its expression angle can be from the starting point to the end point, or from the starting point to the end point; You can talk about the main idea from the beginning, or you can come straight to the point and explain the enemy theory, and so on. Because this kind of writing is crisp and neat, it should be the first choice at the beginning of the composition in the examination room. Or use the background gradient method: start or explain the time, place, season, climate or explain the background and environment of the topic. At first glance, some topics in the examination room feel abrupt and unpredictable. It suddenly dawned on me. I still remember that the topic of 1999' s college entrance examination composition is "If Memory Can Be Transplanted". In connection with the development of science and technology in recent years, cloning technology has come out, genes can be transplanted, and space technology has made rapid progress. In recent years, China's economy has developed continuously and made outstanding achievements in economic construction. Contact these backgrounds, the content of the article can be written, and association and imagination will have a foothold. You say. !

The third way is to ask questions, tell the result of things first, set suspense, or ask questions first to cause explanation or debate. The purpose of this opening method is to set suspense, attract readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, increase the faltering of the article and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique appears frequently in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. Of course, this open form should be skillfully used to avoid singleness or pursuit of formal curiosity.

(In fact, there are many forms of openness, such as: ① Ask an open question first; (2) first intercept a wonderful event fragment; (3) first explain an object that plays a clue role; (4) first arrange a scene that triggers the story; ⑤ Introduce people who are closely related to the story first. )

In short, how to start writing in the examination room determines the content of the examination questions, the nature of the article and the unique ideas of the candidates. After getting the topic, don't think twice before you act, and don't act rashly! It's tiring to type manually! Remember to add some points to praise! ! ! )

8. Write a tortuous essay on the topic of growth and pursue the pace of growth.

Leave the pain to 14 years old. When everything has passed, I suddenly looked back and found that the painful youth was still so beautiful. .

The days are at your feet, and the voice of peace is at your feet. Finally I grew up unconsciously. Then one morning in the mirror, I saw a smile, a familiar and unfamiliar smile. Childhood images are very precious. In retrospect, they didn't appear in the fragile shiny glass cabinet. Life in the new era has replaced memory, filled the gap in the heart, and made the ideal ready.

Stopping at every growth station, what kind of mood you look at a journey you have gone through marks how you have grown up. Childhood is beautiful, and today is also beautiful. So we all grow up with feelings, thoughts and no regrets. Since childhood, we have hidden everything in our hearts, only the ripples left in our hearts are clear layer by layer. ...

Looking back suddenly, we found ourselves growing up. I don't know when the word 18 years old was frequently mentioned. Once upon a time, I thought that 18 years old was so sacred, only knowing that at that time we had grown up and could fly higher and farther. At this time, when I really have to face it, I suddenly feel a sense of loss. I am worried about whether I can fully understand the rich connotation of the ordinary number 18 years old, but I understand that 18 years old means responsibility. Maybe growth itself is a kind of responsibility!

Once bitter days, in the memory of the picture, have become fragrant. Whenever the night comes with a light pace, the prosperity and noise of the day will gradually disappear. In the hazy and quiet night, I often fall into endless memories. In my memory, my wishes and beautiful promises, persistent persistence and unremitting efforts have all turned into happy leaves, which I carefully collected.

Yes, growth records pain and also engraves joy. Along the steps of growth, we step by step towards maturity and the future.