How to write a celebrity's composition in Chinese

It's hard to say clearly here, and the writing technique can't be completed overnight. You can refer to Andersen's The Glorious Thorn Road, which is the best one written by celebrities I have ever seen (attached).

Don't write their examples before you write what you have learned. That's too vulgar to get high marks.

You can examine the limitations and greatness of that era from the life of celebrities, and you can also write the feelings and loneliness of celebrities beyond the times. Everyone was drunk and I woke up alone. Great people always find it difficult to accept and understand the times. For example, Su Shi, you can write about his broad mind of "I am infinite", which is beyond the times and unprecedented.

Anyway, you have to put it another way.

Attachment: Glorious Thorn Road

Once upon a time, there was an old story: "The glorious road to thorns: a hunter named Bloomwood gained great glory and dignity, but he encountered great difficulties and risked his life for a long time." Most of us have heard this story when we were children, and we may have read it later, and we also thought of "Thorn Road" and "Disaster" that have never been sung. There is no big dividing line between story and true story. However, stories often have a happy ending in our world, while real stories often have no result in this life and have to wait until the eternal future.

World history is like a slide. A clear film with the modern darkness as the background was shown, explaining how those good people and talented martyrs who benefited mankind walked on the thorny road.

These wonderful pictures reflect all the times and countries to us. Each film is only shown for a few seconds, but it represents the whole life-a life full of struggle and victory. Now let's look at the people in the ranks of these martyrs-this team will never dry up unless the world itself is destroyed.

Now let's take a look at an amphitheater full of audiences. Irony and humorous language like the tide from aristophanes (1) in the "cloud". One of the greatest figures in Athens was laughed at physically and mentally on the stage. He is a soldier who protects the people against the thirty tyrants. His name is Socrates. He rescued Alsi Viade and Shengnuofeng in the melee, and the genius surpassed the ancient gods. He was there himself. He got up from the bench in the audience and walked to the front to show those who were laughing what he had in common with the objects being laughed at on the stage. He stood in front of them, standing high in front of them.

You, juicy, green and poisonous carrot, the shadow of Athens is not an olive tree, but you!

Seven city-states (5) argue with each other that Homer was born in his own city-that is, after Homer died! Please look at him when he is alive! He wandered around these cities and made a living by reciting his own poems. His hair turns white at the thought of tomorrow's life. He, the great prophet, is a lonely blind man. Sharp thorns tore the clothes of the saint in this poem to pieces.

But his songs are still alive; Through these songs, ancient heroes and immortals also gained life.

From the country of sunrise to the country of sunset, one picture after another appeared. These countries are far apart in space and time, but they have the same brilliant thorny road. Thorny thistles only bloom when decorating graves.

Camels walk under palm trees. They are full of indigo and precious treasures. These things are a gift from the monarch of this country to a person-this person is the joy of the people and the glory of the country. Jealousy and slander forced him to flee the country, and people didn't find him until now. Camels are now going to the town where he escaped from chaos. People carried a poor body out of the city gate and the camel team stopped. This dead man is just the person they are looking for: Felduxi ⑥-The glorious road of thorns ends here!

In the Portuguese capital, on the marble steps of the palace, sat a black African with a round face, thick lips and black hair. He is begging. He is a loyal slave of Camons. His master, the author of the narrative poem "Song of Lugitania", would have starved to death if he hadn't begged a lot of copper coins from him.

Now a precious monument stands on Camons's tomb.

There's another picture!

There is a man standing behind the iron railing. He is pale and has a long, messy beard.

"I invented something-the greatest invention in many centuries," he said. "But people have kept me here for more than twenty years!"

"Who is he?"

"A madman!" The guard at the madhouse said. "These crazy strange dame just more! He believes that people can push things with steam! "

The man's name was Solomon de Gauss, and Li Sailiu couldn't read his prophetic works, so he died in the madhouse.

Now Columbus appears. Wild children in the street often laugh at him behind him because he wants to discover a new world-and he has already discovered it. The bell of joy greeted his triumph, but the bell of jealousy was louder than this. He, the man who discovered the new continent, the man who fished up the golden land of America from the sea, and the man who gave everything to his king, was rewarded with a chain. He hopes to put this chain on his coffin and let the world see the evaluation given to him by his time.

Pictures appear one after another, and the glorious road of thorns really has no end.

There was a man sitting in the dark. He wants to measure the height of mountains on the moon. He explored the space between planets. He is a giant who understands the laws of nature. He can feel the earth turning under his feet. This man is Galileo ⑾. He was old, deaf and blind, sitting there, struggling with severe pain and human contempt. He had little strength to lift his feet: when people didn't believe in the truth, he stamped his feet in the pain of his soul and shouted, "But the earth is turning!" " "

There is a woman here. She has a child's heart, but this heart is full of enthusiasm and faith. She held high the flag in front of the fighting army; She brought victory and liberation to the motherland. The air was filled with ecstasy, so the woodpile burned: everyone was burning a witch-Joan of Arc. Yes, in the next century, people spit on this pure lily, but Voltaire, a wise genius, praised "La Bisell".

In the Weibao Palace, Danish nobles burned the king's laws. The flame rose, illuminating the legislator and his era, and at the same time sending a little rosy glow to the dark prison building. His hair is gray and bent; He sat there and carved many lines on the stone table with his fingers. He once ruled three countries. He is the beloved king of the people; He is a friend of citizens and farmers: Christian II [14]. He is a reckless man with the character of reckless times. The enemy wrote down his history. On the one hand, we should not forget his bloody crimes. On the other hand, we should also remember that he was imprisoned for 27 years.

There is a ship sailing from Denmark. A man stood on the mast and took one last look at Brunei Island. He is Duke Bra. He promoted the name of Denmark to the planet, but in return he was laughed at and hurt. He has gone abroad. He said, "There are days everywhere. What else can I ask? " He left; Our most prestigious people have gained honor and freedom abroad.

"Ah, liberated! I only hope that the unbearable pain in my body can be freed! " We have heard this voice for centuries. What is this picture? This is a picture of Griffin ·field⒃ [16], a Prometheus brother from Denmark, who is locked on a stone island in Holm.

We are in America now, near a big river. A large crowd gathered together. It is said that the ship can sail against the wind in bad weather because it has the ability to resist wind and rain. The name of the person who believes it can be done is robert fulton ⒄. His ship started sailing, but suddenly stopped. The audience laughed and hissed-even his own father hissed with everyone: "Arrogance! Completely confused! He deserves it now! You should lock this madman up! "

A small nail broke-that's why the machine didn't move just now. The wheels are turning, the wings are advancing in the water, and the ship is sailing! The lever of the steam engine shortens the distance between countries in the world from a few hours to a few minutes.

Man, when the soul understands its mission, can you feel the happiness you feel at this waking moment? At this moment, all the wounds you suffered on the glorious thorny road-even if you caused them yourself-will be cured, and your health, strength and happiness will be restored; Noise becomes harmonic; People can see God's mercy in one person, and this kind of mercy is spread to the public through one person.

This glorious thorny road looks like a brilliant light belt around the earth. Only lucky people were sent to walk on this belt and were appointed as unpaid chief engineers to build bridges between God and the world.

History has soared and spanned many centuries. At the same time, on the dark background of the glorious thorny road, many clear pictures are reflected to summon up our courage, comfort us and promote our inner peace. This brilliant road of thorns, unlike fairy tales, has no brilliant and happy ending in this world, but it transcends the times and goes to eternity.

(1) aristophanes (about 446-385 BC), an ancient Greek comedian. He lashed out at Socrates in the play Cloud.

(2) Tyrant rule refers to individual rule established by seizing power by force. From the 7th century BC to the 6th century BC, during the formation of Greek city-states, this form of political power appeared widely. In 404 BC, Sparta defeated Athens and set up a 30-member committee in Athens, which was later called the "thirty tyrant government".

Socrates (470- 399 BC) was an ancient Greek philosopher. He once saved the life of Alkki BuAddis (about 450-404 BC), an Athenian politician and strategist, in a war. In another war, he saved the life of his student Xenophon (about 444 BC-354 BC), a Greek historian, strategist and political commentator.

The Athens government forced Socrates to commit suicide by drinking poisoned wine.

Every city in ancient Greece was a country.

6. This is the great Persian poet Mansour (Abul Kasim Mansur, 940- 1020? ), the author of the narrative poem Shahnama. This poem has 60,000 lines, which was written by the king of Persia and promised him one gold coin per line. But after the poem was written, the king's minister gave him a silver coin per line. In a rage, he wrote a poem to satirize the king's evil. This poem is now the preface to the Book of Kings. When the king chased him, he had fled the country.

All landowners full name is Luiz Yaz Camoes( 1524? ~ 1580), the greatest poet in Portugal. His narrative poem Os Lusiadas is the greatest epic in Portugal. He was imprisoned many times before his death.

⑧ Gauss (Salomon de Caus, 1576 ~ 1626) is a French scientist. His works include The Reason for the Machine, which explains the principle of steam.

Pet-name ruby Li Sailiu (1585- 1642) is a French prime minister, who once had the highest power in the country.

Attending1500 On August 24th, the Spanish government sent someone to America to arrest Columbus, put him in chains and sent him back to Spain.

⑾ Galileo (1564- 1642) is a famous Italian astronomer.

⑿ Jean de (Jeanne d'Are,1412-1431), a French heroine, 1429 led 6000 people to beat back the British invaders. Later, she was betrayed to the British and burned to death as a witch.

[13] Voltaire (1694- 1779) is a famous French writer, and Rabisel is an epic about Joan of Arc written by him.

[14] Christian Deng Anden II (1481-kloc-0/559), king of Denmark, united farmers and citizens against the autocratic power of the aristocracy, but was eventually overthrown by the aristocracy and imprisoned. He has been fighting abroad for many years.

⒂ Bra (1546- 160 1) is a famous Danish astronomer. He established the Danish Observatory in Hewin. He discovered Duke Planet.

⑶ Griffinfeld (1635- 1699) is a great Danish politician. His policy is to develop industry and commerce to increase national wealth; But the first condition is to maintain international peace, especially with Denmark's neighbor Sweden. 1675, Denmark declared war on Sweden. 1676 in March, Griffin field was arrested and sentenced to death, which was later changed to life imprisonment.

American inventor ⒄ Fulton (1765- 18 15) designed and built the first American ship propelled by a steam engine.