Write a composition in the form of a total score

1. Write a composition in the form of total score to reward Hà Thu.

After autumn, the weather is getting cooler, and the breeze echoes gently in the air, making people feel very comfortable when blowing on their faces. Taking advantage of the cool weather and the gap before the start of school, my parents and I decided to watch the lotus flowers together in the cool wind.

The car sped through the tunnel and soon took us to the lake. Standing by the lake, looking into the lake from afar, all kinds of lotus flowers are so beautiful that people can't help but want to see them. I came to the lake with a brisk pace, trying to get close to the lotus. Only heard a faint fragrance, refreshing, refreshing.

White, pink, blossoming, clusters of lotus are supported by green calyx, and bright petals are more beautiful. Lotus has different shapes, like a beautiful girl. Next to it is a lotus flower with unfolded petals, which grows on the green lotus leaf. From a distance, it looks like a girl in a long pink dress dancing gracefully on the green carpet. In the distance are clusters of budding flowers and bones, which look like a shy girl sitting on the grass, shyly covering her cheeks with her hands; Next to it, the lotus flower is like a small drum inlaid with precious stones. Lotus girls are singing and dancing on this green stage. Accompanied by a small drum, they are holding a small concert.

Lotus leaf is big, round and green, like a green jade plate; It's like putting a big umbrella in the water, one after another. No wonder Yang Wanli, a poet in the Song Dynasty, praised the lotus in "Seeing Lin Zifang at Dawn in Jingci Temple": "Lotus leaves are infinitely green in the sky, and lotus flowers are of different colors." Under the sunshine, the clear lake water and lotus flowers complement each other, forming a beautiful "lotus picture", which is very beautiful. How beautiful that lotus is! Everything in nature is really full of vitality.

2. It is better to write a composition in the form of a total score, that is, to write things, urgent, urgent, urgent. During my five-year primary school life, many people left an impression on me, including classmates, father, mother and so on. But what impressed me most was my good friend, Tang, who not only studied well, but also loved helping others. She is not tall, and her face is embedded in her face. I have a pair of cherry mouths under my eyes. I remember one day in the fourth grade next semester, the sky suddenly clouded and it rained cats and dogs. I didn't bring my umbrella, so I had to wait there for my mother to pick me up. But my mother has to go to work, and my father has gone to Wenzhou on business. What should I do? At this anxious moment, I suddenly saw a familiar figure coming towards me. Sure enough, it's Don. She stopped and said to me, "Xiong Fangya, you didn't bring rain gear, did you? Shall I take you home? " I was so happy that I thanked her. Then we both walked into the rain curtain with umbrellas. The rain seems to be bad for us, and it is getting heavier and heavier. The rain, like a naughty child, hit the umbrella, got into my sleeve, jumped into my collar and put on my pants. I found that she covered more than half of my side, and her clothes were wet by the rain as big as beans. If you don't catch a cold, "she said with a smile," it doesn't matter, just go back and change. Anyway, a person has got wet, so don't get wet again, which is not good for everyone. "Unconsciously, I went home. She left without sitting or drinking tea. I asked her to sit down for a while, and she said, "No, I still want to sit down. Mom will be anxious, too. "Then I walked into the rain with an umbrella. I watched the rain fall on her like a pearl with a broken line. Looking at her distant back, I remembered her sincere and kind heart. Tang's spirit of helping others is worth learning. She is a good classmate, a good team leader and a good friend. Her helpful quality will always reverberate in my memory, and she left a very deep impression on me.

3. Write a short essay about the West Lake in Hangzhou in the form of a total score. You must have heard of the West Lake. It has a beautiful environment and pleasant scenery. It is located in Hangzhou, which is called "paradise on earth" in China. On the first day of National Day, my mother and I flew over the white clouds and soon arrived in Hangzhou. There are trees and flowers everywhere in the streets of Hangzhou, which makes us full of praise along the way. Our hotel is next to the West Lake. Looking into the distance from the hotel restaurant, the West Lake is surrounded by mountains on three sides and next to the urban area on one side. It is like a piece of jade embedded in mountains. There are three islands in the lake, with Su Causeway in front and Leifeng Tower on the left. According to my mother, the West Lake is 3.3 kilometers long from north to south, 2.8 kilometers wide from east to west, and the water surface area is 5.66 square kilometers. Putting down our luggage, our family walked to the west lake, and the fragrance of osmanthus came face to face. I am like a happy bird, jumping happily on the path shaded by willow trees. Soon we rented a boat, the boatman shook his oars briskly, and the boat slowly rowed to the center of the lake. We rowed to Santan silver moon, the largest of the three islands in the lake. Soon, we saw three stone pools more than 2 meters above the water. The boatman is a strong uncle, and he enthusiastically explains it to us. The ancients lit a big candle in the pool, and 30 moons could be reflected in the water. "Do you know why? There are three pools, each with five round holes. At night, when the candle lights up, the five holes light up, and the three pools have 15 bright spots. With the reflection in the water, there are 30 moons, namely 1 in the sky and 1 in the water, which makes 32 moons. There are 32 moons. The boatman also told us that every Mid-Autumn Festival, boats come and go on the lake, and people play and sing around Santan, which is very lively. When he said this, I couldn't help thinking of an ancient poem: "The bright moon gives birth to the sea, and the three pools and the moon are everywhere; Night boat singing and dancing place, Byakki Smoker goes. " Just thought of here, suddenly, a water heron flew down from the sky, quickly picked up a fish, stopped at a stone pool and flew south. I quickly picked up the camera and took this rare moment. At this time, hundreds of swallows circled in the air in groups, and they arranged in various phalanxes, which was very spectacular. The exquisite beauty of the West Lake is in harmony with the taste of nature, bringing out the best in each other. It can really be said that "light makeup is always appropriate, and it is difficult to paint poetry in ancient and modern times."

4. Write a composition in the form of a total score of 150 words and a corner of the topic campus composition of 150 words.

I love tree-lined summer, I love colorful autumn, I love white winter, but I love flowers more. Rich and colorful. Vibrant spring. "A day's plan lies in the morning, and a year's plan lies in the spring." Grandpa Dongse sent away the cold of the earth, and the girl in spring came to the world with light steps. The scenery in spring is very beautiful, just like a vivid painting. The sunshine in spring is particularly bright, and the graceful spring girl smiles and comes to the flower bed on campus, gently stroking the faces of all kinds of flowers and plants. The grass is like a doll who hasn't woken up yet, opening her little eyes sleepily, slowly poking out her lovely little head and looking at this beautiful world curiously; There are many delicate and charming flowers in the flowers: pink plums are like smoke, fog and dust. The Chinese rose blooms beautiful flowers, covering her little face and secretly laughing. She seems to be able to vaguely hear their cheerful laughter, probably because she is happy for the arrival of the new year! They are as red as fire, as white as snow, as yellow as gold and as pink as chardonnay. They are elegant and extremely beautiful. There are two kinds of lilies: fragrant lilies and common lilies. Ordinary lily is milky white, delicate and moving, and it is even more charming with green leaves! Aroma lily is white inside, red outside and purple inside, competing for beauty, and a gust of wind blows, and suddenly the fragrance bursts. She paints and powders for spring, which is fascinating. The white flowers of orchids are bright and dazzling against the green leaves. The most distinctive is the chrysanthemum, which is bright and enchanting, and some are like golden "wheat waves" that fluctuate with the wind; With anemone-like tentacles, winding; Some are like cockscomb flowers, such as rolling sunrise, and some umbrella-shaped corollas are like fountains. They are scrambling to add luster to spring. Roses are as bright red and warm as flames. Pieces of red strings of red, as well as the proud wild chrysanthemum, all the flowers are scrambling to suck up, inciting the breath of spring, causing spring everywhere ... "sasha vujacic ..." That's the grass talking quietly to Miss Chun! Green grass surrounds the flower bed, which is inlaid with a beautiful lace. Gorgeous Yingchun looked at people's petite and moving faces and smiled sweetly, as if to say, "Spring is coming! Spring is coming! " It exudes a strong fragrance, attracting butterflies to dance on it. Attract bees to fly around and be busy collecting honey. Several nameless flowers are also blooming in the grass, scrambling to show people their gorgeous flowers. Really all love can't be caged, an almond is coming out of the wall! Chun Lv is guarding this beautiful flower bed, like a diligent garden. Today's flower beds can be said to be an ocean of grass, a world of flowers, a home for trees, a stage for butterflies and a paradise for bees. Really dazzling! The strange fragrance is refreshing, making people linger and revel in this beautiful world.

There is a neat row of towering trees in our campus, which is beautiful all year round. In spring, everything recovers, and it is a vibrant green. The new leaves of poplar are round, with a small sharp corner protruding in front. From a distance, it looks like handfuls of green fans growing on a towering tree. Ginkgo tree is not to be outdone, he quietly put on a layer of green yarn. The newly unfolded fan-shaped leaves look so tender and green, as if they were blown away by the spring breeze overnight. In summer, it is a thick green. Poplar and oak trees have grown wide leaves, supporting handfuls of green mulberry trees for teachers and students. After lunch, it became a place for teachers to chat and students to play. The autumn wind blew, and the leaves of poplar, oak and ginkgo trees were blown yellow and floated down, paving a golden avenue for the ground there. Stepping on it makes a rustling sound, as if to say, "Why let us leave our parents' arms? "In fact, I don't want to! But the season is ruthless. When winter comes and the leaves of poplar, oak and ginkgo trees wither irretrievably, people's dreams focus on unyielding pines and cypresses. At this time, you can't help but say: "The snow presses the pines, and the pines are tall and straight. "You know, pine trees are noble, noble, wait until the snow melts. Because of this towering tree, the four seasons on campus will become picturesque. Thank you, towering tree, for adding a beauty to our campus.

Autumn is a beautiful composition. Write 290 words in the form of total score. Autumn is really beautiful! Autumn is really beautiful. The children are really happy. Autumn is really beautiful.

When my mother took me to the countryside to play, I saw red fruits, Huang Chengcheng seedlings and beautiful scenery, which really made people feel comfortable. Leaves fall on the ground one by one, maple leaves turn red, and there are more mosquitoes. Beautiful autumn is really fun.

I like morning glory, because morning glory looks like a trumpet embroidered on a green carpet from a distance. It is colorful and beautiful. Seen from a close distance, its stem is thin and long. Because it is wrapped around the stem, it wraps the stick tightly like a green rope.

Green leaves are like duck feet. National Day Today is National Day. I am so happy to go to my grandmother's house in Liuyang. I get up early.

Dad drove the car and saw yellow rice along the way, a scene of bumper harvest. The rice in the field bent over with laughter, and the farmer's uncle was happy from ear to ear. Unconsciously, we came to grandma's house, and grandma also built a new house. What a beautiful new house! Very big, the wok for cooking is this big, and her little house is really clean, and the living room is very big.

6. Write a short essay about small animals in the form of total score. The animal world is rich and colorful. Every little animal is smart and cute. Naive children have their favorite animals, like their eyes and their cute and funny performances. Of course I am no exception!

My favorite animal is yellow. Oh, don't get me wrong, it's not Huang Feihong, but a bird, an oriole. It's yellow from head to toe, which stands out from a distance! A pair of small eyes look around, as if to say: I have to get familiar with the environment! Under the furry feathers, there are two small red claws. It even sleeps like other birds. Hey! How cute!

Yellow feathers are the most surprising. The color of ordinary bird feathers is brown, which is very common. But the color of oriole's feathers is golden yellow. How strange! I think it may be dyed to keep up with the fashion!

A pair of small black eyes were embedded in that little head and blinked. It seems to say, "You should stop hurting birds!" " You must be so sad!

Little red paws stick out from the yellow feathers, stretching and bending, as if leading everyone to do gymnastics! "Come, one, two, three, four, two, three, four ..." Red claws highlight the beauty of orioles against the yellow feathers. No wonder it says "red with yellow, bright"! Ah, it's so cute!

Orioles don't even sleep like other birds. Every night, the oriole flies to the pole and rolls its golden furry body into a big ball. At this time, you will see a "little hairball" standing on the pole. If I don't tell you, you really don't know it's a bird oriole sleeping! Ah, the thief is so cute!

The singing of oriole is also famous. Every morning, people never sleep late, get up early and chirp me up. "Twitter" seems to say that "a year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in the morning"! Every time I turn on the radio, the birds compete to talk and sing, which makes the whole family jump.

My favorite little animal-oriole bird has its own characteristics! In fact, as long as you observe carefully, you will find that each animal has its own characteristics and loveliness. Protect animals!

7. Write a paragraph, in the form of a total score, saying that the teacher cares about the students. Of course, the greatest thing in the world is maternal love, but I think teacher love is also great.

Teacher's love is like the fiery red sun in winter, which warms us and makes us grow up in the ocean of knowledge! Speaking of teachers, let's talk about our head teacher, Miss Guo. In learning, Mr. Guo is famous for his patience. No matter which classmate asks her questions, she always answers them patiently. In life, she cares about us as much as her mother. If any classmate is unwell, she will ask carefully and care constantly. At ordinary times, she often teaches us the truth of being a man and doing things.

I remember once, we did Chinese homework in class. Suddenly, classmate Wan Nan "Ah!" I started to cry loudly. Seeing her panic, everyone thought that something was wrong with her? Miss Guo also hurriedly ran over, and Wannan was telling a story in innocent girl's seat.

It turned out that Viann, a classmate next to him, accidentally put the pen cover in his ear while playing with the pen. At this moment, Viann blushed and couldn't say a word. Miss Guo carefully looked at Viann's ear and immediately ran to the office to get tweezers.

I tried to take out the pen cover with tweezers, but when I started, Miss Guo hesitated. She said, "Maybe it will break your ears. Let's go to the hospital. "

Say that finish, she and Viann rushed to the hospital together. When we came back from the hospital and learned that Viann's pencil case had been taken out, the stone in everyone's heart fell to the ground.

Taking the case of Viann as an example, Mr. Guo patiently told us what we can't play, what we should pay special attention to and so on ... I think Mr. Guo is not only our respected teacher, but also our favorite elder. She really looks like her own mother.

I want to say: "Teacher Guo, you have worked hard, thank you!" " " .

8. What are the advantages of writing a composition in the form of a total score? It is the central meaning. A layer of thought you want to express: hierarchical narrative is generally a structural way to express the relationship between total narrative and sub-narrative. Total score is always a structured way to analyze articles during reading and writing. Put forward the argument at the beginning (straight to the point), several sub-arguments in the middle, and a general argument at the end (or reiterate the argument or summarize the quotation). Several sub-arguments can be parallel, hierarchical and comparative. , but they cannot be inclusive or cross-related. Total score is always a common structure in argumentative writing, which has several variants, such as total score, sub-total score and sub-total score.

General introduction

The first is a short beginning, or the cause of what is described below, or a general statement of what is described below, which is generally expressed in general language. Then there is the argument. There are two versions. One is the juxtaposition argument, which juxtaposes with each other without obvious traces of time, such as several different sides of a person, several aspects of one thing and several different things under the same center. The second is coherent argument, and there is obvious time lapse between the two, such as different stages of things' development, different things for several days in a row and so on. No matter which form it is, it is composed of fragments, short and pithy, independent of each other and subject to the same main line. Between several fragments of a sub-sentence, it can be expressed by subtitles, displayed by spaces, or like ordinary fragments, but it has obvious jumping. The end of the article is also a general statement, which can be an echo of the opening or a summary conclusion. The total score method exists not only in the relationship between sentences but also in the relationship between paragraphs. The total score method has three basic forms. Let's first look at a passage in Flying a Kite (five volumes): There are more and more kites in the sky, which is very lively. The golden "little bee" erected two green wings, as if flying around among the flowers. Bright red "big goldfish", wagging its tail, seems to swim in the water. There is also the exquisite "small satellite", shining with golden light, as if flying in the universe ... The first sentence of this passage generally says "there are more and more kites", which is very lively, and then the second, third and fourth sentences specifically write three kinds of kite-flying scenes, which obviously constitutes the relationship between the first and second. There is also a passage like this: "The meat of squirrels can be eaten, the hair on their tails can be used to make brushes, and the skin can be used to make clothes." The squirrel is really a lovely and useful little animal. " Is the relationship between the first points and the total. Another way is to summarize first, then divide and then summarize, such as the last section of the sun.

classify

The total score structure can be divided into three types: parallel, comparative and progressive. (Take strong as an example) A juxtaposition: There are four kinds: (1) Strong is **(2) Strong can be **(3) We are strong because **(4) Strong requires ** B contrast: positive first, then negative. First of all, talk about the advantages of being strong, then spend time in the middle (however ...), then talk about the disadvantages of not being strong, and finally sum up the C-level advanced (more flattering, have something to write, and appear more profound in thought): What is strong-why do you want to be strong-what do you want to do if you want to be strong-what does it mean to real life?

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