Read How Steel was Tempered Part II (5)

At the conference, party member, a young member of the Youth League, argued with Trotsky's representative, and pankratov, an old docker, got stormy applause for his speech.

1924 ice and snow hit the earth. People are suffering from cruel natural disasters. Began a hard struggle. The operator received the bad news of Lenin's death.

At Lenin's memorial service, everyone was deeply saddened. But Lenin's death turned thousands of workers into Bolsheviks. Politowski, the old driver, became party member and A Qing became party member. The leader died, but the party team did not slack off.

Chapter vi

Rita and Paul are reunited. Attend the Sixth Congress of the All-Russian Communist Youth League.

Rita also asked Paul why he didn't study in those years and learned about Paul's feelings for him, but Rita already has a family. When we parted, Rita wrote a letter to Paul and showed him the diary of that year.

Paul's health prevented him from continuing to work, so he went to a nursing home in the south to recuperate.

During the holiday, I read the book How Steel was Tempered. The topic is written in the form of metaphor, which means how the iron will is tempered. The writer is ostrovsky, a Soviet writer.

This book is mainly about Pavel Colta King's experience, how he joined the League and his many speeches after joining the League. At first, I joined the Youth League and participated in several wars. He plays the accordion very well, once served as a pioneer of cavalry, participated in battles, and had a horse with missing ears. ①

Reading Pavel Colta King's growing experience, I feel that my whole body and mind are integrated with him, and I have drawn a lot of spiritual strength from him.

Paul is a brave man. He bravely saved the sailor Zhu, but was tipped off by a Polish Victor, so he was imprisoned, but later he was wrongly released. ②

Paul has tenacious perseverance and strong will. In cold weather, the biting wind is frightening. A group of workers, Paul, are also working together to build the railway. At that time, Paul was very ill. Many people advised him to go back, but he refused to go back. Finally, he fainted at the station and was dying. After receiving treatment, he got away with it. On another occasion, Paul was seriously ill. After a month's rest, he returned to work and worked very hard. But a few days later, the disease came back, incurable, paralyzed and blind. In the face of such a blow to life, Paul was not discouraged, but insisted on writing strongly and wrote Born in the Storm, which was well received.

He devoted his life to the revolutionary cause. He said:

"The most precious thing is life. Life only belongs to people once. A person's life should be spent like this: looking back, he will not regret wasting his time, nor will he be ashamed of doing nothing; On his deathbed, he can say,' I devoted all my life and energy to the most magnificent cause in the world-the struggle for the liberation of mankind.' "③

Segment modification ①: The content is too fragmentary, so summarize the content.

Revision: This book mainly tells the experience of Pavel Kochakin and how he grew from an ordinary teenager to a brave capitalist warrior.

Paragraph modification ②: The content is simpler and more specific.

Paul is a brave man. His friend, sailor Zhu, was escorted by escort soldiers. Paul saw him and planned to save him. He knew he only had one chance in his heart. He aimed at the escort's weapon-a rifle. When the escort soldiers approached him, he jumped on the rifle and asked the soldiers to hit him. Zhu He took the opportunity to punch the escort and ran away.

Paragraph modification 3: Add the feeling of this paragraph.

Revision: This passage is Paul's reflection on life at the grave of his comrades-in-arms after overcoming his illness. I feel Paul's persistence in revolutionary work. Is the meaning of life dedication? When I saw this passage, although I couldn't understand it deeply, it really gave me a great shock. I copied it cleanly and deeply in my heart, so that I can further understand the meaning of life with actions in the future.

With Paul

-Comments on how steel is tempered.

I read the book How Steel was Tempered in the summer vacation. The topic is written in the form of metaphor, which means how the iron will is tempered. The writer is ostrovsky, a Soviet writer.

This book focuses on pavel korchagin's experience and how he grew from an ordinary teenager to a brave fighter.

Reading Pavel Colta King's growing experience, I feel that my whole body and mind are integrated with him, and I have drawn a lot of spiritual strength from him.

Paul is a brave man. His friend, sailor Zhu, was escorted by escort soldiers. Paul saw him and planned to save him. He knew he only had one chance in his heart. He aimed at the escort's weapon-a rifle. When the escort soldiers approached him, he jumped on the rifle and asked the soldiers to hit him. Zhu He took the opportunity to punch the escort and ran away.

Paul has tenacious perseverance and strong will. In cold weather, the biting wind is frightening. A group of workers, Paul, are also working together to build the railway. At that time, Paul was very ill. Many people advised him to go back, but he refused to go back. Finally, he fainted at the station and was dying. After receiving treatment, he got away with it. On another occasion, Paul was seriously ill. After a month's rest, he returned to work and worked very hard. But a few days later, the disease came back, incurable, paralyzed and blind. In the face of such a blow to life, Paul was not discouraged, but insisted on writing strongly and wrote Born in the Storm, which was well received.

He devoted his life to the revolutionary cause. He said:

"The most precious thing is life. Life only belongs to people once. A person's life should be spent like this: looking back, he will not regret wasting his time, nor will he be ashamed of doing nothing; On his deathbed, he can say,' I devoted all my life and energy to the most magnificent cause in the world-the struggle for the liberation of mankind.' "

This passage is Paul's reflection on life at the grave of his comrades-in-arms after overcoming his illness, and I feel Paul's persistence in revolutionary work. Is the meaning of life dedication? When I saw this passage, although I couldn't understand it deeply, it really gave me a great shock. I copied it cleanly and deeply in my heart, so that I can further understand the meaning of life with actions in the future.