350-word composition for the fourth grade of primary school: picking grain

Keywords: 350 words in the fourth grade of Tiaoliang Primary School

Words: 350 words composition

This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.

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This composition is about 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is "Picking up Grain". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. One morning, it was sunny, and Comrade Zhu De and the soldiers went to pick food together. In Mao Ping, Comrade Zhu De took out two big baskets full of grain, carried them on his shoulders, and bent the pole. On the way back, the mountain road was rugged and very difficult to walk. The soldiers walked carefully on the mountain road in case they fell. It is five or six miles from Mao Ping to Jinggangshan, and it took them half a day to get back to Jinggangshan. Back in the mountains, everyone was exhausted and sweaty, but Comrade Zhu De never said he was tired. He shared weal and woe with the soldiers, and everyone loved Comrade Zhu De more and more. The famous teacher Xu Kaibo's comments: "Comrade Zhu De took out two big baskets full of grain, picked them on his shoulders, and bent the pole", and "On the way back, the mountain road was rugged and it was very difficult to walk". These two details formed a sharp contrast, showing Comrade Zhu De's spirit of being fearless of difficulties and hardships. There are only three sentences in the full text, but it has shaped the great image of Comrade Zhu De. A short story and several details make readers feel that Comrade Zhu De is admirable. If the young writer can give a negative example from his own life and compare it with Comrade Zhu De, the effect may be better. (China Distinguished Teacher: Miss Wang) 2009-11-26 20: 01:00.