1. Spring has come and it is getting warmer and warmer. _______________________________________________________

1. Lack of subject, the weather is getting warmer and warmer

2. Sprinkling on the beach, the beach is silvery white. ___

The moonlight shines on the beach, and there is no subject

3. I learned the lesson Edison and got an education.

we are educated. . . Lack of subject

4. Lei Feng's deeds of serving the people wholeheartedly.

add "deeply touched us" after. . . . There is only one subject "deeds" on the topic, which is short of object, predicate and form

(2) redundancy

1. At the get-together, he was the first to perform on the stage.

first, the first one. . It means the same thing, so you can choose any one. 2. Grandma planted eggplant, tomatoes, cucumbers and vegetables in her garden.

Remove "vegetables", eggplant, tomato and cucumber are all repeated expressions

3. I often read and read science fiction

Reading and reading the same meaning. Go to one, which is the same as question 1

4. Squirrels like to build their nests on tall trees.

Tall and big trees can all mean big, so the word "big" is redundant.

(3) The meaning is unclear.

1. Li Hong sometimes plays ball with Zhang Ming.

"sometimes" and "often", these two adverbials of time are contradictory, and going to a

2. My sister is very worried that she can't find her parents.

The meaning of the sentence is ambiguous. Is my sister in a hurry? Or are mom and dad in a hurry?

3. Some people advocate acceptance, while others advocate opposition. He agrees with this proposition.

which proposition does he agree with? Agree with the objection or agree with the acceptance

5. The whole class took part in this charity activity, except Zhang Gang.

Inconsistent, the first half of the sentence says "all the classmates", and then it says that Zhang Gang didn't attend, and Zhang Gang is not human.

(4) Improper collocation

1. The music and dance at today's party are really beautiful. _

How can music be said to be "beautiful" if the predicate and the object are not collocated properly?

2. I like participating in the Natural History Museum very much.

the museum "participates"? Just think about it and you will know that it is not right

3. The soldiers braved the downpour and muddy path.

How about braving the "muddy path" and thinking?

4. The battle is going on enthusiastically.

How can the battle be described as "enthusiastic"? It should be "intense"

(5) improper word order

1. All the teachers and students in our school went to visit the Science and Technology Museum. Wang Li sang a beautiful song at the concert.

__ All the teachers and students sing a beautiful song

3. Art and music are very interested in me.

_ Art and music are interested in you

4. Li Hua must be rated as a three-good student by his classmates.

I must be rated as a three-good student by my classmates.