The wind is blowing, and the composition has high marks.

It's windy I really run on the playground. It's windy At this time, I saw the clothes on the clothes rack in the distance begin to dance under the action of the wind: they lined up in order, bowed deeply to show their respect and began to dance. They moved their left hand, moved their right hand, and suddenly a somersault was caught by the person in front. This lively dance is finally over. The garbage on the ground feels unconvinced when it sees clothes happy. They thought: We are not as embarrassed as you. They jumped up, they danced in groups, divided into five groups, rotated and changed their shapes, and then jumped forward to have a carp war. This time, the students on duty who swept the floor were so busy that they rushed over and jumped in front of the garbage. With a bang, she fell to the ground and closed her eyes. After several struggles, the garbage was finally subdued by the students on duty and never dared to dance again. Fall from leaves to the ground and become arrogant. He is not afraid of anything because his mother is an uncle. They played pranks in groups of three and five: the leaves laughed slyly, rolling in the soil for a while and dancing in the air for a while. They put bacteria on our clothes and sand on our faces. . . . . Hey! Even the leaves dare to be so arrogant with the support of the wind. Wind! You really look like a clever magician.

Teacher's comment: The little author wrote this work with his own feelings when facing the "wind". The language is true and natural, and the "look" of the wind is wonderful. This paper describes in detail the changes of all the scenery seen when the wind blows, and comprehensively uses the rhetorical methods of personification and metaphor. The language is lively, which shows the young writer's writing skills well and makes readers appreciate the literary talent of a new generation of young writers. The center of the article is clear, the structure is clear, and the narrative of the little author is very attractive. It is very valuable to describe ordinary things so successfully. I hope the little author can bring us more wonderful scenes. "Get the sand on our faces. . . . . Change it to "Get sand on our faces ...".

The wind shook my heartstrings.

The young leaves outside the window endure the hurricane, fearless, as if the wind is accompanying them, drifting with the wind, so relaxed. It suddenly occurred to me that the teacher said that he was fearless in the face of suffering. Isn't that what the wind has The wind blew and swayed the trees inside. ...

Sometimes when I think about it, it's beautiful when there is wind. Life without baptism is not perfect. That summer, when you and I entered the school gate and met for the first time, our hearts were all excited. Looking around, there are many seniors, and the tide is surging. When you and I first met, Kan Kan talked about it, so we became friends, conflicts entered, and we got into trouble. However, when the wind blows, I am running away from everything, afraid of the wind and all this. It's silly to think about it now. Why didn't I face it bravely at first? After the gale, I realized that this was God's trial. Thanks for a windy day.

Yes, it is windy.

The wind makes the world full of colors;

The wind makes life glow.

The great men of the past stood on the top of the mountain with huge sails. Looking through time and space, Mencius "was born in sorrow and died in happiness", Han Xin was humiliated and Sima Qian became a family. Everything is driven by the wind to the other side of success. Now we greenhouse people always succumb to minor disasters and have no motivation to challenge the wind. We are always happy-go-lucky. It is cowardly of us to let suffering dominate our world. Let's learn from the ancients' striving for the upper reaches, blow the wind to our other shore, and let our world glow with gorgeous brilliance.

This is a beautiful windy day, and we will make those sufferings bow down before us, stand up and be in our own master.

It's windy It's beautiful.