Write a composition using a flashback narrative sequence

1. Composition written in flashback

Grandpa’s birthday has finally arrived.

I got up early in the morning and helped my mother pick vegetables and wash dishes, and urged my father to quickly load film and organize accessories. At 9 o'clock, I came to Ya Nuan Street Cake Shop and asked the boss to help me order a big fruit cake. I drew a dragon on it, ordered flowers and wrote "Happy Birthday". Under the escort of my parents, I ignored the hot weather. , I walked to my grandpa’s house carrying a huge round box with the character “Shou” in it. Sweat was flowing down my cheeks, but thinking about being able to give grandpa a happy birthday made me feel sweet in my heart.

"Tap tap tap" followed by a knock on the door, and we were already standing at the door of grandpa's house. Grandma opened the door and said hurriedly: "Hey, why are you coming to see us in such a hot day!?" "Hey, I'm not only here to see you, but I'm also here to celebrate your birthday!" "Who's celebrating your birthday?" Grandpa welcomed us into the house. "You! Isn't today August 2nd? It's your birthday!" I said, "Look, I brought the cake.

'"Is today my birthday? "Oh, little ghost head, help me celebrate my birthday!" "Hahaha..." Everyone was delighted by Grandpa's remarks. I stepped forward to help Grandpa and Grandma sit down on the sofa in the living room. I took out the red couplets I brought with me and hung them on the wall. The first couplet read "Good health" and the second couplet "Blessedness" "East China Sea" and "Happy Birthday Grandpa" were printed horizontally, and a golden one-foot-square Chinese character "Longevity" was hung in the center... After a while, the living room was decorated with joy and colors by me.

"Everyone is in his place" I said Sent a signal to my parents, "Grandpa's birthday party starts now, let's play music!" "My mother turned off the playback button at hand, and a piece of music "Happy Birthday to You" floated out of the speaker, rippled in the room, and echoed in each of our hearts. I took the faucet cane, walked to the sofa and said: " Grandpa, this is a birthday gift for you! "Grandpa stroked his cane and held my hand tightly. The silver eyebrows on his face trembled slightly in his smile. The corners of his eyes were moist. He kept saying: "Grandpa is happy, Grandpa is happy..." Grandma's The circles under my eyes were red, so I sat between them, wiped my eyes, and handed over the drinks to ask questions.

The big cake with colorful candles was already placed. On the coffee table, I put happy birthday crowns on my grandpa and grandma, looked at the shining flames, held the hands of the two old people tightly and said, "Blow it out, come, let's do it together, one, two, three... ..." Before he finished speaking, "Pa! "Dad has clicked the shutter, leaving this unforgettable moment on the scroll. Mom clapped her hands, grandpa's face blossomed with joy, and laughter filled the entire living room...

2. An essay written in flashback

About the beginning of success: When we discover a continent or cross a mountain, another ocean or grassland will be in sight. This vast universe is at our disposal. No matter how fast you travel, you can't stop traveling. Because life is endless, struggle is endless, and success has no final destination. ----------------Inscription Faith is planted in the heart. Perseverance never gives up. The pursuit never stops. Success. There is no limit. The price of life is higher. Life is like a line segment. It has a beginning and an end, and a career is like a ray. It has a beginning and an end. Those who are good at beginning are actually many, and those who master the end are few. Therefore, in the long history, there are not many bright stars, but most of them are mediocre and inactive people. But when you encounter mistakes, you fall into despair. You complain about everything, or you are proud of your achievements. You don't want to make progress. In a daze, you forget that success has no limits. You forget that hard work has no end. Life is like this. The starting point is the center of the circle, and your circle is drawn. Effort. Your efforts are rooted in your radius. If you lie down and lose heart just because of one failure, maybe you will not make a circle at all, but a incomplete arc. It does not have the beauty and harmony of a rainbow in the sky. .Because the rainbow has experienced wind and rain, but it heralds failure. It does not have the incomplete beauty of Venus's broken arm, but it heralds a kind of cowardice, a kind of cowardice. Because the beauty of Venus is full of vitality, full of mystery. Both The arc is like a bay of stagnant water. It cannot stir up any ripples. If you admire it alone on a small dot, it is like a flower in the corner. Like a frog at the bottom of a well. You daydream all day long. You imagine that it is big. Little do you know that your knowledge is fixed and destined. It is difficult to achieve great things. The only thing is struggle. It is not about trying your best. You should go all out. Try to make your radius longer and longer, and make your circle bigger and bigger. Human pursuits should be as majestic as the mountains and as high as the sky. The distance is vast and the sea is vast. Because there are mountains outside the mountains. The horizon is endless. The sea has no end. This is just like human career. It has no destination of success. Only continuous pursuit. Only by pursuing the limit can life shine. Although success has no limit, But it doesn’t matter where you start. He doesn’t allow you to dictate your starting point according to your temper. It’s important to start from scratch, but in a short life, blindly give up and blindly give yourself a way out. Not this time. Next time. .Next time------How many times can we fight in life? How many next times can there be? Going from day to day, changing your mind when you see something different, is likely to delay the good years. Pursuit is the way to success. Persistence is the foundation of pursuit. Persistence is an unparalleled beauty. Persistence is an earth-shattering song. The story of perseverance never grows old. Nuwa mends the sky. Jingwei reclaimed the sea, Dayu controlled the floods, Foolish Old Man moved the mountains, and his persistent poems are immortal. He insisted on clinging to the green mountains and will never let go. He will never regret it until the end of the world. He is not a hero until he reaches the Great Wall, but a persistent man will never die. Gou Jian, who endured hardships while sleeping, Liu Bei, who visited the thatched cottage three times, and Yue Fei, who served the country with loyalty. -----If you pursue it persistently, you will have the capital for success. Pursue the limit, surpass yourself, transcend yourself, and create brilliance--this is the joy of life! Regarding the beginning of the flashback: Now I am already a sixth grade student. I walked into Yuhi's classroom and looked at the children who had just entered school. They were all happily looking for their seats. They were busy looking at themselves with the children they had just met. New schoolbag. At this time, I seemed to see myself who had just gone to school.

The beginning of the flashback method: Example 1: Record the experience and feelings of a visit to the public hospital "咇-咇-" The sound of the ambulance passing by the wind blew past my ears. My family lives in the hospital It was a common thing to hear this sound nearby. (1) However, it reminded me of my visit to the public hospital yesterday. (2) At this moment, the memory of my visit to the public hospital yesterday is like (a) the stars in the night. The memory flashed on the screen. (b) Paintings appeared in front of my eyes one by one. (c) The rushing waves filled my chest in an instant. Example 2: Remembering an experience of a dispute with a friend when tidying up the room .I saw the slightly yellowed photo on my desk. In fact, it accompanies me when I study and do homework every day. Seeing it was unexpected. (1) However, this moment caused the incident with x Memories of disputes. (2) At this moment, the memories of the dispute with c) The rushing waves filled my chest in an instant. Compositions about people and events have their own narrative order. For example, narration, flashback and interlude. Flashback is to write the plot that happens later in advance. The plot that happens first is placed. Write later. The flashback part. Or the ending of the matter. Or the key plot. Generally arranged at the beginning of the composition: and then narrated in the order of the occurrence of the events. [Author Unit]: Jiangsu [Classification Number]: G634.34 [ DOI]:cnki:ISSN:1008-5165.0.2005-07-020 [Text Snapshot]: Compositions about people and events have their own narrative order. For example, narration, flashback and interlude. Flashback is to advance the plot that happens later. Write. The plot that happened first is written later. The flashback part, or the ending of the thing, or the key plot in it, is generally arranged at the beginning of the composition, and then narrated in the order of the occurrence of the events. The article seems to look at the mountains but not the plain. Writing The use of flashbacks can avoid the dullness caused by common straightforward narratives. It is often fascinating from the beginning. The beginning of the flashback article is particularly important. It must be carefully designed. You must also consider how to connect with the following and the ending. Here are a few compositions. At the beginning, briefly analyze the beauty of it for the students to appreciate. (The dotted words in the example are key words that reflect the flashback.) 1. Summarize the narrative. Highlight the meaning. Example: At home. I still treasure it - hope to adopt it. . 3. Composition written using flashback

Grandpa’s birthday has finally arrived. I got up early in the morning and helped my mother pick vegetables and wash dishes, and urged my father to quickly load film and organize accessories. At 9 o'clock, I came to Ya Nuan Street Cake Shop and asked the boss to help me order a big fruit cake. I drew a dragon on it, ordered flowers and wrote "Happy Birthday". Under the escort of my parents, I ignored the hot weather. , I walked to my grandpa’s house carrying a huge round box with the character “Shou” in it. Sweat was flowing down my cheeks, but thinking about being able to give grandpa a happy birthday made me feel sweet in my heart.

"Tap-tat-tat" followed by a knock on the door, and we were already standing at the door of my grandfather's house. Grandma opened the door and said hurriedly: "Hey, why are you coming to see us in such a hot day!?" "

"Hey, I'm not only here to see you, but I'm also here to celebrate your birthday!"

"Who's celebrating your birthday?" Grandpa welcomed us into the house.

"You! Isn't today August 2nd? It's your birthday!" I said, "Look, I brought the cake."

"Today is my birthday." 's birthday? "Oh, little ghost head, help me celebrate my birthday!" "

"Hahaha..." Everyone was delighted by Grandpa's remarks. I stepped forward to help Grandpa and Grandma sit down on the sofa in the living room. I took out the red couplets I brought with me and hung them on the wall. The first couplet was "Body" "Healthy", the second line "Blessed as the East Sea", the horizontal line "Happy Birthday Grandpa", and in the center hung a golden one-foot-square Chinese character "Longevity"... After a while, the living room was decorated with joy and colors by me.

"Everyone is in your place" I sent a signal to my parents, "Grandpa's birthday party starts now, let's play music! "

Mom turned off the playback button at hand, and a piece of music "Happy Birthday to You" floated out of the speaker, rippled in the room, and echoed in each of our hearts. I took the faucet cane, He walked to the sofa and said, "Grandpa, this is your birthday gift! "Grandpa stroked his cane and held my hand tightly. The silver eyebrows on his face trembled slightly in his smile. The corners of his eyes were moist. He kept saying: "Grandpa is happy, Grandpa is happy..."

Grandma's eyes were also red. She sat me between them, wiped her eyes, handed over the drink and asked questions.

The big cake with colorful candles was already placed. On the coffee table, I put happy birthday crowns on my grandpa and grandma, looked at the shining flames, held the hands of the two old people tightly and said, "Blow it out, come, let's do it together, one, two, three... ..." Before he finished speaking, "Pa! "Dad has pressed the shutter, leaving this unforgettable moment on the scroll. Mom clapped her hands, grandpa's face blossomed with joy, and laughter filled the entire living room.

... 4. Please write a flashback narrative article, about 600 words, please use the excerpt

Something shouldn’t have happened. I fell down while riding a bicycle and injured my leg, and I was lying on the hospital bed.

The monitor was carrying fruit and looked at me with a smile. Seeing her enthusiasm like a big sister, I felt very sad.

What happened the day before yesterday played out before my eyes like a movie. That happened in the classroom the afternoon before yesterday.

"Hey, good news! We have reserved the venue to watch "Star Wars" in the afternoon." The "radio station director" in the class started broadcasting before entering the classroom door.

"Star Wars"? It stars Ge You and Cai Ming. Could it be a comedy? Awesome! I felt very happy for a while. After two classes, the monitor gave out movie tickets.

When it was my turn, I said "God bless" in my mouth, took a shot, and looked at it, oh, the one next to the back row is really bad. I thought I had a good relationship with the monitor, so I leaned into her ear and asked, "Are we friends enough?" I asked softly, staring at her.

"What's wrong?" "This ticket doesn't work, please give me another one, okay?" I seemed to be begging her. "What?" She turned her head and looked at me, "No, everyone will have objections.

If I draw a good one later, I will trade it with you. If not, I can only admit that I am unlucky. . "It looks so businesslike.

There was no hope of exchanging tickets, so I said in my heart: "Let's wait and see if I don't punish you." I snorted heavily.

After watching the movie, I ran into the classroom first, with the monitor at the end. My seat is right in front of her, and she must pass by me when she gets to the seat.

As a result, a plan to rectify the squad leader was quickly formed in my mind. I pretended to study the topic with my deskmate, but quietly stretched one foot towards the aisle.

The aisle is very narrow, allowing only one person to pass through. The monitor came over in a hurry.

"Bang!" She tripped and fell forward, and her whole body fell heavily on the cement floor. I thought it must be very painful. She blushed and struggled to get up from the ground. With tears in her eyes, she looked at me in surprise.

I was suddenly at a loss and lowered my head in shame. I was immersed in guilty memories, and suddenly I heard the sweet voice of the monitor: "Yun, does your leg hurt too much?" I sat up nervously, threw myself into her arms, and said "Wow" cried.

Brief comment: The central event written in this article is an incident that should not have happened between "I" and the monitor. However, the author did not narrate it straightforwardly, but used flashbacks according to the requirements of the assignment. This method makes the structure of the article rich in changes. The sentence "That happened in the classroom the afternoon before yesterday" is used in front of the flashback part to indicate that the following is a retrospective narration. The retrospective part is still written in chronological order, and the time relationship is clearly explained.

The connection between the flashbacks is also very natural. It begins with "I broke my leg while riding a bicycle and was lying on the hospital bed."

The squad leader was carrying fruit and looked at me with a smile. ... What happened the day before yesterday appeared in front of my eyes like a movie. Come out."

He wrote at the end: "I was immersed in the memories of guilt, and suddenly I heard the sweet voice of the monitor...I threw myself into her arms and cried 'Wow'. ".

5. Composition using flashback

I have oh oh oh deep maternal love_Composition

"Mother! The wind and rain are coming, and the bird hides in its nest. "When the storm in my heart comes, I only hide in your arms." Whenever I read this little poem by Bing Xin, my mother's face can't help but appear in my mind, a face full of deep maternal love. .

My mother is a middle school teacher. Her eyes shining with wisdom reveal endless love; her hands that have experienced thousands of vicissitudes of life contain a lot of kindness. In my In my impression, her eyes and hands are connected in series, carrying deep maternal love, turning into rays of light, bathing me in it.

Mom's eyes always reveal infinite care. It's very small When I was young, whenever I walked alone, my mother always looked at me with her loving eyes, with a faint smile on her face, seeming to clear the obstacles ahead for me; when I was a little older, when I could go out alone At that time, my mother would first give me some warnings, and then send me out with her concerned eyes, as if to remind me to be careful on the road; now, although my mother no longer watches me walking like she did when I was a child, I know very well that her caring eyes Her eyes are watching me move forward on the road of life...

Mom’s hands are a carrier of her deep maternal love. Mom’s hands are very rough, with wrinkles on them. , became dry and cracked in the winter and was very painful. However, this still could not stop her love for me. Once, it was winter, the north wind blew "whooshing", and my mother sent me to school. Suddenly, she looked back When I reached my uncovered hands, I couldn't help but frown: "Why aren't you wearing gloves?" I didn't care about this: "I forgot to wear them. It's not cold anyway, so it's okay if I don't wear them." But my mother insisted on putting her gloves on. The gloves were handed to me and the "order" was: "Put them on!" I was moved in my heart. I knew that my mother's hands could not withstand the cold wind, so I was unwilling to obey. However, my mother's non-negotiable eyes finally made me put on the gloves. The pair also wore gloves with her body temperature. The north wind blew in waves, and my mother's hands were bursting with blood. The blood was soaked in deep maternal love. My eyes couldn't help but moisten...

Bathing In the radiance of this warm maternal love, I feel extremely happy. My mother used her deep maternal love to weave a warm cradle for me, allowing me to sleep happily in this cradle. 6. Writing about people (using flashbacks) method)

Flashback is the result first and then the cause, reversed.

There are three methods:

1. Use the ending of the story as the opening example "Memories from Sixteen Years Ago"

2. Use the ending of the story as the opening example * Or start with the most impressive part

3. Use the things in front of you to trigger memories

Example

For example, in the article "Never Forget", the plot is The ending is narrated at the beginning, and then the occurrence and development of the plot are narrated. This is the most typical flashback method. The first part of the article (beginning with "She spoke with emotion and almost choked up") describes that Teacher Pan and Wang Xiang's father and sister went to the station to send Wang Xiang to college, and Wang Xiang gave Teacher Pan a self-portrait. The infinite affection is condensed in a pencil drawing of a child selling ice cream with the words "Never forget, thank you teacher". What does the painting mean? What should you never forget? This method of telling the ending of the plot in advance not only clears up the topic in a humorous and fascinating way, but also creates suspense and arouses the readers' urgent attention. Here, the character dialogue is used to explain that the child in the painting is Wang Xiang. He is a rare child. He can go to college only with the help of Teacher Pan. Naturally triggering flashbacks.

Classification

Types of flashbacks: There are roughly three types of flashbacks: one is to advance the ending, such as "Never Forget"; the other is like "For Sixty-One" The exciting part in the middle is brought forward like "Class Brothers"; the third is that the things in front of you trigger memories of the past, such as "A Precious Shirt" and "The Shoe Repair Girl".

Features

Flashback is to narrate the ending of an event or the most prominent part of the event to the beginning of the article, and then narrate it in the order of the development of the event. Flashback is not to narrate the entire event in reverse, but to narrate it in sequence except for moving certain parts forward. There are generally three situations in which flashbacks are used: first, in order to express the central idea of ??the article, the part that best expresses the central idea is brought to the front and highlighted; second, in order to make the structure of the article rich in changes and avoid straightforward narration; third, in order to express the central idea. The need for effect makes the article twists and turns, creating suspense and fascinating. When flashbacks, the starting point should be clearly stated. There must be clear boundaries between flashbacks and forward narrations, as well as necessary text transitions to achieve a natural connection. Be especially careful not to turn it over and over aimlessly, making the article unclear.

Function

The function of flashbacks and issues that should be paid attention to: The use of flashbacks can enhance the vividness of the article, make the article suspenseful and more fascinating, and at the same time avoid narrative The monotony of slabs and structures. For example, in "The Uninvited Guest", the entire article is written in flashback around the "Uninvited Guest". Emphasis is placed on the second part, which details the stories told by the uninvited guests, which embodies the difficulties of starting a business of Chinese oil workers and the deep affection of class friendship; the whole text is seamless and impeccable.

The use of flashbacks should be based on the needs of content and form; or to express the theme, or for structural changes, or to create suspense, fascinating, and have a special expression effect. Never do flashbacks for the sake of flashbacks. To use flashbacks, there must be transitional sentences or transitional paragraphs. When the flashback part of the narration is completed and the narration returns to the forward narration, it must be explained clearly. Otherwise, the article will be unclear and the context will be unclear, which will affect the expression of the content. This method is often used in film creation. Begin the narration with the results of the development of the story, and then begin to review the occurrence and development of previous stories. In the former Soviet film "The Dawns Are Quiet Here", an old captain led a few young people to sweep the tombs, and then recounted the tragic stories of the young female soldiers who sacrificed their lives under the tombstones in the Great War. At the end of the film, we return to the tombstone. This method has been used in the films "Schindler's List", "Bridge of Dreams", "Titanic", etc. A must-read for primary school students: Flashback is to put a paragraph or sentence in the text to the front, and then narrate it sequentially.

The explanation of "flashback" in the Chinese-English dictionary:

1. flashback; cutback

2. to flash back; to narrate from the end 7. A composition about sequential flashbacks and narration, please have about 200 to 300 words

Chapter 2: Childhood Time

It was winter. When I was young, my mother, father and I were preparing to pack bags. Eat dumplings.

Mom bought meat fillings and flour, then put the flour into a basin, added a small amount of water, and she and her father kneaded the dough vigorously. I took out the necessary tools and washed them carefully. After washing and kneading, we can make dumplings. I took a small piece of dough and pressed it, and a pancake was made. I then wrapped the meat filling in it, closed the pancake, and put five finger prints on it. Gradually we made a full plate and it was ready to be cooked.

Dad put the dumplings into the pot one by one. After a while, I smelled a fragrance. I couldn't wait for the dumplings to come out of the pot.

The dumplings were finally out of the pot, and the three of us ate the dumplings we made with relish. ah! It's so evocative. 8. Please write a flashback narrative article, about 600 words, for excerpts

Things that shouldn’t have happened

I broke my leg while riding a bicycle and was lying on the hospital bed. The monitor was carrying fruit and looked at me with a smile. Seeing her enthusiasm like a big sister, I felt very sad. What happened the day before yesterday played before my eyes like a movie.

That happened in the classroom the afternoon before yesterday.

"Hey, good news! We have reserved the venue to watch "Star Wars" in the afternoon." The "radio station director" in the class started broadcasting before entering the classroom door.

"Star Wars"? It stars Ge You and Cai Ming. Could it be a comedy? Awesome! I felt very happy for a while.

After two classes, the monitor gave out movie tickets. When it was my turn, I muttered "God bless you" and took a shot. When I saw it, oh, the one next to the back row was really bad.

I thought I had a good relationship with the monitor, so I leaned into her ear and said:

"Are we friends enough?" I asked softly, staring at her.

"What's wrong?"

"This ticket doesn't work, please give me another one, okay?" I seemed to be begging her.

"What?" She turned to look at me, "No, everyone will have objections. If I draw a good one later, I will trade it with you. If not, I will have to admit that I am unlucky. . "It looks so businesslike.

There was no hope of exchanging tickets, so I said in my heart: "Let's wait and see if I don't punish you." I snorted heavily.

After watching the movie, I ran into the classroom first, with the monitor at the end. My seat is right in front of her, and she must pass by me when she gets to the seat. As a result, a plan to rectify the squad leader was quickly formed in my mind.

I pretended to study the topic with my deskmate, but quietly stretched one foot towards the aisle. The aisle is so narrow that only one person can pass through. The monitor came over in a hurry. "Bang!" She tripped and fell forward. Her whole body fell heavily on the cement floor. I thought it must be very painful. She blushed and struggled to get up from the ground. With tears in her eyes, she looked at me in surprise. I felt at a loss and lowered my head in shame.

I was immersed in guilty memories when I suddenly heard the sweet voice of the monitor: "Yun, does your leg hurt too much?" I sat up nervously and threw myself into her arms. Inside, I cried "Wow".

Brief comment:

The central event written in this article is an incident that should not have happened between "I" and the monitor. However, the author does not describe it straightforwardly, but According to the requirements of the assignment, the method of flashback is used to make the structure of the article richly varied. The sentence "That happened in the classroom the afternoon before yesterday" is used in front of the flashback part to indicate that the following is a retrospective narration. The retrospective part is still written in chronological order, and the time relationship is clearly explained. The connection between the previous and later parts of the flashback part is also very natural. It begins with "I broke my leg while riding a bicycle and was lying on the hospital bed. The squad leader was carrying fruit and looked at me with a smile. ... What happened the day before yesterday appeared in front of my eyes like a movie.

"I wrote at the end: "I was immersed in the memories of guilt, and suddenly I heard the sweet voice of the monitor...I threw myself into her arms and cried with a cry of 'Wow'.

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