Composition evaluation

In our daily life, we often come into contact with the composition, which requires a complete text structure, and we must avoid an endless composition. Then the question comes, how to write an excellent composition? The following is what I have compiled for you about composition evaluation. Welcome to read the collection.

Regarding the composition evaluation 1 1, the article describes the events in the order of development. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which makes it feel very happy from beginning to end.

When describing the scenery, I wrote my own experience and expressed my inner feelings. For example, the surprise of finding the first grass sprouting, the excitement of seeing swallows nesting under their own eaves, the admiration of smelling the fragrance of peach blossoms, and the joy of hearing the teacher announce a spring outing are all inner feelings. While describing the scenery, properly expressing inner feelings and even associations will make the practice more vivid and real, and will also touch others.

3. Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual.

4. Briefly describe the cause and effect and pave the way.

5, … begins with …, which is more innovative and tells the cause and effect.

6. The opening is concise, refined and orderly; Focus on description ... leave a deep impression on people

7. It is quite innovative to use the scene metaphor at the beginning; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception

Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing. The language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.

9. The beginning was very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning look vivid.

10, at the beginning of rhetorical question, to attract readers.

1 1, get straight to the point at the beginning, so that people can see the full text at a glance.

12, the article is vivid and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.

13, the narrative is clear, the verbs are used correctly, and the metaphor is appropriate. After reading it, you can educate vivid suggestions.

14, simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.

15, this paper expresses sincere praise for a beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style.

Regarding composition evaluation 2, observing principles does not mean sticking to principles. Composition evaluation should also emphasize flexibility on the premise of grasping principles. The flexibility of composition evaluation includes the following three aspects:

First, the standards are different for different training purposes. There is a certain standard for a composition to focus on expression, diction and sentence making, but this standard can be flexibly mastered because of different training purposes. For example, if you practice writing with pictures, as long as the students write the main meaning in the pictures, the order is clear and the sentences are fluent, it can be regarded as a good article. To write about a person, you can write about his basic characteristics in appearance, language, movement and psychology, write about a scene, and write about its levels and characteristics. It should also be a good article. Similarly, writing an activity can record the main process. Write a scene and you can write the main scene. When writing a narrative, the time, place, people and events are complete. Write descriptions with clear description sequence and accurate object description. Writing diaries and letters in the correct format, authenticity and credibility should be encouraged and affirmed.

Second, the angle varies from text to text. The strengths or weaknesses of a composition are unbalanced in all aspects of the composition elements. The angle from which the composition evaluation should proceed is related to whether he can make a fair evaluation of the students' composition. Because a composition, especially an excellent composition, has its own outstanding points, which requires teachers to choose the right angle and grasp the outstanding points of the article when writing comments.

Third, the tone varies from person to person. The acceptance object of composition evaluation is students, and whether students are willing to accept and be inspired is the yardstick to test whether teachers' comments are qualified. Students' age, psychology, gender and experience are different, and the articles written will have different styles, which requires teachers to change their tone, write comments that can convince students, and give full play to the guiding role of composition evaluation. Good composition evaluation should also be short and pithy words, which can make students gain something, communicate with students and understand each other, and at the same time be pleasing to the eye. Stiff, inflexible, stereotyped and universally applicable comments can only arouse students' boredom and disgust.

About composition evaluation 3 In the primary school life that is coming to an end, there are joys and sorrows, smiles and tears, flowers and fruits, and fragrant colors. And the most unforgettable teacher.

Among many teachers, Mr. Lu is the most unforgettable one for me. Although she has been teaching us since the fifth grade, it seems that she and her classmates have been together for more than ten years.

Teacher Lu is very beautiful I liked her from the moment she walked into the classroom. She has blond curly hair with hooks, bright eyes with red glasses and a smooth mouth under her nose.

Primary school 1-4 grade I feel I have no writing ability. It was not until the fifth grade that I was discovered by Teacher Lu that I was good at writing. And teacher Lu also found the advantages of most students in the class.

Teacher Lu is very gentle and kind to every student. No matter whether students study well or not, they tell him questions patiently and never laugh at them. Treat every student as your own child. In order to do a good job in the class, she spent money to buy certificates to encourage students to study hard. She praised and encouraged students to do good deeds. If a student makes a mistake, she should know the mistake, and don't make this mistake and similar mistakes next time. Everyone did well in the last midterm. Teacher Lu not only praised everyone, but also specially took out a Chinese class to take everyone to play on the playground.

Teacher Lu, I am one of the peaches and plums you planted yourself. My germination and growth are bathed in your sunshine and rain, and flowers repay nature with rich fragrance. I will thank you for making progress in my study! Spring rain, which dyed the world green, disappeared silently in the soil. Teacher Lu, you are the spring rain in our hearts, and we will always thank you.

I love you, Mr. Lu!

Comment: In this article, the author introduced one of his teachers to us and thanked him. The disadvantage of the article is that the details are inappropriate and the center is not prominent. For example, Teacher Lu found that "I" was well written and too brief. I hope the author will pay more attention to this problem.

On Saturday morning, I got up a little late. I looked at my watch. It was already 8: 20. I hurried to the cram school and rummaged through the cupboard to fill my stomach. I saw some ham sausages I bought last night in the cupboard, so I wanted to fry them, because I usually peel them and eat them directly. I'm tired of eating, so I want a change. So, under the guidance of my grandmother, I took out two sausages, peeled them first, and then slowly tried to slice them one by one. Who knows they just wouldn't listen, and finally I cut them thick, thin and torn ... Anyway, filling your stomach is the most important thing now. I turned on the gas first, then turned the fire to a minimum, took out some peanut oil and poured it into the pot, and then I hid for fear that the oil would spill on me.

After a while, I saw that there was no movement in the pot, so I boldly leaned in to see it. Who knows, just when I was near the head of the pot, all of a sudden, some oil splashed on my hand. Wow! It's too hot. I quickly picked up the rag next to me and dried my hands. Then I poured the cut ham sausage into the pot, picked up the spatula and pretended to turn it left and right. Soon, the ham sausage turned golden yellow. I turned off the fire and gas, scooped up the ham and put it in a bowl, and finally poured tomato sauce on it. Everything is done, eating the dishes that I have worked so hard to make, full of sense of accomplishment!

This is the first dish I cooked myself, and it will leave a different souvenir in my childhood!

Comments:

This article is a narrative. Under the guidance of my grandmother, I cooked for the first time and described the cooking process in detail through action and psychology. Although there is no gorgeous language, this time I still left a deep impression on the author.

Regarding the composition evaluation 5 1, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, and it can be detailed and focused.

This article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.

3, practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, exciting and emotional to read.

This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

5. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.

6. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.

7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.

8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

9. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.

10, the close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.

1 1. This article can be described in fresh and interesting language ... Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest and laughter, which is a masterpiece.

12, appropriate details, and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article ... the content is richer and more vivid.

13, the full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, and it is worth learning.

14, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.

15, the full text is easy to understand and interesting.

16, the full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.

17, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper.

18, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.

19, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.

20. This article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, novel ideas, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.

With the rapid development of science and technology, great changes are taking place in our motherland. So, what will the future world look like?

The house of the future is a flying house. Every house has a big screen, which shows the whole picture of the house. When you press the red button, the roof will immediately separate and the propeller will rise and keep turning. Wherever you want to go, just turn the steering wheel, just like driving. This way, the traffic is very convenient, just like a butterfly flying around in the sky, which is very interesting! If your house falls on the green grass, it will turn green immediately like a chameleon.

Future patients do not need to see a doctor at all. On the contrary, a very small robot is used to get into the patient's stomach from his mouth. The robot will kill all the germs in the patient's body, so as to avoid the pain caused by the operation.

The road ahead is transparent, like glass. Looking down, it can reflect everything on the ground and shine in the sun, but it is not glass. It is made of polymer building materials and coated with a layer of polishing agent, so that people and cars will not slip when walking on it.

In a word, the future is brilliant and advanced. We must study hard for a bright future.

Comments: The author skillfully designed such a future world through bold and reasonable imagination, which made us feel the author's incomparably rich imagination. The author's imagination is unexpected, the content design is reasonable and has a strong appeal. It would be better if the article could describe specific things in detail.

A junior high school student in composition evaluation 7 wrote in his composition: "I love my hometown and I love my motherland." The teacher drew a long wavy line under this sentence and marked it "good" beside it. After this classmate went to college, he wrote a letter to the teacher, expressing his excitement at that time: "How happy I was at that time! Looking at the long wavy line, I think this is a rope that you hang down from the top of the mountain. Let me seize it and climb the peak of knowledge. This. Well, the word "good" has become the driving force that inspires me to forge ahead. From then on, I fell in love with composition and literature ... "Such an obscure red line, a simple word" good ",has such a magical effect. It can be seen that in composition evaluation, a teacher must not be stingy with praise, just as Chun is not stingy with her wind and rain, thus nourishing students' hearts and raising their ideal sails. For example, some students have a wide reading range and can use ancient poetry appropriately when writing, which plays a finishing role in the article. At this time, the teacher might as well send a sentence: "Your knowledge is very rich, and the teacher is proud of you". Some students' compositions are brilliant and better than others'. Good words, good sentences or amazing words also appear frequently in the composition. Can teachers say, "It's really a great honor for me to appreciate your excellent works. Perhaps the writer will take off from here. " Such a composition evaluation will definitely make the students be elated, and it is self-evident that they are happy and sweet. Didn't this stimulate their interest in writing and make them diligent in writing?

To sum up, it can be confirmed that composition correction is a bright spot in Chinese teaching, and Chinese teachers must pay attention to composition correction. Whether it's a few criticisms in the article or a few general comments at the end of the article, it's just a little effort for teachers, but it's a heavy weight for students! It not only directly affects students' composition, but also affects their lifelong growth. Therefore, the teacher's evaluation of writing must be repeated to be accurate. As long as you light a lamp for students, they will give you a bright future.

About composition evaluation 8 I love my hometown full of laughter.

In spring, Sister Liu took off her white dress and put on a green military uniform. The naughty little grass brother poked out his little head, and the little flower sister showed her white (changed to "pink") cheek. The farmer's uncle works hard and sows in the fields. We children are playing on the lawn. The bird seemed to be attracted and sang loudly. Left a beautiful echo in that beautiful country.

In summer, the stream is swift. We children are playing by the river. Adults are chatting in the shade of trees. Cicada is chirping, as if to say, "It's so hot!" Birds fly freely and happily in the sky. I left a beautiful memory in that beautiful field.

In autumn, Sister Maple Leaf is falling with the red leaves, as if welcoming a bumper harvest year. Xiaohua is ready to say goodbye to her brothers and sisters. Farmers' uncles are harvesting the fruits of their labor in the fields of hope. We are helping the farmer's uncle with his work. Birds bid farewell to everything here in droves. Left a beautiful farewell sound in the field full of laughter.

In winter, heavy snow keeps falling. We played happily on the path. All the plants gave in, only the holly tree stood proudly in the snow. Most animals are hibernating. In this silent winter, I left my sister Dong's footprints.

I love my hometown.

Comments:

What a lovely hometown. A narrative, which arranges the materials in order at a time, grasps the different scenery characteristics of each season and highlights the beauty and hope of hometown. The reference structure of the four paragraphs of Four Seasons before and after the final sentence. Expressed the author's deep love for his hometown.

On composition evaluation 9 1. Appropriate details, clear focus and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.

2. The narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and vivid, the characters are vivid and prominent, and the images are full and vivid.

3. The environment sets off the emotions of the characters, and the scenes blend, and the feelings are in the scene, and the scene follows the scene.

4. The imagination is rich, the idea is strange but not divorced from the reality of life, and it is tied with the association of life, which broadens the reader's thinking and makes people feel lively and interesting.

5. The scenery description is vivid, the words and sentences are appropriate, and the scenes are in harmony with each other, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to the readers.

6. Imagination is wonderful. It not only comes from life, but also transcends life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.

7. The description of the event process is detailed and specific. Although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability for the layout of the article.

8. The appearance is vivid, the characters are lifelike, and the clothes are decent, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It's really called "life depends on each other"

9. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.

10. The expression is vivid and vivid, and there are not many words, which outline the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance. The words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.

1 1. The contents before and after are not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

12. The narrative is short and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.

13. The details are not properly arranged and the priorities are not clear enough.

14. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking detailed description based on points.

15. It's out of date, and the content is too old-fashioned.

16. Focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the thinking is clear.

17. The views are clear, and the likes and dislikes are clear, which makes people clear at a glance.

18. Directly highlight the theme in content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.

19. The theme is serious and the thought is noble.

20. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.

Composition evaluation 10 The scenery in my hometown is intoxicating all year round, which makes you reluctant to leave. Then let me introduce you.

Spring is like a lively and lovely little girl, as lively as a person, turning the world into a vibrant scene. Farmers' uncles sow seeds in the fields, grass sticks out its head, old trees grow branches and leaves, and graceful willow branches flutter in the wind.

Summer is like a gentle and lovely sister, dressing up the world as a world of flowers. Lotus flowers, some in bud, some two or three, some all in full bloom, elegant posture. The breeze is blowing gently, like a fairy in a veil dancing. How beautiful!

Autumn is the harvest season. The golden brown rice is heavy, bending the waist of the straw; Sorghum blushed as if he were drunk. The orchard is full of begonia fruits, like small lanterns. Very interesting.

Winter is a snowy season with dark clouds in the leaden sky. Feng and Xue, two naughty good friends, are rolling and twisting, and running unscrupulously from a distance. There are tall and graceful poplars, as tall and straight as soldiers. It seems that we should have the noble quality like poplars!

The four seasons in my hometown are beautiful and colorful, and I love them.

Comments:

This is a very beautiful landscape writing article. In many places, the author uses metaphors and personification to describe the scenery characteristics of the four seasons in his hometown, vividly, praise the beauty and colorful of the four seasons in his hometown and express his love for the four seasons in his hometown.

About composition evaluation 1 1 In the evening, I was doing my homework with a ballpoint pen. Suddenly, the pen ran out of oil and the beads disappeared. I want to invent a "high-tech" pen which is convenient and practical. The future pen is as thin as a glue stick, just two refills, about 20 cm long, and there is a small square on it, not just a small square! It is not only beautiful in appearance, like a small Rubik's cube, but also can absorb moisture in the air and make ink. There is a beautifully designed small box with all kinds of beads in it. Just shake it and the beads will roll down by themselves. There is a very bright lamp at the top. If there is a power outage at home, turn from the beginning to the middle. If it is too bright, it will flash. If it's too dark, it won't light up. From the middle to the bottom of the pen is a miniature air conditioner. It's very hot in summer, and everyone is so hot that cicadas bark at frogs and dogs stick out their tongues and don't sleep ... The children can't stand the heat, and they are sweating when they run around the playground, but with this pen, it won't be so hot. You came back to write, although it was so hot. In winter, it is freezing, and the children's hands are red with cold. It doesn't matter. With this pen, it will be of great help. As long as it is opened, it will warm up in 20~40 seconds. Although the pen of the future is only an imagination of mine, I want to invent such a pen when I grow up to help children write well.

Comments: The theme of this fictional article is positive, and the little author expressed his wish to help children write with his own invented pen. The little author used his imagination to write his own invention in detail. Although the imagination is a bit bizarre, it also conforms to the characteristics of primary school students and can achieve the purpose of serving the center.

On composition evaluation 12 1. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.

2. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

3. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

The success of this paper lies in observing specific things and developing appropriate imagination.

5. The article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.

6. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.

7. This article is based on real life, which is appropriate, innovative, clear, natural, interesting and readable.

8. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which can be called a relatively successful work.

Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read.

10. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.

1 1. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.

12. This article describes the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very happy from beginning to end.

13. The full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always interesting and interesting to read.

14. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

15. The article is very convincing and thought-provoking.

About composition evaluation 13 family is a ray of sunshine that warms my heart; Affection is a cup of strong tea, which makes me more delicious; Affection is a glass of cold water, nourishing my young mind. A loving mother's arm is made of love. How can a child sleep there without sweetness?

I remember that one morning when I was in the first grade of primary school, my mother caught a cold. When I was going to school, she specifically told me to take an umbrella, but I looked out of the window. Wan Li was cloudless and radiant. I thought: How can it rain in this weather? So I left my umbrella and ran away. Towards noon, suddenly dark clouds were gathering, followed by a downpour. It's really June weather, the child's face. After school, all my classmates went home. I didn't bring my umbrella, so I had to sit in the classroom and wait for the rain to stop. But the rain seems to be bad for me. It's raining harder and harder. At this time, I was cold and hungry, thinking: If I had known it would rain, I should have listened to my mother. My father is on a business trip, and my mother has a cold, so it is impossible to pick me up ... I can't help crying when I think about it. At this moment, I saw a hazy figure with reddish-brown hair and freckles on her face. "ah!" I screamed "Mom!" Mother came up to me and said, "Come on, son, put on your raincoat." Mother asked me to put on my raincoat and walk out of the school with an umbrella and wind and rain. In the rain curtain all over the sky, the umbrella on my head is so pale and powerless. My mother's hair was wet by the heavy rain, and the rain dripped from her hair on my face. Ah, it's so cold. When I got home, my cheeks were wet and I couldn't tell whether it was rain or tears.

Without the love of sunshine, there is no beauty of flowers; Without the love of dew, there is no growth of small trees; Without selfless self-sacrificing maternal love, a child's mind would be a desert.

Teacher's comment: This article, the quotation of the first parallelism sentence, makes the emotional expression of the article stand out. The full text is concrete, the details are true and the description is vivid. The environmental description exaggerates the atmosphere, paving the way for the later mother to pick up the plane, and revealing the praise of maternal love between the lines.

On composition evaluation 14 1. The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which makes people think. The language is lively, the interesting stories are ordinary, but the feelings are sincere and rich, and the touching ending is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.

2. The examples are vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their own identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and reasonable.

3. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.

4. The full text is hearty, full of joy and expectation, sincere and touching, and the beginning is extraordinary.

5. The article is realistic, three-dimensional, readable and interesting. Fairy tales reflect the dark side of reality with keen social insight and vivid language, and depict a series of greedy people, which is profound.

Taking … as a clue, this article is clear and natural. At the same time, through the comparison of specific cases before and after, it criticizes …, and the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.

7. Briefly explain the time, place and result …

8. The language is concise, standardized and attractive at the beginning.

9 ... begins with ... which is more innovative. Explains the cause and effect.

10. The opening is concise, refined and orderly; Pay attention to description ... leave a deep impression.

1 1. The beginning is quite innovative. Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.

12. Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.

13. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.

14. rhetorical questions began to attract readers.

15. Get straight to the point at the beginning, which makes people clear at a glance.

16. Point to the beginning and use attractive words.

17. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article;

18 ... briefly describe the wonderful place; Link local work with overall work.

19. briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph;

20. Situation description causes suspense;

On composition evaluation 15 1. The event process is described in detail, and although there are many contents, it appears orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability for the layout of the article.

2. The appearance is vivid, the characters are lifelike, and the clothes are decent, just like a mirror reflecting the character, which is really called "life depends on each other".

3. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.

4. The expression is vivid and vivid, and a few words outline the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.

5. The content before and after is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

6. The narrative is short and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.

7. Inappropriate details and unclear priorities.

8. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking point-by-point description.

9. Can't keep up with the times, and the content is too outdated.

10. Focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the thinking is clear.

1 1. The views are clear, and the likes and dislikes are clear, which makes people clear at a glance.

12. Directly highlight the theme in content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.

13. The theme is serious and the thought is noble.

14. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.

15. The theme is vague, the meaning is vague, and the writing purpose is not clear.

16. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it seems empty and weak.

17. The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.

18. The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

19. The plot is strong in faltering, and there are accidents at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.

20. The plot changes unconventional, with occasional suspense, waves and surprises. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.