The weather last Sunday

It was sunny last Sunday. I went to the zoo with my friends. We go there by bus. We leave at nine in the morning. We arrived at the zoo at about 65438+ 00. We saw a lovel

It was sunny last Sunday. I went to the zoo with my friends. We go there by bus. We leave at nine in the morning. We arrived at the zoo at about 65438+ 00. We saw a lovely elephant, some beautiful giraffes and a group of lovely monkeys. Clever monkey. We all like monkeys because they are really interesting! We took some photos in the zoo. We will be back at 4 pm. We had a wonderful day.

Test analysis: This paper only gives some topics of the composition. Ask the students to list the outline according to the prompts and pay attention to the cohesion of the context. According to the requirements, it was about last Sunday, so we should use the general past tense.

Highlights show that some phrases and sentence patterns are used in the article, which adds a lot of color to the article, such as: I went to the zoo with my friends. We all like monkeys because they are really interesting! In this paper, conjunctions such as "because" and "equal" are used, which complicates the sentence structure.