What are the advantages of environmental description for writing a composition?

1. What are the advantages of environmental description? Environmental description refers to the description of the specific social environment and natural environment in which the characters live. "People create the environment, and the environment also creates people." (Marx and Engels "German Ideology") The activities and events of characters are always carried out in a certain social and natural environment. Therefore, writing character notes often needs to describe the environment. Mao Dun pointed out in "Skills of Art": "If people want to move in a certain environment, they must write about the environment in their works." The description of the environment in the works, whether it is social environment or natural environment, is not a dispensable embellishment, but is closely related to the thoughts and actions of the characters. Among them, the narrow social environment refers to buildings, places, furnishings and other scenery and folk customs that can reflect the characteristics of society and the times; In a broad sense, it refers to the sum of social life and interpersonal relationships in a certain historical period. Natural environment refers to natural scenery, such as seasonal changes, wind, frost, rain and snow, mountains and rivers, lakes and seas, forests and Yuan Ye. Natural environment description is also called scenery description. The description of the social environment must have a distinct color of the times. When describing the social environment, we should try to draw "genre painting". Gorky said: "Don't forget: in addition to landscape painting, there are genre paintings." For example, the rural dinner scene in the south of the Yangtze River at the beginning of Lu Xun's The Tempest is a very distinctive genre painting. Environmental description mainly has the following functions: First, it explains the background of the story (for example, the description of the layout of Luzhen Hotel at the beginning of Kong Ji Ji); The second is to render the atmosphere (such as the description of the hometown scene in Hometown); The third is to compare the characters' personalities (such as the description of the hut in Pear Blossom on the Post Road). In addition, it can promote the development of the story, set off the emotions of the characters and express the author's thoughts and feelings.

Environmental description mainly has the following functions: first, it explains the background of the story; The second is to render the atmosphere; The third is to set off personality. In addition, it can promote the development of the story, set off the emotions of the characters and express the author's thoughts and feelings.

2. Importance of Environmental Description Environmental description mainly includes natural environment, social environment and scene description. In narratives, there are often sentences or paragraphs describing the environment, which are not dispensable embellishments, but an organic part of the article. Many times, environmental description is often used to set off the atmosphere, portray characters, unfold the plot and deepen the theme. Theme is the soul and outline of an article. Understanding the theme of the article is an important task of narrative style reading. In reading practice, we can infer or understand the theme of the article by pondering the environmental description in the article. Let's take "Missing in Autumn" as an example to talk about how to taste the theme of the article with the help of environmental description. After Shi Tiesheng's leg was paralyzed in autumn, my temper became furious. Looking at the array facing north in the sky, I will suddenly break the glass in front of me. Listening to Li Guyi's sweet singing, I will suddenly throw my things on the walls around me. My mother will hide out quietly and listen to my movements where I can't see. When everything is calm again, she will come in quietly and look at me with red eyes. "I heard that the flowers in Beihai are blooming, so I will push you away." She always said that. My mother likes flowers, but she has been serving since my leg was paralyzed. I gave these two hateful legs a good beating and shouted, "What strength is there in my life!" " "My mother pounced on me, grabbed my hand, held back her tears and said," I am with my mother, live well, live well ... "But I never knew that her illness had reached that stage. Later, my sister told me that she often couldn't sleep all night because of pain in her liver. That day, I sat alone in the house and looked at the leaves outside the window. " Tomorrow, if you like? "She said. She was overjoyed by my answer. "Well, tomorrow," I said. She sat down and stood happily for a while. "Then get ready quickly. ""Oh, are you tired? "A few steps, what is there to prepare!" She smiled, sat down beside me and said, "After watching the chrysanthemums, let's go to imitation food. When you were a child, you loved pea yellow there. Remember the time I took you to Beihai? You said that Yang Shuhua was a caterpillar, stepping on a foot while running ... "She suddenly stopped talking. She is more sensitive to words like "running" and "stepping". She went out quietly again. She went out and never came back. She was still vomiting blood when the neighbor carried her to the car. I didn't expect her to be so ill. I watched the tricycle go away. I never thought it would be forever. When the neighbor's boy went to see her behind my back, she was panting, as if she had had a hard life. Someone told me that her last words before she fainted were: "My sick son and my underage daughter …" It was autumn again, and my sister pushed me to Beihai to see chrysanthemums. Yellow flowers are elegant, white flowers are noble and clean, and purple flowers are warm and deep. Autumn wind is blooming brilliantly. I know what my mother didn't finish So is my sister. We should live together ... problem design 1. What's the author's intention in writing "Strict Array in the Sky, Sweet Songs of Li Guyi"? 2. What description does "Leaves Falling Outside the Window" belong to and what role does it play in the text? 3. What's the significance of "yellow flowers are elegant, white flowers are noble, purple flowers are warm and deep, and they bloom in the autumn wind"? In this article, the environmental description appears many times. If we carefully grasp these descriptions, we will find that these environmental descriptions are scattered all over the article, or reveal the rendering atmosphere and set off the emotions of the characters. Or reveal the character quality of the character; Or promote the development of the story; Or deepen the theme of the article. Among them, deepening the theme is the most important. The ultimate goal of other functions is to highlight and deepen the center of the article. Judging from the content of environmental description, the connotation of social environmental description is difficult to identify and taste in many cases, and its disclosure of the theme often exceeds the description of the natural environment. Question 1, "The array in the sky returns to the north" belongs to the description of natural environment, "Li Guyi's sweet singing. But he can only sit in a wheelchair. Compared with the free-flying geese, it is simply one in the sky and one on the ground. Li Guyi's sweet singing is the representative of 1970s and 1980s. "Sweet Songs" conveys people's longing for a better life and a happy future. In the specific historical period after the end of the "Cultural Revolution" and the smashing of the Gang of Four, the people of the whole country threw themselves into the new construction tide with confidence. And my legs are paralyzed, but like a bystander, I am excluded from the boiling life. These two descriptions of the environment vividly depict my inner loss and depression. The second question, "Leaves falling outside the window" is a typical description of the natural environment. The ancients said, "A leaf falls to know the autumn on earth". Autumn also carries too much decline and sadness. "Since ancient times are sad and lonely. "The once lush and pungent green leaves were dyed yellow by autumn frost and swept away by autumn wind, which naturally reminded people of the decline and fall of life, touching the scene, and a kind of sadness and helplessness couldn't help climbing up the heart of" me ". Just to understand the mystery. The loving and sensitive mother is busy blocking the window with her thin body. The description in the third question is also a description of the natural environment. The author described the colorful chrysanthemums in detail, which made us feel the vitality of chrysanthemums. This beautiful chrysanthemum, blooming in front of the author, makes him feel the beauty of life, which means that "I" has already stepped out of the shadow of paralysis and faced life bravely. This is my mother's long-cherished wish, and it is also "me". This shows the greatness and touching of maternal love. This colorful chrysanthemum is the love of mom's fist. The answer prompt is 1, which is intended to compare the description of natural scenery and social environment by "I".

There is a description of the environment at the beginning and end of the composition. What are the advantages of writing like this? It is lyrical, expressive and in sharp contrast. Example: 1\ Life is like a poem, full of poetry; Life is like tea, and the fragrance of tea is full of affection; Life is like a song, which is hard to stay in the depths; Life is like wine. When you are drunk, wine will make you laugh ...-(Wuxi Wonderful Scene) 2. Life is an ocean of love, and everyone is breathing and feeling love.

Life is like the night sky, in the wonderful moment of the meteor, people feel magnificent beauty; Life is like a trickle, in the wonderful moment of wearing a stone, people feel the beauty of persistence ... but the most beautiful thing in the world is love. -(the wonderful moment of Wuxi) 3. I can't finish sprinkling acacia blood and tears on red beans, and I can't finish sprinkling willow flowers all over the floor. I can't sleep well. After the storm, I can't forget my new troubles and my old ones. I can't open my eyebrows and I can't see a clearer picture. Just like a castle peak that can't be covered, endless green water, faint ...-(Fuyang spoony scenery on the heartstrings) 4 I miss the homesickness of the wanderers living on the bridge, touching my young thoughts and plucking the homesickness strings in my heart; I realized that the silence of "sunrise is like fire, spring is like blue" caressed my young and arrogant thoughts and gave me a calm mind.

-"Xiamen" shore? Running water? Bold and unrestrained) 5. The flowing water is clear, rippling with the rhythm of sound and color, and flowing with the brilliance and brilliance of life. The flowing water is soft, it spreads the tenderness of emotion and the spring dew of love.

Running water is bitter fleabane, which inspires the symphony of strength and beauty and shows the tenacity of the soul. 6. When Dongpo lay man sang under the surging Red Cliff: "The great river east lost all waves, and the romantic figures of the ages …".

We think this is an exciting and magnificent scenery. When Yi 'an lay man sang in a low voice under the falling red, "Cherry is red, banana is green, and the window lattice is wet with rain."

We think this is a quiet and indifferent landscape. When the stars on the moon are scarce, the violet lay man sings to the sky: "The world is full of powerful people, and they will never suffer from getting a sincere face."

We think this is a helpless and distant landscape. Many beautiful landscapes constitute our vast territory, and many human landscapes constitute our splendid and rich history.

-(Fuyang City, "Harmony of Mind") 7. At night, it is so quiet, and the soft moonlight shines everywhere; Night, so deep, my father's snoring echoed all night like a moving moonlight song. Looking at the sleeping father's face, my thoughts also floated to the holy night sky ... (Jinhua City, "Remembering Father's Old Face") 8. "Sing the right wine, life geometry.

For example, it is more bitter to go to Japan in the morning dew ... "Prime Minister Cao Hengyun wrote a poem lamenting that life is too short. Lieyukou walks against the wind, detached and free; Zhuang Zhou is not afraid of worldly fatigue; Li Bai gained both fame and fortune, leaving an eternal story.

On the other hand, people like Zhou Xing and Lai Junchen are greedy for money and lead a restless life. Wei Qing had made great contributions to Huo Qubing's resistance to Xiongnu, but he killed Li Guang for fame, and he himself died of depression. Be kind to people in life, but those who pursue fame and fortune by hook or by crook will have a bleak life.

Although everyone appreciates the philosophy of life that "life is precious, love is more expensive, and if it is free, both can be thrown away", life is a person's first wealth. Only the existence of life can make it possible to talk about others.

-(Nantong "Be Kind to Life") 9. If spring is a group of cheerful seasons, then sunshine is the rhythm of smart jumping. Spring, the messenger of green and the symbol of hope; Sunshine, gentle angel, a symbol of light.

With spring, it is full of vitality and flowers; With sunshine, people will feel warm and comfortable. -(Jiangxi "Let me hold my chest and bathe in the spring sunshine") 10, what is "holding my chest"? Is it self-reliance, self-sufficiency, and not colluding with the secular? Is it bloody, would rather die than surrender, and die for justice? Is it elegant and free and easy, showing off personality, and not flattering dignitaries? How many famous people with lofty ideals in history have explained the meaning of this word to us again and again with their actions and even their lives ...-(Hold your head high, Jiangxi) 1 1, spring, pick a spring breeze, put it in your heart, and let it blow my happiness; In summer, hold a touch of sunshine in my heart and let it illuminate my warmth; Autumn, pick a red leaf, put it in my heart, let it harvest my mood; In winter, I put a sunshine in my heart and let it purify my mind ... I cherish every inch of my life, I long for beauty, I enjoy life, so I will always have a good mood! -(Changzhou "Let Good Mood Lead Us to Success") 0 1. Balzac said: "misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak."

After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet. In this world, a star falls, the starry sky cannot be dimmed, a flower withers, and the whole spring cannot be deserted.

Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter. Face the suffering ●02. Standing on the coast of history, I trace back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu hesitated on the Ze River, and he did not regret his death; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming is carefree in Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... They choose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice.

Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. Only when we set out will we reach our ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap.

Only by pursuing can we taste honest people. ●04. Although you are still a seedling.

However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually occupy the blue sky. ●05, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing at any time, blooming at any time, embellishing this long journey with fragrant flowers."

4. Statements of environmental descriptions. What are the functions of these psychological descriptions? Generally speaking, environmental description includes natural environment description and social environment description. Description of natural environment, such as scenery, places of interest, plants, etc. It is often used to contrast the atmosphere or the psychology of the characters with some of its own characteristics, such as liveliness, beauty and desolation. The description of social environment can include the humanistic characteristics, living customs and social phenomena of a place, mainly describing the social background of the story, which is used to illustrate the background of the story and further reflect the psychology of the characters. For example, in Lu Xun's novel Kong Yiji, the description of Luzhen Teahouse in the first few paragraphs belongs to the description of social environment, which shows the social background of serious class opposition at that time and sets the social tone for Kong Yiji's fate; At the end of the novel, the cold autumn and winter seasons belong to the description of the natural environment. The author contrasts the cold weather with the clothes of the protagonist's single book to set off the tragic ending of Kong Yiji's life. I hope it helps you.

5. What is the function of environmental description? The description of the natural environment includes: the time, place, season, climate, scenery and so on, which plays an important role in expressing the identity, status, actions, mood and atmosphere of the characters.

The description of social environment refers to the description of the background of a specific era and the living environment of characters. The scope it describes can be large or small, as big as the whole society and the whole era, as small as a family and a residence.

The content of description can be indoor furnishings, local customs and the atmosphere of the times. The description of social environment should have strong regional characteristics.

The description of the environment in the article is not dispensable, but serves the theme and characterization of the article. However, when many students write, no matter what the situation is, they are always "sunny and clear, with small trees waving to me and birds singing for me". They just write about scenery for the sake of scenery, but they don't know that "all scenery words are sentimental" (Wang Guowei).

Let's appreciate the importance of environmental description from the works of several literary masters. Social Background Lu Xun's introduction to Xianheng Hotel at the beginning of Kong Yiji: The layout of Luzhen Hotel is different from other places: it is a big counter facing the street, which has hot water and can warm wine at any time.

People who work after work in the afternoon and evening often spend two coppers on a bowl of wine-it was twenty years ago, and now it rises to ten pence every night ..... But these customers are mostly short-sleeved gangs, and they are generally not that rich. Only those who wear gowns go into the house next to the store, ask for wine and vegetables, and sit and drink all over the floor.

The purpose of introducing Xianheng Hotel is to explain the social environment in which Kong Yiji is located, to render two completely different social groups, namely "short-clothed gang" and "long-clothed gang", and to show the serious social class opposition and the cold relationship between people. The author depicts such a powerful, cold and hypocritical social environment, which renders a cold and sad social atmosphere for us, lays the foundation for the development of the plot and foretells the inevitability of the tragedy of the characters.

Xianheng Hotel can be said to be the epitome of the dark semi-feudal and semi-colonial society in China at that time. There are two scenic descriptions in My Uncle Yule by Mo Bosang, the king of French short stories.

A, we boarded the ship, left the trestle, and sailed far away on a calm sea like a green marble desktop. B, in front of us, there seems to be a purple shadow coming out of the sea in the distance, that is Zheersai Island.

The first description of the environment was when the Phillips family traveled with the dream of getting rich. At that time, they received a letter from Yule making a fortune, and Philip's second daughter got married. The family is happy to travel. At that time, the sea was as beautiful as a "green marble desktop" in their eyes. It shows how happy the family is.

But to their surprise, they met Yule, who became a sailor after bankruptcy, and their dream of getting rich was shattered. Therefore, their tourist destination became a "purple shadow" in their eyes. Without saying a word, they vividly wrote the disappointment and frustration of the Philip family. Contemporary writer Cao Wenxuan's description of the storm in A Lonely Journey is closely related to Du Xiaokang's growth.

The storm in Ludang is extremely terrible: thunder, like ten thousand chariots rolling from the horizon, stormy, hysterical and dark, as if the end of the world had arrived, and the storm washed away the duck pen and scattered the ducks. Du Xiaokang showed the courage and strength of an adult, fighting in the wind and rain. The storm gave him the opportunity and stage to grow up.

It can be said that the worse the environment, the more it can highlight the courage and strength of the master Du Xiaokang, and the more vivid the characters are. Revealing/KLOC-The character in the Chameleon by Chekhov, a famous Russian writer in the 9th century, the market that police officer Ralph walked through began with silence.

There is no one in the square. The doors of shops and restaurants are listlessly open, facing the world created by God. Like many hungry mouths, there is not even a beggar at the door.

With only a few strokes, it truly reproduces the scene of social depression and decline under the czar, and reflects the gloomy and terrible face of Russian society in the11980s. This social environment is the soil for Ralph's pandering to reality and flattering personality, while Ralph's spirit maintains a corrupt and dark social system.

Therefore, flogging Ralph's character has more important social significance. In Mr. Fujino by Mr. Lu Xun, the contrast image is the beauty of "Ueno cherry blossoms in full bloom", which reflects the ugliness of Qing students: Ueno cherry blossoms in full bloom look like a crimson light cloud, but there are many crash courses for Qing students in droves.

Tie a big braid on the top of your head, and let the students' hats fly high, forming a Mount Fuji. Other braids are loose and flat, except for the hat, which is shiny and visible, just like a little girl's bun, and her neck is twisted a few times, which is really beautiful.

Those posh "Qing students" are in sharp contrast with the beautiful cherry blossoms! In contrast, readers can't help but feel the disgusting ugliness of "Qing Sheng" on paper. In Lu Xun's Hometown, the author puts the boy's leap soil in a magical picture: a golden full moon hangs in the deep blue sky, and there are endless green watermelons on the sand by the sea. Meanwhile, a boy of eleven or twelve, wearing a silver ring and holding a steel fork, tried his best to go to a spur, but the man turned around.

The author uses the beauty of natural scenery to contrast the liveliness, bravery and harmony between man and nature, so that the image of young leap soil is vivid in this vast and vivid world. Through the analysis of these famous works, we find that the environmental description in the article is very important, which is inseparable from the theme of the article and the characters created.

We should also learn to use these methods skillfully and appropriately in our composition. Increase the authenticity, such as: "There is an endless Gobi outside the window, no mountains, no water, no people …" The first paragraph of "Poplar" explains the location: people initially feel the desolation and barrenness of Gobi, paving the way for the meditation of the following father.

Another example is Kong Yiji.