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"How can you be mean to me" is a line in the online novel "How dare I be mean to you" written by the author.

How dare I be mean to you is a girl's online romance novel written by the author. This melon is poisonous and has ended now, with a total of 248,043 words.

Brief introduction to the plot of the novel:

Dad is a combination of a master and a talented carpenter girl, a hotel tycoon who is both a brother and a father and his cuteness. Xie Xingzhi first met Liu Nanzhi at his parents' funeral. The little guy hid behind his grandfather and grabbed the clothes of adults anxiously. Later, Lu was down and out and was taken in. The child is very good, but he is always timid and refuses to get close to people.

Xie Xingzhi thinks she is ill-bred. However, the night before he returned to Switzerland, the children summoned up the courage to look for him, looked up at him with tears in their eyes, and even the ending was trembling: "Can you ... can you not leave ..." At that moment, her dependence was like a gentle lightning strike, and Xie Xingzhi touched her head and her heart became soft.

It is said that the little orphan girl of Lujia is so blessed. The heartless President Xie bowed to her and gave her half a city of mountains and rivers, a star city. During his stay in Xie Jia, he was asked to personally confirm the style of clothes and personally guide the architectural design. The little girl likes wood, so he went all the way to Finland to cut down a tree for her.

Xie Xingzhi is eager for complete possession, and her purposeful calculation makes her even unable to escape. He kissed her gently in the dark, his voice depressed and firm: "I would rather keep you by all means than let go, even if you hate me." She is his only star in the dark. Welcome to my world, little princess.

Novel "How dare I kill you" small theater;

Lu Nanzhi was stopped by Xie Xing for discussing radio waves with the top singer next door.

The little girl was wronged and her eyes were red: "You, you are amazing."

Xie Xingzhi sighed in a low voice and held her long hair with his fingers. The tone was softer than anything he had ever felt in his life: "Nonsense, how dare I?"