Composition with details as the theme 1000

Details are tiny parts of the whole, or links that are easily overlooked in the system. In a sense, life is made up of details, and we often pay a heavy price for not paying attention to certain details, such as misspelling a word or miscalculating a number. We are often moved by some details, such as a warm word and a subtle move. Behind the details is life, emotion and career. "Taishan does not refuse fine soil, so it can become high; Rivers and seas do not choose trickle, so they can be deep. " It's about the importance of detail.

The success or failure of topic composition, thought is the most important level. Some candidates think that the topic composition is enough as long as it stays on the topic. In fact, topic composition needs profound thinking just like other compositions. If you want to have profound ideas, you must understand the connotation of the topic, put the topic in the context of reading, life and society, do some serious thinking, and then find an ideal angle to write.

There is a thought-provoking example in Wang Zhongqiu's book "Details Decide Success or Failure". Shanghai Metro 1 Line was designed by Germans, and Line 2 was designed by ourselves. Shanghai is located in East China, and the terrain is only a little higher than the sea level on average. In summer, rain often traps some buildings. German designers noticed this detail, so each outdoor exit of subway 1 line was designed with three steps. To enter the subway entrance, you must step on three steps and then get down to the subway station. These three simple steps can prevent rainwater from flowing backwards in rainy days, thus reducing the flood control pressure of the subway. In fact, the flood control facilities of line 1 have almost never been used; Because of the lack of these steps, Metro Line 2 was flooded in rainy days, which caused huge economic losses. We often think that Germans are a bit rigid in doing things, but it is under the rigorous and meticulous work attitude and habits that they pay attention to details.

Our traditional thinking has always believed that details are not important, and "those who achieve great things are not constrained" was once a word we were proud of. Some people say that in China, there are many people who want to do big things, but few people are willing to do small things; We don't lack great strategists, what we lack is excellent executors; There is no shortage of various management rules and regulations. What is lacking is to implement the rules and regulations to the letter. These words deserve our deep thought. We must change the habit of being impetuous, dabbling, and not asking for a very good understanding, and advocate paying attention to details and doing small things with details. ...

In terms of content, you can write trivial things, ordinary but lasting touching details, and you can also write stories about great people who pay attention to details. We can also write about the consequences of ignoring details in a market economy, or the success of paying attention to details. Throughout the world, everything about details can be transferred to the pen. But remember, these details must be meaningful, interesting and closely related to social life. Never write details for the sake of writing details.

In writing, it can be written as prose, narrative, argumentative and novel. However, when assembling materials, we should highlight the details, either by selecting several life segments to highlight one or several details, or by taking a certain detail as a clue to conceive; If you write an argumentative essay, you must have a clear point of view, grasp the details of a certain aspect and make a reasonable argument.

In short, no matter what form it takes, it is necessary to focus on the topic properly, expound the deep connotation of "details" and show a positive value orientation.

[Example 1]

It is often only the details that move people.

Xia Jingjing, Class 3, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province

The details are the mother's inquiry after school, the father's saying that he should go to bed early after finishing his homework, the teacher's eyes when he finished the question, and the detailed notes handed over by his friend after he got sick. Although the details are small, they are timeless.

We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre. Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series.

Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament. Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves.

Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course that they have walked through each other and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back.

We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better. "In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details. Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover.

[Brief comments on examples]

This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points. The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun. The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless.

[Example 2]

Anatomical details

Hu Wenwen, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province.

Once, when a meteor crossed the starry sky, I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story. But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life.

The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success. Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm.

Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Flowers are getting more and more charming", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "I miss my dear ones more every festive season", friendship is planted and blossomed in the details, and love is nurtured in the details. ...

Accumulate small details in your study and pay attention to small details in your work, and your life will be more substantial and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope. One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life!

[Brief comments on examples]

Details are not refined, and we can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life. The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power.

[Example 3]

Details-the source of beauty and eternity

3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province

People say, short as morning dew, fleeting when the sun clears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day. The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power.

We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny. Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people.

There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity. But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no exquisite syllogism, only thousands of seemingly ordinary calculations, reasoning and proofs. Every calculation, reasoning or proof itself is tiny, but it is these tiny details that have contributed to a breakthrough and leap in the history of human science. You can't succeed without details, and you can't get eternity without details.

Some people say that details are only a fragment in the evolution of things, which is true. But even so, who can deny the meaning of the details? Can a thing or thing give people a sense of beauty without any details that make it up?

Chernyshevski famously said: Beauty is life. In other words, beauty is made up of bits and pieces in life, and details are the source of beauty. "The moonlight shines in the pine forest, and the crystal stone shines in the stream. Bamboo whispers that the laundry girl returns, and the lotus leaves bend in front of the fishing boat. Every sentence in Wang Wei's poems is just a general description of the scenery, no matter which one is not a famous sentence. But a few words together form the realm of painting in poetry, where poetry and Zen blend and scenes are intertwined.

It was Cao Xueqin's painstaking management and meticulous carving that made the immortal Dream of Red Mansions. How can the images of Jia Baoyu and Sister Lin be so deeply rooted in people's hearts without his originality and countless details to express the personalities of the characters?

Details are the source of beauty, which makes every tree and stone shine; Details are the saints of time, making fleeting things eternal. Friends, let's seize every detail of life and let life show its due glory!

[Brief comments on examples]

Life is short, everything is a moment, and there is a warning from the beginning. Where can I find a tree to freeze eternity? The author found the tree of details. Beauty is life, and details are the source of beauty. In this way, the author's writing will have a good support, and then he will explain it, and everything will be logical. The full-text language is sophisticated, beautiful and concise.

In fact, a good narrative can't be without wonderful details. The best way to express the theme is to write it to the extreme. How can you write to the extreme without writing details! We do things the same way. Small details are often reflected in many. It embodies our style and humanity. Our success or failure is often reflected in the details. There is a book called details determine success or failure. In 2005, there was a composition for college entrance examination: quite critical. Is to let you see the big picture from a small place.

In the past, we used to capture details around the theme, but now we should capture details first and then reflect the theme. You can complete the composition by capturing a detail. This is undoubtedly an intensive training for the ability to capture details. Because if you can't capture the details of this composition, you really don't know how to write it. If you can't capture a detail, you will undoubtedly get a miserable score.

Example:

A drop of dew can reflect the whole sun.

Author: Sun

A senior reporter left Hong Kong and went to Wuhan to attend an important meeting via Shenzhen.

That day, when he went through the exit formalities in Hong Kong, it was very smooth. After the formalities, the Hong Kong man in uniform politely tidied up the documents, then returned them to him from behind the big glass-with both hands-and said, "Thank you." The informant found it very useful and set foot on the journey easily.

When going through the entry and exit formalities in Shenzhen, the reporter handed the documents into the big glass with both hands. Similarly, the formalities were quickly completed. However, when the Shenzhen man in uniform returned his certificate, he threw it out instead of handing it out. He eagerly said, "Next!" " The veteran reporter packed his papers and hesitated a little, vaguely missing the feeling when he was in Hong Kong.

Reporters were invited to Wuhan to participate in the Third World Chinese Media Forum, and the local government arranged the highest standard reception. On the day of the meeting, there were many people at the venue and the staff were very busy. The reporter felt a little thirsty and motioned the waitress to pour a glass of water. As a result, the waitress whispered, "Wait a minute." The reporter was very surprised. Why can't the mainland waitress politely answer "OK, I'm coming" when the guest asks for tea?

This senior reporter is Mr. Chen Xitian, the current editor-in-chief of Hong Kong Commercial Daily. He is the first person to report Comrade Xiaoping's southern tour, and he has super insight. Teacher Chen felt the differences in soft environment among Hong Kong, Shenzhen and Wuhan, which happened to have a certain corresponding relationship with the degree of economic prosperity. He believes that Hong Kong is an international metropolis with the best soft environment quality; Shenzhen is a new coastal city, followed by the quality of soft environment; Wuhan is a mainland metropolis eager for development, and the quality of soft environment is second. All these feelings stem from the details that Hong Kong people "give" people who are very human, Shenzhen people "lose" people in business, and Wuhan people don't let people "wait" in principle.

Details "theme composition and model essay.

Wang Junfeng 224233, Tangyang Middle School, Dongtai City

Read the following text and write as required.

A small courier company called hot wheels. The courier rushed from the north to the east, sweating and panting. In order to ensure the safety during SARS, he wore a mask when meeting customers according to company regulations; He took the express in his hand and gave it to the customer. "Thank you for waiting. Please put it away. " The small "hot wheels" company can win customers because it has successfully grasped the details.

Homework requirements: Please take "details" as the topic. The materials cited above may not be used by candidates in the article. Make up your mind. Styles are optional. The topic is self-drawn. Not less than 800 words. No plagiarism.

At that moment, I really wanted to cry.

Yang Junmei, Class 3 (12)

I am infatuated with the warmth of sunshine, but it burns my eyes. I tried to smile, but some crystals still fell between my fingers. Are these tears? Will I die for this? ...

This is not my first cat, but it is the first cat I will never forget. It has its own litter of kittens. It doesn't like running around like it used to. It always lies quietly in the "small house" we designed for it. Seeing their "family of four" always makes me feel unspeakable. It licks its baby from time to time, and its keen eyes are only gentle at this time. During that time, the first thing I did when I came back was to see my cat. The kitten hasn't opened her eyes yet, because she is too young to live on her mother. When I was still immersed in their joy, I just didn't expect it to suddenly get sick, which was too fast for me to accept. At first, it won't eat or drink, but it won't leave the kitten. We all love it and want to send it to the doctor, but it always hides. No matter what we call it, it won't leave. Mother specially bought some fresh fish and cooked it with the best seasoning. It just smelled it and didn't want to eat it. He hasn't eaten or drunk for two days, but he still insists on feeding the kitten. His condition is getting worse and worse, and he often bleeds at the corners of his mouth and can't walk. I don't know how sad I am when I look at it. I've been crying. Hold it. Mom says kittens are definitely useless. Can an old cat be taken care of when it is so sick? Mother put it in one room, but put the kitten in another place, so that they can be separated, so that it won't breast-feed the kitten. It struggled in my arms and refused to part with the kitten, but it lost its strength. It leaned against the closed door, cried in a hoarse voice, and looked at us begging. It was the most delicate and pitiful gloom in the world. But for it to survive, I was cruel and didn't let it go to the kitten's room. I have cried. I don't know why I always want to cry. I dare not look into its eyes again. I don't want to see its weaknesses for the time being. God, please save my cat! Please help it!

The next day, I got up early to look, but I didn't find it. I broke out in a sweat. Where did it go? How did it disappear from this closed room? Suddenly, I glanced at the broken glass above the door. A little cracked, but now it's all broken. Only then did I realize that there was so much broken glass under my feet. Did I-I hurried to the kitten's room, only to find that it was there and several kittens were leaning in its arms. The hair on its head was dyed red with blood and its nose was scratched. Seeing that it has been tortured and deformed, I can't help but shed tears. That's pity and emotion. It broke the glass for its children regardless of its own life. If there were no cracks in the glass, I think it must have lost its life. This is the greatest love in the world, and how many people can stand the shock it brings. I never thought cats would be like this. What happened to it, I was completely conquered by it.

The cat, always in my mind, including every detail of it, is so clearly lingering in my mind, and it comes out at once, but it still lingers.

Comments: The most selfless and greatest love is maternal love. We can't let go of the details observed by the author from a nursing cat and the kindness of the author himself. What could be more touching in the world?

Casual attention

Uncle He of Class 3 (7)

I seldom pay attention to people's palms. I'm used to looking at the back of your hand. I'm still young. When I lived in school, I always thought you were very idle at home, so I always called home unscrupulously and asked you to come and see me. On the other end of the phone, you always repeat the same thing: "What do you want to eat? Mom will send it to you tomorrow. " "Do you want to bring clothes?" "What's missing? Mom brought it to you. " And I always shake off everything I want, like a bottomless pocket, expecting you to fill it one by one when you come the next day.

Here you are, carrying a big bag and a small bag. Every time I repeat a nonsense: "Mom, I'll carry it for you." And I always have empty hands because you said these things are not heavy, and I never paid attention to whether they are not heavy. I just want to go forward and let you walk and run behind me without any consideration.

When I see you off from school, I either hold your arm or put my hand on your shoulder. It seems that I have never held your hand.

Inadvertently, I took your hand and crossed the road. The moment I grabbed it, I frowned, and the rough feeling in my hand made my nose a little sour. When I crossed the road and reached the opposite side, I spread out your hand, looked at it carefully and touched it. Old and new scars, cracks and blisters that are worn out and not worn out are almost all over your palm, and one of them is particularly conspicuous. It has a bright red mouth, and seems to want to vomit something and swallow something. I can see that this is a new knife wound. My eyes began to dim, and then you said, "nothing, it will be fine in a few days." I'm a little busy these days, and blisters are common. Sorry, I am not normal. " I know you don't want to make me sad, but now that you mention it, the flood that is about to burst its banks finally broke out. I looked down, turned around and took out a tissue from my pocket, pretending to wipe my nose and secretly dry my tears. I am afraid to cry in front of you, just as I am afraid to see you sad.

"How did you get this knife wound?"

"I got up late this morning and became like this when I was in a hurry." You said with a smile, as if it wasn't on you.

"That you can't slow down, later chop meat, don't you so fast, late is late, I'm not in a hurry. When you work in the future, especially when you have a guy, you are not allowed to be fast. " I almost cried, "and if you are busy at home in the future, don't come to me." I have enough money, too. Do you hear me? "You nodded with a smile.

After you left, I went back to the dormitory to get what you brought me. On purpose, it's heavy. I burst into tears again, only to find that you must be panting when you go to the dormitory with your bag on your back. I really want to slap myself. I can't even see the weight of things. It must be hard for you to carry such a heavy package with so many copies in your hand. I know why you don't talk about weight and cry for pain. However, I often get angry with you, compare you with other people's mothers, and often complain that "every time I call, you come, what if you have nothing to do at home?" Even I feel wronged and think that you don't care about me at all.

Mom, I was wrong. If I hadn't paid attention to the details of your palm that time, I'm afraid I haven't found it yet. I have the best mother in the world.

Comments: Pay more attention, you will find more details in life, you will experience more truth and beauty in life, and you will be more moved or even shocked.

Success comes from details.

Class 3 (1) Cui Hongmei.

He stood at the table, staring at the dishes all over the table, not knowing how to start.

While the boss was eating, he and several senior brothers came to apply for the job. Before they came, they heard that the boss was very picky about food, and I don't know how many cooks were driven away. The boss looked at them after supper. "You go back and cook a dish, and I'll stay when I'm full!"

Oh, my God, how did this happen? He has no idea about the boss's taste. He knows nothing except that he is very picky about food. What kind of food can satisfy the boss? He looked blankly at a table of dishes.

Wait a minute, he suddenly remembered something. Yes, when they left, the boss was eating fish. The boss said the fish had no taste. He remembered that the boss had said that fish had no other taste. He once read a book which said that frozen fish can clean the mouth. Yes, just make ice fish.

The next day, he and his brothers put their own dishes in front of the boss. After all, the two brothers learned from the teacher earlier than him, and the dishes they cooked were full of flavor and very beautiful. He didn't decorate his plate either. He doesn't like what can't be eaten on the plate, but now look at this table. His plate is really bad.

The boss tasted one by one, deadpan, and didn't know what he was thinking. Finally, it's his dish. His heart was pounding and his face was burning. The boss put some in his mouth and chewed it a few times. He looked up at him. He almost fainted, and the boss's eyes came out: "How did you think of cooking this dish?" "I ... I thought of it when you ate fish." He paused, and finally his voice became calm: "You said the fish was tasteless, so I cut garlic, onions and peppers into small pieces, put egg white in the belly of the fish, and then spread egg yolk on the surface of the fish to steam. I think you are tired from work and have social intercourse. You don't like being too greasy. I will put it in ice to cool it, so it will be clearer and won't feel too greasy. " The boss smiled at him: "We only met once. How do you know I think fish has no taste? My chef never thought that he would cook good food for me every day. " Now he is completely calm. Last time I saw you eat fish, I frowned and said it was tasteless. Later, I stopped moving. You didn't talk to us until you took a sip of green tea after dinner. "The boss burst out laughing." You can stay. "

Later, he also became a master. He said to his apprentice, "My boss likes to eat my cooking because I notice his every move. You should not only learn to cook, but also pay attention to every detail, including observing the expression of the eater on the dish. Only by paying attention to details will you succeed. "

Comments: Success is undoubtedly closely related to details. No one who doesn't pay attention to details is successful. The author of this article wrote a story about a candidate who won because of a detail. In fact, there are many such stories, as long as you pay attention to the details in the stories of successful people.

Grab the boat

Zhao Peili, Class 3 (2)

One morning ten years ago, when the sun just came out, my aunt gave birth to a little boy named Xu. He is my only menstruation, lively, naughty and lovable.

Xu is a little emperor at home, but when his uncle is not at home, he is even more lawless, but sometimes he is scolded. Last holiday, I took him home and passed by a river not far west of my home. A middle-aged woman is washing leek yellow under the bridge. She is a senior student. I called her grandmother, and she looked back at me: "Xiaoli, you are back, and your mother is waiting for you to go back for dinner." When Xu saw her sitting on the boat, she was surprised and insisted on going aboard to play. I dragged him away, but he slipped away from me like a little loach. Afraid of his accident, I followed closely.

Xu shouted on the shore, "hey, grandma, I want to go aboard to play." Come on. " One end of the boat is tied to a stake on the shore with a rope. I grabbed the rope and pulled hard, and slowly the boat landed. Xu took a big step and got on the boat. The boat rocked twice and then drifted to the center of the river. He was young, so I got on the boat to take care of him. I stood upright at one end of the boat, and the slight shaking of the boat made my head a little dizzy. Just squat down. It might be better. As soon as I squatted down, the boat shook even more, but fortunately it soon calmed down.

There is a long bamboo pole on the boat. Xu picked it up and supported it with one end. The boat swayed and moved to the center of the river, but the length of the rope was limited and the boat came back soon. Xu was very angry and untied the rope. This time, he was happy and propped up the center of the river with bamboo poles. In the middle of the river, the ship seems to be disobedient again. The boat circled in the middle of the river, round and round. He was very anxious and asked me for help. I tried it carefully and said, "well, I'm not very good at it either." I'll try. If I can reach the shore, it will be luck. " Then, I deliberately let the boat spin in the middle of the river to scare him. Who told you to hold on? We can't go back today. He was a little scared, too, and said, "Please, sister, do something." "Listen to my sister next time?" "hmm." I thought he was much better, so he punted back to shore. But as soon as he reached the shore, he had to hold on again. He came to hold the bamboo pole and said, "I don't believe this ship listens to you or me." I was afraid that my mother would be worried at home, so I didn't let him go on. After I tricked him back.

I have been friends with books since I was a child and seldom go out to play. In my mother's words, I said, "Play and you will know how to play. Can you eat and play as a meal? "

Playing with Xu let me know that playing is not a bad thing, just like punting. Although it is fun, it is very interesting to play. Today, I am still impressed by the details of the last punting. This is my life experience, and playing can be linked to learning. Isn't physical mechanics linked to punting?

Only those who can play, enrich the details of life in play and learn in play can support the boat to sail far away.

Comment: This article is based on a boating experience. It is about "playing" and details. Play can enrich life experience, and only play can learn. This writing method of extracting ideas from life is worth learning.