Sketching skills in writing

1. To write a composition in a simple way, it is required to describe the characteristics of the scenery in minimalist language and reflect the author's feelings.

For example, Lu Xun's "Hometown" begins: "Since it is the end of winter, when approaching my hometown, the weather is gloomy again. The cold wind blew into the cabin, and I looked out from the gap in the canopy. There were several desolate villages across the world of Huang Chengcheng, which were lifeless. " A few words, a few sketches, not only will the hometown of vilen, which is shrouded in a gloomy winter sky, be closed to the bottom; And between the lines reveals the deep sadness contained in the author's heart.

The narrative uses the technique of line drawing, which makes people feel that the lines are clear and the words are concise and true.

For example, The Scholar wrote in Jin Fan's newspaper: ". Read it once, read it again, clap your hands and say with a smile:' Alas! All right! I won! As he spoke, he fell back, gritted his teeth and was unconscious. . "The author captures the movements of the characters and vividly describes the development of the situation.

A rough description of a character can reveal the appearance and manner of the character in a few sentences, so that readers can see the true face of the person clearly.

2. Please refer to Lu Xun's Medicine for the composition using line drawing technique;

1. Aunt Hua dug under the pillow for a long time, took out a bag of foreign currency and gave it to Lao Shuan. Old Shuan took it, put it in her pocket and pressed it twice outside.

2. "hey! Pay in one hand and deliver in one hand! " A man in black stood in front of the old bolt and looked like two knives, stabbing the old bolt in half. The man stretched out a big hand to him; Holding a bright red steamed bread in one hand, the red drops down bit by bit.

Literary sketch

It is one of the descriptive techniques in literary creation. It is also a traditional description technique in China literature, which is deeply loved by the broad masses of the people. Outline the mental outlook of the characters with the most concise and economical words. Writers are required to accurately grasp the most important personality characteristics of characters, without exaggeration or extravagance, but to touch them with vivid pens. Lu Xun's novels are typical line drawing works. Mr. Lu Xun once said: "There is no secret in painting." If you want to say yes, it's just the opposite of the smoke screen method: if you have real meaning, whitewash it, don't be so melodramatic and don't show off. "(The Secret of Composition) Lu Xun deserves to be a master of sketch, and his works are also masterpieces of sketch. He said in the article "How do I start a novel": "I try to avoid nagging about writing. As long as I feel that it is enough to convey my meaning to others, I would rather have no foil. In China's old plays, there is no background. There are only a few main characters on the flower paper sold to children in the Spring Festival (but now there are many backgrounds in the flower paper). I firmly believe that this method suits my purpose, so I don't describe romance, and I never talk about big articles in conversation. "This is his experience in successfully using line drawing techniques in novel creation.

The technique of line drawing can be used not only for the description of novels, but also for the creation of essays and poems. When using this method to describe characters, the author demands to firmly grasp the specific environment in which the characters live and the outstanding features of their characters, experiences, words and deeds, describe them in concise language and express their personality characteristics. In his works, the author sometimes sketches portraits of people, such as Jun Qing's Riverside at Dawn, which describes the portrait of a young soldier Xiao Chen as follows: "He is short and looks as if he is only eighteen at most. Round face, big eyes, and a slender scar on the chin, which is obviously a memorial left by the bullet. " The author described the physical characteristics of soldier Xiao Chen with the scars left in the battle to highlight his brave spirit. This gray portrait can be seen everywhere in Lu Xun's novels, such as the descriptions of Ah Q, Sister Xianglin and Runtu. Not only that, but sometimes there are simple descriptions of the life stories of the characters. For example, in Kong Yiji, Lu Xun introduced Kong Yiji's life story: "Kong Yiji used to study, but he didn't go to school at last, so he couldn't make a living;" So I became poorer and poorer, ready to beg. Fortunately, he wrote a good hand, so he cashed books for others in exchange for a bowl of rice. Unfortunately, he has the same bad temper, that is, he is lazy to drink. " The author grasps his personality characteristics of "not going to school", "not making a living" and "drinking and being lazy", and reveals the tragic experience caused by the poison of the feudal imperial examination system. Sometimes, you can also describe the details of characters' dialogues and actions by line drawing to show their personalities. For example, in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, "Cao Cao cooks wine on heroes", it is written that Cao Cao is worried that Liu Bei may become an opponent for the world in the future, deliberately testing Liu while drinking, and asking him who is the contemporary hero? Liu Bei is now in the position of Cao Cao, and he is afraid that Cao Cao will see through his ambition to seize the world and ask Cao Cao what he wants, so he tries to hide his ignorance. First, he shirked his ignorance, then "Wang Gu talked about him from left to right", but when Cao Cao pointed out: "The only heroes in the world today are the monarch and Cao." Hearing this, he was taken aback and the spoon in his hand fell. "Speaking of rain, thunder. Liu Bei calmly lowered his head and said, "The power of the earthquake is even here." "Smell speech cleverly used thunder to cover up the loss in the past, showing Liu Bei's resourceful character.

When sketching things in a simple way, the author is required to make a true sketch of the characteristics and features of the described things with concise brushstrokes. For example, in Du Xuan's Notes on Jinggangshan, there is a section describing the "Octagonal Building" of Mao Ping in Jinggangshan. The author wrote the simple furnishings in the room in plain language without any description, focusing on the origin of the name "octagonal building": "There is not enough light in the room, so an octagonal lamp barrel was opened on the top of the room. Therefore, everyone calls this building the' Octagonal Building'. " When drawing a landscape by line drawing, the author is required to draw thick lines with simple strokes to form a vivid picture. For example, Song Sushi's "Drunk Book of Looking at the Lake Building on June 27" (I): "Dark clouds turn over the ink and fail to cover the mountain, while white rain jumps over the boat. The wind comes and blows away, and the water under the lake looks like the sky. " The author is good at grasping the characteristics of summer rainstorm, sketching with simple language, and vividly recreating the wonders of the West Lake in summer.

Write a composition in a simple way, about 500 words, the sooner the better. The young man who came face to face was tall and a little thin, but he didn't feel sick. His cheekbones were high, his eyebrows were knife-shaped and his eyes were bright.

High nose, thin lips, ears just hanging on both sides of the head, impartial and full of energy. I saw him straight, walking in front of me with easy steps, shaking hands and talking with me cordially. His words are clear and simple, which makes people feel happy.

I asked him to sit in the chair next to me, and he immediately agreed, laughing and sitting down. The whole process is natural and smooth. Sitting in a chair, his face is indifferent, and his hands are naturally placed on his legs, which is very correct.

I took a cup of tea from the desk next to me and handed it to him with both hands. He quickly reached out his slender arm and caught it with his big hand. One hand holds the handle of the cup, and the other hand holds it under the cup. And quickly say thank you to me.

Finally finished. What kind of homework is this? It takes a lot to paint people. Generally speaking, it is difficult to write a hundred words in a pure sketch, and a vivid sketch can often be described well in only 20~60 words.

At the beginning of the essay of about 4.300 words, the snowflakes are vaguely counted and hard to find, as if there is a god in the sky, and a few finely divided petals are scattered at will.

Ten minutes later, I saw a few pieces of goose feather-like snowflakes flying in the snow foam, and then slowly lying on the wet ground. Snow is as light as smoke, as white as silver, fluttering and falling from the sky.

As soon as the snow fell to the ground, it gradually melted and disappeared without a trace. But it didn't last long. It stopped snowing in less than thirty minutes.

I thought, haven't you seen enough? Why did you stop? It was really fast. December will be the middle of winter. At that time, the heavy snow will be as light as shredded cotton snow, as white as silver, fluttering and falling from the sky.

Look at the silver bars hanging on the bare buttonwood, and the jade balls are gathered on the green pine branches. A gust of wind blew, and silver bars and jade balls fell from the branches and leaves one after another, and some fell into thick snow, and poof disappeared.

In the air, flying snowflakes, like a subtle and graceful girl, dance in the white world. Snow is as white as jade. Is it General Xiaotian sent by the Heavenly Palace or the jade leaf falling from the laurel tree in the Moon Palace? Snowflakes are like beautiful jade butterflies, dancing with ecstasy; Like a dandelion blown off; Like flying; Like a little white flower given by an angel; Scattered and gathered, fluttering leisurely, gently Ying Ying, is undoubtedly the masterpiece of the earth! I saw the snow in front of me as naughty as a butterfly, falling under the eaves for a while, falling on the branches for a while, and floating on the faces of pedestrians from time to time.

Snow fairy waved her sleeves heartily; In the fluttering performance, the sky, the earth, the river and the mountain are pure and clean, and there is no quagmire. When the snow suddenly begins, the winter sun seems to have narrowed the distance with people, which is particularly clear and dazzling.

But the temperature of the sun seems to be cooled by snow and ice, so it can't be heated.

5. Describe a person's composition with lines. A beggar.

That's a beggar. She is about 30 years old, but her brow is full of vicissitudes. She only wore thin clothes and trembled slightly in the cold wind. Another gust of wind blew and she held the baby in her arms. Probably her son, wrapped in two quilts, snuggled up in his mother's arms. Perhaps it was her mother who snuggled up to him. She clung to the child and held herself tight.

Just then, another north wind roared past us with fallen leaves, as simple as grass and Buddha, and the wood fell off, which was extremely biting and fierce. She shuddered. However, I saw her wrap the child in the quilt again, and then took off her coat without hesitation and gently covered the child. Her body is like a leaf in late autumn, shaking badly, but her eyes can drive away the cold and warmth.

She stood up from the ground with her child in her arms and walked away step by step. ...

It's just that the child in his arms is still sleeping, as if he doesn't know the dilemma he faces at all, or he knows that he will never be cold, because no matter how strong the wind is, his mother can shelter him, leaving him only warmth.

6. Write a landscape composition by line drawing and enter the ecological park along the quiet garden road, and enter the lake area from south to north.

The water in Ludong Lake is sparkling. Every July and August, the pond full of water lilies attracts countless photographers, as well as some teachers and students who sketch. Pink, light yellow and pure white lotus flowers are swaying in the water. You can enjoy the fantastic scenery of different scenes from different angles, different times and different eyes.

Luxi is a lake with a water surface of more than 300 mu. At this time, the reeds in the lake are still yellow and have not had time to wake up. In spring, wild ducks wander around the open water and feel the heating of the water. Silly wild ducks can fly more than ten meters on the lake.

In the midsummer of spring and autumn, egrets are slender and slender, foraging in seaweed with elegant steps, sometimes in groups, and sometimes flying alone under the blue sky. Sparrows come and go in droves, chirping their own songs.

Here, all life expresses its love for nature in its own way. Cycling around the lake along the highway to the west, peach trees and weeping willows on the shore are planted alternately.

The yellow buds on the willow branches open their hazy eyes in the breeze, and the branches are as soft and elegant as a girl's hair. Peach branches are reddish brown, and a winter peach blossom has been bred on the branches. They are still sucking the milk growing in their mother's body and have sprouted up small buds, waiting for the arrival of spring breeze and spring rain.

There is no polluted automobile exhaust by the lake, and the temperature is relatively low. Birds can't wait to jump up and down on the branches, calling for peach blossoms, red willows and green buds.