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1. How to write an exercise on the topic of "turning point" in life?

Many people are afraid of turning and don't want any turning to happen to them. Does this coming turning point mean happiness arrival or disaster recurrence? People seem to be very tired, afraid to cope with changes, and just want a quiet life. There may not be many turning points in life, but every turning point will have a great impact. These turning points are the only intersections for our own growth. Every intersection, different directions, of course, will have different endings. Perhaps it is a mutation of innocent lives, but there is no doubt that we all need to face it. As long as we make the right choice, we will certainly gain something. Sima Qian wrote in Historical Records: "King Wen was arrested, playing Zhong You in Zhouyi and writing Chunqiu; Sun Tzu's feet, Sun Tzu's art of war, Zuo Qiu's blind obedience, and his "Mandarin"; When Han Fei imprisoned Qin, he was "full of difficulties" and "..." Many sages experienced these painful turning points, and they realized the great significance of life more deeply. If they can't get out of the shadow of failure and continue to live with amazing vitality, how can they appreciate the classics handed down from generation to generation and the great achievements they have created? An old pioneer lost his horse-a blessing in disguise is a blessing in disguise. Don't just indulge in the pain of failure, and don't indulge in the joy of success. Life is never fate. Only by being good at introspection can we not lose our way. Is the turning point terrible? I'm afraid your indecision scares you. In the face of turning point, we can't escape, otherwise we will only stay in the same place forever. There is no life without turning point, and life without * * * cannot be called real life. Who wants to live an ordinary life? In the dark days when Japanese people were falsely labeled as "the sick man of East Asia", Mr. Lu Xun went to China to study abroad with the enthusiasm of saving the country through medicine. When he saw from the movie that China people were beheaded by Japanese invaders, but they were packed with insensitive China people, his heart was greatly shocked. He thinks that "all stupid and weak citizens, even if they are strong, can only be meaningless propaganda or spectators, and don't think it is unfortunate to die." Therefore, he resolutely abandoned medicine and joined the revolutionary literary movement to awaken the sleeping people in China. At an important turning point in life, only by making the right choice can we achieve the best results. A good horse will not give up galloping thousands of miles because it is attached to the feed in the manger; People who aim high will not give up their long-term interests because of their immediate comfort. The turning point will not be the reason for the sharp decline of life, but only give lazy people an excuse for failure. No matter what you have experienced, what you have gained, what you have forgotten and what you have lost; No matter how many turns there are and when the next turn comes, you can only be as strong, as brave, as facing and as smiling, and your choice can't be wrong!

2. How to write a turning point composition? Give me a hint. There are various turning points in both personal experience and social life. In fact, it implies the scope of material selection and writing angle: you can write about the turning point of personal destiny or the turning point of the historical process of social development. The second sentence, "You must feel something about it, think about it and feel something about it", is a hint to the writing content and writing method: the content of the article should not only describe the turning point events, but also write the enlightenment of the events to you. "Turning point" is a concept with a certain distance from students' personal life, so it is very important to make good use of these tips in the tense examination room.

Turning point is different from transformation, transformation, frustration, and even more different from change. Close to the "turning point" composition, candidates should examine life and society in a broader time and space background.

The core of this topic can be defined as "paying attention to life, society and nature".

"Wind, rain, the sound of reading, sound in the ear; Family affairs, state affairs, and what's going on in the world are all concerned. "

It is not contradictory to write about yourself, others, what's going on in the world and feelings.

From the support of thinking ability, writing "turning point" is different from writing "one person and one thing" It requires the author to grasp the development process of written materials as a whole, look at problems with a linked and developmental perspective, and have certain analytical ability to explore reasons through phenomena.

Appreciation of examples

People who live in difficulties are often more eager for a turning point in their lives, so that their lives can leap in the fastest way.

Look at the man who is buying lottery tickets over there. He is well dressed and looks ordinary. The nylon cloth pocket issued by the company is placed at his feet, which contains the dishes to be eaten tonight. The man once again chose that set of numbers: his own birthday plus his wife's birthday plus his son's birthday. I pushed the camera to him again: "Sir, did you win?" The man wiped a sweat and said shyly, "Next time, I will win next time." I pointed to the camera in my hand: "We agreed to go to your house for an interview today. Look ... "Oh! Ok, come on. " The man picked up his bag and told me to go with him.

The man said, "You can't understand, I need a turning point, a turning point in my life!" " "He excitedly waved his spatula, and a drop of oil splashed on my arm, which was very hot, like a man's earnest hope for the future. I said, "Why didn't you think of this invisible and intangible thing before?" "Before ..." The man put all the dishes in a white porcelain plate. "Oh, that was silly. I always thought that if I did a good job day after day, I would become better, but ... hey! "

In the small room, the man's wife, an ordinary woman, sat on a small stool without saying a word. She is always silent. She was not such a woman before. She had the noise and gossip of a normal housewife until one day, her "sister suffering" in the "same trench" suddenly won a large sum of money and fled. Otherwise, just like us, we may not be able to get ahead after working hard all our lives! "Then, the woman suddenly became silent. It is said to be a mental illness called aphasia.

"I have been buying lottery tickets since then, and my family and I really need a turning point to live a better life." The man said.

I fixed the camera in a man's eyes and asked, "Buying lottery tickets is a turning point in your life?"

There were firm but blind eyes in the camera, and I asked, "You just want to make this home better and better, and it has never changed?" "No," said the man. "So, when you didn't know there was a turning point, you ..." I asked. The eyes in the camera were very excited at once: "I didn't say it when I didn't know!" " Idle around all day, work and work! Just to make life better! What! But it's useless! There is no turning point, all this is a fart! "

I readjusted the lens and asked, "What is your so-called turning point? How did you come? "

The man said, "the turning point is something that can make our family better and live a rich life at once." How did you come? " ? Um ... lottery ... what did you say? "

The figure of the man in the camera is old and helpless. I asked, "Did I bring the turning point?" The man's eyes are empty, muttering something, next to his silent wife. I had to get up and say goodbye. At this moment, the door opened and a boy ran in. He saw a man and a woman and smiled sarcastically: "I'm sick again." Then he turned to me: "I heard everything, and the quantity changed to qualitative change." Without the accumulation of quantity, there is no turning point. They don't understand! "

I left, and the last scene in the camera was the boy's helpless face. I didn't expect to end this interview with words from high school politics books.

From quantitative change to qualitative change, a man actually completed a turning point in his life unconsciously. However, contrary to expectations, he was addicted to the turning point brought by luck and changed from a workshop technician to a laid-off worker.

Success and failure may only be a judgment of the outside world, but the real turning point a person experiences is his betrayal of his original beliefs and his determination to control his own destiny.

3. When writing a composition, how did I change from writing about scenery to writing? Time flies, time flies. In a blink of an eye, I have grown up. After tasting the wind chimes of time and counting the footprints, I quietly found that I have developed so many habits along the way.

My mother said I was a little lazy, but it was not unreasonable. Because every weekend, I only open my eyes when the sun hits me. By this time, my mother had cleaned most of the room. When I walked beside my mother without eyes, my mother always poked my forehead and said angrily, "lazy, I finally woke up!" " Then he smiled and went into the kitchen.

In fact, I don't totally agree with what my mother called me, because as soon as my mother walked into the kitchen, I always cleaned up the other half of the room, and I learned a good cooking skill from my mother, so that whenever my father ate my fried food, he always smacked his head and said, "My daughter is hardworking!"

My father is very handsome. His white face and silver-rimmed glasses look elegant at first glance, and his father's colleagues call him "doctor". In fact, they don't know that my father is still an athlete. Every weekend, my father will take me to the gymnasium of the First Normal University to play badminton. Father is never afraid of college students in the department of physical education, and there will be instant excitement.

Influenced by my father, I came into contact with badminton very early. Frankly speaking, I really don't know what the second is in my badminton match with my classmates. Whenever I come home sweating with a racket on my back, my grandfather always takes it and pretends to say, "Girls' homes should be quiet and don't bounce around all day." He pulled me into the study.

Grandpa is not a writer, but he is a loyal reader. These two bookcases can't hold the books he has read. As the saying goes, "whoever is near Zhu Zhechi is near Mohe". Living in such a scholarly family, it is difficult to study! So the Romance of the Three Kingdoms and Water Margin ... I don't know how many times I have watched them myself.

4. How to write the truth of the composition at the turning point? Life is a rainbow, which creates joy, anger, sorrow, joy, sour, sweet, bitter and spicy; Life is a brush, which paints an unforgettable picture in life; Life is a teacher. It tells people great truths through small things. Life is still …

Recently, because I am too playful, I seldom review my lessons when I go home, and my academic performance has plummeted. My mother didn't say anything after seeing the unit 3 test paper. I find it strange that this is not my mother's usual style.

In the afternoon, my mother suggested that we go for coffee together, and I agreed happily. When we arrived at the cafe, we found a window seat and sat down. The afternoon sunshine shines on us through the glass, which is warm and comfortable.

The coffee was delivered, and a faint fragrance filled my head. I was intoxicated. I poured a small cup of coffee and slowly delivered it to my mouth. Coffee is astringent and a little hot, but after drinking it, it is slightly sweet, so authentic and so refreshing. What happened? While I was thinking about it, my mother said, "Did you taste anything?"

I thought about it and said, "You have to taste the bitterness before you can drink Sweet Caffe, so ..." "Right!" My mother interrupted me, "in fact, life is like coffee, bitter first and sweet later." Do you know why your grades have dropped recently? "

"I know, mom, but I didn't suffer. I am too playful! " My mother said to me earnestly, "son, you must be able to bear hardships!" " As the saying goes,' if you eat hard, you are the master'. What you eat now is bitter for the sake of sweetness in the future! ""it is the master who has suffered. The bitterness now is for the sweetness in the future. " Mom's words echoed in my ears for a long time.

Afterwards, I savored these words. In fact, suffering is also a kind of enjoyment. Just like a caterpillar, after a long wait in winter, it can only break into a butterfly and dance. If I don't study hard now and idle away my time, I will accomplish nothing when I grow up. At that time, I would definitely sigh, "Young people don't work hard, and the elderly are pathetic."

5. How to pass the turning point of the second grade (learning) urgently —— The teaching design of the Chinese comprehensive practical activity class in the sixth grade of the seventh middle school in Bengbu, Anhui Province Hang Fagang I. Activity goal: 1. Let students understand the importance of the beginning of the composition in practical activities through activities.

2. Master the writing method at the beginning of the composition in the activity. 3. Ask students to write attractive opening remarks.

Second, the idea of the activity: in the specific practice of collecting and sorting out, let students learn the method of collecting information and master the writing method at the beginning of the composition. Third, the activity arrangement: 1, the teacher collects the beginning of the students' usual composition.

2. Students collect the beginning of the composition that they think is well written. 3. Compare the collected good composition beginnings with your own composition beginnings, and find out the problems existing in your composition beginnings.

4. Look for information and find out how to write at the beginning of the composition. 5. Contact a number of media classrooms to show the results of practical activities.

6. Summarize the gains and losses of the activity. Fourth, the specific process of the activity: (1) Let students realize the importance of writing a good composition from the beginning.

Gorky said: "The first sentence is the most difficult, just like the tune in music, it often takes a long time to find." Tolstoy attached great importance to the beginning of his works. At the beginning of War and Peace, he was quite satisfied after repeated revisions of 15 times.

At the beginning of anna karenine, he used ten different ways to write it, and finally he decided. The ancient Chinese thought that the structure of the article should be: "phoenix head, pork belly and leopard tail"

In other words, the beginning should be as beautiful and elegant as the head of a phoenix. As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle."

Students must have had this experience: a topic is always difficult to write, but once it is started, especially after a good start, it is always eloquent and interesting. The beginning of the article is the facade of the whole article.

Beautiful storefront facade can attract more customers; If the article starts well, it will attract more readers. Especially for the composition in the examination room, some people have counted that when marking the papers in the college entrance examination, the average time for the teacher to stay on the composition is only 29 seconds, which means that some composition teachers can't see it for 29 seconds.

How can the teacher understand your composition without a good beginning in such a short time? (2) Multimedia presentation of the beginning of the composition written by students at ordinary times: (3) In-class investigation of the situation of students' writing at the beginning, and the collection is as follows: (4) Multimedia presentation of the beautiful composition collected by students: (A total of 50 articles were collected, only 10 was picked here) ● If she didn't walk in this secluded alley as usual that day, if she turned a blind eye to all the details in the alley that day, then ..

I know that I can never ride into Tibet and let the hot smoke burn a happy flower shape from my shoulder. I don't know where the tent is. I can't tell which hill the smoke came from.

I am small and heavy here, and I can't open my eyes because of the light in the snowy area. (Selected from the random thoughts of life the next day (4) Niu Chuanxiao) ● There are countless troubles in life: from birth, illness and death to unsatisfactory work, unsatisfactory work ... All kinds of people have their own opinions and handling methods.

And I admire Dumas the most. He only said flatly to the troubles: "Life is a rosary composed of countless small troubles, and people who know the value of life will finish this rosary with a smile." A few simple sentences tell the true meaning of life-laughing at troubles.

Excerpted from "Award-winning Composition * Laughing at Worry" (King of Grade 2 (5)) ● I always thought bargaining was a vulgar thing. Every time I buy something, I pretend to be rich and pay when I ask the price.

Seeing the sly smiles of the vendors, I realized that I had been "slaughtered", but I still saved face and gritted my teeth. (Guo Yanjun, The First Bargaining) I have a small wish, that is, to see the sea.

Mother said, "Go, son, there is no real sea on the picture." So, I finally realized the richness of the sea.

(Zhao Hongjing's "The Sea" The next day (6) ● It's late at night, and people who have worked all day fall asleep with sweet dreams. Outside the window, the dark blue night sky is inlaid with jewel-like stars, the silver moon sheds bright moonlight, and the quiet courtyard melts in the cool moonlight. I can't help but go to the yard (from the second day of the yard) ● I left my hometown for many years, and many things are in my memory, but the dragon boat race in my hometown has condensed my feelings for my hometown and is engraved in my memory.

(Excerpted from the second day of "Dragon Boat Race in Hometown" (6) Fan Jun) ● Walking into the countryside in May is like walking in the ocean of flowers. "All kinds of red and purple flowers are in bloom."

You see, the leaves of holly are getting greener and the lilacs are purple-white. The beige history is the footprint of human beings, recording ups and downs, and civilization is the symbol of social progress, shining with the sweat of wisdom. China's Shenzhou, with a long civilization of 5,000 years, makes Chinese people proud, excited and excited.

(Excerpted from Wang Yang (6) on the second day of Xin 'an Evening News). ● In the morning, the sun shines all over the earth, and several white clouds fly leisurely in the blue and high sky.

I walked on the way to school, looking at all these beautiful scenery, but my heart was heavy. Everything seems to be covered with a layer of gray in my eyes.

I'm thinking about what happened last night, which makes me regret it very much. (Excerpted from Cui Xuan, Class 6, Grade 2, I really regret it) ● Friend, have you read Qinyuanchun? Snow? Aren't you intoxicated by the grand scene in the poem, "The silver snake in the mountain dances like a wax elephant"? Have you ever heard of the thunderous north wind? If you are a gentle and delicate southerner, you must long for the winter in the north. Please swim with my humble pen! (Class 6, Grade 2, Ma) (5) Compare the beginning of your composition with the beginning of the collected composition, and analyze the problems existing in the beginning of your composition.

(6) Search for information and understand the common methods of writing at the beginning: 1. Direct style: General students always like to go around at the beginning and say irrelevant words, which not only wastes a lot of pen and ink, but also affects the expression effect. In fact, there are many excellent narratives.

6. composition: turn (500 words) to the winding path in the forest, because those twists and turns are more poetic and romantic. A gripping movie is often full of twists and turns, which makes people memorable. In our life, many things are getting better and better because of the turning point.

A book is wonderful because of its turning point. Scarlett, the heroine in Gone with the Wind, has changed from a delicate girl to a tough, really beautiful and sonorous rose because of the changes of the times and the blood of self-esteem in her body. This transformation is real and wonderful, and this turning point makes Gone with the Wind an unforgettable classic. In Wuthering Heights, Heathcliff, the hero, has changed from a simple and lovely teenager to a vengeful demon who is dehumanized by love. This tragedy caused by love is amazing, because this turning point is sudden and wonderful, and such a sudden change in human nature highlights the deep imprint of love in his heart. More unexpected and decisive turning points like Hitchcock and O Henry contain infinite charm. I think the turning point of these works, whether beautiful or amazing, will make us realize the author's intention to the greatest extent and get thinking. They are undoubtedly wonderful.

The turning point in literary works is mostly fictional, but the turning point in life is real. Although some are painful, they eventually become the cornerstone of the miracle of life. Sima Qian wrote in Historical Records: "King Wen was arrested, playing Zhong You in Zhouyi and writing Chunqiu; Sun Tzu's feet, Sun Tzu's art of war, Zuo Qiu's blind obedience, and his "Mandarin"; It is "difficult" for Han Fei to imprison Qin; Lonely anger ... "Many sages have experienced such a painful turning point, more deeply realized the great significance of life, continued the will of life with amazing vitality, wrote a series of classics handed down from generation to generation, and created some extraordinary achievements. It is in these turning points that the tenacity and generosity of the sages condensed their personality and thoughts into a lasting fragrance on the long river of history, and it is also these turning points that inspired more people to feel more sorry. ...

I remember Lin Qingxuan said, "On the road of life, there is not a place where you put a door frame, but the only exit. You can turn left and right; To seek the exit of life. " Yes, our life path must not be smooth and straight. Some turning points may be reluctant, just like when I was a child, I was unhappy to learn that I was leaving the city where I had lived for a long time and moving to Beijing. I don't want to leave my long-time relatives and friends. I don't want to leave every street, even strangers on the street. After all, no one wants to face parting. After arriving in Beijing, I gradually got used to it, made new friends and had a wonderful new life. At first glance, this turning point seems to be an end, but now I think it is a starting point.

The turning point of life, happiness or pain. We should all smile. Life has ups and downs, and we should look at life like this. May a turn interweave an unforgettable life track for you and me.

7. How to write a composition on the topic of witness or turning point? Do not write articles. You should pay attention to the following points:

First, grasping the topic of stylistic writing is often not limited to stylistic writing, so that candidates can play freely. However, unlimited style does not mean

No style. The "unlimited style" of topic composition is actually not limited to one style, so that students have the freedom to choose a style.

When you choose a style, you must write according to the characteristics of this style. The observation ability of some students

Strong, rich life accumulation, might as well extract the wonderful fragments of life, write a vivid and touching narrative; Have the same

Learning imagination, good at writing stories, might as well write fairy tales, fables or science fiction; Some students have strong logical thinking ability,

If you are good at reasoning, you might as well write an argumentative paper with good reasons; Some students have delicate and rich feelings, so they might as well write a beautiful expression.

Love prose, it will be very good.

Second, narrowing the scope of topic composition only provides the topic of writing, without center, material, structure, style, language, etc.

Restrictions, etc. It gives candidates a relatively open space for thinking, allowing candidates to maximize their imagination and creativity.

Force. But if we don't pay attention to the topic and narrow the gap in writing, there will be a situation of "writing a thousand words and pulling Wan Li".

Gross. Therefore, no matter how broad the topic is, we should be good at narrowing the "encirclement circle" and choosing a small incision.

Population, such as a thing, a person, an object, a feeling, a little opinion, etc. , concentrate on breakthrough, put you

The topic selection angle is written in detail and thoroughly, so as to achieve "seeing the big from the small".

Third, the title of the proposed topic is the "eyes" of the article. As the saying goes, "an article is half done." Topic composition makes yourself

Therefore, we should strive to improve the level of the proposed topic, and strive to make our proposed topic accurate, concise, implicit and novel.

Let the marking teacher "love at first sight".

4. Zi Shan's associative composition is an open composition form, which requires candidates to let go of their hands and feet and give full play.

Imagine space, be good at developing associations in many directions, and thus produce colorful ideas. Favorite topic

"Wind", you can think of natural wind: breeze, gale, gale, hurricane, tornado and so on; You can also associate it

For social atmosphere: flattery, gift giving, etc. You can think of a fashion like the wind: Jin Yong fever, Han Han.

Hot and so on; You can even think if you are the wind, if you meet the wind and so on.

Since writing a new topic composition is an exam-oriented composition, we should always give the marking teacher a good feeling and get a good score.

Count. So it is very important to write characteristics and new ideas. When writing, you should be good at "finding another way", that is,

It requires us to have a special feeling in our conception, not to go into the clouds; Have a unique vision in the selection of materials, and don't talk about old sayings; build

Unique thinking, unstable, calm tone and unique charm, not general.

Topic planning skills

In recent years, writing for materials has become an important way. However, many students are flat.

Without exercise, I can't draw up a composition topic in the examination room, and I can't write a successful article.

So, how can we draw up the exam composition questions? Besides reading more books and practicing more at ordinary times, master some skills of writing topics by yourself.

Methods are also important. Here are five simple methods: borrowing, imitating, spelling, drawing and substituting.

"Borrowing" means borrowing ready-made topics from ancient and modern masterpieces at home and abroad or from the life around you, and using them skillfully to meet your own requirements.

The article came up. For example, Gorky's Mother and Lu Xun's Hometown have been used before and after. You also "borrowed" me

"Borrow", the more "borrow", the better. It can be said that the same topic is different and the charm is unique. This method is best used when the examination room is tense.

"Imitation" means copying a composition topic that meets your own needs according to the topic format used by others. For example: "Back

Remembering mom can be parodied as remembering junior high school life, and thinking and doing can be parodied as learning and thinking.

"Spelling" means putting together the effective components in several related topics to produce a new composition topic. some

The meaning of "spelling" includes some words and some usages. For example, the title of 1990 college entrance examination composition is "Flowers and"

On this basis, some people "spell" the second space of "association", which is intended to be a thorn association, which can be described as icing on the cake.

Flowers.

"Extraction" is to extract keywords or short sentences from a given material as a composition topic. For example, in 1990 college entrance examination composition,

Someone extracted the words "flower", "thorn" and "girl" from a given material and drew up a literary and attractive work.

Book title "Flower &; #8226; Thorne & # 8226 girl.

"ghostwriting" means that when time is tight and it is impossible to draw up a satisfactory topic, you can draw up a ghostwriting first and confirm it after the full text is written.

Decide, or because of the inspiration in the writing process, suddenly come up with a good topic. Such as "talk about ..." "remember ..." "introduction

Salt ... "and so on.

Of course, the above five methods are often not used alone in the examination room, but often used comprehensively, which will be more accurate.

Come on, draw better.

8. How to turn a writer's composition into a turning point? It is also called "restraining first and then promoting". It is a writing technique, which refers to trying to belittle or deny someone, something, something or a scenery with a distorted or mocking attitude in order to affirm it. When using this conception method, we should pay attention to less inhibition and more promotion, and promotion can be suppressed.

Write the bad first, then write the good, just like a mountain peak should be set off with a trough. The sharp contrast makes the article more exciting and leaves a deep impression on readers.

For example, Mao Dun's "Praise of Poplar" should be written in praise of poplars. At the beginning, we should write about the "monotony" of its growing environment-the Loess Plateau, which makes people sleepy. This is repression. It's refreshing to suddenly see the tall and straight poplars. This is Yang. Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey" first wrote that he didn't like bees, and then wrote that he praised bees, which also belonged to the desire to promote and suppress first; Xiao Si's "Cicada" first describes the annoying sound and weakness of the cicada, and then describes the short and meaningful life of the cicada, which makes the author amazed. Writers in novels can also be degraded first and praised later, which belongs to this category.