How to analyze the homework of photography class

If you can criticize yourself, you can still write, otherwise if you say yes to this photo, you are really lying. Let's make a self-evaluation from your point of view:

The theme I want to express in this photo is "the girl playing with water". Because there is no experience in guiding subjects, there is no guidance for girls' body posture, movements and emotions, so that there are "squatting" movements and no problems such as playing in the water. I should pay attention next time.

As for the exposure, through self-analysis, I hope that the girl's skin is whiter, and the overall exposure is ignored when shooting, so it is a bit overexposed, which leads to the disappearance of details in the highlight area and no sense of hierarchy. I should pay attention next time.

As for composition, insufficient consideration in shooting leads to the imbalance of the picture, the characters are too centered, the proportion of swimming waters is insufficient, deviating from the theme, the distant horizon is not placed in a reasonable position, resulting in a sense of depression, the stones behind the characters are not used well, and the main line is not taken into account, resulting in the shortcomings that the picture is concise, but the main body is still not prominent enough.

Generally speaking, although this photo is not good, it has accumulated valuable experience through self-analysis and will definitely be improved in the future. Thank you, teacher.