"Who is the most elegant" 20 articles

1, Liang: full of life and interpretation value.

Scientists have successfully contributed to the team, photographers are highly respected for sharing beauty with the world, and welders have become a generation of masters because of their dedication. Three different occupations and different lives all make their lives shine in their respective fields. Their success stems from their interpretation of the value of life and their belief and persistence in their careers.

As a scientist, his life value is to achieve breakthroughs in scientific research and technology and create achievements that attract worldwide attention and benefit human life; As a photographer, you should record the beauty of the world through the lens, share the beauty captured in the lens with the world, and make the world moved and beautiful; As an electric welder, his life value should be to become a model in his own field and a grandmaster.

Because the life values of these three occupations and three people are doomed from their professional orientation, and dedication is undoubtedly the only way for them to succeed and realize their life values. Through their success stories, perhaps we should get such thinking: what is the value of our life? How to make life shine like them?

Our life is short and short, decades; It is very long, but it is also very long, at least much longer than some other creatures. When we come to this world, we naturally shoulder an important mission. Some people say, get into a good university and find a good job in the future, so that you and your family can live better. Some people say that if you want to have children, you should be responsible for your family. It is also said that we should leave something for this society that was born and raised in Sri Lanka.

In fact, all this can be regarded as the value of life. It doesn't matter whether the value is big or small. It all depends on whether we regret life or not. Youth, like us, is the moment when life blooms and the best time in life. So, how should we interpret our own life value? I can't help but think of a sentence widely circulated on the Internet: "People have three lives: life, life and mission".

This sentence reveals three realms of life. From the moment we were born, we all have our own lives, only once. Are we brilliant and energetic, or are we down and out? People who are content with mediocrity have only "destiny", while excellent people have more "destiny". Excellent people have not only "destiny" but also "mission". Their life covers survival, life and responsibility.

Accordingly, aren't the scientists, photographers and welders mentioned above outstanding representatives? They not only live a wonderful life, but also show the value of life and interpret their responsibilities and missions. So, what about us outside the story? Do you prefer mediocrity, Excellence or creating Excellence?

Teacher Tang's evaluation is:

Liang may not have read the full version of the composition materials, and there is a sentence in the proposition that says, "Who do you think is more elegant among these three people?" Please synthesize the content and meaning of the materials and reflect your thinking, trade-offs and choices. " This means that it is best to make your own judgments and choices among three people.

As far as this article is concerned, from the analysis of three people and three occupations, the author has established that their * * * factor "comes from the interpretation of the value of life, from the belief and persistence in the profession." Taking this as a starting point, from the perspective of value, this paper demonstrates the height, strength and depth of life, which is plain, natural, well-founded and profound, so that we can not only see the most dazzling colors of three people in different occupations, but also show that all life should strive to bloom its value and live a wonderful life. This thinking of linking materials with reality and linking others with oneself is a profound expression of writing skills. The fly in the ointment is that there are too many materials discussed in the article, and the three materials are a bit empty.

2. Qiao Zhifeng: The more common, the more elegant.

The selection of contemporary figures produced the last three candidates. Xiao Li, who is keen on learning and thinking, is determined to innovate, making great contributions to solving the mystery of life science and leading the team to become the international academic frontier. Lao Wang, who loves his job and is dedicated, has practiced a unique skill, turned ordinary technology into perfect art, and embarked on a road of "great country craftsman" from vocational high school students to welding masters. Xiao Liu loves photography, crosses mountains and rivers and captures the beauty of time. His blog won the admiration of netizens: "You have brought us a very tasty world" and "You have helped us keep our beautiful homesickness".

Of these three people, who do you think is more elegant? When this question is put before us, I believe many people will hesitate. Three people have their own styles, and actually represent three completely different life choices and attitudes, and of course they have made different achievements and gains. Xiao Li represents high-level scientific talents who are determined to innovate; Lao Wang, who has done extraordinary things in his ordinary post, represents a down-to-earth and refined skilled worker; Xiao Liu should undoubtedly be classified as a young "player" who loves life and has a flamboyant personality. But he is not only satisfied with his sightseeing, but "it is better to play with others than to play alone." He recorded what he saw and heard with the lens, and shared it with thousands of people in Qian Qian, thus bringing happiness and emotion to more people. He went through hardships and took photos, which to a certain extent has gone beyond the scope of personal hobbies and become a cultural phenomenon that more audiences appreciate and interact.

Of these three people, who do you think is more elegant? Although it was difficult to choose, I soon came up with my own answer. Xiao Li has made great contributions to solving the mystery of life science, and his contribution is undoubtedly the greatest. However, such contributions and achievements are not easy for everyone. They need not only diligence and hard work, but also other conditions such as talent and sometimes even a little luck. The "forefront of international scholarship" has always belonged to a very small number of elites at the top of the pyramid, which deserves admiration and reverence, but it is a bit far from the lives of ordinary people. However, Xiao Liu's tourism and photography skills are not high, and it is difficult to bring any practical results. Perhaps it can attract the attention of many fans for a while, and it may cause aesthetic fatigue over time.

I think you have guessed my choice: I will vote for Lao Wang, an ordinary welder and an ordinary but not simple "great country craftsman" In fact, there are many people like Lao Wang around us. They may live in different environments and engage in different industries, but they never complain about their low starting point and never give up their efforts because their work is unremarkable. They sweat in obscurity, they do their work in obscurity, give full play to their potential, and turn what outsiders think is boring into an art that surprises everyone. What is more admirable than such efforts and resilience? What is more real than this kind of life and can also cause people's buzz? The more common, the more exciting; The more common the more elegant!

Perhaps the prejudice that "being a mechanic is better than sitting in an office" still exists among some people. In fact, the two are just different in division of labor, and there is no distinction between high and low. Gu Zeng, an academician of China Academy of Sciences and former president of Tsinghua University, said, for example, the predecessor of California Institute of Technology was Tupu Institute of Technology; Massachusetts Institute of Technology was founded for the industrialization of the United States, and its motto is mind and hands (both theory and practice). Two top universities in the world named the mascot "Beaver" to pay tribute to the dam master in nature. Many world-renowned universities "started" from applied technology education, followed the transformation of national socio-economic strategy, closely linked with practice, and participated in cutting-edge projects and related research.

At present, China has entered a critical period of industrial transformation, and the demand for professional and technical personnel is very strong. If Wang Can Sr is elected as a "contemporary figure", it will undoubtedly play a good role in guiding and promoting the society. Therefore, not only will I vote for Lao Wang, but I believe many friends will do the same. What did you say?/Sorry?

Teacher Tang's evaluation is:

I like reading Qiao Zhifeng's articles. "Speak well, speak well" is the attitude and skill that writers lack most at present. And this article of Joe's classmate made me read out sincerity and full accuracy. The clear and accurate title "The more common, the more elegant" hit the bull's-eye of ten ring from the beginning. Look at the elaboration of the viewpoint again, step by step. Although the writing is simple, it is calm and sophisticated. Cite materials, compare and analyze the similarities and differences among them, and finally clarify their own views, which are praised by ordinary welders. It is natural and appropriate to talk about the need for such people to participate in the current transitional society and the significance of detaining contemporary figures in time.

I will recommend your article to my students. Reject the grandiose and empty style of writing and enjoy yourself in simple and clear practice. Your article is the best example.

Zhao: Xiao Li is the most beautiful in the team.

Seeing the experiences of Xiao Li, Lao Wang and Xiao Liu, they have their own wonderful lives and their own successes. They explained the universal truth that "360 lines, each line is the best". Their success should be respected by the world. But if I have to choose one of the three and say who is the most elegant, I think Xiao Li is the most elegant!

Someone will definitely ask me, why do you say Xiao Li is the most elegant? In fact, the author thinks that Xiao Li is the most elegant, not because he has made great contributions to solving the mystery of life science, nor because they have become the forefront of international academic circles in one fell swoop, but because Xiao Li has led the team to success.

Today's society is not a society of lonely heroes. No matter how strong a person's ability is, he is only one person. As the saying goes, "Everyone gathers firewood with a high flame", "Everyone paddles to open a big boat" and "One pair of chopsticks is slightly broken and ten pairs of chopsticks are firmly held together", all of which emphasize the strength of the team. In reality, the strength of the team has also brought infinite shock to the author, so the author prefers people with team dedication.

When it comes to team dedication, we have to talk about football and shijiazhuang yongchang football team. I wasn't a fan before, but since I watched the shijiazhuang yongchang team's game recently, I have gradually fallen in love with Yongchang, football and become a fan.

As a new force in this year's Super League, shijiazhuang yongchang has no big-name players. It is a "civilian team". At the beginning of the season, as the "newly promoted horse" of the 20 15 Super League, few people will be optimistic about Yongchang, and many teams regard Yongchang as a "soft persimmon". However, after the Super League 13 round, Yongchang ranked eighth among the league 16 teams with the record of 12, 4 wars, 5 draws and 3 losses, which is the best record of the newly promoted horse in the first half of recent years. Yongchang, a newly promoted horse, became famous as a "dark horse". No team dares to despise Yongchang now!

Why can Yongchang "strike back"? Yongchang head coach Yasen said more than once that Yongchang is a team, every player is very important and every player works hard. In the words of some football commentators, as a civilian team, Yongchang is fighting as a team, although there are no big-name stars like Gautrat, Kangka, Zheng Zhi and Gao Lin. And this team includes not only players, coaches, but also fans. In particular, many people think that Yongchang team has enabled Mao Jianqing, Guan Zhen, Li Chunyu and other players who have suffered setbacks in the Super League to find a stage to realize their greatest value.

In reality, most of us are not "stars" in various industries, but just "civilians". It's hard to break through a world by "fighting alone", but if you can work in a United team, you can realize your greatest value and become a dazzling "star" as long as you work hard. Therefore, I think Xiao Li is the most elegant in the team!

Teacher Tang's evaluation is:

Reading Zhao's composition is like chatting with an old friend, and it is also a style of writing that is not unpleasant or urgent.

Starting from the first material, Xiao Li, the author focused on conveying the message of "leading the team" in a spicy and unique way, avoiding the positioning of "keen on learning and determined to innovate". This is also a reminder to us in the material composition exam, and we urgently need to pay attention to the invisible conditions.

It takes two hands to clap, and a man can't become an army. In the author's eyes, the team is above everything else. It is the team that has made Xiao Li brilliant and great, and it is also the team that has made Xiao Li elegant demeanor. As the "civilian team" embodies, no team can achieve today's success by dominating the Wulin by one person alone, but by the twisted drive of eleven people and the unity of reinforced concrete. The article gives accurate examples, clear thinking and well-founded, and completes the basic framework of an argumentative essay. The shortcomings are that the topic is too casual and simple, the language is colloquial, and there is no need to focus only on Yongchang team in the case demonstration.

Graham: Loyalty to the profession is the magic weapon of success.

Different people may hold different views on success, different people may have different paths to success, different people may have different successful experiences, but every successful person has the same character, that is, loyalty to the profession. Xiao Li, who is keen on learning and thinking, is determined to innovate, and has made great contributions to solving the mystery of life science, leading the team to become the international academic frontier; Love and dedication, hard work, out of a "great country craftsman" Lao Wang from vocational high school students to welding masters; Xiao Liu, who loves photography and crosses mountains and rivers to capture the beauty of time, has won the admiration of netizens ... Their success strongly illustrates this point.

Only by being loyal to scientific research and focusing on scientific research and innovation can scientists continuously develop advanced and practical new technologies and methods, reflect their contributions to society in practice, and realize their ideal goals and life values; Only when welders are loyal to their professional posts, conscientious and strive for perfection will they grow from an ordinary worker to a generation of masters; Photographers are also loyal to their profession, carefully capturing the wonderful and unique moments of the world customs, while retaining homesickness, giving people aesthetic satisfaction and emotional buzz, thus gaining a sense of success.

To be loyal to your career, you should not only have ideals and clear goals, but also uphold a strong sense of professional honor and mission, devote yourself to ordinary posts with full enthusiasm, and do your career well in a down-to-earth manner. As the saying goes, a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. A person's success is not achieved in one step. Entrepreneurial enthusiasm, innovative motivation, creative inspiration, etc. To a large extent, it comes from loyalty to the profession. Based on the post, one step at a time, we can reach the other side of success.

Being loyal to one's career means being content with the ordinary and not content with the status quo, and striving to make extraordinary achievements in ordinary work. Without ambition, doing nothing, muddling along, of course, can't do much; If you have the desire to pursue, you will be more enterprising, with higher standards and stricter requirements. If you take no best, only better as your professional creed, you will make new breakthroughs and achievements, and success will wave to you kindly.

Being loyal to one's career means being a brave pursuer who does not bow to difficulties and setbacks, a selfless devotee who is fearless and selfless, and a tireless pioneer who dares to be the first and challenge. There is a good song, you can't see the rainbow until after the storm. No one can succeed casually. A little taste, content with the status quo, timid, suffering from loss, don't want to pay, just want to return, not only can't talk about loyalty to the profession, but also can't get the favor of success.

Teacher Tang's evaluation is:

Graham, like Liang in the first article, may not have read the full version of the composition materials. There is a sentence in the proposition that says, "Who do you think is more elegant among the three people? Please synthesize the content and meaning of the materials and reflect your thinking, trade-offs and choices. " This means that you have to make your own judgment and choice among three people.

However, apart from strict examination, as far as this article is concerned, the author intercepts the three people's "loyalty to their profession" to argue, and the words used are positive and sonorous, and the words used in the four characters are also exquisite and concise. On the argument of "loyalty to the profession", the author showed his full thinking consciousness to readers from three practices. However, if we can change sentence patterns, including whole sentences, scattered sentences, declarative sentences, interrogative sentences and exclamatory sentences, the language expression will be vivid and full.

At the same time, if we can provide just a few examples of characters in our writing, it will make the explanation of opinions less thin and boring and easy to convince readers.

5. Mo Xiaoming: Life from childhood to adulthood

Life is not easy when things are hard, but it is certainly not easy to have a successful life. A conscientious welder, because of his persistence and Excellence, has developed a skill, turned ordinary technology into beautiful art, and finally embarked on a road from a vocational school student to a welding master as a "great country craftsman". This striking example is enough to make the world applaud: nothing is difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb.

Welders are unremarkable, sweaty and doing rough and dirty work, and factories and even roadside repair shops abound. They bend down, hold welding torches, and make a living in dazzling sparks, day after day. However, there are also some specialties in the industry, and some welders have succeeded, and they have become welding masters because of their superb skills. I think the secret of success is that they can bear hardships and stand hard work, keep forging ahead, and have a life goal of gradually turning themselves from welders into welding experts.

All successful people in the world have the same characteristics. From the case of "an electric welder becomes a welding master", it can be seen that even if it is a heavy job and a humble occupation, as long as you are willing to pay and study hard, practitioners can become the best in their profession. From this, I remember an old saying: 360 lines, each line is the best. But in today's impetuous world, impetuous people, how many people can be satisfied with starting from small things and starting from small businesses? There are too many arrogant and ambitious people in this world. They are not at ease to do what they can, but they are fussy and at a loss in the fierce competition in society. Instead, I dream of "pies falling from the sky" every day.

The highest state of life is to make a difference. A healthy life should be a pursuit of life. A life without pursuit is like a stagnant pool without a ripple. Because of eating, a person's body can go from low to high; Because of learning, a person's knowledge reserve can change from poor to rich; Because of hard work, a person's achievements can also grow from small to large ... In fact, everyone has the opportunity to succeed and strengthen their lives. The key lies in how he grasps himself and casts himself. The so-called elements of success should be blood and sweat, perseverance and perseverance.

The strength of a country and the great rejuvenation of a nation cannot be separated from the strength of every citizen. If everyone has a correct outlook on life, loves their jobs and works to the extreme in ordinary posts, so as to realize their dreams in life, then the collection of all people's dreams is a powerful Chinese dream.

Teacher Tang's evaluation is:

Just reading Mo Xiaoming's essay title "Life from childhood to adulthood" shows that it embodies a critical thinking ability. The first three paragraphs skillfully excavate the center of materials, discuss the reason why an electric welder becomes a "great country craftsman", and extend to the key to the success of thousands of "electric welders" in Qian Qian, Qian Qian. And with the method of comparative argument, a small number of arrogant and narrow-minded people in the world were severely knocked down. Finally, Mo Xiaoming chose to sublimate the theme of the article and began to elaborate his own title. A person's success is related to the development of a country and a nation, especially an ordinary but great person like a welder. As for the debatable place, it is a series of parallelism sentences at the beginning of the penultimate natural paragraph and several sentences driven by "because", which do not give full play to the charm of rhetoric and bring too much help to the central idea of the article.

Zhang Haoyue: Success is precious to yourself.

This year's Hainan college entrance examination composition leads to success, so what is success? The materials are given to three kinds of people, and I think they will all succeed through their own efforts.

I remember when I was in primary school, our school started classes at 2: 30 pm on time. I am very playful, so I always step on time to go to school, but sometimes I am late for one reason or another. Since once, I went to play with my friends, I was laughing and clapping my hands. Looking back, it's almost time. So my partner and I ran in the street in confusion. Seeing that time was running out, my little friend simply took me to cut corners and went straight to school from a narrow path. I'm confused about how to get to school by this road, because my deep understanding of the road is rigid, so I always thought there was only one way to get to school. Fortunately, we managed to catch the last bus of time and catch the class. We were very happy then.

Shortcut is a derogatory term to some extent, which will make people lazy, not diligent in thinking, lead to work failure, lack of exercise, and thus lead to losing ground. But it is easier to take shortcuts occasionally than to memorize them, and even lead people to success, win great glory and flowers, and even praise one after another.

So sometimes, shortcuts are also a compliment. Since "shortcut" has both derogatory meaning and justice, we don't have to dwell too much on how to locate their explanations, but learn to give meaning to the word with our own actions and efforts.

There is a saying that "society is like a vat, with all kinds of colors in it." If you want to integrate into society, you must learn to accept the color that society has dyed for you. " I don't quite agree with this affirmation, because after all, people live to control their own lives, not life to control people's thoughts and everything. Society is really a vat. From the bad environment or some aspects, people must know how to adapt to their own environment in order to go longer and further. But this environment can be given by society or created by itself. In the post-70 s and post-80 s era, there are many talents, each with his own unique skills, and most of them are pillars of society. But why are so many high-tech talents embarrassed to face unemployment? Is it because of insufficient academic qualifications? Is it because you have no work experience? Is it because life experience is still very shallow? I think on the one hand, it comes from the demand and pressure of society, on the other hand, it comes from its own rigid setting. You have to hang yourself from a tree to feel at ease. I think countless people just spend a lot of time obsessing about whether they should find another way out and miss one opportunity after another. It is this hesitation that has become the achilles heel of most people. So why not be smart? Since there is no place for you in this position, try to open up another way for yourself. Isn't it all for the goal of "success"? The so-called success is to cherish yourself, 360 lines, and each line is the best. There is no distinction between high and low success. The key lies in whether you are willing to do it, whether you are afraid of hardship, and your view of face. Life often needs more bold attempts to become more and more exciting. Knowing how to look forward and do well in the present is conducive to your own development, rather than standing still and standing still. In the long run, it will only make people depressed, lazy and have no motivation to move forward.

What our society lacks now is the courage to try. They always think that as long as they have their own space, they will have a long-term economy As everyone knows, there are still many opportunities waiting for them, many bumps waiting for them to cross, and many difficulties waiting for them to overcome. If you die blindly, you will only bind yourself in a narrow space. Even if they have a pair of wings, they will not have foresight, but will only kill their young dreams in the cradle. Failure is not terrible. Therefore, sometimes it is wise to find another way out at the end of the road, and it is not indecent to take shortcuts occasionally. Come on, people who are struggling, fight for their youth. Instead of wasting this precious time, it is better to do meaningful things wholeheartedly, make your life more colorful, write a gorgeous chapter for your future, put an end to your youth without regrets, let yourself relive this difficult time in your lifetime, and let your life have no regrets. Come on, lovely people, no regrets in youth!

7, old Su Zi: Only the best, let it be dumbfounded.

People's hearts are only in danger, and their hearts are only weak, but they are unique and tolerant. This "sixteen-character heart biography" of China's traditional philosophy tells an irrefutable truth. Ordinary people's cognition always pays attention to the pursuit of the external world, while monks are always obsessed with the subtlety of the internal conscious world. Only by returning to simplicity and truth, finding the true self and humility is the right path between heaven and earth.

Mr. Wang Guowei said in "The Thorn on Earth": "Nietzsche said:' All literature, I love people who write with blood. "The words of the late Lord are really the so-called people written in blood. Emperor Song Daojun's "Yanshan Pavilion" is also slightly similar. However, Tao Jun is nothing more than the sorrow of his own life. The late master has the meaning that Sakyamuni and Christ bear the sins of mankind, and the size is different. " The true nature of a "hot-blooded calligrapher" is a pure heart. There are many people who take dreams as horses, but there is only one Haizi in this world; There are many determined people in this world, but there is only one Chen Qixian; There are many innovative talents in this world, but there is only one Steve Jobs. Su Shi said in his poem, "Life should be like flying snow". If you want to leave your mark in this white world, how can you do without that childlike innocence?

Whether to persist in innovation and lead the team to the international academic frontier; Or do we love our jobs and work hard, and technology can almost walk out of the road of "great country craftsmen"; Or we bring beauty to others from our own perspective. These wonderful lives are nothing more than keeping a pure heart, constantly inspiring themselves with full enthusiasm in the long journey of life, and at the same time encouraging others to give hope to others, thus achieving the goal of "carrying human sins". But just as there are no two identical leaves in this world, each of us can't live the same way. Because, just like the lyrics in the song "I": "I am me, a fireworks with different colors."

There are 84,000 ways for Buddhists to become Buddhists, and each practitioner has a different way. This is the "only way", and so is our life. Everyone has a style that belongs to everyone, either bright or plain, or vigorous or quiet and beautiful. Some people say that the so-called tragic consciousness is dancing with shackles on, but still smiling, just like Sakyamuni, who knows that life is bitter, still struggles to write down the words "Go ahead" on the Hall of Heroes to inspire himself. We should find the truest self in life, love the world, love our own career and love others with a pure heart, instead of being happy for things and sad for ourselves.

This is the only essence that is allowed in the middle.

8. Sun Zonghu: If you love your job, please protect it.

Post is a place where a person embodies his self-worth. In life, everyone has his own job, no matter how big or small, whether it is hard or not, whether it is rewarded or not, whether it is recognized or not, it should stick to the front line of the post. Love duty. If you love duty, please protect it.

Uncle Lei Feng once wrote in his diary: "If you were a drop of water, would you moisten an inch of land?" If you were a ray of sunshine, would you light up a little darkness? If you are a grain, have you ever given birth to useful life? If you were the smallest screw, would you stick to your life forever? "This passage tells me that no matter what position or role you play, you should do your best, carry forward the spirit of struggle and make your due contribution. Heroes of the past fought to build a new China. Today, brand-new figures appear in front of us. They bravely followed each other. They are not afraid of hardship. They burn themselves and illuminate others all the way.

You see, under the scorching sun, they sweat like rain and work hard; At high altitude, they poured cement without fear of danger; Complex geology, they are careful not to make mistakes ... they are workers who stick to the front line of high-speed rail construction in Hainan West Ring Road. Every time I go home and pass by the construction site along the route, I can't calm down when I see their dark skin and sweat. It is precisely because of them that it is convenient for us to go home, and it is precisely because of them that the economy along the route has developed. Because I love my post, I have been guarding it. Look, in stormy weather, they direct traffic against the wind and rain. When there is a traffic jam, they shuttle between vehicles and guide again and again. In the accident, they ran among pedestrians and comforted them again and again ... they were traffic policemen who stuck to their traffic posts. It is because of them that we have the safety of travel. It is because of them that we have this safe road. Because I love my post, I have been guarding it. Look, in the fast-flowing river, they risk being washed away, while in the reef, they risk being injured. They are not afraid of hardship and fatigue. They search for the missing persons again and again, even if there is a little hope, they will persist until the end ... They are the rescue team searching for the missing persons in the "Oriental Star" shipwreck. Because of them, they were rescued from death one by one. Because I love my post, I have been guarding it. You see, there are sanitation workers who guard city sanitation in the cold wind, teachers who teach and educate people in spite of illness, and medical worker ............. who guards patients day and night at the risk of being infected. They are not afraid of hardship and sacrifice, because they love their work, so they have been guarding it.

Ordinary work, ordinary work, but there are such an extraordinary group of people. They put work first and responsibility first. Day after day, month after month, year after year, they dedicated their hard work and youth to this hot land. They never fear, never retreat, and stick to their posts with their own lives. Because I love my post, I have been guarding it and always been there.