Help me check some compositions, junior high school students'. With points ~

A composition on the topic of "Chinese";

The language in my heart

I have always loved you, the language in my heart.

I have been thinking about you, the language in my heart.

Many people are defining your extension, and many people are interpreting your connotation. I can only touch your skin with my own feelings, listen to your heartbeat and feel your breadth.

I know that you have stumbled from ancient times with the vicissitudes of history. The sediment in Zhoukoudian, the smoke from Hemudu, the wind and frost in banpo village and the rain and snow in Dawenkou have witnessed your life born out of the wild. Qin brick and Han tile forge your strength, Han rhyme and tang style pave your mellow, Mount Tai and Kunlun hold up your body, and the Yangtze River and Yellow River dredge your blood.

I know you are striding away from wisdom with the rings of years. The Book of Songs, Chu Ci, Han Fu, Tang Poetry, Song Ci, Yuan Qu, Ming and Qing novels ... The wisdom of generations of sages has nourished you. You traveled all over the world with Confucius, and you sang songs on the Zehe River with Dr. Qu. You once called "Dou E" when it snowed in Guan Hanqing in June. You used to accompany Cao Xueqin's family to eat porridge and watch The Red Chamber. You turned into a sword and gun to "scream" the national awakening with Lu Xun, and you turned into a horn to watch the "midnight" bell with Mao Dun-

Think big, you have golden horses, and the river surges; If you want to be fresh, there will be a small bridge and flowing water, and an apricot in the south of the Yangtze River; The product is far away, you have the bright moon in Qin dynasty and the magnificent custom in Han dynasty; Sorrow leads to bones and muscles, and the soul pursues the wind; Tears when you are sad, and give your feelings to Xiaoxiang. Philosophically, you have the true colors of Lushan Mountain, and the hidden flowers are bright-

I know that you have always accepted the essence of foreign countries with a broad mind. Tolstoy and Pushkin came into our field of vision from Russia, Shakespeare and Bernard Shaw drifted into our hometown from England, Balzac and Mo Bosang brought the sunshine of France, Whitman and Hemingway brought the clear spring of America, the profundity of Tagore, the romance of Ibsen and the passion of petofi-exotic colors dotted your vibrant nursery.

No, you are not only a mountain full of beautiful things, but also the sky and clouds of nature!

The colors of nature are your charming clothes. "Red, orange, yellow, green, grass, blue and purple, who is dancing with color training?" The majestic green hills and boundless green fields are your graceful charm; White clouds curl up and clear water is long, which is your style; Pink and Li Bai, orange and orange green, that's your flowing color; Mailangjin, Mianhaiyin, that's your blood burning. ...

The voice of nature is your moving melody. The wind rolls yellow sand, the rain hits the residual lotus drops, the sea is magnificent, and the long river is fresh; The cuckoo cries for blood to pick up the sounds of nature, and the oriole whispers fairy sounds; Ten thousand cicadas in midsummer pluck the strings of harvest, and a few crows in winter are brewing another meaningful Spring Festival.

No, you still have colorful pictures of life!

The ends of the earth fall, and your figure is active. Entering Saibei, "the desert is lonely and straight, and the long river falls into the yen"; Walking into the south of the Yangtze River, "White clouds and red clouds dawn from the sea, and spring is in the wild plum river"; Crossing the countryside, "the bamboo language laundry woman returns, and the lotus leaf bends in front of the fishing boat"; Through the water town, "holding the water moon in hand, making it full of clothes and flowers"; Walking on the mountain pier, "Zui Xiang is still there in the mountains, and Weng is not alone in going to the pavilion in 800 miles"; Near the seaside, "the sea goes down to North Korea, and the clouds are long, long, long"—

Every aspect of life is your frank expression. Appreciating the moon, "Su E, a young woman, is cold-resistant and frosty in the middle of the month"; Let's play chess. "I have an appointment, don't come in the middle of the night, knock the chess pieces and drop the snuff"; Drink? "On a green spring day, I sang loudly, drank heavily and started to go home"; Tea? "The Japanese are thirsty for tea, knocking at the door and asking the savage"; Think of my lover? "The most is the gentleness of bowing your head, like the shyness of an invincible water lotus in the cool breeze"; Miss home? Bury me on the top of a high mountain and look at my mainland. If the mainland can't see me, I will cry. "

The art dribs and drabs flow with your feelings. "Step on the flowers and return to the horseshoe fragrance"-that is the language of painting; Eighteen beats of Hu Jia-that is the language of music; "Colorful feathers"-that is the language of dance; "Red face Guan Gong, black face Zhang Fei"-that is the language of China traditional opera; "Floating like a cloud, agile like a dragon"-that is the language of calligraphy; Towering towers and flying bridges-that is the language of architecture; Wood carving stone carving, ice carving root carving-that is the language of sculpture; Including Fiona Fang, connecting the ancient and the modern-this is the language of movies and TV.

No, you have all kinds of "chin beauties".

The black face of the mine recorded your simplicity, the horseback of the grassland carried your wildness, the peasant woman's family talked about you, the snoring of the fishing pillow made you serene, the piccolo of the shepherd boy blew out the original fairy tale on the cow's back, and the smile of the old man under the wall bound the reproduced poetic rhyme. "I don't have good tea and rice today, only folk songs to respect my loved ones." Shan Ye's folk songs are wrapped in the boldness of Shan Ye language. "Brother, it is difficult for my little sister to stay in the west." The ditty on the loess high slope exudes the deep affection of the loess language, proverbs from south to north, slang of local dialects walking around the streets, and it is endless into the rolling river of Chinese!

"The extension of Chinese is equal to the extension of life." In a word, you are broad, you are rich, you are deep and you are rich!

Chinese, the language in my heart, you won more than a "point"!

Charm of Chinese

Language, you are like a soft song; China people, you are like exquisite and meaningful calligraphy and painting; China people, you are like a quaint and dignified guzheng;

I met you inadvertently, and your beautiful melody flies in the hot summer, emitting a dazzling light like a streamer. I am bathed in your warm sunshine, as warm as a fairy tale, feeling the emotions released from my heart. The world is vast, constantly echoing the same ballad, as if it were the warmth of nature for a long time.

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You gave me clear water and bright moon, you gave me mountains and waters, you gave me blue sea and clear sky, and you made me feel as if I had heard the distant "faint song on the high building" in person.

Accompanied by you, there are bursts of laughter, cries of "petals falling like tears, lonely birds singing their sadness", and feelings of "she sews gold thread on the bride's dress for other girls year after year".

Accompanied by you, there is the sound of the warbler's voice, the silence of "sneaking into the night with the wind and moistening things quietly" and the silence of "cicada singing makes the forest quiet and the palace mountain more secluded"

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Poetic life is depicted in the most beautiful picture.

With you, Yan Shu leans against the West Building but sees the blue waves flowing eastward, He Zhu turns to Liutang and meets the duckweed floating, and Liu Yongjing stands by the river and suddenly sees the breeze and the waning moon.

With your company, Li Qingzhao is full of yellow flowers dotted with elegant windows, and the drizzle outside Li Yu's curtain sets off the fading of spring, and Su Shi's pond is broken and flowing.

You have the leisure of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely", you have the aura of "knowing the warmth of spring tonight, and the sound of insects is fresh through the green screen window", and you have the beautiful scenery of "mangroves and green hills are withered, and long grass is endless".

Unfortunately, the text is exquisite and Zen is fragrant. It's really immersive.

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Like an experienced elder, you taught me the true meaning of life. Every word and sentence reveals simplicity and dignity, and purifies my soul.

What I have benefited a lot is not the pursuit of "I don't regret it when my belt is getting wider, and the Iraqi people are haggard and I am haggard", nor the open-mindedness of "people have joys and sorrows, and the moon is full of rain and shine, so it is difficult to become the past", but only the ambition of "worrying about the world first, then enjoying the world" and the mind of "spring silkworms die, and crying at night".

The wheel of history is rolling forward, how can it be smooth sailing! It is precisely because of this that we have the heroic spirit of "going to the water without rain", the spirit of giving up life for righteousness, and the cry of "living as a hero and dying as a ghost". What a sad sentence at this time! "

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Bacon said: "Reading history makes people wise, reading poetry makes people witty", and Du Fu also said: "Reading is like writing, and writing is like a god", which shows the charm of reading.

Writing articles is painstaking. "Sing a word, break a few stems", "Two words for three years, one song with two tears", "Every word is like blood, and ten years of hard work is extraordinary", which shows the hardships of writing.

However, when you calm down, make a pot of green tea, a cup of coffee, play a melodious music, and open the book, a quiet book will come to your eyes. The world in the book is magnificent and panoramic, showing the richness of categories. Isn't it elegant to make friends with the ancients and people today? Isn't that interesting? A scholar can know what's going on in the world without going out. Actually, it's an improvement in taste.

"It's a beautiful sentence of human nature, and the words are not surprising and endless" is also the highest realm of writing. Not everyone can reach this level, but everyone can keep working towards this goal. Writing can tell secret feelings, purify the soul, sublimate ideals, influence the same kind, enlighten the world, show talents, gain bosom friends, and even write an immortal model: "building articles, governing the country, and immortal events." When your article can do something for the people, it is an immortal event!

Students, Chinese is a Chinese study, all-encompassing, extensive and profound. Chinese is difficult to learn, but easy to learn. The key lies in interest and intention. With interest and hard work, read more and write more, and your Chinese will surely advance by leaps and bounds!

Huang Tingjian, a writer in the Song Dynasty, said: "If you don't study for a day, your language is tasteless and disgusting." Historian Fan Wenlan also said, "The bench will be cold for ten years, and the article will be empty." Students, please read and write more articles, because the charm of language lies in reading and writing.