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"I love my hometown-"or "My hometown" composition teaching plan

Jin Lifang qiaocheng experimental school

Teaching objectives:

1, initially cultivate healthy aesthetic taste and love for hometown thoughts and feelings.

2, can use a variety of rhetorical methods, and can describe the scenery from multiple angles.

Preparation before class:

Ask students to collect information about places of interest, local products and celebrities in their hometown.

Teaching process:

First, reveal the topic.

Do you know your hometown? There must be many lovely places in your hometown, such as charming natural scenery, proud places of interest, famous celebrities at home and abroad, amazing local products, especially people who love and build their hometown. Please choose a scenic spot, things, people and events worth writing in your hometown and write a narrative. The topic can be "I love my hometown-"or "My hometown". Then, think about it, what makes us most worthy of loving, praising and writing "I love my hometown-"and "My hometown"?

Qing Dynasty: Ancient Yiyuan Garden, Fahua Pagoda, Confucius Temple and Qiuxiapu Park.

Native products-Nanxiang steamed buns, yellow grass weaving, Kyoho grapes, white garlic and bamboo carving.

Famous people-Qian Daxin, Qian Qichen and Lu.

Think about the order and key points of narration before you start writing. The composition should express the thoughts and feelings of loving hometown. Revise it after you finish it. )

Second, pay attention to observation and description methods.

1, describing the scenery from multiple angles

Observe things in order, because the order of observation is different with different states of things. When the things we observe are at rest, we can observe them according to the different characteristics of things, from the whole to the part and then to the whole, or in a certain orientation order, or in the order of different aspects of things. For example, "I Love Kyoho Grape in My Hometown" can show my love for Kyoho Grape from different aspects such as its shape, color and taste.

When the things we observe are developing and changing, that is, dynamic, we can observe them in the order of development and change, in the order of time change, or in the order of space change. For example, I love Gu Yiyuan in my hometown (or Fahua Pagoda, Confucius Temple and Qiuxiapu Park). The scenery of the ancient art garden in March in Yangchun will never be the same as that in autumn. Write down your love for Gu Yiyuan in chronological order.

We know that observation and thinking are inseparable. Only by observing attentively can we grasp the characteristics of the scenery. Only by learning to read and accumulate, constantly improving their language literacy, using various rhetorical devices and writing scenes from multiple angles can we write sincere articles.

2. Use various rhetorical methods.

I love my hometown-and my hometown. When we describe words with the characteristics of ××, we should not only write the characteristics of ××, but also pay attention to the feelings we like. In order to be more specific, vivid and infectious, various rhetorical methods can be used, such as metaphor, personification, parallelism, rhetorical questions and so on.

Like look! The howling northwest wind hurts like a knife in the face. However, Cedar was not conquered and intimidated by snow and ice. It still stands erect and holds its head high to meet severe tests again and again. From "I love the snow pine in my hometown"

3. Proper use of reasonable imagination and quoting folklore or proverbs can also achieve specific results.

Third, enjoy "I love the river in my hometown"

There is a river in front of my house. I remember when I was a child, my mother took me to the river to play. I pointed to the rushing water and asked curiously, "Mom, where did so much water go?" Mother smiled and said, "This is the Tuhe River, and the water flows eastward into the sea." Since then, the name "Tuhe" has been deeply imprinted in my mind.

I am like a small tree on the shore, growing up slowly with the flowing water of the river.

When spring came, I saw the ice and snow in the river melt, and the branches of weeping willows by the river spit out buds. Slowly, the pink peach blossoms also leaned out of the branches. Swallows fly from the south and fly freely on the clear water. After school, we will take part in this grand flower party and dance and sing on the beach covered with new green.

Summer is coming, and the scenery on both sides of the strait is more beautiful. The riverbank is shaded by trees, and the floodplain is full of fruits and vegetables. After school, we sometimes go swimming in the river. When you are tired of swimming, go to the melon garden to eat melons. Crispy melon with white skin and melon with flower skin are delicious. Sometimes we will help my mother wash clothes in the shade of trees on the shore until dusk to send away the heat of the day.

Autumn is coming, the fish and shrimp in the river are fat, and the apples on the shore are ripe. In autumn holidays, I always like to see orchards with my grandfather. Happy, I ran to the river to catch fish and touch shrimp. The river reflects a smiling face, and the autumn wind plays a harvest movement.

The river in winter is not lonely. Facing the snowflakes flying all over the sky, we went skating in the river again, which was very lively.

I love the river in my hometown, and I love her all year round. I love endless flowing water, I love the beautiful scenery on both sides of the strait, and I love that she moistens the fields on the shore with a trickle and brings people the joy of harvest. I wrote in my composition that I love the small river in my hometown-"Tuhe". The teacher removed the word "earth" in red ink and filled in "Tu Hai". Only then did I know that the real name of my favorite river was Tuhai River.

The student expressed his love for his hometown by describing the rivers in his hometown. How lovely is the river in my hometown? As the author himself said: I love the continuous flowing water, I love the beautiful scenery on both sides of the strait, and I love that she moistens the fields on the shore with a trickle and brings people the joy of harvest. This river is closely related to the lives of people in my hometown, especially children, so "I" picked up a pen to praise the river in my hometown. This is what we call "empathy". The author carefully observes the characteristics of the four seasons of this river, grasps the characteristics of this river in spring, summer, autumn and winter, and gives readers a perceptual understanding of this river. It is different from other rivers and only exists in my hometown. Clarity is also one of the characteristics of this composition. The author not only observed the characteristics and changes of rivers in the order of spring, summer, autumn and winter, but also paid attention to transition and care, which made the structure of the article more rigorous. The third section is the transition section, which uses a metaphor to write the relationship between "I" and the river, so that the article can transition from writing the name of the river to writing the characteristics of the four seasons of the river. The name of Xiaohe is mentioned at the beginning and end of the article, and the real name of Xiaohe is pointed out later, which shows that "I" have more and deeper understanding of this river in my hometown as I grow older. This writing not only takes care of the above, but also has profound implications and is thought-provoking.

Fourth, summary.

In short, we should write about the unique beauty of our hometown according to its historical sites, local products and celebrities, so as to express our deep and sincere love for our hometown. When writing, you must mainly describe the scenery or things or people in your hometown, and combine the characteristics of the scenery (things and people) with your own love and feelings.

I love collecting stamps, and I love my hometown even more.

Wu Meili

I have a beautiful stamp album called Mountains and Rivers in Fujian. The stamps in it are very beautiful!

Ah, opening all kinds of stamp albums is like visiting the magnificent mountains and rivers in my hometown. You see, the continuous mountains are flying, climbing Wuyi Mountain and seeing the strange peaks and rocks; You wear clouds and watch the sea of clouds and waves; You see, the Minjiang River Bridge looks like a colorful rainbow. "The first bridge in the world"-Anping Bridge is ancient and charming; What charming scenery the beautiful Sunlight Rock has: how many touching legends are hidden in the historic earth building in western Fujian; Nanjing Tulou is singing an ancient and beautiful song. ...

I like "Wuyishan" stamps best. Look, these 36 peaks have strange shapes, some are like flowers, some are like torches, some are like bamboo shoots, and some are like jade pillars ... The names of the peaks are more interesting. Yunv Mountain and Wang Feng ... The streams in Wuyishan are really quiet, as quiet as a mirror; The stream in Wuyishan is so clear that you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the stream, and the peaks and bamboos on both sides are reflected in the water, which is really like a water landscape painting!

Ah, nature, you are like a painter, with a magic pen in your hand, drawing such beautiful and magical scenery. No wonder the photographer made it an eternal memorial! I was attracted by this set of stamps, as if I were visiting them myself.

Opening the beautiful stamp album, I love my great hometown even more. Ah, dear hometown, you have magnificent mountains and rivers and a long culture. You are magnificent and full of vitality. Your talent makes my stamp album shine. I will use this beautiful stamp album to praise my beautiful and rich hometown!

Looking at this exquisite stamp album, I really want to shout: "I love stamp collecting and love my hometown more!" " "

"I love my hometown-"or "My hometown" composition teaching plan

Jin Lifang qiaocheng experimental school

Teaching objectives:

1, initially cultivate healthy aesthetic taste and love for hometown thoughts and feelings.

2, can use a variety of rhetorical methods, and can describe the scenery from multiple angles.

Preparation before class:

Ask students to collect information about places of interest, local products and celebrities in their hometown.

Teaching process:

First, reveal the topic.

Do you know your hometown? There must be many lovely places in your hometown, such as charming natural scenery, proud places of interest, famous celebrities at home and abroad, amazing local products, especially people who love and build their hometown. Please choose a scenic spot, things, people and events worth writing in your hometown and write a narrative. The topic can be "I love my hometown-"or "My hometown". Then, think about it, what makes us most worthy of loving, praising and writing "I love my hometown-"and "My hometown"?

Qing Dynasty: Ancient Yiyuan Garden, Fahua Pagoda, Confucius Temple and Qiuxiapu Park.

Native products-Nanxiang steamed buns, yellow grass weaving, Kyoho grapes, white garlic and bamboo carving.

Famous people-Qian Daxin, Qian Qichen and Lu.

Think about the order and key points of narration before you start writing. The composition should express the thoughts and feelings of loving hometown. Revise it after you finish it. )

Second, pay attention to observation and description methods.

1, describing the scenery from multiple angles

Observe things in order, because the order of observation is different with different states of things. When the things we observe are at rest, we can observe them according to the different characteristics of things, from the whole to the part and then to the whole, or in a certain orientation order, or in the order of different aspects of things. For example, "I Love Kyoho Grape in My Hometown" can show my love for Kyoho Grape from different aspects such as its shape, color and taste.

When the things we observe are developing and changing, that is, dynamic, we can observe them in the order of development and change, in the order of time change, or in the order of space change. For example, I love Gu Yiyuan in my hometown (or Fahua Pagoda, Confucius Temple and Qiuxiapu Park). The scenery of the ancient art garden in March in Yangchun will never be the same as that in autumn. Write down your love for Gu Yiyuan in chronological order.

We know that observation and thinking are inseparable. Only by observing attentively can we grasp the characteristics of the scenery. Only by learning to read and accumulate, constantly improving their language literacy, using various rhetorical devices and writing scenes from multiple angles can we write sincere articles.

2. Use various rhetorical methods.

I love my hometown-and my hometown. When we describe words with the characteristics of ××, we should not only write the characteristics of ××, but also pay attention to the feelings we like. In order to be more specific, vivid and infectious, various rhetorical methods can be used, such as metaphor, personification, parallelism, rhetorical questions and so on.

Like look! The howling northwest wind hurts like a knife in the face. However, Cedar was not conquered and intimidated by snow and ice. It still stands erect and holds its head high to meet severe tests again and again. From "I love the snow pine in my hometown"

3. Proper use of reasonable imagination and quoting folklore or proverbs can also achieve specific results.

Third, enjoy "I love the river in my hometown"

There is a river in front of my house. I remember when I was a child, my mother took me to the river to play. I pointed to the rushing water and asked curiously, "Mom, where is so much water flowing?" Mother smiled and said, "This is the Tuhe River, and the water flows eastward into the sea." Since then, the name "Tuhe" has been deeply imprinted in my mind.

I am like a small tree on the shore, growing up slowly with the flowing water of the river.

When spring came, I saw the ice and snow in the river melt, and the branches of weeping willows by the river spit out buds. Slowly, the pink peach blossoms also leaned out of the branches. Swallows fly from the south and fly freely on the clear water. After school, we will take part in this grand flower party and dance and sing on the beach covered with new green.

Summer is coming, and the scenery on both sides of the strait is more beautiful. The riverbank is shaded by trees, and the floodplain is full of fruits and vegetables. After school, we sometimes go swimming in the river. When you are tired of swimming, go to the melon garden to eat melons. Crispy melon with white skin and melon with flower skin are delicious. Sometimes we will help my mother wash clothes in the shade of trees on the shore until dusk to send away the heat of the day.

Autumn is coming, the fish and shrimp in the river are fat, and the apples on the shore are ripe. In autumn holidays, I always like to see orchards with my grandfather. Happy, I ran to the river to catch fish and touch shrimp. The river reflects a smiling face, and the autumn wind plays a harvest movement.

The river in winter is not lonely. Facing the snowflakes flying all over the sky, we went skating in the river again, which was very lively.

I love the river in my hometown, and I love her all year round. I love endless flowing water, I love the beautiful scenery on both sides of the strait, and I love that she moistens the fields on the shore with a trickle and brings people the joy of harvest. I wrote in my composition that I love the small river in my hometown-"Tuhe". The teacher removed the word "earth" in red ink and filled in "Tu Hai". Only then did I know that the real name of my favorite river was Tuhai River.

The student expressed his love for his hometown by describing the rivers in his hometown. How lovely is the river in my hometown? As the author himself said: I love the continuous flowing water, I love the beautiful scenery on both sides of the strait, and I love that she moistens the fields on the shore with a trickle and brings people the joy of harvest. This river is closely related to the lives of people in my hometown, especially children, so "I" picked up a pen to praise the river in my hometown. This is what we call "empathy". The author carefully observes the characteristics of the four seasons of this river, grasps the characteristics of this river in spring, summer, autumn and winter, and gives readers a perceptual understanding of this river. It is different from other rivers and only exists in my hometown. Clarity is also one of the characteristics of this composition. The author not only observed the characteristics and changes of rivers in the order of spring, summer, autumn and winter, but also paid attention to transition and care, which made the structure of the article more rigorous. The third section is the transition section, which uses a metaphor to write the relationship between "I" and the river, so that the article can transition from writing the name of the river to writing the characteristics of the four seasons of the river. The name of Xiaohe is mentioned at the beginning and end of the article, and the real name of Xiaohe is pointed out later, which shows that "I" have more and deeper understanding of this river in my hometown as I grow older. This writing not only takes care of the above, but also has profound implications and is thought-provoking.

Fourth, summary.

In short, we should write about the unique beauty of our hometown according to its historical sites, local products and celebrities, so as to express our deep and sincere love for our hometown. When writing, you must mainly describe the scenery or things or people in your hometown, and combine the characteristics of the scenery (things and people) with your own love and feelings.

I love collecting stamps, and I love my hometown even more.

Wu Meili

I have a beautiful stamp album called Mountains and Rivers in Fujian, and the stamps in it are very beautiful!

Ah, opening all kinds of stamp albums is like visiting the magnificent mountains and rivers in my hometown. You see, the continuous mountains are flying, climbing Wuyi Mountain and seeing the strange peaks and rocks; You wear clouds and watch the sea of clouds and waves; You see, the Minjiang River Bridge looks like a colorful rainbow. "The first bridge in the world"-Anping Bridge is ancient and charming; What charming scenery the beautiful Sunlight Rock has: how many touching legends are hidden in the historic earth building in western Fujian; Nanjing Tulou is singing an ancient and beautiful song. ...

I like "Wuyishan" stamps best. Look, these 36 peaks have strange shapes, some are like flowers, some are like torches, some are like bamboo shoots, and some are like jade pillars ... The names of the peaks are more interesting. Yunv Mountain and Wang Feng ... The streams in Wuyishan are really quiet, as quiet as a mirror; The stream in Wuyishan is so clear that you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the stream, and the peaks and bamboos on both sides are reflected in the water, which is really like a water landscape painting!

Ah, nature, you are like a painter, with a magic pen in your hand, drawing such beautiful and magical scenery. No wonder the photographer made it an eternal memorial! I was attracted by this set of stamps, as if I were visiting them myself.

Opening the beautiful stamp album, I love my great hometown even more. Ah, dear hometown, you have magnificent mountains and rivers and a long culture. You are magnificent and full of vitality. Your talent makes my stamp album shine. I will use this beautiful stamp album to praise my beautiful and rich hometown!

Looking at this exquisite stamp album, I really want to shout: "I love stamp collecting and love my hometown more!" " "