I am looking for three excellent essays for the High School Entrance Examination. One has beautiful language, another focuses on structure, and the third has a beautiful beginning and end.

Beautiful language

Flowing water flowing through my heart

I said that books are flowing water, flowing forever, flowing under the wheel of history, Flow to a brilliant tomorrow, a bright future...

Here I am, gently opening the title page of the book and slowly entering the world of books. As a result, the cool water of wisdom slowly flowed into my heart, giving me endless knowledge, spiritual support, emotional edification, and character enlightenment. I bathed in the flowing water, admiring every grass and flower in the book, every character with a unique life journey, every earth-shattering or ordinary thing...

I always thought that the Grand View Garden was a land of prosperous flowers and willows, a gentle and wealthy land, a fragrant, beautiful and desirable land of girls, but the book proved me wrong. The running water told me the truth with a common sound, so I finally knew the pain of the girl in the quiet Xiaoxiang Pavilion: the green lantern shone on the wall and the person was still awake, the cold rain knocked on the window and the quilt was not wet! Under the prosperous appearance of the Jia family, there are actually the pain of swallowing gold, the pain of jumping into a well, and the pessimism and despair of becoming a monk in youth! The book is like flowing water, and its splashing crystal water shows me the laughter and tears, love and resentment of youth.

When the eastern horizon reveals a red light, when the green Jialing River ripples, when the gorgeous clouds radiate thousands of rays of light, my heart cannot be calm, for the sky that has just broken. , for this dawn that was bought with blood... The flow of books flowed in my heart, and my heart was full of passion. I can't forget Sister Jiang's calmness and determination before she died, and I can't forget Xu Yunfeng's unyielding and unyielding spirit of enduring the pain and digging out the stone with his nails. Perseverance, I can't forget the red rock that Qi Xiaoxuan dyed red with blood... The book is like running water, and her empty waves tell me that today's happy life is hard-won.

In the cold windy morning, the water dragons spraying water, the long whips raised high, and the bullets flying over the heads, nothing can stop the pace of the patriots! The brave and fearless marchers shouted the voice of the entire Chinese nation! Their throats are hoarse, but their fiery hearts refuse to stop. They shouted with their lives: Drive away all those who trample on our land. Books are like flowing water, and her deep sound flowing through thousands of mountains explains to me the greatness of patriotism.

"Over the millennium, I observe the chaos of the world and the sea; I show my grand plans and ask who is in charge of the ups and downs of the vast land; I have thoughts and sing that the mountains and rivers are like picturesque and I aim for thousands of miles." Chairman Mao's poems have become an art. "On a frosty morning, the horses' hooves are deeply broken, and the trumpets are swallowing." "The frost on the trees and the sky are red, and the heavenly soldiers are angry in the sky"... The book is like flowing water, and her shocking words show me the wisdom of a generation of great people.

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Books are like running water, flowing forever, interpreting the true meaning of history. I would like to bathe in this water forever and let it flow through my heart...

Brief comment: The unique perspective of selecting materials and the gorgeous language of the article are the two highlights of this article. How to be original in selecting topics in topic composition without seeming to go off topic is probably the key point that many students consider. The author of this article takes "Books are flowing water" as the theme, and compares the rich emotional world displayed in books, which is either "earth-shaking" or "plain as water", with the "general", "light splashing", "surging" or "emptying" of flowing water. The characteristics of the book are cleverly combined. In just a few dozen minutes in the examination room, he not only fully demonstrated his rich reading accumulation, but also reflected his profound ideological conception and high-spirited and positive attitude towards life. This is worth learning from candidates.

Su Shi said: "When writing is small, it must be majestic and colorful...". The language of this article confirms this. The rhythmic combination of long and short language, the random parallelism, and the random allusions and poems all create a majestic atmosphere and add to the brilliant color of the article. The gorgeous language and grand temperament reflected in the article are presumably the key to winning the appreciation of the marking teacher.

Focus on structure:

Ordinary is also beautiful

A drop of water can reflect the brilliance of the sun, a flower can embellish the beauty of spring, and a screw can drive a machine operation. Although the world is prosperous, you can still find that ordinary things are actually beautiful.

An ordinary drop of water is very beautiful. In the vast sea of ??people, Hong Zhanhui is an ordinary drop of water. He is not a shining star, nor is he a rich man with a wealthy family. He is just an ordinary college student. He works to earn money, not to "promote the economic development of the motherland and achieve great rejuvenation", but just to support his family in trouble and make his sister's life better. An ordinary wish came true in an ordinary way, but he moved China. Hong Zhanhui's spirit of self-improvement and strong sense of responsibility are his beauty, and his actions reflect the glory of spiritual civilization. We are ordinary people, and we can also have that beauty - as long as we learn from Hong Zhanhui.

An ordinary flower is very beautiful. Many people like peonies because they are graceful, noble and elegant. And Tai Lihua made me discover: an ordinary flower is also beautiful. If ordinary people are ordinary people, then disabled people are even more ordinary among the ordinary. Tai Lihua is just a flower that has been unfairly treated by God. Without the blooming of that Spring Festival Gala, she would not be known at all. But her body is disabled and her will is strong, but her delicate arms dance with the most beautiful gestures in the world! I suddenly smelled the fragrance of life.

Tai Lihua’s strong will and the spirit of hard struggle are her beauty. What she embellishes is the beauty of spring in the soul. We are ordinary people, and we can also have that beauty - as long as we spread the inner fragrance like Tai Lihua.

An ordinary screw is very beautiful. The successful launch of Shenzhou-6 made the two heroic astronauts Nie Haisheng and Fei Junlong receive flowers and applause from everyone. Behind them, there is a group of scientific and technological workers who have taken root in the Gobi and dedicated themselves silently. Each of them is like a star. Screws work conscientiously in their positions, overcome technical difficulties one after another, work hard and are unassuming. This is their beauty. Their work drives the operation of aerospace machinery. We are ordinary people, and we can also have that beauty - as long as we do our part in a down-to-earth and silent manner.

Ordinaryness is not mediocrity, it is a character more worthy of respect than greatness. Isn’t ordinary beautiful? Let us be that drop of water, a flower, a screw, and bloom our most dazzling beauty in a silent place.

Beautiful beginning and ending

What I learned from life

Life moves at high speed in the magnetic field of life. After going through countless reincarnations of seasons, we young people have learned a lot. The four seasons play their own march of life on the natural stage. We are also growing up day by day, feeling the baptism of life in it.

Hundreds of flowers blooming - spring

The breeze gently brings spring. In this season, flowers are vying to bloom, the grass has just emerged from the ground, and the wickers have sprouted green buds. Is this a competitive season? Teachers often say that we are spring flowers, growing under the sunshine. In school and in life, we strive for grades and for different goals in our hearts. There is also fierce competition in study and life, just like competing to be the first flower to bloom in spring.

This is where I learned about competition.

Green grass - summer

After seeing the flowers blooming, I lowered my head to look at the green grass. In the storm that just passed, it did not lower its head, although the raindrops Still hanging on Xiaocao's head, trying hard to make it surrender, but Xiaocao still persisted and waited for the rescuer - the sun. It knows that when the sun meets again, it will no longer be oppressed by others. Can Xiaocao's tenacious spirit not move you? Do you also deeply feel the greatness of life?

Here, I learned to have hope and never give up.

Lots of fruits - autumn

Looking around, the golden fruits in the fields are waiting for the farmers to harvest. Are the farmers very happy at this moment? A year of hard work has paid off, not only a good harvest of food, but also a good harvest of spirit for me. Look at the farmers beaming with joy, with happy smiles on their faces, and Miss Qiu left behind her golden dress. Exited the stage.

Here, I learned that only hard work will reward you.

Wrapped in silver - winter

In the whistling wind, the snow fell gently to the ground. After a while, the earth was covered with snow-white gauze, so beautiful! I couldn't help but sigh. Is it for its purity? The snow falls gently, which reminds me of the Red Army's Long March and the eight-year war of resistance. How many revolutionary martyrs' blood has been spilled on this snow.

Here I learned not to forget history and cherish the present.

Stand on the stage of life, experience spring, summer, autumn and winter, and feel the passion and surge of life.