Ballpoint pen drawing for help ~

First of all, it is very good for the landlord to teach himself how to draw. Secondly, the so-called difference you see doesn't actually exist, and your face is well handled. In fact, there is no need to pursue the feminine effect of the so-called "Great God" too much, because your pictures are all from different sources, and yours must be the direct shot effect, but the original picture of "Great God" is very large, and what you see is a miniature version, so it seems that his paintings are exquisite, because you can't see the details clearly. It is also possible that his painting has been modified after scanning (slight PS or something). In addition, it is also possible that his ballpoint pen is better than yours. Don't laugh. According to the characteristics of ballpoint pen, the technical difference is far less than the hardware difference.

Finally, I want to say that there is no need for the landlord to entangle this matter. A good work should have its own theme and time. For example, the treatment of your painting, the face is meticulous and the body is slightly rough. A good work is one with emphasis, contrast and emphasis. Of course, other aspects of your painting need to be improved, such as the treatment of black, white and gray.