The writing language should be concise.

1. What can be regarded as language refinement in the composition? Language refinement 1. Carefully temper the words to be accurate and vivid.

Choosing the right expressive words is a good way to add color to the article. Pi Rixiu, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, said: "A hundred words are forged into words, and a thousand words are forged into sentences." If you use words well, you can achieve the effect that a word is round.

Generally speaking, verbs and adjectives are the most expressive. Here are a few examples to illustrate.

1. "Needless to say, green vegetable fields, smooth stone well fences, tall acacia trees and purple mulberry trees; Needless to say, cicadas sang in the leaves, fat wasps squatted on cauliflower, and the son of heaven suddenly rushed to the sky from the grass. " (Lu Xun's "From a Hundred Herbs Garden to the Moon in Santan") It makes people feel as if they are there, as if they are listening to their voices, as if they are there, with endless aftertaste and catchy words, such as flying pearls and splashing jade.

2. "Grandpa stood under the curved moon and watched his grandson go away." The grandfather in the article is like a sculpture, and the old and affectionate image is vividly on the paper.

3. "He, a quasi-gifted student in the teacher's eyes." The word "quasi" highlights the position of "he" in the teacher's mind, with endless words and endless meanings.

4. "The image of our great motherland appeared in the movie in my mind for the first time." "Photosensitive" is a photographic term, which means that the motherland has been installed in my heart, but it is much better than direct publicity.

5. "The low sky is pressing on my chest, and gloom and depression are tearing at my heart." "Tearing" expresses depression, helplessness, loss and pain, as if my heart is torn by deep red blood. "Pressure", "gloom" and "depression" are used accurately and vividly, and depression is brought to the extreme.

6. "The eyes of bitterness condensed into lines and woven into nets, which caught the footsteps of the class teacher." Write the invisible vision tangible, vivid and unique.

2. Clever use of rhetoric, and strive for vivid images. Rhetoric, if used well, can turn abstraction into concreteness, boredom into vividness, decadence into magic, and enhance the expressive force and image of composition language.

Take Fortress Besieged as an example to understand how Qian Zhongshu used figurative rhetoric to add color to the article. 1. "She only wears a crimson tube top, sea blue sensual shorts, and red nails are exposed in leaking blank leather shoes ... Some people call her' deli' because only deli will publicly display those warm meats; Some people call her' truth' because it is said that' truth is naked' and Miss Bao is not naked, so it is revised to' partial truth'. "

In the sentence, "Deli" is vulgar and "partial truth" is elegant. It is amazing to apply this metaphor to Miss Bao who thinks she is elegant but frivolous and vulgar. 2. "Miss Tang's charming round face has two shallow dimples, and she is born with a good face that women have to spend money and time to adjust their fat and powder to imitate. It's so fresh that people forget their thirst and feel greedy. It seems to be a good fruit.

Her eyes are small, but flexible and gentle, which makes many women's big eyes like politicians' big words. "Not only wrote the beauty of Tang Xiaofu, but also used" politician's big talk "to describe those women with big eyes and no god, which is a unique feature that others can hardly think of.

Only when Fang Hung-chien was attacked by his father-in-law did he realize the importance of diploma. The author commented: "This diploma seems to have the function of the leaf in Adam and Eve's lower body, which can cover up ugliness and shame. A small piece of paper can cover up a person's emptiness, ignorance and stupidity. " It can be described as ironic and spicy, hitting the nail on the head.

4. "Miss Su just came out and smiled coldly, just like holding hands on a cold snowy day." "Hung-chien wanted to be more affectionate when we broke up last year. Holding her hand today is like holding cold-blooded chicken wings." She vividly wrote Miss Su's narrow, dark, romantic and jealous personality.

This metaphor can be seen everywhere in Fortress Besieged. As long as you try to understand it with your heart, you will be amazed at the vividness and maturity of the author's metaphor and gain benefits from using the language. Let's look at a few more examples.

1. "On the winding lotus pond, the leaves of Tian Tian are expected. The leaves are high above the water, like slender skirts. In the middle of the leaves, some white flowers are dotted sporadically, some bloom gracefully and some bloom shyly, just like pearls and stars in the blue sky.

The breeze blew, sending wisps of fragrance, like a faint song on a tall building in the distance. At this time, the leaves and flowers trembled slightly, and like lightning, they spread to the other side of the lotus pond. "(Zhu Ziqing's Moonlight on the Lotus Pond) The proper use of metaphor, personification, synaesthesia and other rhetorical devices has written the dynamic beauty, pure beauty and the harmonious unity of smell, hearing and vision of the lotus leaf.

2. "The setting sun is like blood, like a knight in a red hat." "The sunset glow falls on the horizon, like a red silk, calling from the ancient bagpipes." This is a metaphor used to write flying murals, which is consistent with the scene and perfectly coordinated.

3. "In the winter vacation of grade three, I was fascinated by web design. I stayed up all night. It can be said that I was possessed, and my mother was furious and ordered to turn off the computer. " Citing martial arts terms and modern neologisms, the sentences are lively and playful.

4. "Books are piled up like mountains; The schoolbag is getting heavier every day; Glasses, ring thickness. Very heavy, very heavy, very heavy. "

Concise language, parallelism and repeated schoolwork overload are presented to us, concise and to the point. "Yellow weeds are swaying on the earth, just like drunkards who are drunk with liqueur."

Vivid and full of life. 6. "If the fog on the wall blocks the front of the car, there is a feeling that there is no way to escape. The front of the car collided with the fog quickly, and the sound of the collision could almost be heard.

I think we are crawling in a huge cocoon. "Metaphor is novel and exaggerated, but who can say it's not true? 3. Create original one-liners and try to be subtle and funny.

According to your own feelings, when you write a composition, you will have a flash of inspiration and write a unique and novel language, which will not only add color to the article, but also make readers admire your uniqueness. Look at the following sentences, which may inspire you.

1. The word "senior three" is very heavy, which I think is heavier than "mountain". To tell the truth, the head teacher is really dark, and I believe he won't lose to Bao Gong after soaking in bleach for a few days.

The head teacher's altitude is not high, and the distance from his head to the ground is 1. 6452926 meters.

3. The sky is drunk and red. Clouds are messengers of the sky. They pull the wind to sober up, but let the water ripple. 4。

2. An 800-word composition that narrates that life is wealth. It needs refined language and rich content. Flowers are delicate and ephemeral. Even if they are enclosed for shelter from the wind and rain, they will still wither because they love the sun. Life is fragile, but even if it is short, we should pursue our dreams and shine like flowers. Inscription: Before the HarmonyOS system was opened, the universe was vast, and billions of years passed like smoke. When the air is filled and the dusty filth is taken away, the world finally shows its aura. Time flies, thousands of years have passed in the chanting of literati and the rule of kings everywhere. Those magnificent palaces, those mighty heroes in troubled times, were instantly submerged by the torrent of history and disappeared without a trace. Only some humble bubbles silently cried that they had existed and had all experienced it. Even if there are many servants and wives in the aristocratic life, if only a mediocre person lives a lifetime, an empty heart will certainly not feel happy. God didn't give us much, but a life is the most precious wealth in the world. If there is no life, then the world is meaningless. Life is a process. Sadly, it cannot be repeated. Fortunately, there is no need to repeat, so you can't expect a second life. Is it omnipotent money? Or the power to overthrow the world? I used to think hard. Walking in autumn, I suddenly saw yellow leaves flying in the air like butterflies. It turns out that the real wealth is life. With life, the earth becomes colorful, and we can visit famous mountains and rivers and enjoy the beautiful scenery on earth. Suddenly, I couldn't help shivering with excitement. God is fair. He gave everyone the most precious thing. Just look at how we treat it and how we use it. Hiraji once said: "Life is precious, because it is limited ... because it is limited, we will make unremitting efforts ..." Since I was born in the world, I should cherish everything that God has given me, work hard, and at least look back on my life when my hair is gray, and there will be no regrets. Not to be famous all over the world, not to be immortal, but to live a clean life. ..

3. The composition titled My Chinese Dream should be like this: defeated, poor, strong, stubborn and proud.

Confucius is called a saint by later generations, but in my opinion, he is a dreamer who knows what he can't do but does it. In the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, the ceremony collapsed and the music was bad, the morality was out of order, the war was raging, and there was no way in the world. Confucius, on the other hand, ran around with compassion and restored "rule by courtesy." In order to realize his ideas, he traveled around the world, opened a museum to teach his disciples, was stuck in difficulties but unyielding, refused to be laughed at, and sat on the bench with no regrets. Chu's sarcastic remonstrance, ridicule of falling in love and drowning, and rejection of Mohist masters have never shaken him. "The gentleman's officer, also do its righteousness. If the Tao is not good, you will know it. " He is like this, knowing that times are difficult and it is impossible to realize his ambition, he still has to lobby around and try his best to help him. Although it was as heavy as a lost dog at that time, it shone like the sun and moon in history.

In the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, a dream that takes the world as its own responsibility and dares to take responsibility is not only his, but also mine. The dream-chasing spirit of "knowing what not to do" inspires me to make unremitting efforts for my ideal. Even if I fail, what are my sorrows and regrets? Go forward bravely in failure, and you can go to the light!

The Chinese dream should be like this, successful, transcendent and exquisite. Mo Yan, who was in his thirties in the 1980s, was full of ambition. His work "Red Sorghum" was adapted into a film of the same name and won many awards, including the Golden Bear Award at the Berlin Film Festival. However, he didn't get carried away. On the contrary, he used more patience to explore people around him and record stories around him. After a year's accumulation, he completed more than ten novels such as Sandalwood Punishment and Frog, and won the Nobel Prize in Literature in 20 12. After winning the prize, he modestly said that I was just a storyteller.

Success, not getting carried away, success, not being proud of the world, this is what Mo Yan did, this is my dream. After climbing the peak, it is not spring breeze, but modesty and practicality; Not to stop, but to spur the horse, all the way forward, endless.

The Chinese dream should be like this, and it is not surprising to be humiliated. It is familiar with the years and months, the unyielding snow and the indifferent bluegrass, just for the green hills. Holding my Chinese dream, I don't care about things, I don't care about myself, I walk proudly with the wind!

4. The requirement is about 500 words in primary school composition, and the language should be concise and there should be no nonsense. Every word these days, my mother is ill and lying at home. Every time my father went out, he repeatedly told me to take good care of my mother and help her with housework. On this day, I was playing computer games online, and when I was fascinated, my mother woke up and said to me, "Son, my mother is very uncomfortable." You cook for yourself. " "It's okay! All right! I'll go. " I said impatiently. But I can't take my eyes off the computer. Gradually, I forgot what my mother told me ... After a long time, I turned around. Where did my mother go? I came to the living room, and my mother was lying on the sofa. The mop fell to the ground and was half wet. I seem to understand something. My heart ached, and I didn't know what to do or say. I stood there staring at my mother's tired face ... a few minutes later, I covered my mother with a quilt. At this moment, I heard a clear metal collision, and my heart jumped. How to sleep here? "Mom nodded. My father turned to me and asked, "Did you help my mother? "I looked down, my face was red, and I was ashamed. My mother took it: "He is very good and helped me do a lot of things!" " "Dad touched my head and smiled. This surprised me. I never thought my mother would say that. Maybe my mother is afraid that my strict father will criticize me? But I really didn't do housework! Should I confess to my father or let my mother hide it? I really don't know what to do ... because of this matter, I have been reflecting for several days. My mother worked hard to raise me from a child alone. Now that I have grown up, I can do something for my mother, and I should take the initiative to do it. Touch is an invisible thing, invisible to the naked eye, only to feel with your heart.