How to write a tourism English composition?

The English composition is as follows.

English:

For me, the meaning of traveling is to relax. People should know how to work hard and how to relax.

Another meaning of traveling is to enrich your life. Isn't it boring to stay at home for a long time? People should go outdoors more and see more new things to enrich their lives, so that the pace of life can get a break. ?

Moreover, when you go outdoors, you will find new things, you may meet friends in different fields, or you may find interesting things that you have never heard of before. This is really a great enjoyment for myself.

Chinese:

For me, the meaning of traveling is to relax. People should know how to work hard and how to relax.

Another meaning of traveling is to enrich your life. Isn't it boring to stay at home for a long time? People should go outdoors more and see some new things to enrich their lives and give the rhythm of life a break.

Moreover, if you walk outdoors, you will find new things, meet friends in different fields, or find interesting things that you have never heard of before, which is really a great enjoyment for yourself.