The composition of my first trip

Thinking of writing: time, place, person, cause, process and result of things.

There are many things in life, such as going to school for the first time, doing homework for the first time, singing for the first time, playing the piano for the first time, cooking for the first time and so on. I have had many firsts, but one of them is something I can't forget.

20 12 during the may day holiday, my father said that he would take us to travel, which made me very happy. Just waiting for my uncle to come and travel with us.

When my uncle came, we got in my uncle's car and set foot on the road of travel. So everyone decided to travel to Kongtong Mountain in Gansu. We saw the junction of Gansu and Ningxia, where sentries stood guard in case someone did something bad.

When we arrived at Kongtong Mountain, my father first led us to eat the famous local handmade noodles with sour soup. Oh, it is delicious. Noodles are thin and long, and soup is sour and spicy. After eating, we came to the scenic spot. It's really beautiful, with fresh air, surrounded by mountains and rippling blue waves.

Dad took us to the cable car, and I looked down, but I was scared. My mother encouraged me, and I slowly put my head out, but I shrank back. Everyone next to him said, "This little girl is so timid that she is scared by such a high vision."

So, I said to myself in my heart, "Come on, you can do it!" " "I looked down again, although it was still a little high, but the beautiful scenery attracted me.

This time, I finally overcame my fear of heights. In the middle of the lake, the lake below is like a clear mirror, just like being in a fairyland.

Although the first experience was thrilling, it also honed my will.

Extended data

Composition writing skills

1, accumulation of writing materials

It runs through the whole rapid composition training, but it should be emphasized in the basic training stage. A clever woman can't cook without rice. Without writing materials, it is difficult for a good writer to finish writing an article. Therefore, students must be required to memorize by topic; Some typical materials, such as patriotism, party leadership, respect for knowledge, reform and opening up, building a clean government, learning from Lei Feng, etc. Every aspect should be remembered.

2. Enrich the writing language

Writing language training and vocabulary accumulation are very important. One of the ways to enrich writing language is to recite and strengthen extracurricular reading. The more books you read and learn by heart, the smoother your composition will be, the more literary your language will be, and you won't always talk.