College entrance examination composition: thinking analysis and model essay 20

20. Read the following materials and write as required.

Entering the tourist season, some prestigious scenic spots do the opposite and close their doors to thank guests. Hoh Xil, the source of the Yellow River, Gangshika Snow Mountain, Bird Island in Qinghai Lake ... Every tourist season, tourists come in droves, which brings great ecological pressure to these scenic spots dominated by natural resources, especially some tourists lack ecological awareness and the quality of civilized tourism is not high. It is believed that the "thank you order" issued by the scenic spot will bring economic "loss", but it can effectively maintain the local natural landscape.

What do you think of this? Please consider the current situation and write a composition of not less than 800 words.

Requirements: choose a good angle, define the concept, define the style, and draw up your own topic; Don't copy, don't copy.

Intention analysis

This topic examines writing ability, which is a task-driven material composition and reflects the relationship between current social development and environment. In the tourist season, some scenic spots issue "guest restriction orders", which will cause certain economic losses, but compared with the "ecological losses" brought to local natural environment resources, it is insignificant. The "thank you order" is not only an alarm for the destruction of the natural environment, but also an opportunity for the improvement of the natural environment. Therefore, when writing this topic, we can organize the writing content around the relationship between environment and development and express our understanding of reality. When thinking, we can think from the following angles: ① Tourism should be civilized. Travel is a fashion. In the era of mass tourism, many scenic spots have become places that tourists yearn for. However, due to the lack of environmental awareness and low civilization quality of individual tourists, the local natural ecological environment has been destroyed, and the scenic spot issued a "thank you order", which is worthy of recognition. ② Development and environment. In the era of market economy, many problems really need to consider economic value. But if there is a contradiction between development and environment, it is necessary to analyze it objectively. The "Xie Keling" in the scenic spot will certainly bring a lot of economic losses to the scenic spot and the local government, but if it is not done, it will bring greater ecological losses to the local natural environment, which is irreparable. ③ Opportunities and alarms. For the natural environment of the scenic spot, the release of the "thank you order" is an opportunity to repair the "face value". What is the experience of the scenic spot? For camp managers and tourists, the release of the "thank you order" is a wake-up call for some tourists' lack of awareness of ecological protection, which leads to the destruction of the ecological environment.

Methods the finishing touch

The basic framework of task-driven composition has the following five parts. (1) a loud title. It is based on the examination of the topic, clear thinking, choose the writing angle, and draw up an eye-catching topic. Try to extract this topic from the material? The core idea, and select the key words in the material to combine into a concise phrase or sentence. Try to replace attitude with opinions or opinions. It is better to use the established words to transform. It's better to be unconventional. (2) Quote+statement+opinion. The first paragraph of the text adopts the form of "quotation+statement+opinion" to achieve the effect of "debut". Citation can be direct or indirect, but it must be targeted. The position must be firm, decisive and clear. Don't procrastinate, but get to the point. (3) Explain the reasons at different levels. It is untenable to have an attitude and an opinion without reason. Therefore, the third step of the composition must explain your reasons. Elaboration must be organized, that is, divided; Also pay attention to the hierarchy of content, such as from shallow to deep, from surface to inside, from concrete to abstract. Only in this way can we show the depth and breadth of a student's thinking. (4) further elaboration. The most basic way is to put forward a feasible and meaningful solution to the problem, that is, to solve the problem. In addition, you can also "horizontally expand" and "vertically dig" and simply refute. In particular, refutation can presuppose the opposing party first, and then persuade it euphemistically, which reflects the thoroughness of the author's thinking and meets the requirements of "civilized reasoning" in task-based composition. (5) Connecting with practice and completing it quickly. Any article should consider its practical significance. If there is no practical significance, the article will be much inferior. Therefore, it is necessary for students to combine exercises with compositions in the examination room. But this link should not be too mother-in-law, and it should come to an abrupt end like the end of a piece of music.

Selected readings of model essays

The purpose of "thanking guests" in scenic spots is to better "welcome guests".

Entering the tourist season, some prestigious scenic spots do the opposite and close their doors. What are their intentions? Some commentators pointed out that it may not be difficult to find the answer by looking at the names of these "Xie Ke" scenic spots. Hoh Xil, the source of the Yellow River, Gangshika Snow Mountain and Bird Island in Qinghai Lake are almost all scenic spots famous for their natural resources. Among them, Hoh Xil is called "the last pure land of mankind", and Qinghai Lake ranks first among the "five most beautiful lakes in China". These gold-lettered signboards affixed to them by the outside world have become the best advertisements for them to attract tourists, but at the same time, they have also brought the objective consequences of overwhelming fame.

Indeed, in recent years, with the rapid increase of national tourism demand, tourist hotspots continue to operate at a high level, and the reception volume of some scenic spots exceeds the approved maximum carrying capacity, which not only causes great pressure on the surrounding areas of the scenic spots, but also leads to traffic jams in front of the scenic spots in the tourist season, difficulties in parking, eating and staying around the scenic spots in the tourist season, and even brings irreparable "ecological losses" to the internal management of the scenic spots and the natural environmental resources of the scenic spots, so that some people have no choice but to appeal, "Don't let eco-tourism be destroyed. Therefore, by issuing a "thank you order", tourists are temporarily or permanently refused to enter the scenic spot, precisely to let the scenic spot ecology have a proper rest and slowly recover its "vitality" after being overloaded with "work".

In this regard, Huangshan Scenic Area has long been a mature exploration. "Five Mountains come back without looking at the mountains, and Huangshan comes back without looking at the mountains". As a scenic spot with three laurels of world cultural heritage, world natural heritage and world geological park, Huangshan Mountain is a good place for people to visit and enjoy with lush vegetation, rugged rocks and numerous historical sites. However, from1June 1987 to1June 1987, Huangshan Scenic Area insisted on the regular closure of major scenic spots for 30 years, making the scenic spots of Huangshan always beautiful and dazzling.

In fact, the "thank you" in the scenic spot is just to better "welcome guests". The experience of Huangshan scenic spot can confirm this point, which has brought rich returns to Huangshan. At present, the air quality standard, surface water environmental quality index and regional environmental noise quality index of Huangshan Scenic Area have reached or exceeded the national first-class standards. For some important scenic spots, tourists certainly have some regrets, but they are not incomprehensible. After all, no one wants to see the scenic spots dry up, the larger foe, and the great rivers and mountains buried in the hands of our generation. Many tourists said that as long as the scenic spots can survive well, this regret can be made up next time.

Scenic spots, like people, also have "fatigue phenomenon", and the practice of Huangshan Mountain should attract more scenic spots. If the scenic spot wants to develop in the long run, it is necessary to adhere to the concept of ecology first and effectively protect the balance and stability of the ecosystem by means of "thanking guests" or "resting". Of course, tourists should also consciously improve the quality of civilized tourism, strengthen the awareness of ecological protection, be kind to ecology, and let eco-tourism have a sustainable future! Only when everyone takes action can we protect our ecological environment and promote the sustainable development of tourism.

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