A 60-word English composition for a one-day tour in Shanghai

Last Sunday. I went to Shanghai with my father. We went down the mountain in the morning. I saw wooded mountains and wild flowers in full bloom. We climbed up the mountain along the mountain road. Halfway up the hill, I felt a little tired. It began to rain, and my silk umbrella in Xihu was leaking. Dad said to me, "Li Yang, don't give up halfway." Finally, I insisted on reaching the top of the mountain, and the scenery on the top of the mountain was so beautiful. We are flying kites. Finally, we went home. Finally, I have kept this umbrella ever since. I'm very happy.