Incorrect related words in sick sentences

To modify an ill-chosen sentence means to modify an ill-chosen sentence so that it does not change its original intention and the sentence is more fluent. What are the mistakes of related words in sick sentences? The following are the mistakes of related words in sick sentences that I sorted out. Welcome to read

1. Improper collocation

1. Cadres and the masses, without exception, must abide by the socialist legal system.

　(? And? Should be changed to? Or? )

2. No matter the climatic conditions or geographical environment were extremely unfavorable, the climbers still overcame the difficulties and climbed to the top successfully.

(should be changed to? Although? )

3. After analyzing some educational policies, it is very necessary to think about the deep-seated problems of education.

(should be changed to? Further? )

4. At the party, the actors of the Radio Art Troupe enthusiastically praised the hard-working sanitation workers, and their programs were praised by the audience from creation to performance.

　(? From? Arrive? Should be changed to? Yes? Or? )

4. On March 17th, six members were expelled from the Olympic Committee because of the bribery scandal. The next day, the world's major newspapers made detailed reports on this event that shocked the international sports world. (should be changed to? For? )

2. Improper position

1. If there is something wrong with the ideas in a work, even if the words are very good, it is unacceptable.

　(? Even if? Should be moved to? Words? Before. )

2. If he can't be realistic, his career will suffer.

　(? Him? Should be moved to? What if? Behind it. When two clauses have the same subject, the related words are behind the subject; When the subject is different, the related words are in front of the subject. )

3. If there is something wrong with a work, even if the writing is very good, it is unacceptable.

(put "even if" before "words". )

4. The related words are not in the right position

The first correct format is: Subject A related words? (subject a) related words?

the second correct format is: subject a of related words? Related word subject b?

○ If there is something wrong with the ideas in a work, then even if the writing is very good, it is unacceptable. (? It's also bad, right? The subject of? This work? Omitted,? Even if? Should be moved to? Writing? Before. )

○ The students admire Miss Wang very much, because she not only speaks well in class, but also has noble moral character and versatility. (? Not only does she speak well in class, but she is also virtuous and versatile. ? This is a simple sentence with a complex sentence as the predicate. )

○ This kind of teaching has not only enabled students to review the old lessons, but also learned new knowledge, and achieved good results. (? Even students? Change to? Make students both? . If he can't be realistic, his career will suffer. (The subjects of the two clauses are the same, and the related words should be placed after the subject; Subjects are inconsistent, and related words should be placed before the subject. This sentence? Him? Should be moved to? What if? (later)

Third, the contents of the sub-bureau are illogical

1. Both cadres and the masses, without exception, must abide by the socialist legal system.

　? No matter? It's a conjunction, indicating a conditional relationship. When used to exclude all conditions or conditions within a certain range to form a sentence expressing conditional relations, it is often followed by? How about it? 、? How's that? 、? What? 、? Who? Wait, it means all around, and then with? Both? 、? Always? Yes? 、? Also? 、? Or? Wait for the related words to echo. When excluding conditions within two or more ranges, when? No matter? There should be a parallel item after it, and a choice conjunction is often used between items. Or? 、? Or? 、? Or? Connect.

of course, in this sentence? Without exception? With? Whether there are repeated language diseases.

2. Because the adaptors didn't understand the essence of the original well, they left their subjective imagination and added many inappropriate plots, which greatly weakened the ideological content of the original.

in this sentence? Instead? Wrong use, should be? Thus? . Because the reasons are discussed before, and the results are discussed later.

It must be pointed out that the current flood of review materials for primary and secondary school students not only leads to a vicious circle of time-consuming, inefficient and poor quality, but also seriously interferes with the normal teaching order and increases students' academic and economic burden.

(switch the contents after \ "not only \" \ "but also \". )

abuse of related words

1. Because of the enthusiastic support of manufacturers, this trade fair can be held smoothly.

what is the meaning of this sentence? Because? And? Because? The meaning is the same, so one of them can be deleted.

this sentence can be changed to: because of the enthusiastic support of manufacturers, this trade fair can be held smoothly.

2. In the past year, the company's performance increased substantially, but ABC products won the "Annual Sales Award".

　? But? Used to express a turning point, but this sentence has no turning point, so it should be deleted? But? .

this sentence can be changed to: in the past year, the company's performance has increased substantially, and ABC products have won the honor of "annual sales award".

3. He didn't talk to the teacher himself, but asked me to.

is a transitional relationship, not a progressive relationship. Abuse? And? , which makes the semantic expression unclear, should be? And? Change to? But? .

2

1. The Chinese performance of Class 5, Grade 9 is the best in the whole school. (Improper collocation: the main achievement is the class, and "one class" is removed)

2. Various localities have taken measures such as tracing the source of the disease and isolating observation to prevent the spread of influenza A (H1N1). (Improper collocation: removing "no longer" or "no", or changing "no longer" into "continue")

3. Due to the use of scientific review methods, his learning efficiency has been greatly improved. (Improper collocation: improper efficiency and improvement, change efficiency to improvement)

4. This year will be the 14th military parade in New China and the first since the new century. (Improper collocation: add "military parade" after "this year" or change "yes" to "hold")

5. Eating lobster for bronchitis and allergic rhinitis will lead to the aggravation of the disease. (Improper collocation: subject and predicate. Add "patient" after "allergic rhinitis")

6. With the re-excavation of Qin Terracotta Warriors after 24 years of silence, it has attracted the attention of domestic and foreign media. (Incomplete composition: lack of subject, delete "with")

7. At this World Table Tennis Championships, the athletes won the men's team break championship again through hard work. (Incomplete composition: lack of subject, delete "after" and ")

8. This nine-year boarding school has more than 15 students who suffered the least casualties in the earthquake and resumed classes the earliest after the earthquake. (improper collocation: subject and object "students are schools")

9. These activities, which are deeply loved by students, have enhanced and cultivated students' sense of ownership. (Improper collocation: consciousness cannot be cultivated, so "harmony cultivation" should be deleted)

1. The improvement of academic performance mainly depends on whether students work hard. (face both sides: should delete "whether")

11. We sincerely thank our teachers for their silent efforts over the years. (semantic repetition: "sincerely" and "in my heart" are repeated)

Recently, penalties for drunk driving have been increased all over the country in order to avoid those appalling traffic accidents from happening again. (Multiple negations lead to semantic confusion: the word "no longer" should be changed to "again")

13. In the review of the senior high school entrance examination, many students are not focused on the review, and the time schedule is unreasonable. Some even remember the previous knowledge and forget the later knowledge. (Incomplete composition: lack of object head word, should add "phenomenon" after "unreasonable")

14. In this coal mine accident, Chuangsuohu was the only survivor among the miners who died. (Inconsistency:)

15. March is the best season of the year, and a large number of Chinese and foreign tourists will come here at this time. (It should be changed to "March in Kunming")

16. All localities and departments regard improving, safeguarding and attaching importance to people's livelihood as the foothold and starting point of all their work. (word order is reversed)

17. Effectively reducing the burden on farmers is the key to building a new socialist countryside. (One side and two sides are not properly matched)

18. The reason why Fuzhou won the "National Health City" is the result of the concerted efforts of the people of the whole city. (Redundant ingredients: delete "reasons")

19. By carrying out dragon boat races and making dumplings, Qu Yuan's patriotic spirit can be passed down from generation to generation. (lack of subject: delete "pass")

2. Whether a person has a healthy body or not depends on persistent participation in physical exercise. (One side is not properly matched with both sides)

21. Due to the successful return of the unmanned Shenzhou spacecraft No.1 to No.4, China has joined the ranks of space development powers, which is also a sign of the growing strength of China. (lack of subject: delete "due to")

22. The high-speed maglev train is completely out of contact with the track when running. It has no wheels and transmission mechanism, and the suspension, guidance, driving and braking of the train are realized by electromagnetic force. According to the data, the tail feathers of long-tailed chickens growing in the wild can grow by about one meter every year, while the life span of long-tailed chickens can be eight to ten years, so the longest tail feathers can exceed seven meters. (Improper collocation: the life span of "should be deleted")

24. Some experts believe that the frequent occurrence of environmental incidents is mainly due to the fact that some local governments simply rely on scale investment to obtain economic growth rate, which makes resource consumption amazing and environmental pollution increasingly serious. (Redundant components: "frequent" or "frequent" should be deleted)

25. According to the old man's later recollection, in addition to the 3, yuan just taken from the bank, there are other documents such as UnionPay cards, ID cards and mobile phones in the bag. (logical error: mobile phone is not a certificate)

26. Our school's fund-raising activity for Sichuan disaster area has received positive responses from many school teachers and classmates, and raised more than 3, yuan in less than one day. (ambiguity: "many school teachers and classmates")

27. The language of writing articles should be concise, and all unnecessary wordy words must be deleted. (redundant components: "unnecessary" and "verbose")

28. In learning, we should solve and find out the existing problems in time. (improper word order: "solve" and "discover")

29. The activities of using ethanol gasoline by motor vehicles have made the air in Baise City cleaner. (incomplete composition: lack of subject)

3. Some parents spoil their children too much, which makes many students lack self-control and compare with each other in life. (Semantic repetition: Ill-chosen words are commonly used, including "current" and "urgent", "ten" and "cool", "ten" and "disparity", "prevention" and "no", "worrying", "excessive" and "flattering". (Improper collocation: the verb-object "cultivates" the "ability" rather than the "level")

32. I grew up in a drama family, and Henan Opera is no stranger to me. (improper word order: "I" is the subject)

33. After technological innovation, the cost of the material factory has doubled, while the output value has increased by 1%. (Incorrect collocation: "falling" and "doubling" are improper and should be changed to "5%")

34. There are two ill sentences in the following paragraph, please find out and modify them.

(1) The recent drought in southwest China is mainly due to the destruction of atmospheric activities by high-pressure dams. (2) The high-pressure dam, like a dry wall, crosses over the southern part of Guangxi, preventing the Pacific water vapor from advancing westward. (3) Although there is cold air going south in the north, it can't merge with water vapor. (4) Therefore, there has been no rain for a long time in the intersection of Guangxi, Guizhou and Yunnan, and it has suffered from the rare dry weather in the past 5 years.

in the first sentence, suggestions for revision: delete the redundancy of "because" and repeat the third sentence with "main reason". Suggestions for revision: change "although" to "even" or "even" to "but" the related words are wrong.

35. There are three sentences in the following paragraph, each with a linguistic defect.

(1) In order to create a better medical environment for the people, the Ministry of Health is going to promote the service mode of "diagnosis before settlement" throughout the country. (2) The so-called "settlement after diagnosis and treatment" means that patients pay the deposit first when they are in outpatient clinic, and then go to the checkout after all the diagnosis and treatment. (3) Implementing the service mode of "diagnosis first and settlement later" can save about 2% of patients' visit time.

(1) replace "founding" with "creating"; (2) put "unification" before "checkout"; (3) delete "above" or delete "about"

36. The underlined parts in the following paragraphs are all ill-chosen, and suggestions for revision are put forward respectively.

April 2th (1) Nearly a thousand representatives from the financial and insurance system of our city and some schools listened carefully to the heroic deeds report of Xiong Dayong, a martyr who fought against ice disaster, at Yiyang Grand Theatre. Xiong Dayong was a surveyor of Zhuzhou Central Branch of Pacific Insurance before his death, and he died in the line of duty on January 16 this year while handling the accident of claim settlement. (2) The provincial party committee and government ratified him as the honorary title of "model of anti-ice disaster relief in Hunan Province" and "martyr". (3) Hearing the reports made by the colleagues and relatives of the martyr Xiong Dayong, the participants were deeply moved. Everyone said that they should follow Xiong Dayong's example, be willing to contribute and be brave in taking responsibility.

(1) remove "near" or "redundant"; (2) change "ratification" to "posthumous award" and remove "for"; (3) remove "heard" or "made"

37. There are two ill sentences in the following paragraph, please find them and correct them.

(1) Ten provinces, municipalities and autonomous regions in China will try to add Peking Opera content to music courses this year. (2) Jiangsu Province is one of the pilot provinces, and Beijing Opera classes are offered in 2 primary and secondary schools in 8 cities along the Yangtze River. (3) In addition, indoctrination will encourage all regions to introduce local operas into teaching. (4) This is conducive to students' awareness of learning national culture.

in the second sentence, change "start" into "open"

in the fourth sentence, change: add "cultivate" after "benefit"

38. Her rosy face is like a pear in full bloom. (Incorrect metaphor: "pear flower" means "rosy face")

39. Happy streams are singing crisp songs.