It is really cold today. How to write sentences vividly and concretely?

1, the weather is really cold, and the cold wind is ruthless. A person's face hurts like a knife, as if it could be frozen in one breath. People outside are shivering, some wrapped in cotton-padded jackets, some rubbing their hands, some shrinking their necks ... The weather is very bad, the road is dusty, the sky is gray and gloomy, and there is no life. Even the birds in the tree don't know.

It's really cold today. The wind is blowing, the glass is covered with ice, and the streets are sparsely populated. People who walk on the road occasionally wrap themselves in thick cotton-padded clothes and put their hands in their pockets.

Write specific sentences, pay attention to:

1, what is the theme;

2. consider what aspects to write;

3. Write each aspect into a specific sentence.

Extended data:

To write a specific sentence, we can start with determining the "object" of description.

The so-called "concretizing sentences" means having a central sentence, so we should concretize the central sentence. As for "objects", students should identify "keywords", that is, keywords that describe specific "objects".

Key words are generally the core content of sentences, such as: the flowers in the park are really beautiful.

The key word of this sentence is "beauty", so we should focus on "beauty" and write the content concretely.

The classroom is really quiet.

The key word of this sentence is "static", and the specific content is centered around "static".

If the "object" is not clear, the longest sentence is also "the old woman's foot wrap-smelly and long."

This tree is really tall. The thick trunk needs several people's hugs to flourish. From a distance, it looks like a big umbrella cover.

Although the content behind this sentence is rich and there are many words, it is not written around the "central sentence". The core word of the central sentence is "Gao", so writing this sentence concretely means writing the characteristics of "Gao" concretely and vividly.