How to write a composition in Sai Qu Xia?

65438+ is like a wild beast. The soldiers who heard the sound were terrified out of their wits, so they went to tell their general-"General Fei" Li Guang. After hearing the news, he took his bow and arrow out calmly, and then walked out of the tent with his men. Before he came to the forest, Li Guangchao took a bow in his left hand and an arrow in his right hand and shot it out at once. Suddenly disappeared. Strange to say, I don't know whether Li Guang's archery is superior or the town is fierce in all directions, but the wind suddenly stopped moving. All the onlookers were amazed and praised Li Guang for falling from the sky. As the night was thick, everyone chatted a little and went back to camp to have a rest. The next morning, the weather was fine, and the soldiers all went out of the tent to look for the body of the beast last night. At this moment, they suddenly heard someone exclaim: Why is it in the stone? That's weird! "After hearing the news, everyone went to the stone to see the wonders. I saw Li Guang's arrow stuck deeply in a big stone, but I didn't see any traces of wild animals. Someone went to the stone and tried to insert the arrow into it, but he couldn't pull it out. "General lee is a fairy! "Everyone sighed. After learning this, Lu Lun wrote a poem "Song of Xia Sai" to express his admiration for Li Guang. Comments: The language of ancient poetry is concise and the narrative is jumping. On the basis of being faithful to the original poem, Jing Wong boldly imagined the story of "Li Guang shooting at night", which was reasonable and convincing. We really applaud Jing Wong's rich imagination.

2. How to write Li Guang's Song of the Frontier (2) [Lu Lun]

The Woods are black, the wind hits the grass,

However, the general tried to shoot arrows at night.

The next morning he found his white feather arrow.

Point to the depths of hard rock.

[Note] (1) The grass is startled by the wind: that is, "the wind blows the grass", which describes the weeds on the side shaking in the strong wind. As the old saying goes, the cloud follows the dragon and the wind follows the tiger, which is to use the "shocking wind" to set off the momentum and atmosphere of the tiger leaving the forest. (2) bow: open the bow. (3) Pingming: It's just dawn. White feather: refers to the arrow, because the tail of the arrow has white bird feathers. (4) No: trapped, which means that the arrow is shot into the stone. Cold: that is, prismatic stone, which refers to angular stone.

[Brief Comment] The second poem in Xia Sai Qu, a group poem composed by Lu Lun, borrows the story of Li Guang, a famous soldier in the Han Dynasty, to write the heroic behavior of the general during his night patrol. In the selection of materials, the poems basically copied the ready-made materials in Historical Records Biography of General Li, which is obviously that the poet consciously compared General Li with Li Guang, a famous historical figure, and played a role in connecting the past with the future and praising the celebrities in the middle Tang Dynasty. This poem is written in a tense atmosphere and tight rhythm, which makes people feel afraid to breathe. The first two sentences say that the grass and trees are shaking when the tiger goes down the mountain. This is because the frightened grass and trees still have to tremble for the arrival of the tiger and dragon, which reflects the general's skill and courage. With a hard bow in his hand, he is not afraid of tigers or dragons, and dares to run wild in the dark night. How brave it takes! The last two sentences are also full of thrilling atmosphere. Readers will naturally think, is the tiger killed by an arrow, and what if it comes back after being injured? It was not until the last sentence "pointed to the depths of hard rocks" that the reader breathed a sigh of relief. It turned out that last night was a mistake, turning the stone into a tiger. This is a false alarm. There is something commendable about the creation of this poem, that is, it makes up for some logical deficiencies in Li Guang's description of beating tigers without stones in Historical Records Biography of General Li. Its original text is like this: "Go hunting widely, see a stone in the grass and shoot it as a tiger. Zhong Shi has no arrows. See the stone. " When I first read this article, I doubted that Li Guang was a good melee fighter. Shooting stones in the grass not too far from him, will he mistake it for a tiger? At that time, I felt that the first sentence should be changed to "hunting in the wide night", which made the following description have a basis. Later, when I read this poem, I saw the opening "The Woods are dark and the wind is blowing, but the general tries to shoot at night", which means that the time is "night" and the luminosity is "dark". In this way, the general mistakenly thought that the description of the tiger had a solid foundation. On the one hand, it can be seen that the general was killed by mistake, on the other hand, it can be seen that the general is on high alert, and on the other hand, it can be seen that he is indeed a general with extraordinary brawn and extremely high martial arts. Therefore, this poem by Lu Lun actually supplements some deficiencies in the description of Li Guang's shooting tigers in Historical Records Biography of General Li, which should be said to be a very meaningful thing. The use of allusions in poetry, properly and skillfully, is icing on the cake and adding charm. This poem praises the ancients, especially the generals, by borrowing ancient allusions, which is more effective than that written by the Ming people and fully shows the beauty of allusions.

3. Who knows how the poem "Song of the Great Wall" is written? In the faint moonlight, geese are soaring, and the chief Tatar is fleeing in the dark? I was about to lead the light cavalry to catch up when the snow fell full of bows and knives.

32. Sai Qu Xia (geese are flying in the bright moonlight) Lu Lun

[Notes]

1. Xia Sai: an ancient frontier fortress military song.

2. Moonlight: There is no moonlight.

3. Khan: the leader of Xiongnu. This refers to the supreme commander of the invaders.

4. escape: escape.

5. Will: Leadership.

6. Qingqi: Qingqi and Fast Cavalry.

7.11: Catch up.

[Brief analysis]

This is the third poem in Lulun's "Xia Sai Qu" series. Lu Lun used to be a marshal judge of the shogunate, and he had a good understanding of the life of soldiers. Poetry describing this life is more substantial and powerful in style. This poem is about the heroic feat of the general preparing to lead his troops in pursuit of the enemy on a snowy night.

The first two sentences are about the enemy fleeing. "In the bright moonlight, geese are soaring", and the moon is covered by clouds and dark. Su Yan started up and flew high. "Chief Tatar fled in the dark". On this unusual night with high black wind, the enemy sneaked away. "Khan" originally refers to the supreme ruler of Xiongnu, and here refers to the invaders of Qidan and other nationalities who often invaded the south at that time.

The last two sentences describe the general preparing to chase the enemy, which is unusual. "And we chase it, and the horse is lightly burdened." The general found that the enemy had absconded and wanted to lead the light cavalry to pursue it; Just as we were about to leave, there was a heavy snow, and in an instant the bow and knife were covered with snowflakes. The last sentence "and the burden of snow on our bows and swords" is a description of the cold scene, highlighting the hardships of fighting and the brave spirit of soldiers.

This poem blends scenes. The enemy troops fled in the scene of "wild geese flying in the bright moonlight", and the general was prepared to pursue them in the scene of "snow burden on our bow and our sword". The atmosphere of running away and chasing is effectively rendered. The whole poem does not describe the process of chasing the enemy in the snow, nor does it directly describe the fierce battle scenes, but it leaves a very rich imagination space for people.

About the author: Lu Lun (748-800) was born in Hebangpu (now Yongji County, Shanxi Province). Poets in Tang Dynasty.

4. How to write this poem? Many poets wrote several excerpts from Song of the Plug as follows.

Border songs

Lipper

The mountains in May are still full of snow, only cold, and the grass can't see the grass. Spring can only be imagined in the flute "Folding Willow", but it has never been seen in reality. The soldiers fought the enemy in the golden drum during the day and slept in the saddle at night.

I hope that the sword hanging around my waist can quickly pacify the border and serve my country.

Border songs

Xu hun

After a night of fighting in Hebei, half the soldiers in Qin area failed to return to camp.

A letter from the soldier was sent back in the morning, telling him that the warm coat had been delivered.

Song of frontier fortress is a new Yuefu poem with frontier fortress scenery and frontier fortress war as its theme. Xu Hun's Xia Sai Qu is the shortest and smallest poem in the same theme. The first two sentences only use ten words to describe the night battle north of Sanggan River. As a result of the midnight battle, about half of the soldiers never came back. Among the thousands of victims, one soldier received a letter from home the morning after his death, telling him that his warm clothes had arrived. This is a very common and real tragedy in the war years.

Poetry truly reflects reality with pure and objective narration. On the surface, the author neither praises nor curses the frontier war in his poems, but from his description of the heavy casualties caused by the war, he is very sympathetic to the soldiers who died in the war and does not recognize it. Because Xu Hun lived in the middle of the Tang Dynasty, the empire of the Tang Dynasty had been declining, and many frontier poems were infected with the sentimental feelings of the times. The tone of this poem is melancholy and sad.

A remarkable feature of this poem in artistic expression is that it uses the technique of "less is more" to reflect reality. Among the thousands of soldiers who died, the poet chose a typical plot of a soldier, that is, "I came with nostalgia and hesitated to send cold clothes" to highlight the tragedy of sacrificing soldiers and make people feel deep sympathy for the victims and their families. This is actually a silent condemnation of the rulers who made this war.

Poetry is purely line drawing, and the four poems are purely narrative, without any discussion, but from the typical events extracted by the author, there is naturally a tendency. The artistic style is natural, simple and simple. However, it is not shallow, profound, very intriguing, but also plain, and it is surprising and moving to be good at well-meaning language. "When you have a letter of nostalgia, you send your own cold clothes", which is hard to bear to recall and has a strong tragic atmosphere.

Four songs under the plug (part 1)

Changjian

Jade and silk look back at the emperor's hometown, and Wu Sun is not king when he returns.

There is no war in the end of the world, and soldiers sell the sun and the moon.

Tang

Windson got a fright,

However, the general tried to shoot arrows at night.

The next morning he found his white feather arrow.

Point to the depths of hard rock.

Lu Xun's "Xia Sai Qu"

In the faint moonlight, wild geese soar in the sky.

The Tatar chiefs are fleeing from the darkness.

We chased them, and the horse's burden was light.

We must carry bows and arrows and swords in the heavy snow.

[Notes]

1. Xia Sai: an ancient frontier fortress military song.

2. Moonlight: There is no moonlight.

3. Khan: the leader of Xiongnu. This refers to the supreme commander of the invaders.

4. escape: escape.

5. Will: Leadership.

6. Qingqi: Qingqi and Fast Cavalry.

7.11: Catch up.

5. Li Bai's Sai Sai Qu has been rewritten into a poem or prose of more than 200 words. In May, Jiangnan, where he swam, was in full bloom in spring. And here, only the snow that doesn't melt all the year round in Tianshan Mountain-if snowflake is also a flower. In May, Chang 'an, which he longed for for for a long time, was already the "Prophet of Plumbing Duck on the Spring River". Here, there is no spring breeze, only cold-but the cold wind is also a kind of wind belonging to frontier people. He heard the flute coming from a vast area, but he couldn't tell which direction it came from. In fact, it was a willow-a willow-a parting song, a homesick song, a sad song-he couldn't hear the intoxicating song, only the drums; I didn't see spring, only rows of horses.

But he didn't complain. The sword around his waist is not only used for clapping and singing. He was a real man in the Tang Dynasty and a gentleman in the prosperous times. He is one of countless front-line soldiers. The drums are beating, and the horn in his heart has sounded-go, for the beautiful Datang, for the relatives of Datang! He cut the cold with his sword, and countless swords cut at Loulan!

6. The "Sai" in Lu Lun's "Scene Description of Sai" is a historical record from Li Chuan.

Lulun

In the dark forest, the grass was suddenly blown by the wind, and the wind was rustling. The general thought that the beast was coming and immediately pulled out the arrow.

Dawn went to look for the arrow, which had gone deep into the edge of the stone.

translate

In the dark forest, the grass suddenly swayed and rustled with the wind. The general thought the beast was coming, so he quickly drew his bow and shot an arrow.

Looking for an arrow at dawn, it has fallen deeply into the stone edge.

To annotate ...

(1), plug-the ancient song title. Most of these works describe frontier scenery and war life.

(2) the wind-suddenly blown by the wind.

Bow-bow, bow, including archery.

(4) Pingming-just before dawn.

⑤ White feather-the white feather behind the shaft, which refers to the arrow here.

6. No fall, that is, drilling.

⑦ Stone edge-the corner of the stone.

This frontier poem describes a general who killed a tiger. It is based on the biography of General Li written by Sima Qian, a scholar in the Western Han Dynasty, and records the deeds of the famous Li Guang at that time. The original text is: "When you went hunting widely, you saw a stone in the grass, thinking it was shooting tigers, and the stone in the middle (zhòng) had no arrow. You see, it is also a stone. "

The first two sentences of the poem describe what happened: in the middle of the night, the forest was dark, and suddenly the wind was blowing hard, and the grass was undulating by Joe; The frogman was in a trance when he landed, and a white tiger came at him. At this moment, the general is flying through the forest. He is quick-sighted and quick-footed, and he bows and shoots arrows. ...

As a result of the last two sentences, the next morning, the general remembered what happened in the forest last night and came to the scene along the original road. He couldn't help being surprised: in the bright morning light, he clearly saw that he had shot a boulder instead of a tiger. Fear crouched there silently, and the white arrow plunged deep into the edge of the crevice! Please note that the place where the arrow enters is not a cave, a gap or a stone surface, but a narrow and sharp stone edge-what a great arm strength and martial arts it takes!

Someone wants to ask, why didn't the general kill the tiger until the next morning? The original story didn't tell me that it was a stone the next day! This is the poet's artistic treatment. First, it can show the general's confidence. It has always been very popular. Are you afraid it won't die or run this time? Second, it can increase the intuition of the image and make people see it more clearly. If you watch it that night, of course, you can find that this is a misunderstanding, but it is difficult to achieve the vivid effect of the current picture.

Poetry pays the most attention to implication and emphasizes the implication. Seeing the description of the arrow hitting the stone in the poem, we naturally associate it with: What would it look like if it was really a tiger? What happens if you shoot enemy soldiers and horses on the battlefield? Thus, the image of a general with high martial arts, bravery and good fighting skills stood in front of our eyes.

7. Li Bai's ancient poem Xia Sai Qu was rewritten into a modern translation.

one

In May, the mountains were still covered with snow, with only the cold and no flowers.

Spring can only be imagined in the flute "Folding Willow", which has never been seen in reality.

The soldiers fought to the death with the enemy in the golden drum during the day, but slept with their saddles at night.

I hope that the sword hanging around my waist can pacify the frontier as soon as possible and make contributions to the country.

Secondly,

China's army went to the northern desert, because the military forces of the Hu people were preparing to invade the south.

The soldiers went on the rampage only to serve the court's great kindness.

They are not afraid of hardship, eating snow in the vast sea and sleeping in the sand in the faucet.

There is only one wish, that is, to break through the enemy country, pacify the frontier, and let the people of the motherland rest easy and live and work in peace.

third

The horses galloped like a whirlwind, and the soldiers threw them off the Weihe Bridge.

Say goodbye to the bright moon in the Han Dynasty with bows and arrows, and bow and shoot arrows to defeat the conference semifinals on the battlefield.

After the war, the guest stars in the sky dimmed, the barracks gradually became empty, and the sea fog disappeared.

After the success, in the heroic portrait of Qilin Pavilion, only the portrait of Huopiao Yao was left.

Fourth.

The horse galloped on the gold plug, and the white clouds and yellow sand on the plug wrapped around the dream of thinking of the woman.

In this autumn, which is prone to sad thoughts, recruiters in the frontier evoke the thoughts of boudoir.

Fireflies fly around the autumn window, and the border city moon is far and near in front of the boudoir.

Autumn frost has withered the leaves of plane trees, and the west wind is rustling among the branches of the sand pond.

People who miss you can't wait, and the tears of acacia are only secretly empty.

Fifth.

Land Rover invaded the south when the autumn was crisp and the horses were fat, and Tang Jun dispatched military forces to meet them.

The general went out with the tiger symbol, and the soldiers stood guard against the enemy in Longsha.

At night, the moon bends like a bow shadow, and the frost and snow in Alakazam condenses into flowers.

The army has not yet entered Yumen Pass, so don't worry too much.

Sixth.

The bonfire was lit in the depths of the desert, and the war reflected the sky of Ganquan Palace.

Emperor Xiandi was furious, pressed his sword and called general Li to lead an army to meet the enemy.

The murderous look is soaring, the drums are loud, and the heavenly soldiers are brave and invincible.

Running the battlefield depends on the brave spirit, clearing Land Rover in World War I and pacifying the world. ..

Six Poems by Xia Sai is a set of poems by Li Bai, a great poet in the Tang Dynasty. These six poems use the popular Yuefu theme in the Tang Dynasty to write current events and express their heartfelt feelings, mainly describing the historical facts that Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty pacified the Xiongnu intrusion, and reflecting the spiritual outlook of the prosperous Tang Dynasty with an optimistic tone and magnificent artistic conception. There are praises for the brave warrior Jin Goma Tie, and there are also descriptions of the tenderness of the boudoir. The content is extremely rich, the style is loose and unrestrained, and the heroism is full, which expresses the poet's noble patriotic sentiment.

Brief introduction of the author

Li Bai (70 1~762), whose name is Taibai, is a violet layman. He is the most unique and greatest romantic poet after Qu Yuan. He has the reputation of "poetic immortal" and is also called "Du Li" with Du Fu. His poems are mainly lyrical, showing the arrogant spirit of contempt for powerful people, expressing sympathy for people's sufferings, being good at depicting natural scenery and expressing his love for the mountains and rivers of the motherland. The poetic style is magnificent and bold, the imagination is rich, the language flows naturally, the melody is harmonious and changeable, and it is good at absorbing nutrients and materials from folk literature and myths and legends, which constitutes its unique magnificent and gorgeous color and reaches the peak of poetic art in the prosperous Tang Dynasty. There are more than 1000 poems, including 30 volumes of Li Taibai's Collection.