Revise the exercises and answers of ill sentences (incomplete components, repeated words, inconsistency, improper collocation)

1, Class 5, Grade 9, with the best Chinese performance in the school. (Improper collocation: the main grade is a class, and "one class" has been removed)

2. Various localities have taken measures such as tracing the source of the disease and isolated observation to prevent the influenza A (H 1N 1) from spreading again. (Improper collocation: remove "no longer" or "no", or change "no longer" to "continue")

Because of the scientific review method, his study efficiency has been greatly improved. (Improper collocation: improper efficiency and improvement, change efficiency into improvement)

4. This year will be the14th military parade in New China, and it is also the first time since the new century. (Improper collocation: add "military parade" after "this year" or change "yes" to "hold")

5, bronchitis, allergic rhinitis eating lobster, will lead to aggravation. (Improper collocation: subject and predicate. Add "patient" after "allergic rhinitis")

6. With the rediscovery of Qin Terracotta Warriors after 24 years of silence, it has attracted the attention of domestic and foreign media. (Incomplete composition: lack of subject, delete "spike")

7. In this World Table Tennis Championships, the athletes struggled hard and won the men's team championship again. (Incomplete composition: lack of subject, delete "through" and "through")

8. This nine-year boarding school has more than 150 students, which is the school with the least casualties and the earliest resumption of classes after the earthquake. (Improper collocation: subject and object "students are schools")

9. These activities, which are deeply loved by students, enhance and cultivate students' sense of ownership. (Improper collocation: consciousness cannot be cultivated, so "harmonious cultivation" should be deleted)

10, the improvement of academic performance depends mainly on whether students work hard. (Two sides: the word "whether" should be deleted)

1 1. We sincerely thank the teachers for their silent efforts over the years. (Semantic repetition: the repetition of "sincerity" and "in my heart")

12. Recently, penalties for drunk driving have been increased all over the country to avoid the recurrence of those appalling traffic accidents. (Multiple negations lead to semantic confusion: "no longer" should be changed to "again")

13, during the review of the senior high school entrance examination, many students did not focus on reviewing, and the time schedule was unreasonable. Some even remember the previous knowledge and forget the later knowledge. (Incomplete composition: the head word with no object, "phenomenon" should be added after "unreasonable")

14. In this coal mine accident, Chuangsuohu was the only survivor among the miners who died. (Inconsistent:)

15, March is the best season of the year, and a large number of Chinese and foreign tourists will come here at this time. (Mismatch before and after: it should be changed to March in Kunming)

16, all localities and departments regard improving people's livelihood, safeguarding people's livelihood and attaching importance to people's livelihood as the foothold and starting point of all work. (word order reversed)

17, effectively reducing the burden on farmers is the key to building a new socialist countryside. (One side is not properly matched with both sides)

18, Fuzhou won the "National Health City" because of the joint efforts of the people of the whole city. (Redundancy: Delete "Reason")

19. Qu Yuan's patriotic spirit can be passed down from generation to generation through dragon boat racing and Bao jiaozi. (Missing topic: Delete "Pass")

Whether a person has a healthy body depends on insisting on taking part in physical exercise. (One side is not properly matched with both sides)

2 1, due to the successful return of the unmanned spacecraft Shenzhou-1 to Shenzhou-4, China has joined the ranks of space development powers, which is also a sign of China's growing strength. (Missing topic: Delete "Due to")

22. The high-speed maglev train is completely off track during operation. It has no wheels and transmission mechanism, and the suspension, guidance, driving and braking of the train are all realized by electromagnetic force. (Sentence combination: "Relying on" should be deleted)

23. Data show that the tail feathers of long-tailed chickens grown in the wild can grow about one meter each year, while the life span of long-tailed chickens can be eight to ten years, so the longest tail feathers can exceed seven meters. (Improper collocation: the life of "should be deleted")

24. Some experts believe that the frequent environmental protection incidents are mainly due to the fact that some local governments rely solely on scale investment to achieve economic growth, which makes resource consumption staggering and environmental pollution increasingly serious. (Redundant components: "Periodic" or "Frequent" should be deleted)

25. According to the old man's later recollection, in addition to the 3,000 yuan just taken from the bank, there are other documents such as UnionPay cards, ID cards and mobile phones. (Logical error: Mobile phone is not a certificate)

26. Our school's fund-raising activities for Sichuan disaster areas have received positive responses from many school teachers and classmates, and raised more than 30,000 yuan in less than one day. (ambiguous: "many school teachers and classmates")

27. The language of writing articles should be concise, and unnecessary wordiness must be deleted. (Redundant components: "unnecessary" and "redundant")

28. In learning, we should solve and find existing problems in time. (Improper word order: "solve" and "discover")

29. The use of ethanol gasoline by motor vehicles has made the air in Baise city cleaner. (Incomplete composition: lack of theme)

30. Some parents spoil their children too much, which makes many students lack self-control and compare with each other in life. Semantic repetition: commonly used ill-chosen words include "current" and "emergency", "ten" and "calm", "ten" and "disparity", "prevention" and "none", "worrying", "excessive" and "flattering".

3 1. Education in the new era should cultivate students' observation, thinking and creativity. Improper collocation: verb-object "cultivates" ability rather than level.

32. I grew up in a drama family, and Henan opera is no stranger to me. (Improper word order: "I" is the subject)

33. After technological innovation, the cost of the material factory doubled, while the output value increased by 10%. (Improper collocation: improper "drop" and "double" should be changed to "50%")

34. There are two ill sentences in the following paragraph, please find out and correct them.

(1) Recently, a severe drought occurred in the southwest of China. The main reason is that high-pressure dams destroy atmospheric activities. (2) The high pressure dam, like a dry wall, crosses over the south of Guangxi to prevent the Pacific water vapor from advancing westward. (3) Although there is cold air heading south in the north, it can't merge with water vapor. (4) Therefore, there has been no rain for a long time at the junction of Guangxi, Guizhou and Yunnan provinces, and it has suffered from the rare dry weather in the past 50 years.

1 sentence, modified: delete the redundant component "because" and repeat it with "main reason".

In the third sentence, suggestions for revision: change "although" to "even" or change "also" to "but".

35. The following paragraph contains three sentences, each of which has language defects. Please correct it.

(1) In order to create a better medical environment for the people, the Ministry of Health is going to promote the service model of "diagnosis first and settlement later" throughout the country. (2) The so-called "settlement after diagnosis and treatment" means that the patient pays the deposit at the outpatient clinic first, and then pays the bill after all the diagnosis and treatment. (3) Implementing the service mode of "diagnosis first and settlement later" can save about 20% of patients' time of seeing a doctor.

(1) Replace "creation" with "creation"; (2) put "unification" before "checkout"; (3) Delete "above" or "about"

36. The underlined parts of the following paragraphs are all wrong choices, and suggestions for revision are put forward respectively.

On April 20th (1), nearly 1,000 representatives from the financial and insurance system of our city and some schools listened carefully to the heroic deeds report of Xiong Dayong, a martyr in ice disaster relief, at Yiyang Grand Theatre. Xiong Dayong was a surveyor in Zhuzhou Central Branch of China Pacific Insurance Company before his death. He died in the line of duty on June 5438+1October 65438+June this year when he was dealing with claims. (2) The provincial party committee and government ratified him as the honorary title of "Model of Anti-ice Disaster Relief in Hunan Province" and "Martyr". (3) After listening to the report of Xiong Dayong's martyr colleagues and relatives, the participants were deeply moved. Everyone said that they should follow Xiong Dayong's example, be willing to contribute and be brave in taking responsibility.

(1) Delete "near" or "surplus" (2) Change "ratification" to "ratification" and delete "for" (3) Delete "hearing" or "making".

37. There are two ill sentences in the following paragraph. Please find and correct them.

(1) This year, 10 provinces, municipalities and autonomous regions across the country will try to add Peking Opera to the music curriculum. (2) Jiangsu Province is one of the pilot provinces, offering Peking Opera classes in 20 primary and secondary schools in 8 cities along the Yangtze River. (3) In addition, indoctrination will encourage all regions to introduce local operas into teaching. (4) This is conducive to students' awareness of learning national culture.

In the second sentence, modify: replace "start" with "open"

In the fourth sentence, amend: add "cultivation" after "benefit".

38. Her rosy face is like a pear in full bloom. Incorrect metaphor: "pear flower" is an inappropriate metaphor for "rosy face"

39. Happy stream is singing crisp songs and dancing gracefully into the distance. (Improper collocation: verb-object should change "singing" into "song" and "jumping" into "dance")

40. Seeing this photo seems to bring me back to my childhood full of infinite fun. (Incomplete composition: lack of subject, so "see" should be deleted)

4 1, middle school students go to internet cafes, which has attracted the attention of educators and the majority of class teachers. (Logical error: "educator" includes "class teacher", and the two cannot be juxtaposed; "Most class teachers" should be deleted or "and" should be changed to "especially" and "especially").

42. Since the reform and opening up 20 years ago, the living standards of China people have improved significantly. (Improper collocation: "level" is only high and low)

43. Fuxia expressway is an important traffic artery connecting Fuzhou, the provincial capital, and Xiamen, the special economic zone. (Semantic repetition: The Road contains the meaning of "importance")

In the process of modernization, we should fully absorb the advanced experience of other countries. (Improper word order: Everything Abroad)

45. With the joint efforts of the people of the whole city, the air quality in our city has been significantly improved. (Incomplete composition: lack of theme)

Zhuge Liang's superhuman wisdom and extraordinary courage are the key to success. (One side does not match both sides)

47. We will do our utmost to solve the problem of Taiwan Province Province by peaceful means. But we will never promise to use force. (Ambiguous meaning: "No" should be added between "commitment" and "use")

48. People are deeply infected by the clear thinking and optimism of the elderly. Improper collocation: subject and predicate, emotions can infect people, but thoughts can't; "Clear thinking" can be deleted)

49. In order to cultivate us, the teacher really forgets to eat and sleep, deliberately. (Improper use of words: "deliberate" is a derogatory term and should be changed to a commendatory term such as "painstaking")

50. The reduction or exemption of agricultural taxes by local governments is one of the reasons why farmers' income is increasing year by year. (Misuse of words: the word "pardon" should be changed to "remission")